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Fall of the Dark Empire: Rise of the True Sith (very very Closed)

CorpSac
04-10-2004, 08:09
The bloody war between Coreworlds and the Dark Empire had raged on for over 5 years, both empires at first where evenly matched with minor battles on both sides with minor victorys. Billions dead with no end in sight no side being able to get a foot hold for long Till one day, one fateful day the war turned for the worse for the Dark Empire. A ship that had the power to disable entire systems and leaving fleets unable to defend themselves. With this new weapon the Coreworld fleet could tear though the defences of the Dark Empire with out the DE ship being able to fire a single shot. tho this ment they had to take systems 1 by 1 it was better then what the DESC could do and this was what was needed to end the war, to corse the fall of the dark empire from the space super powers......or so they thought.

Tak system
"are they ready" the figure sead looking down at the massive factory below.
"yes yes, all 1,000 have been sent to your ship" the Tech replyed "and tell the emperess that the full order of 10,000 will be completed on time if not sooner."
"very well" the Figure sead, turn and walking out. He walked to his shuttle sitting down with a view from the window. After about 5 minutes he was nearing his ship, he looked out into the space, 100s of imperial ships protecting the industiral world of Tak VII.
As soon as his shuttle docked he went to the cargo bay, about 1,000 steel Caskets stacked in the cargo bay. He walked over to it and looked in to the eyes of the soul less fighter, the pure killer with no mercy the Dark trooper.
This would be the last time he would ever come to the Tak system, for as soon as he left something happned, somthing that would shock the empire and the master minds of the war.

Tech Sargent Darkosh sat looking at the sensor screen, not far from the front there always task forces attack the system. He looked round the room and was just about to get up and get some coffee when the screen light up.
"HOLY SHIT" he shouted looking at the screen, 1000s of dots had apear, above them the type of vessals it was.
Then all of a sudden the Imperial fleet heading for the ships registered "disabled" same with the Defence platforms and sats around the planets. somthing out there had the power to disable to the entire system only the plantary defences work and that was what was on the planet, and that was no much. he knew the system was going to fall, and he couldnt even contact the pizza man if he wanted to....comm systems were down.

Secret
Corlon
"it happens master, so how long till you take over" the young person sead
"soon Bandon soon. you see now that the Coreworlds R&D got that nug in the right direction from my spy, it wont be long till they get here. They will tho run into the new fleet and there weapon wont have an effect and the forge will force them to invade the planet. But they will find that will cost more lives then its worth." the Older one sead, "soon Bandon the rain of the so called sith house will end and the rise of the true sith, the Master of sith will rise and forge an empire like no seen. The rain of Bane will come, ive waited over 5,000 years for this and now it is time."
Arenumberg
04-10-2004, 08:14
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CoreWorlds
04-10-2004, 08:45
It was a dark time for two powerful Empires of the Galaxy. The Imperial Republic of Coreworlds and the Dark Empire of Corpsac have been at war for 5 long and terrible years. Worlds have been destroyed on both sides, with various superweapons. Billions of lives have been lost. But the war continues. The war still raged.

I, Daniel Masaki, Commander of the Sabers fighter squadron, Heir to the Empire, have killed more enemies than I could count, have survived more battles than I could remember. You wouldn't think a 16 year old boy could fly an X-wing to kill hundreds of enemy pilots, but you've never been a Jedi.

"Beep beep beep twitter beep." Rocky, the R2 unit beeped and whistled. He has been in my family for as long as I can remember, and other than Artoo himself, is the only R2 unit I would trust.

"Yes, I know were coming up to the Tak System." I replied. Yet another battlefield to throw yet another million troops on yet another campaign. I sighed, knowing that we'd probably take the system, only to lose it in a few months to the Empress of Corpsac. If only there was a weapon that could win this war easy...

