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Whittier and I RPed this one via yahoo.



WARNING: THIS RP IS NOT REALLY SUITED FOR YOUNGER VIEWERS. YOU’VE BEEN WARNED.

Brezhnekov’s 16-year-old daughter was walking home from school. The Raven had enlisted the help of two more CM intelligence operatives for this operation.

She’s walking with her friends. There are 5 of them.

A large black limousine pulls up about 30 feet in front of where the group is walking. Two men in suits and dark sunglasses step out

(Man 1)"Hello kids, how'd you all like a ride home?"

First girl: “No.”

Looks at man with weird look

(Man 1) "You all sure about that? Mr. Brezhnekov sent us to pick you all up to get you home safely."

(Man 1) "Ms. Sarah Brezhnekov, if you'd please come with us, your father is waiting."

(Sarah): I need to call my dad to find out if he did send you.

(Man 2) "There's a phone inside the car. If you'd just come along please."

(Man 2) "Your friends can come along if they want."

Alexandra, (Sarah’s friend), "I got a cell phone right here you can use."

Sarah "thanks". She takes here friends cell phone and begins dialing her dad's number.

Raven who is growing very impatient steps out of the limousine whips an UZI out from under his coat. "GET IN, NOW!"

The girls start screaming and running.

He fires into the air, "Move and die."

They drop the cell phone.

They were a few feet down the road when the gun was fired and they dropped to the ground.

(Raven) runs over and grabs Sarah, "Get up."

The other two men each motion for the others to get up.

Crying, with tears streaming down their faces they are led back to the vehicle at gun point.

A shop keeper who saw the incident runs out of his store with a shot gun and begins firing at the gun men, shouting "let them go".

Raven just levels his Uzi and blasts the man away

A red Honda Civic stops in front of the car and 5 male youths jump out and assault the kidnappers.

One of the men in the suits pulls out a pistol and shoots 3 of the men from the car. The other man pulls a sawed off shotgun out from under his coat and fires at the remaining 2 from the car

Raven gets into the back first and then motions for the others to follow, one man gets into the front to drive, and another gets into the middle. As the man is getting into the middle he smiles at Sarah and says, "I'm going to enjoy keeping an eye on you."

Raven tells the driver to floor it. They speed off, to an abandoned warehouse about 17 miles away. On the way they write a message and give it to one of the teens, they toss her out of the vehicle and carry on, the message says, "Resign or they'll all die."
There is one survivor from the 5 men from the car who is critically wounded; he can identify the men and the car but not where they went. The woman dumped out by the kidnappers, she was told to take the message to the incumbent.

The limo will be destroyed at the warehouse and 3 separate cars will be used in the future. All with clean plates.

The guard sitting next to Sarah lets his hand slide down to her leg; he starts to move it up her leg. He says, "God I'm going to enjoy you."

Raven hears him and says, "I said nobody touches them."

The guard quickly removes his hand from her leg and says, "sorry boss."

They’re about 5 miles from the scene when Raven says, "Okay, lets send him a message he can't ignore." the driver pulls over, they pick out one of the group, (there are 5 left including Sarah) The guard from the middle section of the limousine tells the girl to get out and walk.

(Operative 1) (To the girl) "Get out, move." (Pushes her forward)

He stops at the side of the road. (Operative 1) "Kneel down."

(Operative 1) (Pushes her to her knees) then he drops his pants. "Start sucking bi---."

After that was done, he beat her and raped her. Then he left her barely alive with a message. "Dear President, resign and drop out of the race or worse will happen to your daughter."

(Operative 1) (Gets back into a limousine. He turns to Sarah, running his hands through her hair. "Your friend was good, I can't wait to see how you are."

(Raven) "I said don't touch her."

(Operative 1) "Sorry boss. I forget things sometimes."

The limousine moved on and shortly later, they arrived at the warehouse, nobody saw them go in.

(Raven) "Everybody out."

(Raven) (To Sarah) "You come with me. Your friends are to follow those two nice gentlemen there." There were two more operatives inside the warehouse, total of 5 counting Raven and the 2 getting out of the limousine. Her 3 friends were locked in a large storage room, no way out, nothing, concrete room.

(Raven) (Leading Sarah to an empty room with just a chair and a camera, a black blanket draped behind the chair so nothing is given away, the room is sound proof so no outside signs can give clues) "Sit down."

(Raven) "I said sit down!"

She sat down.

(Raven) "Now I'm going to make a nice tape of you speaking, it's going to be sent to your father. I want you to tell him how you are, and what you think will happen to you if he doesn't do what we tell him. Do you know what it is we want?"

(Sarah) (In a nervous tone) "Is it money?"

(Raven) "Of course not, we've enough money to last many lifetimes, we want him to resign and quit the race. Now get ready." Motions 3...2...1... (he points at her, it's here cue to start talking)

(Raven) (Pauses the camera) "Don't ask questions kid, just talk."

(Sarah) “What’d my dad ever done to you." bursts into tears

(Raven) "We don't like his politics, I'm just following orders okay. We don't want a socialist running your nation. So he's got to step down."

(Sarah) “But my nation has always been socialist.”

(Raven) "Now are you going to make this tape or not?"

(Sarah) “No”

(Raven) "Yeah well I'm not here to debate you. Remember that guard you were sitting next to; he really would like 20 or 30 minutes with you. I've been nice in keeping him off of you, but I could just as easily turn my back for an hour and go outside for a cigar."

(Raven) "So you'll make it then?"

She reluctantly nods.

(Ravens) "That's a good girl."

She is very scared and frightened, and her voice quivers and tears stream down her cheeks as she talks.

(Raven) (Wearing a mask, he hands her a card that reads) "We're serious, we mean business, and you have 48 hours. Don’t call the police, don't call anybody, just call the media and tell them you're out of the race. Then you'll get her back alive and well, otherwise we'll send her back to you in pieces." He tells her, "Hold the card up, nice and good now so daddy can see it."

Holds it up.

(Raven) (Still wearing his mask) Appears behind her. "Don't worry. I'm not a child predator; your daughter won't be harmed in that way, at least not by me. But I can't stay awake for 48 hours straight, the sooner you drop out, the sooner you get her back means that the guy who is just waiting to have a go out her won't get to. So think about acting quick."

(Raven) (Still wearing his mask) Appears behind her. "Don't worry. I'm not a child predator; your daughter won't be harmed in that way, at least not by me. But I can't stay awake for 48 hours straight, the sooner you drop out, the sooner you get her back means that the guy who is just waiting to have a go out her won't get to. So think about acting quick."

Raven turns the camera off. He then takes out the little disc it recorded onto. About the size of a dollar bill and it weighs only a few ounces. He calls for a trademark raven. The bird flies down. He attaches the disc to the a string and the bird carries it off to deliver it to the president

(Raven) (To Sarah) "You did good."

(Raven) "So, is your father a smart man? Will he drop out, what do you think?"

(Sarah) “No.”

(Raven) "What a shame, cause I got kids of my own and the idea of having to kill a kid doesn't appeal to me."

(Raven) "Well maybe you can make another tape later that might help convince him. If he doesn't drop out within 24 hours I'll let that nice guard come in here and you and him can work together to make a nice movie that I'm sure will certainly give added incentive to your father to drop out."

Sarah is visibly very scared.

(Raven) (Takes out a custom made cigarette holder, silver with Republican Guard insignia engraved on it. He takes one of the expensive cigarettes out and lights it with silver lighter) "Want one?"

(Sarah) “n n n no.”

(Sarah) “Shaking with fear now.”

(Raven) "You sure? Here, have a smoke, it'll calm you down." (He places a cigarette in her mouth and then digs into his pocket to get his lighter)

Sarah drops it.

(Raven) "Why are you wasting good tobacco? Those cost 25 bucks each. Now pick it up and put it back in your mouth. Or maybe you'd rather have that nice guard come in here and put something else in your mouth."

(Raven) (Stern tone) "I said pick it up."

Sarah picks it back up.

(Raven) "Good, now back in the mouth."

After she puts it back in her mouth Raven lights it for her.

(Raven) "You got to inhale on it."

Inhales drops it again, coughing and hacking

(Raven) "Ah come on now, not that bad is it?"

Begins convulsing and hyper wheezing from allergic reaction.

(Raven) "Hey, you alright?"

(Raven) "You need an inhaler or something, any kind of medication?"

Sarah can’t respond, begins to go into shock

(Raven) (Who is trained as a paramedic, immediately treats her for shock and gives her Cogentin (Benztropine))

Her convulsions stop.

(Raven) "You okay there, sorry bout that. Didn't think you'd have any reaction to a little smoke."

(Raven) "You want some water or something?"

(Sarah) “No.”

(Raven) "You want a swig of this?" (Takes out a small silver flask that obviously contains liquor of some kind)

(Sarah) “No.” She obviously wants nothing to do with her abductor.

(Raven) "Ah come on now, I'm not such a bad guy, am I. This is just business, nothing personal. I said I got kids of my own, lighten up a bit, nothing is going to happen to you."

(Raven) "Here take a swig, it'll settle you down." (Extends the liquor flask towards her)

(Raven) "It's not poison or drugged. See." (Takes a swig himself)

(Raven) (Waves his hand in front of her) "Anybody home?"

(Raven) "Nobody there eh? I guess you don't want anything to eat, and you want to sleep in this cold damp room with no furniture rather than sleeping in a warm bed."

(Raven) "Well I'm out of chaw, I'm going to the store to get some. You have fun staying here. I'll be back in a few hours." (She realizes if he leaves that none of the other guards will keep that one guard from having his way with her). He stands up and turns to leave. He starts to head towards the door.

(Sarah) "Wait, please don't go.”

(Raven) (Turns around)"Why. You suddenly feel like talking now?"

Spits in his face and kicks him between the legs and runs for the door.
(Raven) (Who was wearing a cup, always be ready, just grabs her and says) "Why did you do that?"

Starts kicking and punching and slapping and scratching trying to get away

He is much stronger than her, and he simply holds grabs both her wrists to rein her under control.

She struggles to get free.

(Raven) "Please stop now. You know I could call in that friendly guard, he likes a struggler. But I'd rather not. Now stop it and sit down."

(Raven) (Loosens his grip on her) "Now sit down."

Continues to kick and struggle

(Raven) (Tightens his grip on her) "You're tempting me girl, you're tempting me. You're trying my patience. I've tried to be nice to you thus far, but even I have my limits."

Raven slaps her across the face and then tells her to "Just sit down would you."

Sits down and withdraws into her self.

(Raven) "So what were your plans before all this happened. You now I was supposed to be deer hunting with two of my sons today. They're 15 and 16. But my orders were to come here and a good soldier follows order. You know what I mean?"

(Sarah) “No I don't you are evil.”

(Raven) "How am I evil? I'm just following my orders. Don't worry though and you won't be harmed. I've got kids of my own, if somebody had them, I'd do whatever they asked to get them back. I'm sure your ole man will drop out and we'll have you back to him in no time. Don't you worry any."

(Raven) "You going to say something. Whatever you do, don't go acting stupid and hitting me again like that." (Moves his hand over the bleeding cut on his cheek) "That really hurt, you do that again. I might have to kill you, and I wouldn't want to do that. So don't make me do anything I don't want to do, okay?"

(Sarah) "I need water"

(Raven) "Sure. How much do you need?"

He gets her a 1-liter bottle of water.

She grabs it and drinks.

(Raven) "You want something to eat?"

(Sarah) “Yes.”

(Raven) "What do you want?"

(Sarah) "A steak"

(Raven) (Laughs) "Steak?"

She just looks at him.

(Raven) "Well if you promise to be a good girl. I'll see that you get a steak."

(Sarah) “Ok.”

(Raven) "I'll be back shortly. Anybody bothers you, you tell me."

He walks out the door and locks it after he exits.

He's been gone about 30 minutes when the door is unlocked and opened. It's the operative who was touching her in the car; he walks in and locks the door behind him. "Hello there darling. How are you?" He's got a big grin on his face.

He moves to about 5 feet away her from.

(Operative) "Well now you think we might be a little better acquainted since the boss is gone?"

