NationStates Jolt Archive


War

Dougnolia
30-03-2005, 19:00
We, The Democratic Republic of Dougnolia, declare war on The Constitutional Monarchy of Chelsea FC - Raikkonen. :mp5: We believe than any support of Chelsea FC is totally unaccpetable and it should be stamped out immediately. Support of Chelsea FC is dispicable, it far worse than Nazi-sympathizing. This extreme right wing activity must be stopped before it is too late.
Jamum
30-03-2005, 19:03
ooc: another first poster! remeber you don't have a miletery!
Falcania
30-03-2005, 19:11
*Yawn* not another foolish first-post-war-thread. I suggest you join someone else's RP rather than create your own. Ta. Otherwise, very good, only one typo, no txt speak or 1337 speak and you seem to have made your point. However, declarations of war generally require more than 4 lines. A better suggestion would be thus:


The Democratic Republic of Dougnolia have decreed that The Constitutional Monarchy of Chelsea FC - Raikkonen are acting unacceptably on the following grounds:

Ground 1: Excessive right-wing political stance

Ground 2: Unacceptable Nazi-sympathy

We, the Democratic Republic of Dougnolia have decreed that if the Constitutional Monarchy of Chelsea FC - Raikkonen do not cease and desist the activities covered under the stated grounds of war, that the Democratic Republic of Dougnolia shall be in a state of war with the Constitutional Monarchy of Chelsea FC - Raikkonen and all of their allied nations.


See? Much better.
Dougnolia
30-03-2005, 22:15
Thanks Falcania