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in space near the moon

the alien mother ship comes into sight of Earth a massive black saucer covered in tiny lights dwarfs all of the Earths satellites just when we detect them all satellites fail

(aliens can't attack yet but you can position your forces and abduct people)

ooc: damm my spelling!

the mother ship sends out its smaller ships each under a different General all fighting for the same thing

The Wraith Hive ship moved into position on the other side of the planet, so far unaware of the other aliens' presence. Commander Valkan entered the Queen's chamber, bowing low and waiting as she finished feeding on a human left over from the Pegasus galaxy. When its dying screams had faded, she looked at him, waiting for him to speak. "We are ready my queen. The Dart fighters are prepared to go to the surface and begin the harvest." "Good..." she replied. "You may have the pleasure of feeding on thier leader." "Thank you my queen" he said, and left the chamber.

OOC: Why not? I'll bite.

IC:
Pvt.:Sir, two of our satelites detected a spacial anomaly near the moon, but we lost contact shortly after.

General Granger: Hmm.. What about our Kamoor IBBEM defensive satelites?

Pvt.: We're still recieving signals, yes.

Granger: Good, as soon they get in range, let's see how they like ABM lasers!

Pvt.: Yessir!

"what the hell is going on out there" shouted Jamum's Dictator "no idea sir we have lost all satellites and that object we detected it's seems to off broken into smaller objects" said the Intel adviser clearly having no idea what's going on 2well that’s good isn’t it" the Dictators face showed signs of relief "no sir there heading for large city's ETA 1 hour " " my God".

OOC: Why not? I'll bite.

IC:
Pvt.:Sir, two of our satelites detected a spacial anomaly near the moon, but we lost contact shortly after.

General Granger: Hmm.. What about our Kamoor IBBEM defensive satelites?

Pvt.: We're still recieving signals, yes.

Granger: Good, as soon they get in range, let's see how they like ABM lasers!

Pvt.: Yessir!

ooc:can't attack yet! you don't know what it is! oh and post your map

ooc: my map http://photobucket.com/albums/y100/Hypotheticalia/?action=view&current=map.jpg

The Hive ship immediately began disgorging thousands of fighters down to the richest feeding ground the Wraith's sensors could find, a landmass the humans called "China". As the swarm broke through the cloud cover, sirens began to blare and the primitive human fighters moved to combat the threat.
Thier efforts were futile, as eventually superior numbers won out over the experienced Chinese pilots. Now the Darts descended to the surface, the screaming whine their engines made driving the humans into a frenzy. They ran for shelter, but in the end, there was nowhere to hide.
http://www.gateworld.net/omnipedia/ships/w/wraithdart.shtml

OOC: OK, most you appear to be n00b's at RP'ing, so I'll watch and particitpate. Learn...

IC: The military attache strode confindantley through the Assembly building. His pass gave him unlimited access, and the pips at his neck commanded instant respect. This was a member of the Homeland Security Division, feared for how ruthless they could be to traitors or other threats. He strode into the office, and laid the sheet in front of Lord Barabarossa,"Sir, a message from Station 12"

Barbarossa looked at it,"This had best be good... what the hell?!"

"Yessir, aliens are invading!"

The President sat back in his chair,"Get Colonel Cougar and General Harris up here, NOW!"

Within ten minutes, two uniformed men were standing in front of Lord Barbarossa,"You called sir?" said the younger, whose uniform was unmarked in anyway

"Gentlemen, we appear to be on the verge of an alien invasion of Earth"

Both men started, then looked at their leader as if he was mad,"Are you ok, sir?"

"I'm legally sane, yes. This report*flourishes it* states quite clearly what Station 12 picked up less than an hour ago"

*Both men read it, their expressions altering as they do so*

"Colonel, get SHADOW together. We are going to need all of you. General Harris, I am declaring martial law until the crisis is past. See that all civilians are evacuated to the deep shelters, and then prepare for invasion"

Both men saluted,"YESSIR!"

As they left, Barbarossa looked out the window,"So it has begun..."

Thier efforts were futile, as eventually superior numbers won out over the experienced Chinese pilots.