She runs to the other side of the room.

(Operative) "Why you running girl. I'm sure you'll like it. You're awful nervous, just relax, I'll make sure you enjoy it." He removes his pants.

She looks for some place to run to

(Operative) "Now come on girl, don't make this any harder than it has to be. Come on over here nice and easy. I'll make sure you get the most out of it."

(Operative) "Never done it before have you?"

Her eyes bulge out, she runs to the door trying to get out, her heart racing, her life flashing before her eyes. She felt she was going to throw up

(Operative) (Turns to face her) "Why you running. I ain't going to hurt you."

He slowly walks towards her, "Now why you making this harder on yourself."

She tries desperately to open the door.

(Operative) "It's locked. The only you'll get out is by doing what I tell you. Now I'm done playing games." (He points to the table in the room) "Go and lay down on the table. Now!"

She looks for a window, anyway to get out of there, away from him

(Operative) "No way out of here, solid concrete room. Just do what I'm telling you to do, won't take that long. Be over before you know it.”

He moves towards her and has a look of growing impatience in his eyes.

(Operative) "I won't tell you again girl, do it or you'll regret it."

(Sarah) "NO"

(Operative) "Hmm. Maybe you want me to just shoot you and get it over with. Or perhaps I could hang you, take damn near 30 minutes to hang. I know something else we could do, takes less time than 30 minutes and you'll enjoy it a lot more than you would hanging. Trust me on that one. Now just go over to the table and lay down."

(Operative) "How old are you?”

(Operative) "I asked you a question girl. I want an answer."

(Sarah) "16"

(Operative) "Well do you want to make it to 17?"

(Operative) "Well, do you?"

(Sarah) “Yes.”

(Operative) "Then you know what to do." (Motions at the table)

She gets on the table. He walks over and says, "Don't worry, you'll enjoy this, I know I will." He starts to slide her pants down; somebody begins to unlock the door.

It's one of the other guards and he enters in, the guard says, “The boss is going to be back in 10 minutes, possibly sooner, you better get back to your post."

(Operative) "I can do it in 8 minutes, tell me when the boss is about to enter the building."

The other guard walks out. The operative talks to Sarah as he continues to pull her pants down. "You’re not going to tell the boss about this are you?"

Sarah doesn't answer.

(Operative) "Well?" (Motions with his hand like he's about to slap her)

She gives no answer; she has withdrawn inside her self, safe from the outside world.

(Operative) (Shakes her) "Hey, when I ask you a question you answer me. I could make this a lot more enjoyable for me, and a lot less enjoyable for you, if you know what I mean."

Still no answer, she freezes up. He rolls her over and stands right behind her. "Do you know what I mean? Want to answer me yet?" No answer, she can't believe this is happening.

She wishes she were somewhere else. (Operative) "Hey, you answer me." (Slaps her)
No response, just tears.

Somebody is at the door unlocking it; Raven (returning quite early) enters the room and sees the man standing over the girl stripped down to her bra and panties. "What the hell is going on here?" The man lets go of Sarah.

(Raven) (To Operative) "What the hell are you doing in here!?"

She freezes; she is scared to death to move

(Operative) "Nothing, nothing at all. I wasn't doing anything. Ask her, she'll tell you."

(Operative) "I was just.... Ah I was... Well the thing is..." Raven just pulls out a pistol and shoots the man in the head. He flies backwards and blood and pieces of brain splatter everywhere.

(Raven) (To Sarah) "Are you okay?"

(Sarah) “Yes.”

(Raven) "You want to get out of this room, you can come with me, there's two beds in my room, and you’ll be safe there."

(Sarah) “Yes.”

(Raven) "This way, follow me." (He notices she is about to look at the dead man) "Don't look, trust me, you won't ever forget it."

Raven leads her to his room in the warehouse, where the previous owner used to sleep when he was spending the night. A windowless room with two beds, a desk, and a bathroom.

(Raven) (Handing her a box) "Here’s your steak."

(Raven) (Locks the door to the room) "I'm going to get some sleep, when you're done eating, you should try to sleep to. You still nervous from what happened earlier?"

She takes it. But doesn't eat. Instead she crawls to the empty bed and curls up into a ball weeping.

Raven moves over to her and puts his arm on her shoulder, "You going to be okay? You want something to help you sleep?"

(Sarah) “No.”

(Raven) "Don't worry, nothing will happen to you here. Like I said, I'm not a bad guy, this is just a job. I got a family to support you know?"

He puts the safety on his gun (it's such that a girl like her would never figure out how to get it off) and sets it down on the stand next to his bed) then he lays down to sleep

(Raven) "If you need anything don't hesitate to wake me up. And feel free to get up and get a drink of water or something. I left out some vodka if you want some. Bathroom is in there." (Points to door)

She says ok.

(Raven) (Sensing she is upset sits up and walks over to her) "You going to be okay kid?"

(Raven) "Don't worry, I took care of that guy didn't I? See I said nothing was going to happen and I was telling the truth."

(Sarah) “Yes.”

(Raven) "Well, then you've got nothing to worry about. You'll be back home in no time." (He pats her on the head like he would do to one of his own kids)

(Raven) "Here, drink some of this, it'll help you sleep. Get some good sleep and you'll feel better in the morning." (He offers her a bottle of vodka)

(Raven) "Trust me. I haven't let anything happen to you yet have I?"

She takes the vodka.

(Raven) "Go on, drink some, not too much though."

She cautiously tips the bottle back and drinks what probably amounts to 3 shots in a few gulps. Raven takes the bottle and says, "Easy there, not so fast." In a few minutes she starts to feel tired and then lays down the sleep

(Raven) "Sleep well." Raven covers her up then goes to his bed because he needs to get some sleep also.

The messenger ravens arrive at the house and deliver the message; the note and tape have been sent. Raven awaits the reply.

To Be Continued.

Brezhnekov has read the letter and the seen the video.
He has mixed emotions. One the one hand he loved his daughter and didn't want anything to happen to her. One the other hand he had duty to his nation. To his people.
The smile that was on his face all day, from his lead in the polls was gone. Replaced with a very sad and gloomy, terrified look.
His wife had burst into tears at the news and was blaming him for it.

He ordered a telivised address to be held in one hour. Brezhnekov was not a christian or a muslim. But for the first time in his life, he found himself calling a higher power and he fought back tears.

He then called together his cabinet.

A raven flies into the office of Brezhnekov through an open window, it carries a note, it drops the note "We said tell nobody. You didn't listen. We're angry. You'd better make sure you drop out." The bird then "Caws" loudly, turns and flies out of the room.

How could such monsters exist? He thought to himself.

In the televised address, he spoke directly to the abductors:
"You can all go straight to hell. The Secretary General of the United Socialist States of Whittier bows to no one, fears no one. The election of the Secretary General of Whittier is the soverign affair and right of the people of Whittier. Terrorist groups have no right to tell us how to govern our own nation. Therefore, I am giving 24 hours to free her. If you do, I will allow you to live. If not, you will all die."

He then ordered the home security forces on full alert and the search and rescue operation began as the secret service and Whittier armed forces began their manhunt for the abductors and their victims before any harm could come to Sarah Brezhnekov. He even ordered 3 units of special ops teams to join the search.

ooc: brutal, just plan brutal.

Whittier will not give into nor be intimidated by evil terrorist groups.
Any nation that is found to have funded these terrorists will be severly punished. The election will go on. Brezhnekov will not withdraw and none of the other candidates will be allowed to withdraw either.

A raven flew into the bedroom of Brezhnekov, through the open window. It carried a note, "You're upsetting us greatly. It could take hours or days to find us, but seconds to kill her. Call off your goons now and I assure you no harm will come to her. I suggest you write a phone number on a card and give it to the bird, he'll see it gets to me. We'll be in touch."

The raven waits while the man writes out the phone number, then ties the card to the bird. The bird "Caws" loudly and then flies out the window.

The United Socialist States does not negotiate with terrorists.

Aleczander Hamion has released the following message concerning the kidnapping of the President's daughter and her friends.

The government of Blargistania stands fully behind the legitamite government. We will place our full backing behind the United Socialist States and offer any aid the government should ask for. We can provide aid militarily or we can provide the use of satillites to image Whittier. Terrorists will not be tolerated.
-Aleczander Hamion, First Among Equals, Blargistania

the election is here:

http://forums2.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?p=6553385&posted=1#post6553385

Aleczander Hamion has released the following message concerning the kidnapping of the President's daughter and her friends.

The government of Blargistania stands fully behind the legitamite government. We will place our full backing behind the United Socialist States and offer any aid the government should ask for. We can provide aid militarily or we can provide the use of satillites to image Whittier. Terrorists will not be tolerated.
-Aleczander Hamion, First Among Equals, Blargistania
ooc: you mean secretary general's daughter don't you?
:)

The Secretary General and his family is grateful for the support of BLARGistania.

ooc: you mean secretary general's daughter don't you?
:)

yeah.

The Republic of Ancient Terra respects the right of any nation to have a free and open election. Terrorists have no right to interfere in such matters. Clearly, the people of Whittier wish for Brezhnekov to lead their nation. What right, we ask, do Terrorist claim that would allow them to impose their will on others?

There is none. Terra pledges assistance to Whittier, and wishes them luck. We hope that this matter can be resolved peacefully, and express our well wishes to the Secretary General's family. The people of Ancient Terra stand with you.

Good hunting.

Respectfully,

~Emperor Taichi Kamiya, Leader of Ancient Terra~
~Talus Karn, Prime Minister of Ancient Terra~
~Lord Admiral Yamato Ishida, Chairman of the Joint Chiefs~

The phone in Brezhnekov's house rang. An aid picked up the phone

(Man) "Get me Mr. Brezhnekov."

(Aid) The Secretary General is indisposed at the moment. Can I take a message?

(Man) "Get him, it's a matter I'm sure is of great importance to him."

(Aid) “Well, I am afraid I can't do that. He has more important matters to attend to.”

(Man) "Tell him Raven called and you didn't notify him of the call. See how long you keep your job."

Listen here rayban, raven, rave on or what ever your name is, I was told not to disturb him. His family is in crises. If you call here again we will the police at your house to arrest you. Show some damn compassion will you.”

(Raven) "Put him on, now. And this line cannot be traced.”

The aid hangs up the phone. “Dumb crazy people.”

Raven dials Brezhnekov's mobile phone. Sarah gave him the number.

Brezhnekov answers his mobile. "Brezhnekov here."

(Man) "I called your house, your aid wouldn't put me through to you, he hung up on me. I don't like that."

(Brezhnekov) "Who is this?"

(Man) "Call me Raven."

(Brezhnekov) "What do you want?"

(Raven) "I think you know."

(Brezhnekov) "No I don't know"

(Raven) "You want her back don't you? Then do what I've told you."

(Brezhnekov) "Good God." the realization sinking in of who he was talking to.

(Brezhnekov) "If you harm her, you will die a thousand deaths."

(Raven) "Hahahaha. I'm already dead."

(Raven) "The next time somebody hangs up on me, well it won't be pleasant. Got it? I want respect. And you made me mad by calling the police. Don't bother trying to trace this line because it can't be done. We can talk for a while. Do you want to talk to her, make sure she's still alive and well?"

(Brezhnekov) “Yes. I want proof of life.”

He holds up the phone, she starts to talk "Dad I'm okay."

(Brezhnekov) “Where are you?”

(Raven) (Takes the phone back) "Now, now president, we can't be talking about that."

(Raven) "Well, are you going to be dropping out of the race?"

(Brezhnekov) “Give me some time to think about it.”

Secret service agents began tracing the call.

(Raven) "Well think hard, one of my men tried to do something unpleasant to your daughter. And I killed him for it; I didn't want her to get hurt. But I won't play games. Drop out." He hangs up. The agents shake their heads, no trace.

Brezhnekov hung up the phone. A grave look on his face.

(Wife) "Who was it dear?"

(Brezhnekov) “Just the ambassador from Magdha.”

(Wife) "Anything important?"

