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The Ruin of Ages [important, please read]

Momanguise
13-11-2004, 15:24
The shadows, augmented by the flickering flame danced upon the walls. The soft drone of hushed voiced uttering the passage of death reverberated throughout the chamber as the dying man was taking his last breaths. The man who had taken Momanguise out of the ashes of the great fall was on his death bed, the high pitched straining of his failing lungs mixing into a macabre counterpoint with the crackle of torches and the incessant murmur of the wardens of death. The torches dimmed, and the chant grew louder.

Nobody outside of this secluded compound had seen or heard of Ernesto Sanchez for over three weeks. Ever since he succumbed to the advanced cancer that he had hidden from the his adoring public, he had been hidden quite successfully from their prying eyes. Now though, the old man was to be laid to rest at last. As the chant of the wardens grew into a great crescendo, the tallest stepped forwards, his face shrouded in shadow as he pulled his jet black hood high over his head. He was a mountain of a man, easily seven feet tall he exuded a sense of authority and destiny that most men die for dreams of that mere impression of power. A voice rang out from beneath the layer of cloth, a cold and mighty voice that contained no vocal imperfection, a rich tone that contained inside it a endless void of meaning. As he spoke, the chant of the wardens dropped a tone, keeping in perfect syncopation with the steady words of the stranger. ‘A new age is dawning,’ he began, a steady and irreversible rhythm playing on his lips, ‘When the old who have served their purpose must wane and finally pass out of the sight of men, for like the sun is eclipsed by the moon, the new order must usurp the past and lead us out of this night, for a new, red dawn is rising!’

His voice betrayed no excitement, but the sheer power within his tone commanded respect and authority. On the stone bed, the final altar, the dying man croaked incoherently as he tried to protest. The speaking figure, his massive frame silhouetted against the dark wall, showed no recognition of this pathetic attempt to assert the forgotten authority of an age past. A drum began to sound, a slow and steady beat that moved with a sense of ultimate intention while the figure continued, his rich voice sounding like a death knell, a tolling bell. ‘Now, now the blood must run of that forgotten epoch must run as time itself runs. The cry of pain must sound as a crowing trumpet sounded in the glorious battles of old. Now the flesh must burn as the pyres of the heroes of old consumed themselves in an ecstasy fire. Now! Now the blood must run as the river, as time, as the blood of the people themselves.’ The drum beat rose into an orgasm of rhythm and the chant dropped into a beautiful cadence the figure drew a shining ornamental knife, an embodiment of death itself, from the folds of his cloak. He raised the gleaming blade high above his head, his own voice falling into a mesmerised chant, ‘The lamb of God, we perish you for our sins as we ourselves will perish for our sins. Man, from dust you came and to dust you shall return!’

The knife fell. It sung through the air, effortlessly driving itself through skin, vessels, bone. As the moral blood blossomed from the open wound, he retracted the knife, and the figure remained without any emotion of pity or empathy for the wretched man lying prostrate before him, raking his lungs and coughing up sickly black blood. Sanchez broke the silence with a ghostly death rattle, like the howling of the wind it permeated every corner of the room, and the hearts of the assembled men. They let out a collective drone of finality, as the epoch of Sanchez ended, and the age something new and terrifying had begun. The figure, up till now shrouded in total darkness slipped the hood from his head, revealing himself for the first time. His thick set and pale face, contrasted by his black as the night hair, emulated a sense of power, of authority, of leadership. He took a flaming torch from the wall, and threw it unceremoniously unto the dead man. As the flames feasted on his flesh, the unhooded man spoke again, a cold fury in his voice that reeked of a sense of destiny. ‘Let them know,’ he uttered, his throat chocked with pride, ‘That Koda the Ruin of Ages has arisen, and the world must take notice.’

As the funeral pyre roared in life, he turned his back upon the smoky chamber, his duties as leader of Momanguise already playing like devils upon his mind.
Momanguise
13-11-2004, 17:44
The news came to the ordinary people as news always does, disjointed and inaccurate. Throughout Momanguise, citizens woke up to the news that the fundamental change in the history of Momanguise had taken place. Democracy, that most fundamental of all the guiding principals of the state, was gone. As the people stared in awe and shock at the emerging news, red shirted militia took to the streets, beating protestors and dragging away leading dissidents. Regular army units, confused and unsure of their position, did nothing to stop these red shirts as overhead jets of the Momanguise Air Force circulated in apparant support of the coup. On massive screens, Koda himself was projected as the saviour of Momanguise, and televised addresses were given to the nation. Appearing swathed in traditional dress, he spoke with an air of authority that Sanchez could never have hoped to possess.