Blue-shifted light soon turned to streaks of light, and then, POW, I reverted to realspace. Behind me came the rest of my squadron, then the 30 Star Destroyers and other escorts popping out of hyperspace. Finally, the Super Star Destroyer Allegiance rumbled out, ready for trouble.

"Ok, guys. S-foils in attack position...wait a minute." I stared in confusion at my scanners. "This isn't right. Sticks, your scanners showing anything?"

"No, Tiger." She said. Her real name is Jessica Betancourt, but we call her Sticks because she's skinny. "Looks like a lot of ionic interference, but there's no nebula around here."

"Yeah, and all the enemy ships seem to have gone dead. No enemy chatter, either." Chad, a third pilot said. "This is weird."

The a crackling voice from the Super Star Destroyer was heard. Admiral Kermode.

http://www.saltus.bm/Web/About/images/Headmaster_Kermode.jpg

"It's time I revealed to you all what's happened here. After long months of research, we have finally been able to achieve a powerful weapon that could help us win the war: An Ion Disruptor Device. It is a weapon with enough power to EMP everything outside an atmosphere in a system. Basically, your enemy's systems are fried. This was a test of that device.
Now hear this. If any enemy does still survive to shoot, destroy him. But if he's disabled, leave him alone. Though many atrocities have been committed on both sides during the past 5 years, it won't happen to this one. Understood?"

"Yes sir." We chorused like schoolchildren.

I grinned. Looks like we don't have to kill so many today. "Ok, you heard what the Headmaster said (we call him that because he sounds like a teacher). Lock and load, watch your six, and be careful who you shoot."

It turned out that a few fighters survived the ion disruption, mostly from the planet and we took care of them, all too easily. I didn't even have to use the Force, just my piloting skills. I saw assault shuttles heading to the planet and disabled ships, and knew that boarding actions were happening. Some would fight, and some would simply surrender. I covered the lead shuttle, all the way down to the planet, where weapons still worked. I helped strafe the enemy so that the Marines could land and fight. Explosions occurred as the battle rages for Tak VII, and this one would clearly fall to us.
Japanese States
04-10-2004, 21:43
Tak VII, a cold deserlate place with a Atmosphere so poisened That no liveing thing could live outside the biospheres of the Planet. Millions of people live on Tak VII and millions would die befor for surrendering to the Coreworld empire and the people from Coreworlds new that. As the Sirens rang and people ran to the bunkers, Massive blast doors slip open on the surface of the planet and Plasma bolter canons, Missile Battries and Torpedo Battires pop out. What was left of the Fighter Garason was fraticly getting into the skys to try and fight, even tho it was useless but still they had try and stop the invasion force.
The Transports landed and 10s of thasounds of Coreworldians troops exited crossing the barren lands of Tak VII, attacking the local Garasons.
"Commander Rogers you need to get a company over to the *explodtion heared and coreworldian voice hear* shit they broke though.....*a Corpsacian scream*" Thats all Captain Nak heard over the comms, He was only 17 drafted in thanks to the plantary draft. Young good looking, funny he was a ladys man not a fighter.
As he saw the Coreworldian troops head towards him on the barrans, he told his company to hold fire. "wait till you see the whites in there eyes, remmber we're out numbered here atlest 4:1 so make each shot count" he sead, "its been a honor men". As the Coreworld troops marched closer and closer still the company sat, Then he gave the order. "CHHHHAAARRRRGGGGEEEE" he shouted as his company of 160 men ran towards the income troops, Fireing away pulling out there Plasma blades. They teared into the troops opening fire at point blank, cutting of limbs but still it wasnt anough there was just to meny of them. After a good 20 minutes of fightering the Corpsacians where cut down, the wounded taken captaive and the dead taken aswell for later bairial as it had come that both sides seemed to the dead of the other on the battle field, dog tags gave the names, Age, DOB and family. Meny corpsacians soldiers carryed with them letters of last requests, thing they asked who ever found them to do no one knew if the coreworldians did the request.

