NationStates Jolt Archive

The Republican army hoping to restablish democracy in the country after years of oppresvie ruler by oppresive kings and emperors. The army was willing to sacfrice themsevles to their cause.
"After many years of the ruler by dictroial emperors and kings The Scandinvans will finally be free from the yoke of their opressors,"yelled rebel genral Marcus.
"Over the ridge pf thpse hills are the Imperialists they may outnumber us but God is on our side!!b Now charge and bring freedom to our great people!" yelled gneral Marcus.
The battle took place in a deep valley with a large river right in it's center. The armies of both sides enocuntered heavy ressitance form the other force. Many brave Republicans died that day along with even more Imperilists
but thanls to this victory they had been able to gain territory in large areas of the mountains.

whats your point?

whats your point?
OOC: It's a badly written revolution peice; that's the point. Don't be rude. As to the author of this...way too short. I suggest you look up some other revolution threads in II and see how they were done, then rewrite yours.