(Brezhnekov) “No. He just wanted to thank us for helping rebuild his nation.”

(Wife) "You look pale as a ghost, what aren't you telling me?"

(Brezhnekov) “Nothing. Its all these terrorist attacks and... And.... the abduction of our only daughter. It’s all taking a toll on me. But I’ll be all right. Everything will be fine, you will see.” He breaks down into tears and slams his fist into the wall leaving a hole.

(Wife) "What are we going to do? Are you going to give in to their demands?"

(Brezhnekov) “I can't. But I must. But I can't. For the first time in my life, I don't know what to do.”

(Wife) "Do you think if you gave in that they'd hold their end of the deal and let her go unharmed?"

(Brezhnekov) “No. They will kill her anyway.”

(Wife) "But if you don't try to get her back, you'll never forgive yourself."

At that moment a raven flies in through the open window, it has a message.
Brezhnekov picks it up. "If you resign I can guarantee your daughter will be returned unharmed. If you want, we can arrange for the two of us to meet. Reply via card, give the card to the raven."

(Wife) "What is it?"

(Brezhnekov) (He writes down) “Where do you want to meet?”

(Wife) “Nothing”

(Brezhnekov) “You should go to bed now, you need your sleep.”

About 40 minutes later another raven flies through the window. "The park about 2 miles east of where she was abducted. Central River Park. 2 hours come alone, no wires, no police, no plain clothes, no tricks."

(Brezhnekov) He writes, “How can I trust you? If I come will you release my daughter?”

About 41 minutes later another raven flies through the window. "How do I know I can trust you? You could have police swarm me at the park. And I'll release her if and when you resign, not before. This meeting is just to work out the details. I'll be at the park in about 90 minutes, you'd better be there also. Come alone, remember if something happens to me and I don't get back to where I'm supposed to go, something bad will happen to her."

About 20 minutes later a raven flies in "I'm at the park waiting for you, where are you. I don't like to wait. Get here now or bad things might happen.” the park is a 10-minute drive from where he lives. Brezhnekov gets in his car and drives to the park.

He sees children playing near the front, towards the back on a bench in the secluded of the park is a man in a long coat, with a hat and dark sunglasses on, he is surrounded by over 100 crows and ravens, he is tossing them seeds. Brezhnekov walks over, a gun inside his coat pocket.

(Man) "You Brezhnekov? Did you come alone?"

(Brezhnekov) “Yes and yes where is my daughter?”

(Man) "I'm Raven, don't try anything funny, one of my men has you in his sights. Don't worry I guarantee your safety as long you don't try anything. Your daughter is alive and well in a secret location

(Brezhnekov) “What do you want?”

(Raven) "I want to complete my mission so I can leave and go home to my children. To do that, you must drop out and Hitler must come to power. At the least you must drop out and more right wing man must come to power."

(Brezhnekov) “Hitler will never be elected even if I did drop out. Whom are you working for?”

(Raven) "You're set to win. When you win, resign and name him your successor. I work for those who shall remain anonymous."

(Brezhnekov) “If they are unnamed, they can not be counted on to keep their word.”

(Raven) "You're not dealing with my bosses. You're dealing with me. I keep my word. Remember I told you one of my men tried to touch your daughter. Here is what I did to him. He opens his coat and tosses the president the head of the man who tries to rape his daughter

(Raven) "I keep my word."

Brezhnekov pukes.

(Brezhnekov) “If I agree to this here and now, you will release my daughter? And her friends?”

(Raven) "She won't be harmed if you do what we say. Once you're out and Hitler is in, she'll be released and I'll crawl back under whatever rock I crawled out from. The friends will be released also; everybody will be unharmed and can go back to their lives. Once Hitler is in."

(Brezhnekov) “Why Hitler?”

(Raven) "You don't ask the questions, you just do what you're told. I just do what I'm told. That is how the world works. You obey orders."

(Brezhnekov) “Look here buddy I don't know who the hell l you think you are talking to. I am the f---ing Secretary General of the United Socialist States of Whittier, one of the most powerful nations in the world.”

(Raven) "I think I am the man with your daughter's fate in his hands. I've got you by the balls. Get it?"

(Brezhnekov) “Now you just shut your mouth.” Said Brezhnekov angrily.

(Raven) (Raven) "You going to pull your gun on me? What caliber is it, 380? 9mm? 32?"

(Brezhnekov) “I don’t 'negotiate with you or any other terrorists” “That's none of your business.”

(Brezhnekov) “You can tell your puppet masters that I will not resign. I will not give in to their ruthless tyranny. You can tell your masters to stick it up their butts.”

(Raven) "You're signing her death warrant."

(Brezhnekov) “And if you hurt her, I will hunt you to the ends of the earth.” (The anger made his eyes begins to glow reddish.)

(Raven) "Didn't I tell you. I'm already dead."

(Brezhnekov) “Your children will join you.”

(Raven) "This is going nowhere. Resign and name Hitler as leader or else she dies"

(Brezhnekov) Yeah, I did some checking on you

(Raven) "Sadly, they too are already dead, or will be soon."

(Brezhnekov) “Do you want them to be dead? They will die.”

(Raven) "You're not a child killer, you're not like me, and you wouldn't do it."

(Brezhnekov) “Oh no?”

(Raven) "Your wife would never forgive you."

(Brezhnekov) “Tell that to the special ops team I just sent to your home. What my wife doesn't know won't hurt her.”

(Raven) (Raven) "Your wife could die you know. You could lose her."

(Brezhnekov) “So could yours.”

(Raven) "She's dead already."

(Raven) "Years ago. AIDS."

(Raven) "The same Virus that killed her consumes me and my children, we're walking ghosts waiting to die."

(Brezhnekov) “Perhaps I shall make your deaths slower and much more painful.”

(Raven) "Kill me if you want to." (Takes out a pistol, hands it to him) "But know if you pull the trigger you'll never see her again."

The ravens and crows begin to "Caw" loudly, mocking the president.

(Raven) "Well, you going to kill me?"

(Brezhnekov) “I am not a coward. I am not you. This is my final answer, No.”

He turns around and walks away.

(Raven) "Will you be resigning then?"

He pushes a couple of buttons on his cell phone and plains clothes secret servcie and special ops troops jump out from the bushes and down from the tree branches.

(Brezhnekov) “You have my answer. Release her now"

(Raven) "You lied." (He waves his arm in the air, the 100s of crows and ravens fly around pecking at the soldiers. Thousands more join them from nearby flocks in the air. In the confusion, "The Raven" makes his escape. He left a note, "Resign and let Hitler in, or we'll send her back to you piece by piece, and we'll make sure your wife is the one who receives the packages."

The forces fire, killing a lot of the birds. He takes the note and shreds it. Walking back to his car. His cell phone rings.

(Brezhnekov) hello

(Raven) "What did you catch with those men?" "I'll tell you. “Tis the wind and nothing more!" "Quoth the Raven, Nevermore."

(Brezhnekov) He hangs up on him. The phone rings again.

(Brezhnekov) He picks it up, "F off" and then hangs up.

The phone rings again. “Hello.”

(Raven) "Well you need some manners my friend. What did I say would happen if anybody hung up on me?"

Brezhnekov stops and looks around. Surrounded by his very large security detail.

(Raven) "You tried to ambush me there. Give me one good reason I shouldn't have her killed right now. Give me one good reason I shouldn't kill you. I've got you in my sights."

(Brezhnekov) “Go ahead and kill her. That's what you are going to do anyway.”

(Raven) "No. You're wrong. I've always intended to let her go the moment hitler is in power."

(Raven) "Why do you think I killed that man who tried to harm her? I like children, I have children. But I must follow orders."

(Brezhnekov) Brezhnekov had prayed for strength to handle the situation and for God's guidance. He now felt he had a plan. “Mr. Raven, on second thought. I would like to discuss your terms.”

(Raven) "I'm allowed to modify the terms slightly. Hitler doesn't have to come to power so long as you deport all your nig---s and Jews."

(Raven) "How many do you have?"

(Brezhnekov) Brezhnekov had been praying all day. Suddenly he had a revelation as if a bright ray light was shining on him from heaven and a light bulb snapped on his head.

Raven is largely gone from the area now; he is nearly back to the warehouse
(Brezhnekov) “We have over 34 million why? I mean 340 million?”

(Raven) "Are you willing to deport them all?"

(Brezhnekov) “Why?”

(Raven) "We don't like Jews and nigg---. They're not fit to associate with whites."

(Brezhnekov) “What does that have to do with this?”

(Raven) "No white man anywhere in the world should have to live alongside them. You have lots of whites."

(Brezhnekov) “You are mistaken, our nation is mostly native American.”

(Raven) "I have to go now. I'll be in touch. Don't worry, she'll be okay, for now."

(Brezhnekov) “I will step down.”

(Raven) "Good, when it's official, you're out, Hitler is in. She'll be released unharmed. You have my word. Goodbye for now. I'll let her talk to you soon." (He hangs up to stop any trace attempts as he was reaching the safety limit)


He sees a raven perched near him, give him the most disturbing stare ever it "Caws" loudly.

Brezhnekov met with his advisors later that day and they planned and began to implement Project Trojan Horse. As soon as the election is over, Brezhnekov will resign and Hitler will rule Whittier.

As he returns home to talk to his wife, he sees ravens and crows flying all around near his house. They stare at him and "Caw" loudly. One has a message. "My eyes and ears are everywhere." He sees there must be at least 5,000 crows outside of his house, and 1,000 ravens.

(Wife) "Honey, why are those birds there? They're making me very nervous."

To be continued.

Brezhnekov formally requests asylum for himself and Whittiers Jewish and black populations.

Blargistania is willing to open its borders to all Whittier Blacks and Jews. We are much more accepting than these terrorists would seem to be. We also offer full political asylum to Brezhnekov and his family. Blargistania transports can be at Whittian (?) airports within the day. We can have refugee camps up within the week as well to support any peoples who flee Whittier. These will be interim homes until they can be relocated to a more fitting area. Please assemble all refugees who wish to leave as well as the family of Brezhnekov. We will make as many flights as necessary to evactuate these people.

A raven delivers another message. "They cannot just go to another white nation. The blacks must go to Africa, the jews to Israel or any other middle eastern nation if they so choose."


Occ- I'll be gone for about 24-36 hours and will finish this all up when I return.

Oh and by the way. The President was just bluffing when he said he knew who Raven was. The Premier of my country doesn't even know Raven's real name. Nobody knows anything about him. He's somebody who according to records died over 8 years ago. But now even the records are gone. He is a man who doesnt' exist, wasn't born.

A single man shall not determine the fate of millions. Should the refugees choose to come to Blargistania, that is where they will go. If this 'raven' decides to interfere, the weight of the Blargistanian military forces will come crashing down on whereever he chooses to call home. Our transports are departing for Whittier to relocate all those who wish to move. Interference will be seen as an act of war.

OOC: On a side note: Blargistania is not a white nation, there is a high mix of races.

A raven delivers another message. "They cannot just go to another white nation. The blacks must go to Africa, the jews to Israel or any other middle eastern nation if they so choose."


Occ- I'll be gone for about 24-36 hours and will finish this all up when I return.

As raven has broken his promise, Brezhnekov has chosen not to step down.
The agreement was either that Brezhnekov step down or all jews and blacks leave the country.
As Raven has broken his word, Brezhnekov formally announces that he will not be stepping down.
Adolf Mussolini Hitler has been seized and arrested on charges of having ties to terrorist groups, treason, and of trying to overthrow the legitimate and democratically elected government of Whittier, further he is also being charged with the high crime of racism.
Brezhnekov is aware of the great sacrifice he is making with his decision. However, the good of the many outweighs the good of the one.

Raven can take his scam and stick up his ass. The nation is on alert. We are now looking for the government that has been funding raven's group. We are currently looking at Hawaiin Islands. If any one has any information on who is supporting this group, there is a one million dollar reward available. The actions of the raven group in whittier in the last two days were acts of war. When Whittier finds out who was behind it, retaliation will be swift, just, and proportionate.

