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15-02-2004, 19:47
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Chapter 1 John mirra:the american dream.




This is a story that i made related to max payne some of it is not mine but most of it is.So the story is about a man named john mirra that has wonderful life that turns bad well enjoy this story....





It begins in upper manhattan new york city.A man named john mirra comes home from his job as a DEA agent to his wife and baby daughter."hi honey how are you" says john mirra as he opens the door."Oh fine the wilsons are coming over" his wife replied."oh well let me feed the lizard his crickets.As john fed his leopard gecko crickets he heard a strange whisper."mirra.........mirra.... john mirrraaa..." said strange voice."whaaa whos there" he asked but he shook his head " I must of been hearing things.He opens the door and sees his daughter he strokes her hair with his hand and walks out of the room.knock...knock..knock.. he looks through the peephole to see a man.He opens the door the man pulls out a barretta 9mm pistol "Oh shit!" he ran to reach his sig sauer in the holster.bang!! bang!!! "ahhhhh *gasp*" his wife was shot.He loaded the pistol aimed fired and wounded the man.But he disappeared and he heard a shot in the room of the baby."nooooooooo!! not laura!!" he ran but it was to late the baby was dead."YOU SON-OF A BITCH I'LL KILL YOU FOR KILLING MY FAMILY AHHH!!!!!" he screamed as loud as the gun that was fired.He knew he would be thought the killer he had to run.




Part II the killer named mirra.
He ran down the steps of the apt to the reception it was the killer."FREEZE YOU SON OF BITCH I'LL SHOOT" he dropped the gun."Who the hell are you" john asked."I'm john mirra" he answered."No wait how can this be i'm john mirra" he asked in wonder."Well i'm your alter ego John" the evil mirra replied."F*@ck you your f@#cking dead!" he raised the pistol but then evil mirra disappeared.Then a black van apeared "freeze john mirra you pychotic were coming to take you away!" the men yelled.He shot at them killing 3 of them but they over powered him and put him in a straight jacket.The van had a flamingo on it wait a minute your evil mirras men.Then they injected him with a drug that made him drowsy he passed out."whaaa where am I" he asked himself."He looked in the mirror mirra evil mirra was there."hahahahahahahhaha" he laughed at john.Then a flamingo appeared "MirRors ArE MOre fUn ThaN TelEvIsion" the flamingo said."This is my flamingo consider him my pet"evil mirra replied."wait evil mirra why did you kill my family?" a tear ran down the face of john mirra."well john there is something that you have done that you must pay for"replied evil mirra."THERES NOTHING I'VE DONE WRONG YOU LIER YOUR DEAD!! YOUR F**CKING DEAD!" john had smashed the mirror but they had vanished before he killed them.the door to johns cell opened."Yes this is mirra hes the one that killed his family".These were evil mirras men they were trying to trick me into thinking I had killed my family."grab him"said one man.they took him through a hall."DEATH IS COMING DEATH IS COMING AHHH DEATH...HEEESSSSSS HERE HEEESSS HERE AHHH"one of the mental patients was screaming because he was insane.They walked john into a room they injected him and they said he had a tumor and the needed to operate on john."Give me the anathetic" said a man with a surgeons mask."Easy john this will only take a minute you will feel better." said the man.But mirra remembered anathesia was a clear liquid not brown liquid.That was no pain killer it was poison.John kicked him in the groin the man fell."ahhhh my balls you bastard!" the man yelled for help but mirra kicked him in the jaw with such force he broke the mans neck.there was a scalpel on the operating table he positioned himself and he picked the straight jacket's lock.He picked up the scalpel.Evil mirras men tryed to open the locked door.One kicked the door down."Freeze mirra!" the man yelled pointing a glock pistol.John put his hands up and then through the scalpel at the man and punctered the man head.He picked up the gun but it was not a glock just tranqcalizer gun.It was useless.He threw it down.He saw a man punched him and put him in a head lock."shit man dont kill me!" the man yelled.He walked the man still in the head lock."Whats the door code"john demanded."28469" the man told him.12 men with batons and tazers stood there.He walked over the men saw john."Let the guard go" said one man."F*ck you put the shit down"said john.they complied they put down the guns.John broke the man in the choke holds neck.they grabbed the batons and tazers again."stop stop now!" yelled the men.John saw the locker where they took his gun it was unloaded but he could point it and pretend its loaded."okay man whos got the gun now!!" yelled john.They froze in fear."Screw this im calling back up!"said one of the men on his radio.John quickly ran toward them and pistol whipped on man and took his baton.He hit one man with the baton only injuring him.struck one man in the throte punctering his trachea killing him.BAM he hit the one the one he injured in the head so hard he saw blood as he hit him.One man punched him hurting john in the stomach.BAAMM another hit to the man in the chin knocking him out.He quickly grabbed a pistol from one of the dead men.He dove backward and he shot 6 of them dead.The rest he killed now his next goal was escaping from the pink bird mental instutute after evil mirras flamingo.