Underground in the manufactureing Plant of the Dark Troopers the team was frantic with fear, running around copying files then deleteding them.
"hurry the hell up they cant get the infomation" The head Tech sead "down load all of the infomation onto a drone, then send it to Corlon and also delete all infomation on...it"
"yes sir" someone replyed, an Explodtion rocked the room and the AI spoke.
"Sir, Coreworldian troops have enter level 5, Boomers are trying to hold them off but are quickly getting cut down. Clash's are also taken up defenceive stances and clone troopers are prepareing to attack." The female voice of the AI sead "warning Level 4 Breached, Sectors 5, 12, 18, 21, 32 and 35, Coreworldian troops are over whelming defences."
"activate self destruct, Scilent mode" he sead, "is the data copyed to a drone yet?" the head tech sead.
"yes, Beth activate drone 12, set corse to Corlon." one of the other techs sead to the AI.
"drone 12 away, activateding Stealth mode....drone passed Plantary blockaid and made jump into hyperspace." Beth sead.
Just as she finished her world Coreworldian troops burst in, the techs pulled out pistals and opened fire on the incomeing troops but where cut down quickly.
"command this is Captain Hikaru, we have captatured the base." The Older good looking Coreworld tooper sead.
"do you know what they where manufactureing?" a voice came from the Comm. One of the troops ran over to a concel, then his jaw droped. The Techs didnt finish deleted the basics of the Operation. "Sir, they....they where produceing Dark Troopers." the trooper sead. Hikaru Relayed the infomation to who ever was on the other side, Then the Troop looked up.
"sir we've got less the a minute to get the hell out of here befor the main Fusion reactors explode." the trooper sead.

On the Surface the Largest Biosphered city, the battles ranged on when suddenly a Explotion happened rocking the entire city. just outside a massive Mushroom cloud formed, and a Cartor the size of a small City and extreamly deep was smokeing. The Factorys 2 Gigaton Fusion reactors had exploded. The Crator could be seen fro space and the mushroom cload was so high it could be seen for 100s of miles.

Battles still raged on most fo the Corsacian marines went into hand to hand combat, the Combat AIs crushing things in there wake only to be taken down in a hail of fire from 6 other troops. Nuclear weapons exploded left right and center has the Corpsacians fought for there homes. Worst of all the Corpsacians had let lose the Hive of Xenomorphs that were not only attacking Coreworldians but also CorpSacians takeing them to the nest, now it was a 3 way war and it was going worse for the Corps then it was for the cores. Confussion, Disaray all of it no one knew what the hell was happening. There where Jedi's leading the Armys of Coreworlds, CorpSacian Siths rampageing into the Jedi's. All around no matter where you looked there was a battle if it was to stay alive or just simple to eat. The invasion would take a few days and even after that the Coreworldians had to take care the the Xenomorphs, thanks to a idiotic CorpSacian General who thought it was a good idea to let them out.

what was left of the Dark Troopers on the planet where riping to shreds the Coreworldians but it wouldnt last there was just to meny Enamys. Each time one would fall to prevent any Infomation on the things getting into the wrong hands, 2 micro fission charges exploded with the force of 10 Kt's that made shore noting lived and killed what ever troops where dumb to go near the thing.

OOC: dam jolt and i was signed in as CorpSac grrrr and it posted this in as CorpSac grrr
Powerful Sith Lords
04-10-2004, 22:07
no offense
and I know this is private

but could you 2 fix your terrible spelling

it's not sead it's said
for one

use dictionary.com to help your spelling
these posts are sorta hard to read
Japanese States
04-10-2004, 22:09
how about you go away, its not like you dont know what the word is ment to be.
Powerful Sith Lords
04-10-2004, 22:25
how about you go away, its not like you dont know what the word is ment to be.

wow
such hostilities over a mere suggestion

I have terrible spelling myself and at one point couldn't even spell "doesn't" but I was never so hostile towards suggestions of improving my spelling. Even today I still sometimes have a hard time spelling my own name.

