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"Attack strat. Gamma 45-12!"

And with that Sllabecaps Elite Fighters The Paladin knights rushed into The final Stronghold of the Commeckst (communist) The former Ruling party of Frarikel before the Great librations.


"Move move move! Room Cleared, Proceed to Level 3!"

Despite using Childs Radios and old rusty AK-47s The Paladin knights Move and strike with the strength of an Elite Army unit. Within 5 mins the Strongholds last Commeckst Defender falls to the ground, the old Communist flag is Burnt then pissed on by the knights and with that they all suddenly go into two single files and stand at attentchen. suddenly a man with an odd looking flag walks in between the knights and hosts up Sllabecaps's flag.


With that the Liberation is over. Communism is defeated




LEAT FREEDOM RING THOUREOUT THE LAND!

OOC: what do you guys think?

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OOC:
Some suggestions... first, a couple spelling errors... it's let, not leat... and throughout, not thoureout... ;)

Also, some more discription of what actually happened would have been nice, as well as some background information... such a short post just doesn't give us much info or detail... get into detail about why they're doing this, are they terrorists, or what? Also, talk about the planning and use dialogue (sp?), and finally, be more detailed in the events that unfold... go into detail about the fighting... what are they thinking? What are they seeing? Doing? Hearing? Saying?

It may seem like alot, but that's why this is called role playing... you need to describe what's going on, like in a story, so people can picture it in their minds...

Some tips for success on NS :D

If you ever need help in a RP or just got some questions, just lemme know, ask me... or ask any vets on NS, as most are willing to help everyone out on improving their skills, as it makes things more fun...

IC:
To: The newly liberated nation of Sllabecaps
From: President Maybury:
RE: Good luck!

Hello! We wish your newly freed nation luck, and would like to help your nation recover. We are willing to open up trade with your nation, and would like to offer a peace treaty.

Please get back to us on if you accept.

Thank you,

President Maybury

OOC Thank man!


IC


"We thank you for your kind gester, we have just rebuilt the port and will be able to open up trade right away, however diplomatic work might take awhile all the old diplomats were Commeckst suporters. We need to Train our own diplomats and rebuild the Diplomatic Central control before we can send out diplomats to deal with other nations.

Commander Nagit."

OOC: No prob :D

IC:
We look forward to begining trade with you. Do you need any help rebuilding your cities?

We understand your situation, and hope that your new diplomats can be trained in due time, as we look forward to strengthening ties with your nation.

Thank you,

President Maybury

"Hmmm, the cities were genraly left aloun, however then the Commeckst were beginning to lose they used a tactic call "Scorched Earth" the lands were striped burned and then salted, There is hardly any food and we have no idea what to do.


Commander Naget

We are sorry to here this. We are preparing to send a large amount of food to your nation to help ease this problem.

OOC: I'd suggest making a new thread if you are badly in need of food and other things asking the Int'l Community to send aid...

IC:
Within two (NS) weeks, our shipments, on planes and ships, will be leaving to help ease your national food crisis.

President Maybury

OOC: Medieval?

OOC: Medieval?
OOC: If you actually read what he said ("AK-47" is a key hint) you'd know it was modern tech... good idea to read what's actually said instead of assuming something because of the title... btw, there are "strongholds" in todays world... "The Eastern part of the city is the rebels only stronghold in this country. You gotta be careful in there.")

Press Release from the People's Communist Party of Brazil

"We are delighted you have overthrown the revisionist, oppressive chains of the Leninist model. We are glad you have released yourself from the lie of state capitalism. Now that you are truly free, and can establish democracy in your nation, you must serve your people. Release your vision from the Leninist model, and find the merit of the Spartakist method.

Your nation needs aid, and we will give with open arms. We also request that a delegate and representative from the PCPB Spartakist League to bring consciousness of the Spartakist ideal. We ask you not reject this on the basis of your past experiences with the Leninist model. What we ask you is to be concerned for the welfare of your own people. We wish to bring consciousness of the Spartakist method. We will openly allow your people to chose, for imposed democracy is no democracy at all.

On the subject of aid, we are willing to donate four billion in foreign aid towards agricultural reform. We are also open to exporting at reduced price fruits, fish, and other foodstuffs. In addition, we can provide advance pharmacuetical technology for developing nations, with an entourage of three thousand Brasilian doctors who will work free of charge, their living conditions paid for by the PCPB."

Signed
O Presidente Juan Osvaldo Hernadez
http://www.worldpress.org/images/0602chavez.jpg

OOC Thanks for the advice guys :D

IC


To ViZion

We Thank you Dearly for the food aid, We have begun develpemt into Hydroponics To help with the food, but with such little capital it has been hard, but we will not let the Commeckst win even in there death, we will find a way, thank you for all your help.


To Communist Brazil

We Thank you for the aid and welcome your Delaget to the nation, how ever the people hear have lived under a Brutal Dictator calling themselfs Communist, as it seems whether or not it was true communism the people seem not to care, I suggest you send a guard with them.

After a brief meeting, the ViZionarian Government has approved a request to donate $45 million USD. This will be wired shortly.

We are also willing to sell discounted armored vehicles, ships, submarines, and airplanes to your nation to help rebuild it's military, as well as help train it in exchange for allowing us to build two bases on your land.

Will you accept this?

Dear ViZion

We Thank you for this aid, This will go into Hydroponics Technology
As for the millatry bases we say yes on one Condition, you must allow one Paladin Centron to stay in the base at all times to make no illegal things are happening in Sllabecaps.

Dear ViZion

We Thank you for this aid, This will go into Hydroponics Technology
As for the millatry bases we say yes on one Condition, you must allow one Paladin Centron to stay in the base at all times to make no illegal things are happening in Sllabecaps.
We can agree to this.

The money has been wired.

We would like to know what sort of aircrafts, armored vehicles and tanks, and naval forces you need.

We are also preparing to send four generals and 16 drill sgt's, as well as 50 Delta and Rangers. We will begin shortly picking out the location for the bases, and upon that time, we will begin construction.

"What we need is Speed Speed Speed, powerful is nice but if you cant move fast your are at a disadvatage. Your Fastist stuff would be best. I would say stay out of the north. Communist still operrate there

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