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Gruesome murders in Maslawyia! (Open RP)

Maslawyia
28-09-2004, 14:22
OOC: Basically I want some people to RP being the detective(s) to try and catch this guy that I'll play.

IC:

It was a nice little bar, not too trendy but not too dingy at the same time. He'd already had a few shots of Tequila just enough to sharpen the senses. A few girls in their tarty clothes had already got a bit drunk and had got up and started dancing on the bar, the barkeep didn't mind as long as he had a good view.

He knew what he wanted though. He had seen her when he was on the underground in the morning getting ready to go to work. Tall, blonde, slim with green eyes. Oh yes he could taste her already. The night had started to draw to a close and she got up to leave. Outside it had started to rain and she was getting soaked and desparately wanted a taxi. He meanwhile sat on his motorbike wearing his leathers, helmet and visor pulled down.

Brum brum zooooooooooooom!

He had started his engine and was after her but a safe enough distance away so that he just looked like he was part of the traffic behind the cab. He saw her cab pull up. She was getting ready to get out, he had to act quick,he pulled up in front of them and got out. He kept his visor down and took out his silenced gun.

Phooot, phooot, phoooot!

Three shots through the windscreen killed the driver. She started to scream but it was too late urine moistened the passengers seat as his fist met her face leaving a tooth on the ground below and blood streaming from her nose. She was out cold. He carried her into a dark alley by her tenement block next to his bike where the storage case was open. He pulled out an axe and with smooth powerful cuts separated her four limbs from her body. She was barely alive but now all that was left was a stump connected to a head.

He stared. An interesting artistic concept yet to be completed. He severed the head and quickly walked over and put the axe away. He got out his Black and Decker battery operated drill and started to drill the different parts of the body into the will forming what he thought was a public mosaic of humanity.

He admired his artwork for a second and then walked over to his bike.

Brum brum zooooooooooooom!

He was gone.....

OOC: You can join in now. Finding the body investigations etc etc I will RP witnesses interviewed and more murders.
Maslawyia
28-09-2004, 14:29
OOC: This really pisses me off if you don't care why post and ruin my thread please delete your post ok?
Maslawyia
28-09-2004, 14:36
OOC: Why don't you just fuck off cos you've just fucked up what was a decent thread that could've become a decent RP.
Mekanta
28-09-2004, 16:03
-OOC-
If there's any problem with my detective, go ahead and tell me. I'll use a Terran slave loyal to the Empire instead. ^_^

-IC-
TXT712-Gamma, better known as "Erix", stood in the shadows, smiling. His black trenchcoat hid his arsenal, all Underpact as Lord Akai ordered.

His drive to obey his orders remained present in his mind, despite Lord Kuroi having told him to go relax. It was too set into his mind.

Too programmed into his very being. Being a Simulant, he was made to be as Organic as possible, but he was still a Mechaform. A machine made for a purpose. And that purpose, given Kuroi's orders to go relax, was to go to a bar and get hammered...

He walked through the streets, freezing as he smelled something. Blood...

Breaking into a run rivaling that of some professional athletes, the trenchcoated Simulant dashed through a maze of alleyways, finally seeing the sight.


Fact: This death seems to have been forces
Fact: No signs of ritualistic suicide
Conclusion: Murder
Fact: Lord Kuroi is present in this city
Fact: Orders are present to protect Kuroi-sama
Conclusion: Threat to Lord Kuroi
Fact: Orders are present to work with this nation
Fact: This is an illegal activity
Conclusion: Assist local police forces. Find person responsible.

Final Analysis: Capture entity or entities responsible...
Maslawyia
28-09-2004, 16:39
OOC: Thats fine. I think if we get 1 or two more detectives to work together it'll work well. I posted this in NS forum too cos I thought this thread died here. So it's up to you where we do this.
Sanctaphrax
28-09-2004, 18:16
Maslawiya, check your tg's!
Maslawyia
28-09-2004, 18:17
I have and replied.
Maslawyia
28-09-2004, 22:03
aaaaait bump! respect