NationStates Jolt Archive

"The border Guards lay dead, slumped over their posts as trrop after troop marched into the unprepared, and undefended Lebensturm. With Candafree air superiority overhead, the coiuntry was in a panic. The World War Of Their country had finally arrived"

ooc: "The world war of their country had arrived"? does your first grade teacher know you talk like this? I know mine'd have a heart attack just reading the atrrociuos mangling of the english language. on a related note, does lebenstrum know youve invaded? why did you invade? how did your troops kill the border guards? how do you know the border guards didn't have tanks and or battle mechs and that your puny forces could have possibly had a chance against them? This is very poorly RPed and not at all interesting, give it some pizzazz, some intrigue make people either want to help you and your rightousness or despise your evil, more description at the very least.

OOC: Welcome to the forums! Please read the stickies: had you read them, you would have known what you have just done is godmodding. You have to begin the invasion and let the country reply to show their losses: you can't tell them their losses or tell them what's going on in their country. Also, Juitel is right: if your going to RP, try to make it a little more interesting. It's kinda boring to read, "I send 5,000 guys to your nation. They shoot at the border guards."