BLARGistania, we thank you for your offer and your assistance. Any one who wants to leave will still be allowed to leave. And you will still be allowed to evac them. However, the government will no assist in the forced deportation of people's based on their race.

We would suggest that Whittier take extreme measures in this case. We shall watch and observe.

Blargistania will have transports waiting for any who choose to leave. We can also offer the use of our satilite system to map out any areas you see fitting. It is our hope that we can assist in the removal of this 'Raven' from the political scene. Any assistance we can offer, you have but to ask. One wonders what following the Raven that sends the message would do?

Blargistania will have transports waiting for any who choose to leave. We can also offer the use of our satilite system to map out any areas you see fitting. It is our hope that we can assist in the removal of this 'Raven' from the political scene. Any assistance we can offer, you have but to ask. One wonders what following the Raven that sends the message would do?
Great idea.

IDF is disgusted by this and condemns these actions

OOC: Would I be right to predict a possible Stockholm Syndrome coming here?

IDF is disgusted by this and condemns these actions

OOC: Would I be right to predict a possible Stockholm Syndrome coming here?


Occ- IDF: Quite possibly your prediction could be accurate.

Occ- Whittier wasn't available so I handled both parts for this small piece, I'll wait for him though before doing anything too important.


It had been 6 days since the kidnapping (occ I know it's been shorter, but a few real days= more NS days)

Raven was frothing with rage, the 3 operatives were patrolling throughout the warehouse. Raven took out a letter and wrote it. "You pick which one you want to do, resign, or deport the jews and other non-whites. Your choice, but Hitler is to be released and pardoned immediately, that is nonnegotiable. Do this and she lives, do it not, and well, bad things can happen."

A raven arrived in the bedroom of Brezhnekov and dropped the note, the bird "Cawed" loudly at Brezhnekov and then flew off out the window.

Raven was sitting on a couch in his room watching TV, Sarah was sitting on the other side of the couch. A loaded UZI was sitting on the couch in between them. Raven got up to get a drink in the other room, she just kept watching TV, not even thinking about trying to use the gun.

(Raven) "You want anything to drink?"

(Sarah) "No, I'm good. Thanks anyway Johnny." (He's told her his first name is Johnny)

(Raven) "You need anything?"

(Sarah) "No, I'm good."

Raven walks back to the couch asks her to pick up the UZI while he sits down, she holds it for him until he sits back down and then hands it to him. He sets the UZI down on the floor.

Brezhnekov was on the TV giving his acceptance speech for winning the election. He was also threatening to crush "Any and all who attempted to use terror to influence the results of our recent elections."

(Raven) "Your father isn't a very honorable man you know, he tried to kill me while we were meeting a few days ago under flag of truce."

(Sarah) "That's just wrong, how could he do that?"

Raven can take his scam and stick up his ass. The nation is on alert. We are now looking for the government that has been funding raven's group.

Occ- Raven is an intelligence operative for CM's "Department of Internal Security" "Foreign Intelligence Branch". He is primarily an assassin and is used mostly for blackops or when the "Raven" touch is need (He is the best operative in the nation). Officially he doesn't even exist, the Premier doesn't even know his real name. Everybody knows him as "Raven".



Johnny Ray Price “Raven” (36) He is the super-secretive intelligence operative for CM. He works for the Department of Internal Security Foreign Intelligence Branch. He is the best assassin in CM and he is also the best master of disguise and deceit. He has 2 sons, aged 14 and 12, his wife died shortly after giving birth to their youngest son, she had AIDS (got it from blood clotting factor), both the boys have AIDS, Raven has AIDS. The CM government has refused to research possible AIDS cures for fear the data would be leaked out and AIDS wiped out in Africa. Raven desperately seeks a cure for AIDS for himself and his sons. Nobody knows his real name, not even the Premier. He usually goes by one of the following aliases, “Edgar Johnston” “Edgar Allan”, “John Poe”, “Allan Edgar”, “John Edgar”, “John Allan”, “John Rayman”, and “Allan Rayman”.

WARNING: THIS RP IS CERTAINLY NOT SUITABLE FOR YOUNGER READERS. YOU’VE BEEN WARNED.

It had been 6 days since the kidnapping, and Sarah clearly had “Stockholm syndrome”.


Raven was talking to Sarah. "So what do you want to do now? It looks like your father won't comply. Do you want to leave and go back to him?"

(Sarah) “No.”

(Raven) "So what do you want to do? I'm getting on a plane in a while to get out of here. Are you saying you want to come with me?"

(Sarah) “Go with you.”

(Raven) "Okay, well we're going to need disguises. Change our hair colors and such."

(Raven) "Here." (Tosses her a bottle of blond hair dye)

Raven changes his hair color from black to brown. He also shaves.

(Raven) "Do you know how to use a gun?"

(Sarah) “No.”

(Raven) "We'll have to fix that. If something happens on the plane, should it try to turn back for any reason, we're going to take control and make sure it gets to where we're going."

(Raven) (Holds out two weapons, one is a 9mm pistol, the other an UZI submachine gun) "Which one do you want?"

She chooses the 9mm.

He goes over the basics, the slide release, magazine release, chambering a round etc, the loaded chamber indicator. It's a Glock 17 so no safety to worry about. He has a Beretta 92F and an UZI SMG.

He takes her to a basement part of the warehouse where they can shoot without any chance of the outside hearing.

He sets up about 20 glass bottles and then helps her get into the right shooting position. He positions her arms and tells her how the hold the gun, he moves her legs into the right stance.

(Raven) "Okay, just line up your sights, then hold your breath and ease back on the trigger."

She shoots the entire magazine, and then he hands her another magazine, she finishes shooting the remaining bottles.

Raven smiles and tells her “Good shot.”

Then he went outside first and about 2 miles from the warehouse

Raven called Brezhnekov on his cell phone.

Brezhnekov picks it up

(Raven) "Hello."

(Brezhnekov) “What do you want?”

(Raven) "Well you didn't do as I said."

(Brezhnekov) “And you are a liar.”

(Raven) "How do you figure that?"

(Brezhnekov) “The government of Whittier will not be blackmailed by any terrorists.”

(Raven) "Okay, well you won't be seeing her again."

(Brezhnekov) “I have people hunting you. You will die.”

(Raven) "Well that won't help you at all. You'll never see her again."

(Brezhnekov) “Why are you doing this, Mr. Raven? What is in it for you? Why don't turn yourself in and accept amnesty.”

(Raven) "None of that really matters. The point is you lose."

Raven is counting the seconds until he has to hang up to avoid a trace.

(Raven) "You don't get it. You're not going to be seeing her again, ever. You had your chance and you blew it. You lose."

(Brezhnekov) “Don't worry about the trace.”

(Raven) "Good bye." (Hangs up)

Brezhnekov orders the Special Forces to go around and round up all persons who hold fascist ideas and views.

Raven then sees a trucker getting ready to get on the road, he hears him talking about an 8-hour drive. He opens his cell phone, dials the president and then sticks the phone in the back of the truck while the trucker is looking.

(Brezhnekov) "Hello"

Raven goes back to get the other 3 operatives and Sarah. The friends of hers will be left in the warehouse and the police notified where to get them to release them.

Raven was talking to Sarah. "You almost ready to go?"

(Sarah) “Yes.”

(Raven) "Nice job on your hair." (Noticing her hair is all blond now)

(Raven) "Well the others are getting ready, they'll be a while."

(Sarah) "So what might we do for that time?" (Says it in an enticing tone)

(Raven) "I don't know? What do you want to do?"

(Sarah) "Do you have any protection?"

(Raven) "You mean like ear plugs and glasses for shooting?"

(Sarah) "No not that kind."

(Raven) (Embarrassed) "Oh, yeah, of course. Why?"

(Sarah) "You'll need it."

She pushes him down onto his bed and they get to it. Raven liked that she made the first move, he found it a turn on

(Occ- Yes she knows he has AIDS. But what are the odds it gets transmitted with protection, plus his is in remission from treatment, but he needs to find some sort of permanent solution to his AIDS problem. Also, she’s really messed up psychologically and probably cannot comprehend the risks. Also, his treatment therapy has made the risk of passing it on very minimal, but it is costing him dearly, his body is slowing being eaten away by the treatment therapy, basically a barrage of deadly chemicals and biological agents that were engineered to stop the spread of the virus and to confront the virus and kill it. Without a cure though, he'll only live probably 10 more years at the most)

After the sex they were laying around talking.

(Raven) (Laying in bed holding Sarah closely) "So what do you want to do now? They're probably ready to go now." (occ- the other operatives aren't ready to go just yet)

Raven and Sarah were speaking. She was curious about his real name and where they were going.

(Raven) "So you're sure you want to come with me, it's a long way away."

(Sarah) “Yes.”

(Raven) "Okay, if anybody asks your name is Victoria Allan, I am John Allan, your mother who we are going to visit is named Elizabeth Allan. Remember all that."

(Sarah) “It would be better if we said we were visiting your mother.”

(Raven) "Okay. But my mother is actually dead."

(Sarah) They don't know that do they?

(Raven) "No, I guess they don't. But except for my two sons, everybody is dead. I don't want anything to happen to you, so you keep a close watch over the surroundings when we're at the airport and don't look suspicious, the guards might pick up on it."

(Sarah) “Ok.”


(Raven) "Oh there's something I haven't told you. Not even the leader of my nation knows it. My real name, Johnny Ray Price." She was one of the few people who knew his real name, was this his weakness, he had fallen for a 16 year old girl whom he had abducted, and he had just told her his real name. But she was attached to him so much she was looking forward to leaving the nation with him and accompanying him to his homeland.

(Raven) "Actually it's John, but when I had friends they called me Johnny. They're all dead now, war claimed most of them."

(John) (Looking at her with a look of amazement) "Do you realize how beautiful you are?"

(Sarah) “No.”

(John) "Really, you don't think you're beautiful, well you are, that is for certain."

(John) "Has nobody ever told you that before?"

John moves her hair from in front of her eyes and then kisses her.

(John) "So do you have any idea what you want to do when we get where we're going?"

(Sarah) “No, I don’t care as long as I'm with you.”

(John) "Likewise." He kisses her again

He starts to rub her between the legs and then fade to the next scenes of them drying off and dressing after showering after doing it again. (With protection of course)

They're readying to go.

(John) "You ready. Remember how I told you to keep the gun tucked away so nobody can see it."

The other 3 operatives are readying to go, they're left ample food and water for her friends and they plan to tell the police where to find them as soon as they're out of the country.

(Sarah) “Where are we going?”

(John) "Dallas, Texas."

(Sarah) “Why there? If they find us, my dad can just send troops right across the border to get us.”

(John) "We're not actually going to Texas. The plane will take us to Baton Rouge to stop off; we'll get off there and take a train to Mississippi, which is our final destination. If we have to, we'll hijack the plane."

(Sarah) “What about my friends though?”

John is setting up a cell phone, "This will go off at a set time when I press a button on another phone, it will dial automatically and alert the secret services, it'll stay on, they'll trace it, come here and find your friends safe and sound, so don't worry about them, they'll be fine."

(John) "Don't worry, nothing has happened to anybody yet has it? I've kept you safe, your friends will be safe also."

(Sarah) “Ok.”

(John) "And nothing will happen to anybody so long as I'm here."


(John) "Okay people, let's get this show on the road." (Points to two of the operatives), "You two are brothers, work it out." (Points to the other one), "You're a businessman, figure something out." (Pulls Sarah close to him) "We're father and daughter. We'll figure out a story." "Okay, all teams get in 1 of the cars, make sure you can get your Uzi onto the plane, I'll figure something out." The other 3 operatives get into the cars and leave, John gets the door for Sarah and then closes it after she gets into the car, he gets in and leans over, tells her "Don't worry, it'll work fine" then he kisses her, leans back and starts the engine, then he drives toward the airport.

A tall man with brown hair (dyed it, used to be black) wearing sunglasses and a suit went to the airport ticket line for "Communist Louisiana Airlines". He was accompanied by a girl about 16 years old with blond hair (she’s dyed it).

(Employee) “Hello, how may I help you?”