I just want to make sure, you do know that even aliens can't send their entire population to invade, right? :rolleyes: This whole alien invasion thingy is stupid, and getting really boring, imho. Hell, what's the chance that all the aliens are so superior to us. :rolleyes:

"Sir report's suggest another object on the other side of the planet following a similer pattern" the intel adviser seemed shoked at the fought that these might not be just your ordinery rocks

"are these just asteriods?" the Dictator still in shock about the first object

"....dammit answer I got peaple all over the place saying its Aliens"

"Sir we will find out in about 15 minuits"

"why is that" the dictator now having no control on the situation

"well sir there is one heading here"

The Hive ship immediately began disgorging thousands of fighters down to the richest feeding ground the Wraith's sensors could find, a landmass the humans called "China". As the swarm broke through the cloud cover, sirens began to blare and the primitive human fighters moved to combat the threat.
Thier efforts were futile, as eventually superior numbers won out over the experienced Chinese pilots. Now the Darts descended to the surface, the screaming whine their engines made driving the humans into a frenzy. They ran for shelter, but in the end, there was nowhere to hide.
http://www.gateworld.net/omnipedia/ships/w/wraithdart.shtml
OOC: This is known as GODMODING, a huge NO-NO in RP's. Trsut me, you cannot do this. People need to be given a chance to defend. You cannot juts say that 'Oh, I destroy all your forces with a death ray', because it's juts stupid! This goes to all you n00b's

I just want to make sure, you do know that even aliens can't send their entire population to invade, right? :rolleyes: This whole alien invasion thingy is stupid, and getting really boring, imho. Hell, what's the chance that all the aliens are so superior to us. :rolleyes:

ooc:calm down man it's only a roleplay

From deep in the centurion galaxy on the space station Babylon 1 (http://www.worldtrans.org/venus/spacestation.jpg) an anomaly was detected near earth. Suddenly Admiral Archon recieved the disturbing message.

Comm: "Sir the Wraith have been detected near earth along with some other unknown forces."

Admiral: "Alright I want you to send 2 Midway-class Megacarriers, 3 Draconic-class Supercarriers, 4 Hades Quick Strike Cruisers, and 2 Warbird-class Stealth Warships to meet this threat but do not attack just ready the forces and try to scare off as many Wraith as possible keep weapons ready and shields armed. Also equip the new Mjolnir attack/defense drones to those vessels. And if it comes to a fight try to take as much enemy tech as possible intact."

With that the mighty force dispatched to try to protect the human race. Their ships jumped and spread to battle formation.

OOC Any questions on those ships look at my research thread.
Map (http://www.wcnews.com/maps/sectors/vega.png)

OOC: This is known as GODMODING, a huge NO-NO in RP's. Trsut me, you cannot do this. People need to be given a chance to defend. You cannot juts say that 'Oh, I destroy all your forces with a death ray', because it's juts stupid! This goes to all you n00b's

ooc:hes got a point just start again just come from the same mothership it speeds up things shall we continue

Oh, yeah, Good job to Jamum on his map! We should all be making maps...

After an hour, the culling was cut short and the Darts were recalled. Inside the Hive ship, Valkan strode angrily to the bridge. "What is the emergency?" He asked coldly of the Wraith at the navigation console. "We have detected a ship of unknown design on the far side of this planet. There are no records of it in our database, and it appears to have primitive sensor cloaking devices, as it has been detected by the humans' satellite array." Valkan pondered for a moment, then came to a decision. "We'll leave them for now, re-deploy the Darts, hit "China" again. Wipe it clean of all human inhabitance. After we have refilled our storage pods, we will go and speak with our competitors." And with that, the swarms of Wraith Darts again streamed to the surface.

From deep in the centurion galaxy on the space station Babylon 1 (http://www.worldtrans.org/venus/spacestation.jpg) an anomaly was detected near earth. Suddenly Admiral Archon recieved the disturbing message.

Comm: "Sir the Wraith have been detected near earth along with some other unknown forces."

Admiral: "Alright I want you to send 2 Midway-class Megacarriers, 3 Draconic-class Supercarriers, 4 Hades Quick Strike Cruisers, and 2 Warbird-class Stealth Warships to meet this threat but do not attack just ready the forces and try to scare off as many Wraith as possible keep weapons ready and shields armed. Also equip the new Mjolnir attack/defense drones to those vessels. And if it comes to a fight try to take as much enemy tech as possible intact."

With that the mighty force dispatched to try to protect the human race.
Map (http://www.wcnews.com/maps/sectors/vega.png)


ooc:dammit go away and read the prep thread

Oh, yeah, Good job to Jamum on his map! We should all be making maps...


if your going to try and ruin this I ask you not too and whats wrong with my map?

