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IN THESE STREETS-CO-RP,VIOLENCE,ADULT THEMES

Baccardi
20-05-2004, 15:53
9 YEARS AGO-SOUTH BRONX:

Giovanni Venegas sat his 12 year old brother on the hood of his BMW M5, it was a warm summer day in South Brooklyn. People were all over the streets, bass pounded from passing cars:

"ey tommy what you think of these new wheels baby"

Said Gino wiping a rag over the windsheild:

"it's nice Gino...you given any money to mom yet?with your job and all"

Gino looked his brother in the eyes and replyed:

"look Tommy..mom wanna spend all her money on shit that don't help the family,i won't give her f--- tommy..i buy food,i pay for cable..she gets the cheak.."

Tommy smiled and looked at his brothers hands,glod rings on every finger with rocks in them:

"Gino..your the best brother..you got a nice car,a job..money"

Gino looked at his brother and sat beside him:

"Tommy..i worked for all i got bro..some day it's all gonna be yours man! but not like i did it, naww man ill kick your ass"

Tommy grinned and looked to his left seeing 4 men get out of a red mercedes, Gino jumped off the hood of the car stuck his hand in the front of his pants pulling out a Chrome 9MM.

The men were wearing sweaters and it was hott as hell with the hood pulled up:

"Gino!! whats happening!!"

Gino turned his head to his little brother with a horrifyed look on his face:

"Tommy run hooome!!" he screamed then leveled the wepon shooting round after round

Tommy sat on the car frozen with fear,one of the men in the hoodies fell on a stack of garbage cans, the others pulled guns out of their pockets shooting at Gino:

"Tommy! Run!! goto Carlos's house man! get his ass out here!!"

Gino continued to yell, Tommy was still frozen watching this go down. the 3 remaining men were getting closer to Gino, he fired 2 more shots then his gun clicked:

"fuuuuckkkkkkk!" he yelled at the top of his lungs then turned to tommy and gave a little smile, his body jerked over and over, the smile drained off his face with his complection as he slumped to the ground. Tommy looked over at the murderers frozen in his spot, there was 2 left..the third man lay on the ground in a puddle of blood. It was all slow motion now as the men ran to their car and sped off down the street.

Tommy finnaly was able to move and walked over to Gino's lifeless corspe and ran his fingers over his only dead brothers face,tears were on Ginos face,were they Tommys or his...

PRESENT DAY:

Multicoloured lights danced across the walls,music pumped in the club. A group of hispanic boys sat at a corner table moving to the music, the one in the center had 2 girls on his lap with their tits hanging out:

"haha it's jumpin tonight boys!"

yelled the one in the middle, the others agreed by lettin out howls or other noises, he was the one obveiously in charge of the group. Another man strolled up to the table and gave the center man props:

"whats up Tommy, my f--- man!"

It was Tommy Venegas, brother of Giovanni:

"nothin Carlos, sit your ass down man you blockin the veiw"

Carlos looked at the 2 honeys on his lap:

"what you mean cuz?? you already got 2 on yer lap!"

Tommy made them get up and join Carlos:

"forget them man.."


Upon Leaving the club everyone gathered at Tommys Black BMW M5 that had belonged to his brother:

"aight boys..we got some buisness to take care of tonight yeah?"

"yeah" the boys replyed

"ok, we gonna find smokey and jusst smoke him, haha, smoke smokey!"

They piled into the car top down and drove down the street, in the backseat Ray put 2 shot gun shells in a double barrel sawed off:

"yo Papa im ready!"

exclaimed Ray. this fool smokey was beleived to be one of Overdose'd boys who shot up Gino, they dissappeared after the killing and it was heard they were back in town. Gino was a crack dealer,gun dealer you name it. Gino was killed for movin on OD's territory, now Tommy was pickin up where Gino didn't get to finish, when Gino died the Italian boys lost territory by the block, this was gonna be a war well waited,unexpected..



COMMON PEOPLE JOIN IN, IT'S FUN! ANY CHARACTOR YOU WANT! BESIDES TOMMY.
Baccardi
20-05-2004, 15:54
BUMP
Baccardi
20-05-2004, 15:54
BUMP