Part 3:Escape from the pink bird mental instutute.
John continued down the hall he saw another man in small room talking on the phone."Yes John Mirra the patient has escaped his holding cell we must capture him the boss wants him alive" said the man talking on the phone.John snook up to the door and knocked on it."what the hell whos there you can come in" said the man."no can you come here I have some paper work you need to sign." john said."okay" said the man as he opened the door.John took the mans head and threw him into the wall.He continuly kicked his back until he was sure the man spine was broken.He opened a blocked door and took the mans baton just incase when the gun ran out of ammo he could still fight.He walked down while hearing muffled talking.Men in black suits with ski masks were walking with M4 carbines and MP5s with full gear with pistols in their holsters.John jumped from cover and shot one in the head.they saw john and pinned him down."god damnit we have mirra pinned down johnson go capture him now!" yelled a man.When he ran to john he shot him in stomach killing the man.He took his M4 and fired at them they were all shot dead with john being shot only in the foot.He ran picking up a CS gas grenade.He ran into a large area over 7 men were there staying in a crouched postions."SHOOT TO KILL FORGET THE BOSS'S ORDERS JUST KILL MIRRA!!" yelled a man.John quickly peeked and noticed from a glance behind a wall that none had gas masks.He took the CS grenade pulled the pin and threw it he heard a loud pop the gas spewed out like the after burners on a F-14.There was a air vent that the gas went into the gas spread."*cough* I cant see anything its teargas" said a man.John was to pissed off to cough or sneeze he ran threw the gas yelling:"IM GONNA KILL YOU MOTHAF**KING BASTARDS!!"He smacked one man with the M4 and took his ammo.He fired at the confused men his gun clicked.It was out if ammo.He unloaded the clip and inserted a new magazine he continued to fire killing them he saw a door marked:EMERGENCY EXIT.He ran outside he saw a car with a flamingo insignia and on the side it read pink bird mental instatute.And he saw the licensne plate.And his mind was filled with fear.Instead of New york plates it read Noir York.Evil mirra had put him into a different dimension.He got into the car he had no idea where to go.A cell phone lay on the passenger seat he took his pistol and shot the window.He unlocked the door and went in he pulled out the wires and wired the car to turn on.Then all of a sudden the phone next to him wrang."hello?" he said."Hello john"said the voice.He reconignized the voice it was evil mirra."What do you want you sick f*ck" said john."You have escaped but that will all change you see im a mass murderer every time you refuse to do something someone from your demension dies,now lets start there is a man in a hotel you must kill him." said the evil mirra."why?" asked john."He is an enemy of mine" said evil mirra."So if hes a enemy of mine he also is my enemy" said john."Yes hesMark Hammond." John remembered Mark Hammond had struck his brother and killed him.