'People of Momanguise! Today, Ernesto Sanchez has passed away, killed by natural causes. He has named me as his successor. Through the stregnth invested in me, I will bring Momanguise to a new age of prosperity and power! Democracy, like capitalism, is an abstract concept, and it is our duty to not allow our vision to be clouded by such mortal concepts. I pledge to have the nerve and the resolve to do away with these useless and outdated institutions, for far from serving the people, these institutions hinder the people! I take it upon myself, and myself alone, the burden of leadership of this country. Whilst you have your lives to live as you please, I will shoulder this great weight with no thourght for myself. Come, comrades, invest your power inside of me, so I can lead Momanguise into the new, red dawn that is rising in the east!'

Koda the Eternal,
Supreme Leader of Momanguise
~The Ruin of Ages~
Momanguise
13-11-2004, 19:18
bump?
Momanguise
13-11-2004, 20:04
tentative bump?
imported_ViZion
13-11-2004, 20:06
TAG (busy atm)
Momanguise
13-11-2004, 20:41
Typical II, I make a thread about cats and I get a zillion responces. Democracy falls and a brutal dictator rises to power and nobody cares...
Hogsweat
13-11-2004, 20:43
OOC-Muahah YES!
IC

We support the Koda regime fully. finally, the Momanguisians have seen the error of democracy. Thank goodness. I suggest our two leaders meet up sometime for a little.... aquaintance chat.
Comrade Electorate Josef Dorsal
Momanguise
13-11-2004, 20:51
ooc: and you didn't see it coming....

ic: That would be most excellent. Our two countries have had somewhat strained relations of late, but co-operation between nations is always the prefered course of action. I look forward to meeting Comrade Josef Dorsal soon.

Koda the Eternal,
Supreme Leader of Momanguise
~The Ruin of Ages~
Momanguise
14-11-2004, 10:07
Bump Please People Say Something
Vastiva
14-11-2004, 10:10
OOC: Mom. Serious question. As everything you say has happened is an internal event what sort of response do you want?

And I'll say the same thing I said to Roycelandia - in this RP, where is the room to add to the RP? What position is open for someone to come in on? Yes, the writing is marvelous; yes, it's an interesting idea. But what does that mean to the rest of us? Why would I support the government of Momanguise in the first place - or support a conquest against it?
Momanguise
14-11-2004, 10:42
ooc: Yes, of course you are right. Also, thank you for taking the time to point it out, rather than just not posting entirely (I'm looking at the fifty or so who have looked at it and done diddly squat). However, I have held a large number of allies and enimies who would be intrested in this development, Hogsweat being an example of both paradoxically. But, I also spent a lot of time on this, and it peeves me slightly that if one of the older nations (AMF, Pantera, Crimmond, even Credonia) was to post something vaugely similar, everyone would OMG fall over themselves to post back. Just a slight hint of jealousy on my behalf :) .
Vastiva
14-11-2004, 10:50
OOC: Relax. And people have such status because they post alot, and have become the idol/envy of many. And have been around so long they fart dust. ;)
Momanguise
14-11-2004, 11:05
ooc: Heh, the sound of the challanging of the established order. No worries though, thank you for your kind comments.
Momanguise
14-11-2004, 18:34
Late night bump.
Momanguise
14-11-2004, 19:37
Late night bump.

I concur wholeheartedly with the above statement.
Vastiva
15-11-2004, 01:25
OOC: What, no late night twist?
Red Tide2
15-11-2004, 01:29
OOC:One twist... coming up.
IC:
Official Response from Red Tide
"We support the new goverment in Momanguise and offer them (for free) the plans for our high-tech XM-100 Assualt Rifles."

OOC:If anybody has been following certain threads they would KNOW why this was a twist.
Armandian Cheese
15-11-2004, 01:35
The nation of Armandian Cheese wholeheartedly supports dictatorship, and is happy that a new nation has entered the fold. We shall support you however we can.
Momanguise
15-11-2004, 10:50
We thank the glorious leaders of RedTide and Armandian Cheese for their support. Long may our nations co-exist in harmony.

Koda the Eternal,
Supreme Leader of Momanguise
~The Ruin of Ages~

Official Life of Koda

Born 1967, Yuloski Koda Abramovitch

Gains top grades in his economics course, joins communist party at the age of 18

Serves with distinction in the Armed Forces

Rises through the ranks of the communist party and is named as Ernesto Sanchez's successor on his deathbed

Actual, and secret life of Koda

Born 1967 Yuloski Sergei Abramovitch

Gains top grades, but is expelled due to a brawl in which another student died

Assumes the name 'Koda', which translated literally means 'The End' or 'Finality'.

Dishounerably discarged from the army after killing a man in a duel over a woman, the incident was hushed up by the army due to the fact that the other man was a general.

Is employed by the MPSA (Momanguise Peoples Security Agency), and becomes their most gifted assaisin. He was a member of the firing squad that executed General Franklin, the then leader of Dr_Twist. Later, he also masterminded and executed the assaisination of Robert Smith of Decisive Action.

Outmanouvered his collegues when it became apparant that Sanchez was dying, and ultimately rose to become the supreme leader of Momanguise.