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Greetings, all.

I would really like some feedback on my ongoing Worlds Without End RP. Please post comments, criticisms, speculation, etc. in here.

Here's the link to the RP.... http://forums2.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=357520

Thanks. :)

No comments? No feedback? :(

Please give me some.

The attention given to detail is impressive and it is a rather good RP, other than that I don't like anything to do with future, space, or anything that isn't Earth. I like your RP, overall it gets a 92-95% on the DA grading scale.

You could use more sex and violence (as it seems now, aside from the people being arrested, there is little if any "roughing people up") pistol whip a few people, maybe some aliens attack the spaceship, who knows, but I know you and I'm sure you'll make it enjoyable and good. :D