(Raven) “Hello, two tickets to Dallas, Texas. The next flight please.”

(Employee) “Round trip or one way?”

(Raven) “One-way.”

(Employee) “First class, business, or economy.”

(Raven) “First Class.”

(Employee) “The total comes to 7,521 dollars and 92 cents. How would you like to pay for that?”

(Raven) “Here.” (Hands her the cash)

(Employee) “And your names please.”

(Raven) “John Allan.”

(Employee) (To Sarah) “And what’s your name sweetie.”

(Sarah) (Smiling) “Victoria Allan.”

(Employee) “Are you two going on a vacation?”

(Raven) (Puts his arm around Sarah) “Yes, family vacation, my mother is there and we’re going to join her and make a vacation out of it.”

(Raven) (To Sarah) "Isn't that right?"

(Sarah) “Yes.”

(Employee) “Here are your tickets, have fun, the flight leaves in 2 hours.”

John and Sarah take the tickets and walk away.


Another man in a suit and dark sunglasses walks up and says, “Soonest flight to Dallas, Texas please, one way. Business class.”

(Employee) “Total comes to 2,762 dollars and 18 cents. And your name is?”

(Operative) “ Hans Brunner.”

(Employee) (Hands him the ticket) “Enjoy your flight Mr. Brunner.”

The man gives her the cash, takes his ticket and walks away.


Two other men in suits and dark sunglasses walk up. “Hello, my brother and I need to be on the next flight to Dallas, Texas, one-way. Economy class please.”

(Employee) “4,132 dollars and 27 cents. And your names?”

(Man 1) “Peter Brueghel.”

(Man 2) “Gregory Brueghel.”

They hand her the cash and she hands them the tickets.

(Employee) “Okay, enjoy your flight.”


The 3 men in suits and raven each had an UZI they planned to smuggle onto the plane, how they were going to manage it though, they were unsure. Raven saw a man who had also bought tickets to Dallas was not watching his bag well. Raven slipped a hand grenade and a small pistol into the man’s carry on baggage. Raven would soon have the distraction needed to enable him to slip through the detector equipment.

Raven was sitting in a seat talking to Sarah, nobody else was around, he leaned over kissed her and said, "Don't worry, we'll be on the plane soon. You nervous?"

(Raven) (Noting the man whose bag he stuffed a gun into nearing the detector) "Let's get ready to go."

The man walked through, the alarm went off, the guards all freaked out, rushed him, he panicked and ran, they chased him

Raven and Sarah slipped on through the detector, nobody noticing they too set off the alarm, but it went off immediately, the man was screaming, "I don't know how that got there." The other 3 operatives also slipped passed the detector.

The boarding call was made, John and Sarah took their seats in first class, one operative sat in business class, and the other two sat in economy. John leaned over and asked Sarah, "Do you want something to drink, something to help you relax perhaps?"

The plane had just gotten airborne and was about 20 miles out from the airport.

Suspecting something, Brezhnekov issues an emergency order grounding all flights and orders airport and seaport personnel to report all suspicious persons.

Raven noticed the plane was turning around. He stood up, walked to the cockpit and asked the pilot "What is going on? Why are we turning around?"

(Pilot) “The President has ordered all planes to be grounded, we have to return to the airport. Please be seated sir, the plane will be landing in about 10 minutes, we have to circle the area while other planes land.”

(Raven) “Interesting.” He walks out of the cockpit area, then he talks into a small communications device, to the operatives, “We’re going to land back at the airport, they’re grounding flights, operation eagle, operation eagle.” (Seize control of plane). In economy class two men each pulled an Uzi out from their carry on baggage. Raven ran back into the cockpit with an Uzi that he got from his bag. He screamed at passengers. “Stay in your seats!” “Nobody do anything stupid, you won’t get hurt.” He made it the cockpit and shoved the gun against the pilot. “Keep flying, we’re going to Baton Rogue, Louisiana. You’re not going to stop before we get there, once we get there, the plane will be refueled and I will give you further instructions. A few passengers in the business class were getting up to see what was going on. The operative in business class jumped up and pulled his Uzi out, he told them all to just sit back and relax.

Raven called Sarah into the cockpit and told her to sit down with her pistol and keep an eye on the pilot. He kissed her and told her, “Keep them covered good, keep a close eye on them.” He then ran to check the passenger manifest to see if there was an armed sky marshal on the flight. As he ran he told people to “Stay in your seats and you won’t get hurt.”

The Air Traffic Control asked why the plane was not returning to the airport. “Communist Louisiana flight 813, your current course is not consistent with making a landing here. Are your instruments working properly? Adjust course to the following.”

(Pilot) “Ummm… Air Traffic control, there are people with guns in the cockpit, I’ve been told to fly to Baton Rogue in Communist Louisiana. I don’t think I have much of a choice.”

(ATC) “Okay, you are probably best doing what they say, we’ll contact the secret services immediately and see what can be done. Keep in regular contact if you can. You are cleared to continue your flight. But be warned, the flight to Baton Rouge will mean you’ll be landing with empty or nearly empty fuel tanks.”

Raven walks back into the cockpit, ATC can hear him yelling, “No talking on the radio without permission.”

All passengers and flight attendants are in their seats under the watchful eyes of the 3 operatives, there are about 120 people on the plane. Raven keeps moving from the first class seats (to check on them) and the cockpit. He has found no evidence of any armed sky marshals on the plane.






(Occ- Communist Louisiana, this will concern you soon, but not very much. All you have to do is allow the plane to land, refuel, and then be on its way)

Oh boy, doing the 1st daughter, Whittier will REALLY love that

[OOC - Right now I have nothing to say, but TG me if this escalates into war.]

same here on the TG, I will participate in a war

[OOC - Right now I have nothing to say, but TG me if this escalates into war.]

Fabus (The Premier of my nation) has no idea that this is going on. Raven was ordered on this mission by a general who is involved in intrigue to spark a war to try to increase his power and influence and get himself an opportunity to "show his skills". My nation has a bad history of officers trying to serve their own interests. Part of the reason we do purges. If this threatens to escalate into war, CM would certainly handle it so it doesn't become war. We don't like wars.

Oh boy, doing the 1st daughter, Whittier will REALLY love that

Whittier and I rped it all via yahoo messenger :)

I did the parts for my characters, he did the parts for his characters, and when he had to run off to do stuff I handled the parts for both characters (The at the airport post is basically all done by CM)

IDF, please contact me at yahoo at Knightofmalta1096


I wish to discuss something with you that might benefit both our nation. It's a good idea really.

I don't have yahoo messenger. try tgs

I don't have yahoo messenger. try tgs

I don't know how to do TGs on this new forum lay out.

:(

I'll just say it.


This is all top secret stuff mind you. If you like it and think I should go ahead with it and you help me, well I'll gladly help you take eastern egypt, syria, lebanon etc.

If I decide to go ahead with it, it will look something like this.



Occ- This is all just pure speculation at the moment, although a large portion of the CM fleet (With about 4 million troops and their equipment in transport ships) is currently on the way towards the coasts off various African nations. We are not declaring an invasion yet, we are just considering it.

Ic- Public announcement "CM believes that a conference should be called to divide Africa up amongst the "Civilized Powers" of the world. We would like the following nations, Western Sahara, Morocco, Algeria, Tunisia, Libya, Egypt, Sudan, Ethiopia, Eritrea, Djibouti, and Somalia."

Potential Speculative, SECRET: CM has decided to begin building an empire. We realize some people may have claims to the lands I am going after. But in the CM universe, these lands are unclaimed. I need people to RP the armed forces and governments of the nations in question. Keep in mind historically none of these nations have performed well in combat.

Secret Offer: "To any nation that borders one of the nations I am going after, if you support me, I'll make it worth your while"

Secret Request to Israel: "We wish to inquire about the possibility of basing some aircraft in your nation to use against Egypt and other nations on our list. We want to know what you'd want in exchange, we'll make it worth your while."

Secret Offer: "Calling on any willing nations to ready to invade one or more of the nations on the list, in conjunction with my forces."

Special Secret Offer to Israel: "If you invade Egypt in conjunction with my forces, we'll give you 500 billion dollars + whatever unforeseen expenses you incur. We'll also offer you a mutual defense pact and we'll help you invade and annex Lebanon and Syria if you so wish."

Occ- We plan to vastly improve the standard of living of the natives. We will be sending about 200-300 million white colonists to the lands in question once they have been secured. The colonists will form the benevolent ruling class and will help build roads, schools, hospitals, and other infrastructure.


Here is "Operation Living Space"

Official public announcement, "Recent fleet movements in the Mediterranean, red sea, Atlantic ocean near morocco and western Sahara, and the horn of Africa near Somalia, are part of a calculated campaign to help carry civilization and liberty to the oppressed people of Africa. Now we have decided to help liberate the people of Africa.


Population of lands to be annexed by CM

Western Sahara= 267,405
Morocco= 32,209,101
Algeria= 32,129,324
Tunisia= 9,974,722
Libya= 5,631,585
Egypt= 76,117,421
Sudan= 39,148,162
Ethiopia= 67,851,281
Eritrea= 4,447,307
Somalia= 8,304,601
Djibouti= 466,900

Total Population= 272,547,809

Liberation Forces and where they are going:

Western Sahara= 4 Divisions of Infantry, 1 Division of Mechanized BMP Infantry, 1 Division of Mechanized Warrior Infantry, 1 Armored Division, 1 Parachute Division. 144,000 army forces total.

Morocco= 12 Infantry Divisions, 2 Divisions of Mechanized BMP Infantry, 2 Divisions Mechanized Warrior Infantry, 2 Armored Divisions, 1 Parachute Division, 1 Republican Guard Cavalry Brigade, 1 Republican Guard Armored Division. 365,000 army forces total.


Algeria= 20 Infantry Divisions, 2 Divisions of Mechanized BMP Infantry, 2 Divisions of Mechanized Warrior Infantry, 3 Armored Divisions, 1 Parachute Division, 1 Republican Guard Cavalry Brigade, 2 Republican Guard Armored Division. 545,000 army forces total.

Tunisia= 8 Infantry Divisions, 1 Division of Mechanized BMP Infantry, 1 Division of Mechanized Warrior Infantry, 1 Armored Division, 1 Parachute Division. 216,000 army forces total.

Libya= 12 Infantry Divisions, 3 Divisions of Mechanized BMP Infantry, 3 Divisions of Warrior Mechanized Infantry, 3 Armored Divisions, 2 Parachute Divisions, 2 Republican Guard Armored Divisions, 1 Republican Guard Cavalry Brigade. 455,000 army forces total.

Egypt= 30 Infantry Divisions, 3 Divisions of Mechanized BMP Infantry, 3 Divisions of Warrior Mechanized Infantry, 4 Armored Divisions, 2 Parachute Divisions, 2 Republican Guard Armored Divisions, 1 Republican Guard Cavalry Brigade. 797,000 army forces total.

Sudan= 10 Infantry Divisions, 2 Divisions of Mechanized BMP Infantry, 2 Divisions of Warrior BMP infantry, 2 Armored Divisions, 2 Parachute Divisions. 324,000 army forces total.

Ethiopia= 30 Infantry Divisions, 1 Division of Mechanized BMP Infantry, 1 Division of Warrior BMP Infantry, 1 Armored Division, 2 Parachute Divisions. 630,000 army forces total.

Eritrea= 10 Divisions of Infantry, 1 Division of Mechanized BMP Infantry, 1 Division of Mechanized Warrior Infantry, 1 Armored Division, 1 Parachute Division. 252,000 army forces total.

Somalia= 10 Divisions of Infantry, 1 Division of Mechanized BMP Infantry, 1 Division of Mechanized Warrior Infantry, 1 Armored Division, 1 Parachute Division. 252,000 army forces total.

Djibouti= 4 Divisions of Infantry, 1 Division of Mechanized BMP Infantry, 1 Division of Mechanized Warrior Infantry, 1 Armored Division, 1 Parachute Division. 144,000 army forces total.