Part 4 ThE FlESh Of FallEN AnGels.
John drove he had refused to kill hammond."Fu*k you mirra im not killing him you stupid f*ck!" john screamed into the phone.Then people on the streets of Noir York were walking until a women was screaming she had fallen into the ground.Face first dead.the phone rang again:"ThE FlEsH oF FalLen AnGEls"it was mirras pet flamingo he knew because it spoke in bazzarre strange voice.The people looked at john."Its him hes the mental patient!!"John got out he ran police officers ran after him.Another women fell from the sky and was killed.The flamingo said the flesh of fallen angels because hes probaly causing these women to fall he was right mirra and the flamingo were murderers.He ran while the officers chased him "FREEZE MIRRA!" yelled the sgt."SHOOT HIM!" one officer shot at john it missed and news paper dispencer.Since the police stopped to shoot john got away from them.But then a patrol car and another one of those "pink bird mental instutute" vans was following the patrol car.A man arose from the sun roof of the van with a MAC-10 machinepistol.Shots rang out john was hit twice but the shooter paused to reload. john pulled out his trusty sig sauer pistol he fired blindly at the patrol car the bullet penetrated the window of the patrol car killing the driver the car spun out of control and crashed into a pole on the left side into a pole.As he ran the huge apt. complexs and sky scrapers blocked the sun.The vans shooter kept firing but john stopped abrubtly and fired at the van his finger rapidly pulling the trigger the bullets struck the shooter in mmultiple areas in the chest a few times until the shooter fell down.He reloaded the sig sauer he was low on ammo he still fired at the van he hit the front right tire the van spun out of control hitting a taxi cab.the people all around scattered people yelling and screaming john holstered his pistol.He still had the M4 on a sholder strap he had 9 magazines with his pocket stuffed with ammo.A man stumbled out of the van john fired the M4 striking the man in various areas.He then saw another he switched the M4 to semi-auto to conserve ammo.He aimed carfully nailing the man in the head.One more came out "FREEZE" yelled john.He shot the man in the leg.The man felled and grunted in pain."WHERES MIRRA!!" demanded john."hes at the night club called "The Pink Flamingo" another thing named after evil mirras flamingo.John knelt down and smacked the man with the butt of his M4 but only knocking him out.He ran he hid in a old hotel until it was night.He was carful so the reception women didnt know who he was.He used the alias: Tim Elder.He checked out of the hotel and he saw a taxi he stopped the taxi.He entered the taxi."where to man?" asked the cab driver."The Pink Flamingo night club" john answered."Thats fine you wanna dance there and meet some nice ladiess?" the man grinned after he talked.John look at his eyes threw the mirror."No to settle unfinished buissness" john said as he pulled out his sig sauer and loaded it.He also had a MAC-10 concealed under his jacket with lots of clip.He had stashed his M4 in a suitcase that he brang with him in the taxi."Okay were here that will be 7.80" said the driver."thank you" replied john as he handed him the money and walked out of the taxi.He stared at the huge pink letters and he heard the music from outside.He had arriced at the Pink Flamingo.