OOC: This is known as GODMODING, a huge NO-NO in RP's. Trsut me, you cannot do this. People need to be given a chance to defend. You cannot juts say that 'Oh, I destroy all your forces with a death ray', because it's juts stupid! This goes to all you n00b's
Hey, I never claimed to be a pro at this...besides, I just want to wipe out China...those guys have had it coming for a while now. But I'll take your advice: less force next time. Be advised though, Wraith Darts do attack in large swarms.

ooc: shall we try again on a new thread?

Message to humans: How stupid are you? Yu can go to space, right? Take a nuke up there, than shoot it at the alien motherships. You may kill their queen, and when you tell the other motherships that there is plenty more where that came from, problem solved. :D

ooc: shall we try again on a new thread?
ooc: yeah, lets do that. Think of all this as trial and error. I'm gonna copy and paste my beginning post however.

if your going to try and ruin this I ask you not too and whats wrong with my map?

What? I said you did good on your map. :D I liked it! You even marked where the fish are!

ooc: don’t copy the original post attack the same way as the aliens did in signs and independence day

ooc: don’t copy the original post attack the same way as the aliens did in signs and independence day
hokay...yeah, that should be easy to do as the Wraith...maybe a scouting party...alrighty, start up the next thread, I've got a plan this time.

Alright, I'll copy and paste my starting post

http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?p=8557045#post8557045

The Asgard Mothership Beliskner, a.k.a. Thor's Chariot, hovered roughly two million miles away from the orbit of Mars. Its lone occupant, Thor, Supreme Commander of the Asgard Fleet, sat in the control room peering at the read outs the computer had given him. It gave a three dimensional view of Earth and all the space around it, it didn't look good, both ships were unidentifiable to Thor. The computer couldn't identify one but the other came back as being a Wraith Mothership, the odd thing however was that all the information on the ship and the Wraith came from records thousands of years old. Thor wasn't concerned about that at the moment though, he needed to get to Earth. The Beliskner was being cloaked and Thor was pretty sure that the other ships couldn't detect him yet, but then you never know.

"I have to find out what's going on, and fast."

As the fighters stream through the upper atmosphere the MAF scrambles all available defenders against an overwhelming quantity of unknown bogeys, inevitably there were some problems...

Red1: Where's my wing?
Red2 we're still getting armed and fueled sir.
Red1: You should have been ready five minutes ago, you all owe me a beer when we get... *KABOOM*

The first few Harrier jumpjets to lift are destroyed outright, but as more and more begin to lift the enemy targeting systems seem to become overloaded, reducing the number of casualties. The 150 remaining jumpjets streak towards the unidentified hostiles and hope the first casualties were just luck. The first plane out is piloted by the best man in the whole airforce, "Doc" Dobrescu, only his skill has kept him alive long enough to get him into visual range of the enemy fighters, what he sees makes his blood run cold... The enemy is like nothing on earth, sleek and deadly, all function but with a beauty all its own, and completely impossible for the sidewinders to lock on to. The Doc radios back to the base to tell what he's seen and goes to engage his foe knowing that his death is a foregone conclusion, at the maximum range his 30mm cannon rip to life chewing across the enemy hull with no visible effect. Five minutes later the Doc has fallen, caught as he tried to flikker away from one enemy and flew into anothers path.

The Asgard Mothership Beliskner, a.k.a. Thor's Chariot, hovered roughly two million miles away from the orbit of Mars. Its lone occupant, Thor, Supreme Commander of the Asgard Fleet, sat in the control room peering at the read outs the computer had given him. It gave a three dimensional view of Earth and all the space around it, it didn't look good, both ships were unidentifiable to Thor. The computer couldn't identify one but the other came back as being a Wraith Mothership, the odd thing however was that all the information on the ship and the Wraith came from records thousands of years old. Thor wasn't concerned about that at the moment though, he needed to get to Earth. The Beliskner was being cloaked and Thor was pretty sure that the other ships couldn't detect him yet, but then you never know.

"I have to find out what's going on, and fast."

read the signup thread fool!

http://photobucket.com/albums/y90/DominionofRS/?action=view&current=Dominionmap.bmp
Here's the map. And I'm not attacking, I'll just put the satelites on standby. BTW, sorry if it's not big enough. You can just save it and view it through paint.

http://photobucket.com/albums/y90/DominionofRS/?action=view&current=Dominionmap.bmp
Here's the map. And I'm not attacking, I'll just put the satelites on standby. BTW, sorry if it's not big enough. You can just save it and view it through paint.

ooc:you have to click on the picture and when a big picture comes up use that

ooc:you have to click on the picture and when a big picture comes up use that
I just made an account so I don't really know what happened. It's a lot bigger, but the site keeps resizing it.