This means that 150 of my 400 Regular Army Infantry Divisions are deployed. 20 of my 20 Regular Army armored Divisions are deployed. 18 of my 20 Regular Army BMP Divisions are deployed. 18 of my 20 Regular Army Warrior Divisions are deployed. 4 of my 4 Republican Guard Cavalry Brigades are deployed. 7 of my 30 RG Armored Divisions are deployed. And 16 of my 20 Regular Army Parachute divisions are deployed.


Naval forces involved

6 Los Angeles class attack submarines

6 Virginia class attack submarines

6 SeaWolf class attack submarines, normal

6 SeaWolf class attack submarines with 2 Mantas

6 Oscar II class attack submarines

24 Manta class fast attack minisub

8 Ohio class ballistic missile submarines

8 Typhoon class ballistic missile submarines


6 Fabus Class Super Carriers (Nimitz just renamed) (50 F-14Ds. 15 F/A 18 Hornets. 20 Rafale M)

4 Baron Class Battleships (Iowa Class just renamed)

25 Stalin Class Frigates (Oliver Hazard Perry just renamed)

25 Hitler Class Destroyers (Arleigh Burke just renamed)

20 Kirov CGN,

20 Farragut DDG stealth

4 Yorktown Carriers



Well IDF, what say you? Should it become reality rather than just a dream right now? We can divide the area up, I'll eastern Africa you take the middle east. Well?

It wouldn't work, those nations are claimed by the Ottoman alliance, which has over 30 nations, many can beat us singlehandedly. If it could work I would try, but I don't see how it will. I will help in Africa, but the ME is too hard to take

It wouldn't work, those nations are claimed by the Ottoman alliance, which has over 30 nations, many can beat us singlehandedly. If it could work I would try, but I don't see how it will. I will help in Africa, but the ME is too hard to take

Okay, well it will always make a nice pipedream fantasy in my mind. Maybe someday if we can get enough allies, we'll try it. If you ever need my help in the middle east, just say so and we'll find some crusader sorts to help you out.

How about just Morocco and Western Sahara? Anybody have those two?

I would do that for fun CM. While my gov would be against it, I could RP in an insane general just to make things interesting.

Okay, well it will always make a nice pipedream fantasy in my mind. Maybe someday if we can get enough allies, we'll try it. If you ever need my help in the middle east, just say so and we'll find some crusader sorts to help you out.

How about just Morocco and Western Sahara? Anybody have those two?
Someone has those, I'll help you if needed. We need to recruit quietly to get allies.

whoever controls Morocco controls southern European trade, and naval movements there. We can even mine the Gibraltar straight to hold the world hostage

If somebody can take Egypt and Morocco, you can dominate the oil shipments into southern europe and such. If we can take Somalia, we can terrorize oil shipments along the horn of africa.

Egypt would be hard to take due to the alliance, any other african nation would be easier.

The USSCR has plans to take South Africa. Interested?

((OOC: This is really good stuff. Cinema quality. Must say I am thoroughly enjoying it. Raven is so delightfully evil, but not at the same time. Keep up the good work.))

count me in, go to www.nationstates.net to do tgs, same way as old. just search for IDF and then do the usual.

TG me with info of allies and such. I'm in!!!

The USSCR has plans to take South Africa. Interested?


Yes.

CM, get IDF into the International through some finagling so we can form tactics and plan.

this RP with Raven reminds me of 1st season of 24 (the best show next to simpsons)

CM, get IDF into the International through some finagling so we can form tactics and plan.

This is getting way off topic here. This is about CM and Whittier and the election kidnapping etc. Lets move all further discussion on this to a new thread perhaps?

all parties check my naval storefront to stock up, I will give 20% off (enough to cover costs)

Take that 20% off of my previous purchase then, please. And CM, yes, make another topic.

I'd be glad to help.

Okay this is getting back on track now.

Raven told the pilot and copilot to keep flying. He told the flight attendants to serve the people some water and other drinks to help calm them down. They also gave out light snacks, a few dozen people who had to use the bathroom were allowed to.

Raven was standing near the cockpit keeping a close eye on the pilot and co-pilot. Sarah was inside the cockpit keeping the pilot at gunpoint with the pistol she had.

Two people on the plane, both males (CM citizens) stepped forward, gave Raven the White Knights of Mississippi callsign (He isn't a member but he recognizes the sign) and they were promptly issued pistols by 2 of the 3 operatives. There are now the 3 operatives, Raven, Sarah, and the 2 WKM who are patrolling the isles and keeping watch over people. A total of 7 hijackers.

The two people stepped forward because they recognized the accents of the hijackers as being CM accents.

The pilot got permission to contact Air Traffic Control at the destination.

(Pilot) "Baton Rouge Air Traffic Control, This is Communist Louisiana airlines flight 813, we will be approaching your airport in approximately 5 hours, we need to land and refuel. Will you clear us to do so? Please clear us, there is a man and a woman pointing guns at me. We need to land as soon as we get to the airport, we'll be low on fuel, there will be no time for circling while we wait. Please have us cleared and ready to land."

One of the passengers looked out the window of the aircraft and whispered something to woman next to him, pointing out the window. She leaned over to look. The people behind them looked and soon all the passengers were looking out the windows. Some of them counting something outside the plane.

A voice came on the pilots headset,
"Communist Louisiana Flight 813, this the Whittier Air Force. You are ordered to turn around to Whittier International immediately. We are on your tail and have you in our sights. Failure to comply will be very bad for you. Flight 813, reply over."

Behind the craft, 15 F22 Raptors were taking up positions around the plane. They had been ordered into the air as soon as word as of the hostage taking had reached Brezhnekov. They had orders to blow the plane out of the sky if didn't return to Whittier International. Each Raptor was armed with 4 Sidewinders. The lead Raptor locking on to the plane itself, but not arming its missiles. The pilot was hoping he wouldn't have to kill all the civilians.

One of the passengers looked out the window of the aircraft and whispered something to woman next to him, pointing out the window. She leaned over to look. The people behind them looked and soon all the passengers were looking out the windows. Some of them counting something outside the plane.

A voice came on the pilots headset,
"Communist Louisiana Flight 813, this the Whittier Air Force. You are ordered to turn around to Whittier International immediately. We are on your tail and have you in our sights. Failure to comply will be very bad for you. Flight 813, reply over."

Behind the craft, 15 F22 Raptors were taking up positions around the plane. They had been ordered into the air as soon as word as of the hostage taking had reached Brezhnekov. They had orders to blow the plane out of the sky if didn't return to Whittier International. Each Raptor was armed with 4 Sidewinders. The lead Raptor locking on to the plane itself, but not arming its missiles. The pilot was hoping he wouldn't have to kill all the civilians.

The pilot asked Raven what to do. He told him, "Let them eat static."

5 minutes passed, the lead pilot spoke into his com:
"Flight 813 please respond." Using the other com, "All Raptors lock on to target."
Pilot #2's voice came over the com. "This is Raptor 2 locking on, over."
The other pilots followed suit.

The pilot spoke over the radio to the fighter planes. "Hello. This is flight 813, there are people in the cockpit holding a gun to me. I cannot turn around."

Pilot" I have my orders sir. You must return to base."

(813 Pilot) "Please sir, there are 120 men, women, and children on this plane. The gunmen say they'll let everybody go once they get to where they want to go. Please don't do anything to hurt anybody."

(Pilot) "Listen, tell whoever is in charge, that we have orders to shoot the plane down unless you all turn around."

(Raven) "Do you want to be a mass murderer, that is what you will be. You will be martyring us all."

(Pilot)"Hey look buddy, I'm just following orders from the very top. The way I see it, you already threatened to kill them if the plane turns around, I have orders to kill them if the plane does not turn around. Basically, they're screwed either way."

(813 Pilot) "Please, get somebody in authority I can talk to."

(Raven) "Get me your leader. I want to speak to him."

(Pilot)"This is Commander Thompson of the 52nd Combat Air wing, to the man on the flight 813, stand by for comms with the secretary General.

The pilot could feel the beads of sweat building on his face, he didn't want to have to kill all those people.

The phone rings at Brezhnekov's office. His secretary tells him its the air force. He picks up the phone and is briefed on the situation. The military switchboard then patches him to the lead F22 which in turn patches him over to the civilian airliner.

(813 Pilot) "Secretary General sir. There is a man with a gun to my head and he says he will start shooting people unless we take him to Baton Rouge in Louisiana."

Raven gets up to use the bathroom.

(813 pilot) "The leader has gotten up, but the girl is still here, I'm betting she won't hesitate to shoot me either."

(Brezh) Who am I speaking to?

(813 pilot) "Jack Donalds, pilot of Communist Louisiana Airlines flight 813 sir."


(Brezh) “Who’s there with you, Mr. Donalds?”

(Donalds) "The leader just went to the bathroom, only some girl is here now. The others are at other points throughout the plane, 3 other gunmen, they were joined by 2 passengers."

(Brezh) “Now listen carefully, I want you to tell what the situation is. How many terrorists all together, and what are their demands and what threats they have made.”

(Donalds) “"There are 7 armed people on this plane. They want to be taken to Baton Rouge, they say if they are taken there nobody will be harmed."

(Brezh) “And if they aren't?”

(813 Pilot) "They're threatening to kill people. Their leader says millions will die."

(813 Pilot) "He said something about nerve gas."

(Brezh) “What?”
Brezhnekov's face was now shadowed with concern.

(813 Pilot) "He said if he doesn't get to Baton Rouge safely he'll release nerve gas all throughout major population centers in Whittier, he says his men had been spending the last 5 days stashing it in key spots."

(Brezh) “Tell them if you don't turn back, I will have those fighters shoot you down.”

(Brezh) “Let me talk to the terrorists.”

Raven returns to the cockpit, "Hey buddy. The gas is set to go off in about 24 hours, if you shoot us down, you'll never find it all in time. Once I'm safely in Louisiana I'll tell you where they all are. I'll even send you a map."

Standby. (Speaking to the Raptors) Don't let him out of your site and don't let him cross into foreign airspace.

(Raven) "Hey Brezhie... Do I need to show you I am not bluffing, there really is gas. Shall I prove it with a little demonstration?"

(Raven) "I want the raptors gone, out of here. Back them off all the way, now."

Brezhnekov orders the Raptors to back off a little bit but to continue tailing the plane.
"What are you terms?"

(Raven) "We're going to get to Louisiana, refuel and then continue on from there. When we get where we're going we're out of here and the plane can continue on to wherever it wants to go. We fade back into private life and you never hear from us again. Well except when we tell you where the gas is. Then after that you never hear from us again."

(Brezh) “I will need 1 hours to meet with my cabinet to discuss this.”

(Raven) "Why, you're the guy in charge, they mean nothing. Don't stall. You have 10 minutes. Otherwise the opening pitch at some random baseball game will be quite unpleasant."

10 minutes later, "Well, are you done talking it over yet?"

brezh orders back the planes. He has begun consulting the govt. of Communist Louisiana and Whittier radar sites are now tracking the plane. E3 Sentries are now in the skies watching the plane. "Look out your window."

He can hear Sarah and "Raven" talking in the background.

(Raven) (Into the radio) "All planes back away."

brezh: "All planes are being withdrawn." Let me talk to my daughter.

(Raven) "She doesn't want to talk to you."

(Brezh) “I know you are holding her hostage.”

(Raven) (To Sarah) "You don't want to talk to him do you?"

(Sarah) “Yes I do.”

(Raven) "Okay. Go ahead and talk, tell him you're not a hostage, you're here of your own free-will

(Sarah) “I am here of my own free will. Why did you lie daddy?”

(Sarah) “Why did you want them to kill me?”

(Sarah) “How could you?”

(Sarah) Put a bunch of nig---s and Jews ahead of your own daughter?

She starts to get upset, John (Raven) lets her rest her head on his shoulder. He pats her on the back, "Don't worry, it'll be okay. You're safe now. Nobody will hurt you. Although your father wants to shoot the plane down with everybody in it, see, he's the mass murderer."
(Brezh) “Stop telling her that you liar. You're the mass murderer.”

Raven plays back the recording of the fighters threatening to shoot the plane down on the Secretary General's orders.