Part 4 pay back time.
John saw the huge line shoved people out of his way until he reached the bouncer."Let me in before I incapacitate you" said john in a hrad boiled voice."Nice try get to the back of the line" said the bouncer."Im only gonna ask one more tim let me in or you'll be in the cement" replied john.The bouncer pulled his fist back about to punch john.John was well trained in akido he took the bouncer's arm put it down he then struck his throat took his knee and smashed his face.He had incapacitated the bouncer.He pushed open the door.He saw a stripper that looked like his wife.They were serving "Flamingo Cocktails".He walked toward the staff door he pulled out his sig sauer and shot the bouncer in the head.He kicked down the door killed two guards behind the door.He then opened the suitcase and took out the M4 loaded it and began to slaughter the guards.One fired at john missing him."TIME TO DIE YOU MOTHERF#@CKERS!" he then kept firing in the air so pissed that he would kill anyone came into his path.He fired at a bouncerin the groin and then continuly fired at him as he dropped to the ground.John knew that usually nightclubs have a upstairs but he had to lay low because of the loud music and noise no one heard the bloodshed.He walked out of the staffroom to the dance floor over to the stripper."Hey whats your name b*tch" said a drunk man next to john."Ohhhh mine is brenda" said the stripper.Wait a minute brendas my wifes name."Hey whats your last name?" asked john."Its mirrana" John remembered that he was in a parralell dimension."Brenda you must leave john mirra is going to kill you!" john said shaking her shoulders."Hey asshole the lady gets payed to strip not talk!" said a bouncer."Fine your no worth killing" john walked over to the bar."whats your drink,sir?" asked the bartender."Martini with a olive" replied john.What john didnt know is that everyone that worked in the club was loyal to evil mirra and they would kill any of his enemys.The bartender slipped some sionide in the martini."Here ya go 5.50" said bouncer.John handed him the money he looked at the drink he was suspicious there was particles that looked like dust floating in the martini.John took the drink he knew it was poisened.Five of mirras men came in dressed in black.John approached them."Hello sir can I welcome you to the club here take this complimentry martini" said john pretending to be a worker at the club."Sure thanks" said the mercanary.The man choked and fell over the bouncers took out there pistols.John jumped backwards the sig suaer glistened in the bright club.BAAMM!!! "AHHH" the bouncers head was blown off.John ran over to do some close quarters shit."Come here mothafucka!" the bouncer yelled at john holding a bali-song knife."K fuck you!" john ran.struck his trachea took out a spider-co knife flipped it and stabbed the bouncers stomach repeadtly."AHHHHH UGHH" the bouncer fell and bled to death."YOU FUCK YOU KILLED SAM!!!" he pulled out H&K sub-machine gun.The gun sprayed wildly john was pinned down."fuck!" the bouncer said as the gun clicked.He reloaded."nows my chance" john sprung out.the sig suaer gunned him down.More men came the music turned off abrubtly.The club was empty because of the shooting."FREEZE POLICE!" cops entered some were SWAT.The bouncers and mercanaries didnt fire at the cops because they were on the same side."MIRRA DROP THE GUN!!" the SWAT team threatend to shoot."You win" John put the gun down.The flamingo aprroached."JoHn MirRa" the flamingo said again in his wierd voice."Yes this is he" john answered back. "YoU HaVe ComE FaR,BUt aS ClosE As YoU wiLL GeT" then the flamingo stopped at walked away.The steps of shoes were coming from the stairs."Ahhh John your back like my club" evil mirra said."FUCK you asshole!" john yelled back."Ooh no need for such language john" " Your going to kill hammond" john said."NO! NO!! NO!!!" john interrupted."IM NOT GONNA FUCKIN KILL HIM!!!" John yelled very loud here."Remember what the flamingo said: if you dont kill hammond a person from your dimension dies! evil mirra reminded john."Fine but you have to tell me why you killed them" john demanded."Deal go now if you shoot back your dead"replied evil mirra he ordered a SWAT guy to let him go.John ran out he was going to kill hammond.John saw that same taxi that drove him to the club.The driver rolled down the window."Well hello again" the man was happy to see john again."I need to know where brenda mirrani lives." john replied."Oh her jump in i'll take you to her for free" the man unlocked the back door.John got in.The phone rang."Hello" john said."MiStEr MiRRa" the flamingo again."What do you want" john snapped."YOu ArEnT gOing thE riGht WaY" the flamingo said."Ummmm.....F*#K YOU!!!" john yelled and hung up."whoa what the hell happend" the driver looked worried."Nothing just some person keeps annoying me" john said."Oh were here" the driver unlocked the door."You want me to stay" the driver asked."sure" john said as he walked out and knocked on the door."Hello you were at the club" she motioned for him to come in.He walked in."Hey who da f*ck are you" the same drunk guy."GET OUT ASSHOLE!!!!" brenda yelled."I'll be back ho" he walked out."Now lets sit down"

Meanwhile out side."Sir this alpha team were ready to move in" the SWAT officer talked on his TOC radio."go!!go!!go!!" the men moved very quickly towards the house."Kill the cab driver" the cpt. ordered."Yes sir" the officer aimed his MP5 SD and fired."AAAH SHIT SOMEONES TRYING TO KILL ME!!!" the driver opended the glove compartment and pulled out two baller 9mm pistols."Tango 12'oclock" the SWAT officer said on the radio.The gun fired and wounded the driver.The driver ran to the house opened it and fell down."Hey man there back" he got up."Wait mister mirra let me come" brenda said."Okay take this" john handed her a barretta."Okay lets do this" john cocked his gun and the three fighters would go kill hammond if they could get past the SWAT team.Okay bravo team we see tangos inside" the SWAT guy said."Roger that go!!go!!go!!" the team ran firing wildly at the door.John jumped out and fired his guns "AHHHH" the SWAT officer got hit he fell to the ground."RUN TO THE CAB!" the driver yelled running toward the car.John shot out the window he dived into the drivers seat.The other two made it in safely.The car drove but the SWAT team kept firing back the window in the back blew out.But they go away now on there way to hammonds house.TO BE CONTINUED.




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