As for not knowing what the word is ment to be. In some cases that was only after reading the whole sentence two or three times.

Although, I think I shall leave you alone. You seam far too hostile towards any thought or suggestion of self-improvement.

Again, no offense intended. Wish you wouldn't take it as such.
Japanese States
04-10-2004, 23:21
im pissed off since each person needs to point it out, now NO ONE ELCE POST THANK YOU.
CorpSac
05-10-2004, 01:09
bump for Coreworlds
CoreWorlds
05-10-2004, 01:14
OOC: Best get on MSN. I'm writing it up now.
Yotomo kiwii
05-10-2004, 01:16
silverbeet prismatic
CorpSac
05-10-2004, 01:18
OOC: Best get on MSN. I'm writing it up now.
will when i can mate will when i can.

and does no one understand the meaning of CLOSED, no one needs posts in here unless your invited by me AND coreworlds.
CoreWorlds
05-10-2004, 01:24
As I flew around the mushroom clouds and the turbulence, I shook my head in sadness at the futile sacrifice. I heard the reports of the enemy producing Dark Troopers, and I know a few more soldiers would die to take them down. But with the breakthrough of the ion disruptor, perhaps the war can finally end. Perhaps we can finally achieve victory.

But I still had to wonder...how many more troops will yet die before the bloodshed is over? I shook my head, as the call came over the comms that major resistance has ended, and the planet has been captured. A tattered Imperial flag was hoisted in what’s left of the capital, and the troops cheered as the Battle of Tak ended.

“Looks like it’s over, eh?” Chad asked.

“Yeah.” I said. “And with that new weapon of ours, we’ll be able to finish this war in time for Christmas.”

“That’s what they said during the Earth world wars, and the first year of this shit.” Jason Raleigh, the youngest member (14) of my squadron spat cynically. I couldn’t blame him, though. This war has made everyone cynical about peace.

“Well, let’s get back to the Allegiance, freshen up, and await our next orders.” I said, banking upwards towards space. The rest of the squadron followed, now that we completed our objective.

Once we landed at the primary hangar bay, we were debriefed and then we were dismissed to do whatever we wish until the Admiral called. I, for one, escorted Jessica to the SSD Café, where dozens of pilots, troops, mechanics and other members of the ship ate and drank, chatted, and played pool.
CorpSac
05-10-2004, 05:49
2 days later

Corlon

"THEY WHAT" she shouted, "how the hell did they take the Tak system?"
"we dont know, we got the drone it has all the data we're shore they dont know about...."
"i dont care if they know or not, order the fleets to be on high alert in that area i dont want the bastards getting another system." she ordered.

Lexington System

Lexington system, the Major shipyards of the northen sector and one of the most fortified.
Commander Elayna Breen sat in the Stations bar, talking to a few of her Combat buddys. she was called Lucky E since meny a battle shes been damage to the point where most would have died yet some how she hasnt. Even so she never took chances when she could help it, tho what people didnt know didnt hurt her. Her mother was a Dark Servent of the Emperess and so she had inheareted a few traits that no one knew about.
"hay Lucky you hear?" Psyco said
"hear what?" Elayna replyed looking up and takeing her last shot of Fire wiskey.
"Tak, its be invaded we're on alert" Psyco chuckled "seems like high command are paranoid that the Coreworld fleets would attack here"
Elayna grumbled and finished her drink, "i fucking hate this jump sometimes why cant a lady get drunk when she wants to" she mumbled.
Psyco and Elayna walked down to the docks, takeing a shuttle back to the Armagendon a Tigerclaw class Destroyer.
All around the system the whole place was on alert, weapon platforms getting ready, even the fucking failsafe nova platforms around the sun where active phaseing out into hyperspace. Shipyards weapons activated and fighters were out in force, covering corvettes and alike and staying in formations.
Elayna and her squad of 7 where in the far rims of the system with the Armagedon and another Destroyer the Battlewitch with the Ravanos Heavy Cruiser Tenchi and the Dreadnought Corlon.
They where patroling the outer rims of the system rather boring work but someone had to do it.