(Raven) (To Sarah) "It's a sad truth that your father is a liar."

(Brezhnekov) "Two can play that game." He orders the F22 pilot to play back the recording of Raven threatening to gas entire cities.

(Raven) (Quietly to Sarah) "That's just a bluff, there is no gas, we never placed it, remember we played cards all those days, I never had time to place it." (Loudly) "Remember I killed my own operative because he tried to harm you, your father cared more about his campaign for office than he did you. He now wants to shoot the plane down and kill us all."

(Brezhnekov) “Why don't you explain to her why you tried to kill 4 innocent men cause you didn't like political views.”

(Brezh) “How about those people you killed when you abducted her?”

(Raven) "I don't know what you're talking about, political killings? What do you mean? Those people who were shooting guns indiscriminately and almost hit her. I was protecting her, which is more than you've done."

(Brezh) “No. The time for your propaganda is over. Its time for you to tell the truth.”

(Raven) "Sarah, remember that man with the shotgun. He nearly hit you; thankfully I got him before he could. I've protected you, which is much more than he's done for you. He tried to kill me while we were meeting at the park, we were to come alone, he had a whole team of guards ambush me. I barely made it out alive."

(Brezh) “Why did you have her friend, Heather, brutally raped and left by the side of the road for dead.Did you tell her about that?”

(Raven) "I did no such thing."

(Raven) "The other man may have done so, which is one of the reasons I had to kill him, he didn't obey orders. I said nobody was to be harmed."

(Brezh) “That's not what Heather said. All leaders are responsible for the actions of their subordinates Raven. Are you saying you can't control what your subordinates do?Are you saying you are a weak coward?”

(Raven) (To Sarah) "Just ask your father about this." (Plays the tape of the father threatening to kill Raven's children saying what his family doesn't find out about him is okay."

(Raven) (To Sarah) "Your father is a sick man, he likes to harm children. He'd kill my sons if he could find them."

(Brezh) “Those guards in the park were there to protect me from assassination. We knew could not trust him. We found one of his snipers up in tree, with his sights pointed right at me. He was going to assassinate me.”

(Raven) (Plays the recording) "I'm Raven, don't try anything funny, one of my men has you in his sights. Don't worry I guarantee your safety as long you don't try anything."

Sarah, becomes confused as the two men argue over who tried to kill who.

And my man had you in his sights; he could have shot you at any time. But he didn't. Cause I told him not to unless your sniper fired first.

(Raven) (To Sarah) "Your father also called about 100 special agents to try to ambush me, he was supposed to come alone. It's a given everybody brings 1 sniper though, but he brought a small army."

(Raven) "Then his men unloaded their weapons into flocks of peaceful birds."

(Plays recording of birds cawing as they are being shot)

(Raven) (To Sarah) "Do you wish to continue to hear his lies and distortions?"

Brezhnekov, "If I pull back the planes, and let you go, will you release her?"

(Raven) (To Sarah) "Do you want to go with him, the child murderer?"

Sarah: "I don't know who is lying and who is telling the truth." She is now very confused

Sarah "I don't know."

(Raven) (To Sarah) "Killing my co-worker wasn't easy, but I did it to protect you. He was my friend. Your father wouldn't even be honest and open to try to protect you."

(Brezh) "I did what was in the interest of our people. I did all could."

(Raven) (To Sarah) "And I've done what is in your best interests. I got you all the food you asked for, kept you safe. I did everything for you."

Brezhnekov, "Honey, remember the beaches and the birthday parties we put on for you? And all those sleepovers we let you have? When ever you fell and got hurt, who was it that made you better?"

(Raven) (To Sarah) "Remember Sarah that I love you. And you'll like it where we're going. Plenty of rolling hills, farmland, horses to ride."

(Brezhnekov) "I thought you was going to marry Greg. Remember Greg, honey."

Sarah, "I love you John but..."

(Raven) "Do you want him telling you what you're going to do. It's your choice, I don't object to whatever you decide, it's up to you."

Brezhnekov in a stern voice, "Raven, why don't you stop pressuring her and let her make up her mind? Or do you have something to hide? Like the fact you have AIDS?"

(Brezh) "Yes we've been finding tiny scraps of bits of information, information we find most interesting.”

(Raven) "She knows it already, they're working on a cure, maybe it will work."

(Sarah) "I already know he has it."

(Brezh) “But unlike Whittier, no one is spending 2 trillion to find the cure.”

(Raven) "My nation won't let me die, they're spending over 800 billion."

(Brezh) "Raven, what is 800 billion compared to 2 trillion. We are already pretty close to what looks to be a cure. Its a drug that is being tested now, it targets the genetic ID of the HIV virus. We've been testing it in lab animals and it has a high rate of success so far."

(813 Pilot) "We'll be in Baton Rouge in 2 hours. We've been out of Whittier airspace for almost an hour now."

(Raven) "Raven is so impersonal. Call me John."

(Brezh) "We know your kids have it too. You want them to live don't you? We can help you. Ok, John."

(Brezh) "Call me Alexander."

(Raven) (To Sarah) "Why don't you go to the back of the plane for a while and sit down, get a soda or something." She gets up and goes to the back of the plane.

(Raven) (In radio) "Alexander, my sons are going to die, we both know it. I'm going to die."

(Brezh) “If you bring my daughter back, you can help us change that.”

(Raven) "It started as just a mission but it became something more, you know what I mean?"

(Brezh) “Your sons don't have to die. You don't have to die.”

(Brezh) "No I don't understand. I only know you did something to my daughter."

(Raven) "No, I didn't do anything to her. Anything that happened she decided to do. I told her she could go and she choose to come with me."

(Raven) "All I did was be nice to her and see nobody hurt her."

(Brezh)"And?"

(Raven) "What do you mean and?"

(Brezh) "Who hurt her if not you?"

(Raven) "Nobody hurt her, I saw to it. I gave you the head of the one man who tried to. You threw up remember. I guess you're not as used to death as I am."

(Brezh) “Ok. What do you want?

(Raven) "You never get what you want. You know how these things always end. The plane is going to land to refuel, commandos are going to storm in, and my men and I will die in a shoot-out.

(Raven) "Am I right, you've already arranged the commandos to meet us in Baton Rouge, right?"

(Brezh) “If you land in CL, they most likely will storm the plane. But if you return to Whittier, I promise that won't happen.”

(Brezh) "No. There are Whittier troops in CL.
But the CL government did say they would storm the plane cause they don't like terrorists”

(Raven) "No, it's all over. We'd have to go directly to our home country to avoid trouble, but that would bring trouble on the home country. You know our leader didn't authorize this mission."


(Brezh) “Where is your home country?”

(Raven) "I'll take that piece of information with me to the grave."

(Brezh) “And if your leader didn't authorize the mission who did? If you tell me that, I will grant you amnesty and you don't have to return to Whittier.”

(Raven) "I'm sure you can respect a man who keeps a secret so closely guarded."

(Brezh) “Not if it involves committing acts of war against a sovereign nation by assassination.”

(Raven) "Oh well it doesn't matter. It's all over anyway." (His voice is despondent and very depressing tone)

(Brezh) “Do you want to go to your grave knowing you helped a mad man start a war that led to the occupation of your nation?”

(Brezh) “Do you want to go to your grave knowing you helped a mad man start a war that led to the occupation of your nation? Can you have that on your conscience? We are not after you. Just the one who gave you the order.”

(Raven) "You'd never take us out, anyway you'll never find out who we are. The general who ordered the mission was a radical in the Department of Internal Security.”

(Brezh) “You have my word. What’s his name?”

(Raven) "He’s dead already. Purged for disloyalty."

(Brezh) “Then there should be no problem in giving me his name is there, if he really is dead.”

(Raven) "If I gave you his name, you'd figure out our country. I don't care to protect him, but the country is something worth protecting."

(Brezh) “If he was purged and killed we won't invade. We won't have any reason to.”

(Raven) "I worked under his command, they'll probably purge me. If I die in the line of duty, well my sons can have a dead hero as a father, rather than a dead coward."

(Brezh) “Then at least return my daughter.”

(Raven) "That's just a given isn't it?"

(Brezh) “My daughter comes home and you go home and no one dies.”

(Raven) "Anyway, she decided to come with me you know."

(Brezh) “Sounds to me like she's not so sure.”

(Raven) "Is anybody ever sure of anything?"

(Raven) "The doctor was sure the blood clotting factor my wife used was safe."

(Raven) "The doctor was also sure my sons wouldn't get infected."

(Brezh) “How?”

(Raven) "When they were born they got it, mother to child."

(Brezh) “Ok.”

(Raven) "There's only one thing I'm sure of. It's over. 16 years of intelligence work is over."

(Raven) "Have you ever wondered when obeying orders crosses the line?"

(Brezh) “We all do.”

(Raven) "I haven't been able to see the fu--ing line for years. Crossed it so far back."

(Raven) "You know the hardest part for me, you know what it was?"

(Brezh) “No.”

(Raven) "Bluffing you into thinking I'd actually kill her if you didn't do what I said. I honestly didn't have any idea what I'd do if you didn't meet the demands. I'm not a butcher you know, I can't do those sorts of things. I was dumbfounded as to what to do, so I just figured, get on a plane and go home."

(Brezh) “And that proves you are not a butcher. You are not like the person who gave you that order. But why are you protecting him?”

Raven takes out one of his expensive cigarettes, the pilot says, "This is a nonsmoking flight." Raven says, "Hey, I'm the guy with the gun here, fly the damn plane."

(Raven) (To Pilot) "Where is the nearest airport?"

(Pilot) "We'll be at Baton Rouge in about 30 minutes."

(Raven) "Why don't we screw that and just go all the way to Mississippi."

(Brezh) “Mississippi?”

(Raven) "What about Mississippi?"

(Brezh) “Nice country.”

(Raven) "I guess so."

(Brezh) “So, how about those Mississippi Falcons.”

(Raven) "Never heard of them. All team names were changed decades ago."

(Brezh) “Why? Never mind.”

(Raven) "They're now the Mississippi Kluxers."

(Brezh) “Ah.”

(Raven) (Silently) "It'll be good to be home again."

(Brezh) “Is Mississippi home?”

(Raven) "Yes."

(Raven) "I just didn't want to buried in Louisiana, I want to be buried at home in a proper manner."

General Kopright: "Sir we can 5 naval battle groups there in one day and blow them to smithereens." Brezhnekov: "No, I gave my word I wouldn't attack."

(Raven) "I'll be joining my former commander General Richards soon. I don't have any illusions about where I'm going."

(General Kopright) "But sir we have an open window."

(Brezhnekov) "I said no and that is final. Are you questioning my authority soldier?

(General Kopright) "No sir."

(Raven) "The Premier is a decent man, he'll make sure your daughter makes it back to your nation safely."

(Brezh) “Very well.”

(Raven) (Quieter) "As for me. God have mercy on my soul." A loud "Bang" erupts throughout the cockpit, the pilot screams "Sh--. My ears, he just shot himself."

(813 Pilot) "This is Donalds of Flight 813, the leader of the hijackers has just shot himself. Repeat, he has shot himself."

(Brezh) “Mr. Donalds, what is the status of the leader? Is he dead or alive?”

(Co-pilot) "He's alive, but barely, if he doesn't get to a hospital immediately, he won't make it."

(Brezh) “Can you make it back to Whittier without refueling?”

When the operative in business class heard the shot go off he came racing to the cockpit. "Keep going, Mississippi is just a short while away. Go." (He cocks his Uzi)

(Donalds) "Ummm. It's one of the other operatives. He claims to be the second in command. He blames me for the leader being shot."

(Brezh) “Put him on the radio.”

Two male voices are yelling in the background, 1 operative 1 the WKM passenger with a pistol who is helping the hijackers. A doctor from first class was tending to Raven.

(2nd) "Hello, who the hell is this?"

(Brezh) “This Alexander Brezhnekov of the United Socialist States of Whittier.”

(Brezh) “Who am I talking to?”

(2nd) "Just call me 2."

(Brezh) “Well Mr. 2 you have a choice.”

