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we at sephrioth declare peace with cam III

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IC:
High Command, Prospero
Cam III was working out who to invade next when an aide ran into his room, waving a peice of paper in Cam III's face.
What! Get that out my face!
Sorry, my lor..
Sensing his masters annoyance a Citadel Guard had struck down the man and picked up the paper and handed it towards Cam III
Thank you.
He began to read the paper, not paying it much attention. He had got to about half way down when he blurted out Jesus! The said towards a Citadel Guard, [/i]Take the Truth and Reconcilation and 5 Hades and go to Sephron.[/i]
Why?
Just do it!
The guard ran out and bumped into one of the Halcyon class destroyers pilot, knocking him to the ground.
Ahh, just the person I needed.
Jesus, watch were your go... WHAT?! You need me? What for?
We have to go to Sephron.
Why? Just do it!
Yes, what are you? Sir, commander, admi..
The guard started to push him down the corrindor heading towards the docking bays....

----1 Hour later----
The Truth and Reconcilation and Hades had departed for Sephron, they were on a strictly peaceful mission. In that way all the weapons had been taken offline, they were as dead as a fish out of water...

OOC: In a peaceful geasture I am giving you 5 Planet Killers. (I noted your request on the message board..)

ooc Thanks as a return gesture of good will we will give you one vengance superfortress.
ic an aide ran into the seprioth warroom. ooc thats where the new president rufus has his office ic two bereker gaurds stood mencingly by the presidents desk glared at the aide.
the aide says ''sir the short range senors pick up a convoy of vehicles''
''so'' says the president. he points a pulse pistol at the aide get one vengance ready and send it to cam III as a gesture of friendship says the president.
''Witch one do you wish me to send oh great leader''. Qiut kissing my ass you anoying me'' says the president. ''Send the defender'' he orders he pulls the triger on the pulse pistol and shoots the aide in the head and kills the aide''now let that be a leason i don't stand ass kissing.''

Sephron
Be on alert, take us to the nearest space port.
Aye sir
The 5 Hades destroyers had recieved their orders and procceded towards a space port. They had arrived uncloaked so that Sephrioth could see them, The ships had reached the docks and requested permision to dock.
Right, take us out of here!
Admiral Shay told the Truth and Reconciliation. The ship had departed, leaving the hadesin the hands of Sephrioth Berzerkers...

occ thanks cam did you get the defender
ic the presiden was teleported to space port 26
he mutters 'beautyfull just beautyfull.'' k lets test this baby out he orders he boards the hades fire the nova cannons at domnair our fourth moon.
the nova cannons begin to charge.

OOC: Thanks, I will use it for many puporses. Your one step closer to a good post Seph! If you keep using quotation marks (") then your post will make more sense.(NOT ment in a bad way what so ever)

IC: The Vengance Superfotress had come under Camian control when the truth and reconciliation had docked with it. They both headed back to Propsero, happy knowing they had a job well done. And that Cam III wouldn't kill them...

Wait! Lets see the test.
Oh very well, but if Cam III knows, we will be killed.
Yes but only for the test.

The ships turned around and procceded to watch the test...

the cannons were fully charged ''move'' he orders the weapons offcier
yes sir the weapons offcier said afriad.
Ruffus aims at domnair and fires the nova cannons they impact with domnair causing it to disintgrate. ''sweet'' the president says ''imagine when we replace the nova cannons with a hades laser''.

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WHAT! Ours don't do that!
Chief weapons officer of the fleet Mknoll shouted.
Ahh, Cam III orderd improvements, just for Seph.
Damn it, get us those improvements!
Your the weapons officer of the fleet, you do it.
What?! But your the Admiral?!
Yes and?
Oh crap...
They watched from the bridge as they moon disintergrated, an amazing site.
Acctully, I will get them!

ic now lets assgin these to the death corps and resprayed with the seprioth flag says the president.
ooc the death corps are my space marrines.

Sephrioth

Another good attempt at role-playing. You still need to use quotation marks around your dialog but you are improving. Also, I suggest keeping your In Character and your Out Of Character comments seperate. It breaks the action when you place an OOC remark in the middle of an IC action. Use line spaces to seperate actions from each other. That will clarify everything much better.



Good job both of you.

OOC: I'm trying to be a better RPer, I'm trying! Honest!