System defences:
just over 400 ships
12 figher Garrson (70 fighters each)
System defence platforms (over 200 mix of Plasma bolters, Torpedo and Lasers)
Mines
Nova platfroms around the sun (phased into hyperspace) incase the system falls to enamys.
CoreWorlds
05-10-2004, 07:56
2 days later...
The pilots and crew of the fleet was being briefed on the next course of action.

Admiral Kermode is presiding in the large briefing room. A hologram of the Lexington system is shown in the center of the room.

"This is the Lexington System, as of 12 hours ago. It is a major shipyard of Corpsac, and High Command wants it taken out as soon as possible. There are over 400 ships in this system, including 12 garrisons of fighters, as far as our spies could tell. Since this is a major system, we have Interdictor cruisers to sniff out nova bombs. You remember the incident at Derra V."

We nodded solemnly. A fleet managed to take the Corpsac world, but nova platforms were sent into the sun, blowing the world, millions of innocents, and the fleet to kingdom come. Since then, we've used Interdictors (escorted by Vicstars) to pull the novas out of hyperspace and destroy them before they could destroy the system. This one will be no different.

"Well then. The main fleet (SSD Allegience, 30 Impstars, 10 Impcruisers, lotta escorts) will be assaulting the shipyard itself. Armageddon and Reign of Fire battlegroups (15 Impstars + escorts) will be flanking the enemy positions to draw fire away. All fighter squadrons know their duty: to keep all enemy fighters and bombers away from the capital ships. Any questions?"

"What if the enemy manages to blow their own sun?" A young pilot asked.

Must be a newbie, I thought. Who else would ask such a stupid question?

"Then we rendzevous at best speed back here and try some other system. Just don't run out of fuel before that happens." Dark chuckling emanated from the crowd, embarrassing the pilot a bit. "Anyways, you have your assignments. We'll be jumping in 30 minutes so don't dawdle. May the Force be with you. Dismissed."

Chattering immediately struck up as the crewmembers headed to their stations. The Admiral caught me and we saluted, me first.

"Your father just sent you word that your mother is pregnant." The Admiral said. "It's supposed to be twins."

"Really? That's great news! When's Mom's expecting?"

"About 2 months. Reason why the message took so long is that news from home is slow."

"Yeah, I know." The holonet was down for a year or so, when the relay stations were attacked by Corpsac. Dispatch ships in dangerous areas are rare because of the obvious dangers. It's no wonder that every message to and from home is precious. I saluted. "Thank you, sir."

"Anytime. Go on then, and get ready to jump."

"Yes sir!" I stood at attentions, spun around on my heels and turned around, heading to my buddies in the squadron at the main hangar.

Twins. Now I have another reason that we must end this war quickly. I shall do my best to make it happen.

30 minutes later, the fleets made the jump to hyperspace, ready for yet another battle. This time, the Ion Disruptor Device won't be used, so it would be bloody.

OOC:
Next post, the Battle of Lexington begins!
Arenumberg
05-10-2004, 08:10
OOC: I think CorpSac is dyslexic (If your not correct me) So back off, Even if he isnt, back off he doesnt sleep often, lol, and Coreworlds just stays up too late, lol.
CoreWorlds
05-10-2004, 08:13
OOC: I think CorpSac is dyslexic (If your not correct me) So back off, Even if he isnt, back off he doesnt sleep often, lol, and Coreworlds just stays up too late, lol.
OOC: Yeah, but my staying up too late is a sign of dedication to my writing skills. I am the l33t writ3r! :p
CoreWorlds
05-10-2004, 08:43
http://yoyo.its.monash.edu.au/groups/mac/shinji.jpg
The Heir, Commander Daniel Masaki! *Girls seem to be attracted, but I don't know why.*
CoreWorlds
06-10-2004, 03:47
Lexington
Stars stopped streaking out and returned to points of light as the Allegience fleet suddenly burst out of hyperspace 30,000 km from the shipyards.