(Brezh) “You can turn that plane around or you can continue on, in which case I will have to have my military invade your country. Which will it be.”

(Donalds) "Good God. He has a grenade in his hands."

(2nd) (Hyperventilating)

What are you doing with the grenade Mr. 2?

(2nd) (Hyperventilating, beads of perspiration drip down his face) "I... Don't know... I can't think... Crowded in here."

(Brezh) “Put the grenade away and no one gets hurt.”
(2nd) "By the time we get back to Whittier the boss will be dead. Jackson City in Mississippi is 20 minutes away. Whittier is almost 5 hours.”

(Brezh) “Ok, you can land in Mississippi. You don't have to return to Whittier.”

(2nd) (Nervous and hyperventilating) "It's too crowded in here, I have to get out. Let me out, let me out, open the door, let me out."

(Donalds) "He's going crazy."

(WKM 1) "Just calm down Joe. No need to drop the grenade. Just put the pin back in real nice and slow, and breath easy."

(Donalds) "Okay, the grenade is away."

(Brezh) “Good, now see to it that you land at Jackson City.”

Right at that moment the armed air marshal in economy class decided to make his move. He stood up and shot one of the operatives in the chest. The WKM man and other operative in the economy section fired at him. The operative fired a long burst from the Uzi. Bullets impacted all throughout the body of the plane. Brezh heard the gunfire. A stray bullet hit the pilot, and he slumped over.

(Brezh) what's going on up there? Donalds, Donalds.”
Another stray round hit the co-pilot

(Brezh) “Respond.”

(WKM 1) "Problem. The pilot and co-pilot are dead."

(Brezh) “Can you fly.”

(WKM 1) "Only an Su-25."

(Brezh) “Well, I want you to contact ground control and have them talk you through the landing. Understand?”

(WKM 1) (Over intercom) "Attention, is there a pilot on the plane. Get up here now." A man who is a pilot in a MiG-31 came to the front. (In radio) "I found my co-pilot." Pilot Donalds wasn't dead, he choked out a few words to guide the men


(Jackson City Air Defense Battery 5) "This is Mississippi Battery 5, attention unidentified craft, you do not have clearance to be enter Jackson City air space, your present heading will take you into Jackson City in approximately 5 minutes, alter your course now or we will be forced to shoot you down." Brezh heard it on his radio also.
(WKM 1) "This is an emergency, we really need to land, the plane is damaged, and the pilot and co-pilot are bleeding profusely. We don't have time for this."

(Air Defense) "Alter your course."

(WKM 1) (Gives him a WKM signal)

(Brezh) "Get me the leader of communist Mississippi now."

(Air Defense) "Ah greetings brother. You are cleared to land at runway 2. Don't forget the big meeting tomorrow."

About 60 seconds later (Curtis Fabus) (On phone) "Premier Fabus here. Who is this?"

(Brezh) “This is Secretary General Brezhnekov.”

(Fabus) "Is there something you want to talk about? I was swimming."

(Brezh) “Yes, there is a plane in your nation that your people have threatened to shoot.” down

(Fabus International Airport Air Traffic Control) "Flight 813, be advised Emergency Medical Personnel are standing by to tend to the wounded once you land."

(WKM 1) “Okay, I don’t know anything about landing a 777.” They walk him through the steps. The MiG-31 pilot handles all the switches etc.

(Fabus) (To Brezh) "Does it have clearance?"

(Brezh) “I don't know. We have an emergency situation; cause terrorists seized the plane and threatened to kill all 120 passengers. Most them are dead or seriously wounded though. But so were the pilots. They can't go anywhere else except to Jackson.”

(Fabus) "Terrorists? From what nations? Arabs again?"

Brezhnekov felt disgust.

(Fabus) "It's always the Arabs. They got their towels wrapped around their heads too tight."

(Brezh) “We can discuss it once you let the plane land. I am sending my ambassador to talk to your government about a matter that may be of interest.”

(Fabus) "Well are the Arabs on the plane? We don't let Arabs into our nation? What group is it?"

(Brezh) “They are your people.”

(Fabus) "Oh, well I'll be. Why didn't you say so? They're probably just eager to get home, the plane was moving too slowly. They figured they'd encourage the pilot to go faster, boys will be boys."

(Brezh) “Sure, if you say so. But I know otherwise.”

(Fabus) "Well what kind of Mississippian would I be if I didn't allow my own countrymen to use our airports. Surely they can land here."

(Brezh) “Okay. That’s what I wanted to hear.”

(Fabus) "They're cleared to land already, apparently the air defense battery man and the man flying the bird in are members of the same social club."

(Brezh) “Ok.”

(Fabus) "Now what was the other thing you wanted to discuss with me?"

(Brezh) “Your nation's acts of war.”

(Fabus) "Why hell, I haven't approved anything even remotely considered an act of war. We're just isolationists here. What the heck are you talking about?" (His voice and tone show he is genuinely ignorant of what the man is talking about)

(Brezh) “Several of your nation's agents were in my nation with orders to kill candidates and kidnap my daughter and her friends.”

(Fabus) "Oh my. Well this is the first time I've heard anything about it. I'll certainly see this matter gets investigated. We execute generals who take it upon themselves to do such thing. Rest assured. Well is your daughter alright now?"

(Brezh) “She is on the plane. And I want her back.”

(Fabus) "Why of course sir, that's just a given isn't it. I wouldn't attempt to deprive you of your daughter."

(Fabus) "Do you have any names for me as to who is involved in all this?"

(Brezh) “Then you understand?”

(Fabus) "Oh certainly I understand."

(Brezh) “Someone in the dept. of Internal Security. That was all I could get. Someone high up.”
(Fabus) "He's probably dead. We just shot about 80 members of the DIS for suspected disloyalty and confirmed disloyalty."

(Fabus) "But we'll make sure."

(Brezh) “I will need to see his corpse.”

(Fabus) "If you want to come all the way on out here to Mississippa, that's your business, you're welcome to come on out here." (The way he said Mississippi struck him as funny)

(Brezh) “I will have my ambassador verify.”

(Brezh) “And I want my daughter on a plane back here with in the hour.”

(Fabus) "You Sure? I could have her flown back to you or will you fly out here to get her? I'm sure she'll be in no real mood for flying after such an ordeal, perhaps you might fly out here and the two of you could take a train back, it's nice and scenic, give you all plenty of time to talk."

(Brezh) “Yes, I will fly out there to pick her up on Whittier One.”

(Fabus) "That sounds good. You all want to, you can land at the private runway at my estate in Neshoba County. It's called Stalingrad. It's a private airport but it can handle any size airplane. I'll see your daughter is there waiting for you."

(Brezh) “That would be good. I will be there in 5 hours.”

(Fabus) "You reckon on taking a train back or you figuring on taking a plane?"

We will be leaving on Whittier One. We can't take the train. Too many reporters and common people

(Fabus) "Flight 813, just arrived at the gate and unloaded."

(Brezh) “Good, good.”

(Fabus) "I got a private train, 1,200 feet long."

(Brezh) “Very well. My secret service will be accompanying me.”

(Fabus) "When you have 6 trillion dollars to your name, you can buy anything. And 6 trillion was just my last count. I think I'm somewhere near 10 trillion now."

(Brezh) “I am on the way now.”

(Fabus) "A bit of news from the airport, your daughter is refusing to get on the plane to get here to wait for you. She is said to be insisting on wanting to go to the hospital with some wounded man. From the way they're telling it, it don't sound like the boy got too long to live."

(Occ- I know they’re talking different to others. That’s just how they sound to others. They sound normal to each other)

(Brezh) “Let her go. I will meet her at the hospital.”

(Fabus) "Okay. If you reckon that's what you want. I won't argue none with you."

5 hours later he made it the hospital. The name on Raven’s chart was a big blank.

Sarah was at the bedside next to John, he was on numerous life support machines.

The doctor came in and suggested she leave, "She'd been there long enough."

The doctor told Brezhnekov to leave also, "Visiting hours are over. And this guy doesn't even know who is here or not."

Brezhnekov left with his daughter to catch the train back to Whittier, where a psychiatric institution was waiting for her.

The papers reported the mysterious man was gone the next morning, nobody knows how he was able to leave, nobody even knows how he managed to live, if he did live. All they know is around the hospital were thousands of ravens and crows.

Brezh found a package at his front door, a large one. He picked it up. And looked at the return address but there was none. He then had his personal guard open it. To make sure it wasn't a bomb. A guard said about 50 ravens had carried it in. The guards open the package.

Inside was a small birdcage with a raven in it. The pistol he had given her, a set of car keys to a Cadillac Eldorado (Everybody in my nations loves Cadillac), and a card. The card read, "You were such a good shot it'd be a shame for you to give up shooting. I figured you might need a car. And the raven, well that's a pet for you to keep. You'll always have a friend in Mississippi." Outside a deliveryman was pulling up in a car, a 1978 red Eldorado.

The Raven had learned a valuable lesson from the girl, he quit his job the day he had the strength to walk into the office and face his boss. Today the raven is living in an undisclosed location somewhere in rural Mississippi. He finally did get the AIDS treated for his sons and himself, and he is no longer dying. After they treated the 50,000 AIDS patients in CM, the cure was destroyed so it would never fall into the hands of blacks or those who would give it to blacks. The scientist who worked on the cure kept it all in his head.

Hopefully peace shall endure.

However for now, the CM government will continue killing disloyal officers and party members. Nobody in CM shall be allowed to challenge the authority of the Premier!

Reporters swarmed around the SG asking questions. "What was "The Raven" like?"

(Reporter 1) "Was he a beast?"

(Reporter 2) "Was he insane?"

The SG: "Neither, he was simply lost."

(Reporter 3) "Is it true he is dead now?"

SG: Knowing it wasn't true, "Yes. He is dead and buried.

(Reporter 4) "Are the rumors that him and your daughter were romantically involved, are they true?"

Orders a Secret Service Agent to seize and arrest the reporter asking the question.

The reporter is charged with disloyalty to the homeland.

(Reporter 4) "Hey, I've got my rights. Free Press! Free Press!"

SG: "We are socialist nation, we have no free press."

(Reporter 5) "How did they ever manage to smuggle 4 Uzis and 1/2 dozen pistols and grenades onto a commercial airliner? How bad has security gotten here?"

SG: We are looking into that. The Minister of Airport Security has been relieved of duty and now sits in jail for dereliction of duty.

(Reporter 6) "Is it true your daughter helped them hijack the aircraft?"

(SG) “Yes.”

(Reporter 7) "Do you plan to have her charged with hijacking?"

(SG) “No, I had her committed to a psychiatric institution for evaluation and treatment.”

(Reporter 8) "Is he doing well? Is her condition improving?"

(SG) “Yes. Whittier has the finest psychologists on earth. I will say that I don't like how the government of CM runs their own country.”


Meanwhile in rural Mississippi. A blind man about 36 years old is sitting on a park bench, he was blinded in what he calls a "gun misfire." A young kid comes up and asks him, "Hey mister, how do you get all them crows and ravens to sit by you."

The man replies, "You just have to know things kid. You just have to know things."

The man asks the kid, "Would you mind walking me home, it's 3 miles away. I'll give you 100 dollars though." The kid jumps at the offer.

The boy escorts the man home; the ravens and crows follow the entire time. The man says, "Stick your arm out and one might use it as a perch." The boy does and a raven flies to him, he has a new pet. The bird "Caws" loudly. "Cool", the boy says, "Wait till the other kids see this."

The man gets home, he gives the kid the money he promised him and the kid runs off to show his friends the bird on his arm.

The man hears the voices of his two sons and they come running to him. He fumbles about and finally manages to hug them. He smiles, the first smile in a quite a long time.
He lost his sight but he gained vision.


In Jackson City the media was asking Curtis Fabus questions, he simply said, "I have nothing to say." And kept walking to his meeting. He didn't want to talk to any media figures, when some of them bothered him he had them arrested and charged with, "Pissing the premier off."

wow, okay. That was interesting. My forums were down for three days so I wasn't able to finish up, but nm.