Poll: What do you think about my store fronts?
As of the fact that I'm having trouble with sales, I'm currious of what people think of my store fronts. I'm still updating both of them. So what I need is views or advice on how I could improve my store fronts, or make them more visible so people will buy them.
Here are the links:
G.E.H. Naval Store Front (http://forums2.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=383626&page=1&pp=15)
G.E.H. Land Assault Store Front (http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?p=7973647#post7973647)
Please submit any suggestions that are with in reason, and aren't dirrect insults.
OOPs...Gues I need to make a new one. *Sigh*
On second thought, I guess it's more of an opinion poll on how I could improve the sights. Making them more attractive, remaking them all together, what FT items I should sell... That sort of stuff...
Not excatlly what categories should be on the poll if I do make a new thread. Suggestions?
Please, no sarcastic suggestions (Kyanges...eventhough you are a friend, please no sarcastic suggestions. I've gotten more than one from you in the past....)
Upper Xen
29-01-2005, 02:53
OOC: First of all, GEH is probably not a good selling name. For some reason, it doesn't sound appealing enough.
Try renaming it something like "Hunterian Military Industries," or "Hunterian State Armory."
OOC: First of all, GEH is probably not a good selling name. For some reason, it doesn't sound appealing enough.
Try renaming it something like "Hunterian Military Industries," or "Hunterian State Armory."
What about "Star Forge Industries"?
Upper Xen
29-01-2005, 02:56
Good idea.
Just because you told me not too...
...I won't. Seriously, this kind of thing isn't really needed. I tried it before, and only one person actually offered suggestions. They were helpful, but keep in mind my questions were quite specific. Unless you ask about a specific thing that you have in mind, I'm afraid the most you'll get are the same general ideas, and comments. If you want to improve your storefront, think about it yourself, come up with an idea, and then ask about that. I'm sorry, but I don't think that there are many, save some friends, who are going to go out of their way to give you all the answers.
OOC: First of all, GEH is probably not a good selling name. For some reason, it doesn't sound appealing enough.
Try renaming it something like "Hunterian Military Industries," or "Hunterian State Armory."
You know, "G.E.H." probably isn't appealing to you, but the same can be said about "Armscorp". Besides, "G.E.H." probably adds some mystery...
Lol.
Upper Xen
29-01-2005, 03:08
You know, "G.E.H." probably isn't appealing to you, but the same can be said about "Armscorp". Besides, "G.E.H." probably adds some mystery...
Lol.
Kyanges, "G.E.H" sounds kinda awkward to pronounce, and it looks, no offense to Huntaer or you, kinda odd.
As for my choice of "Armscorp," I think it sounds cool....has that buzzwordy corporate feel to it.
Kyanges, "G.E.H" sounds kinda awkward to pronounce, and it looks, no offense to Huntaer or you, kinda odd.
As for my choice of "Armscorp," I think it sounds cool....has that buzzwordy corporate feel to it.
I know it sounds odd Upper Xen. If you think about it, a lot of nations on NS have odd names. I think I'll change it to "Star Forge Industries" for when I make my permenant changes.
Upper Xen
29-01-2005, 03:11
I know it sounds odd Upper Xen. If you think about it, a lot of nations on NS have odd names. I think I'll change it to "Star Forge Industries" for when I make my permenant changes.
I'll give you that, but I prefer names that I can roll of my tongue really quickly.
Good idea, BTW on the name Star Forge Industries.
I'll give you that, but I prefer names that I can roll of my tongue really quickly.
Good idea, BTW on the name Star Forge Industries.
I think that I should make a new store front and make it more oppen to other sci-fi technologies... maby even including my own.
Kyanges, "G.E.H" sounds kinda awkward to pronounce, and it looks, no offense to Huntaer or you, kinda odd.
As for my choice of "Armscorp," I think it sounds cool....has that buzzwordy corporate feel to it.
You will note, that this is all subject to opinion. To some "G.E.H" may have that, "buzzwordy corporate feel to it."
I agree, "Star Forge Industries" sounds somewhat better to me, but the word, "Industries" is used so much now, (Even by me). Have any other ideas on what to slap on to the end?