"Admiral, we're in the system, all shields up and we're in range of the enemy."

"Very well. Engage ECM, jam all communications. Fire at will!" Admiral Kermode ordered.

No matter how many times I see it, it's always awesome to see the Super Star Destroyer literally explode with turbolasers, ion cannons, missiles and torpedoes, all aiming at the shipyard or enemy ships. The other Star Destroyers also chose targets of opportunity and let loose their smaller, but no less dangerous blows of firepower.

"Ok, guys. Lock and load." I said, as Rocky screeched with the warning of incoming fighters. "Double up the forward deflectors!"

The forward shields strengthed as we passed through the cloud of fighters. I wasted no time in blazing away at the enemy fighters. Using the Force, I and several of my pilots were able to blaze a path of destruction like a conflageration. Part of the reason why I stopped counting the number of lives I've taken.

I dove, looped and rolled, taking out enemy fighters with every Force-targeted shot of my laser cannons.

The Admiral checked his watch. "Not long now." He muttered.

And the battle continues to rage...and there's nothing left to do, but kill or be killed.
CoreWorlds
08-10-2004, 21:39
As I chased an enemy fighter, I bumped into this thread and blew the enemy fighter apart.
CorpSac
08-10-2004, 22:29
alarms went off across the ship as the Coreworld vessals enter the system, but for the task force in the outer rims of the system was a ISD, a dead one.

"HALL HAND OPEN FIRE TAKE THE FUCKING THING OUT NOW" the captain of the Tenchi shouted.

Plasma bolters, Ion beam cannons, Pulse cannons all that the task force had opened fire on the ship. Just as the ISD returned fire tearing though one of the destroyers shields tearing large holes into the hull of the destroyer, the dreadnought returned fire with all 18 twin heavy plasma bolters and 6 plasma cannons followed with a volloy of Fussion missiles and torpedos.
The heavy Cruiser followed up with a volly of muti torpedos and muti missiles and a full barage of its weapons.

Fighters clashed even if the Coreworldians where out numbered they still cut though the novices but the 14 elite pilots where makeing short work with the Coreworldian vessals that where stupid anough to try and taken them on, the sky light up in space between the vessals. the destroyer that had taken heavy damage in the first few minutes was hit hard again by the ISD, tearing though its rear section breaching the reactor core makeing the vessal explode in a blaze of fire damageing the Heavy Cruiser.

Elayna and her wing man Psyco were tearing though the Coreworldian fighters, they may have the advantage of shields on them but the Corpsacians had teh advantage of better manuverble fighters. A fighter got behind Elayna, she couldnt shake im. Quickly fireing her top trusters she spun her fighter it was faceing the back still going in the same direction and opened fire with her bolters, tearing though the fighter. She quickly turned her figher round when a call from the Destroyer came in "all fighter return we getting out of here".
Shit she though just as the battle was getting good, just then a blast smashed though one of her wings makeing her spin. "Psyco get that fucker off me will ya" she shouted.
A few seconds later she saw her destroyer go up in a blaze, the 2nd destroyer to go. The fighters were getting cut down and the dreadnought was the only thing to hold fighters left. quickly Psyco covered her as she tryed to pilot back to the dreadnought, watching as the 2 ships poured more fire power into the ISD.

Across the System the Corpsacians where getting cut down, the SSD, the one thing that scared the shit out of any Corpsacian defence force. Meny went for the Jump gate but got cut up others where desprate and tryed to ram the ship. No one was incommand of the force and it didnt look good for the Corpsacians...not at all.