Terrorist Attack on Holy Panooly
OOC: just a note Imperial Heaven ops were in the country with Inner Heaven ops already.
IC: The van was filled with over 70 pounds of explosives(fertizzler bomb.) Its destination was the one of the popular malls in the city(OOC: Panooly you can choose which city.)
Huzen Hagen
10-02-2004, 20:58
OOC: just a note Imperial Heaven ops were in the country with Inner Heaven ops already.
IC: The van was filled with over 70 pounds of explosives(fertizzler bomb.) Its destination was the one of the popular malls in the city(OOC: Panooly you can choose which city.)
stop this maddnes now! Panooly stood up for you and this is how you repay them
We applaud this attack on Holy Panooly. This is the price for collaberation with the Capitalist scum. However the HLF deny any involvement.
Seceret IC: As a reward Imperial Heaven I donate you $1 billion for the attack.
OOC: just a note Imperial Heaven ops were in the country with Inner Heaven ops already.
IC: The van was filled with over 70 pounds of explosives(fertizzler bomb.) Its destination was the one of the popular malls in the city(OOC: Panooly you can choose which city.)
stop this maddnes now! Panooly stood up for you and this is how you repay them This is a different Panooly. The old government was overthrown in a coup d'eta today and replased with a anti-terrorist government. We are rebeling against the new government.
We applaud this attack on Holy Panooly. This is the price for collaberation with the Capitalist scum. However the HLF deny any involvement.
Seceret IC: As a reward Imperial Heaven I donate you $1 billion for the attack.
IH thanks HLF for there generous gift
We applaud this attack on Holy Panooly. This is the price for collaberation with the Capitalist scum. However the HLF deny any involvement.
OOC: *Cough* Err... I wasn't aware that he's actually carried out the attack as such, instead he has set up what he's going to do.
I would also like to use this point to say that before this has happened, Holy Panooly's government is trying to find terrorists they know are in their nation... so the chances are that the people who were supplying you would have a better chance of routing you out because they've dealt with you.
Now the nation is on alert (see the thread (http://www.nationstates.net/forum/viewtopic.php?t=122706)) and I would expect that such an attack would be both harder and easier...
So if you are going to do some kind of attack at least try and write more about it, flesh it out and all...
For example, you could write about how some of them avoided capture from the new regime, how thier friends are being caught and then how they lost most of their safe houses... except for the small few that Holy Panooly didn't know about.
At least try and make a story out of it, no one can win Nationstates, the real winners are the ones who make good stories and do it by working with the people they are fighting (OOC).
Inner Heaven
10-02-2004, 21:26
We applaud this attack on Holy Panooly. This is the price for collaberation with the Capitalist scum. However the HLF deny any involvement.
OOC: *Cough* Err... I wasn't aware that he's actually carried out the attack as such, instead he has set up what he's going to do.
I would also like to use this point to say that before this has happened, Holy Panooly's government is trying to find terrorists they know are in their nation... so the chances are that the people who were supplying you would have a better chance of routing you out because they've dealt with you.
Now the nation is on alert (see the thread (http://www.nationstates.net/forum/viewtopic.php?t=122706)) and I would expect that such an attack would be both harder and easier...
So if you are going to do some kind of attack at least try and write more about it, flesh it out and all...
For example, you could write about how some of them avoided capture from the new regime, how thier friends are being caught and then how they lost most of their safe houses... except for the small few that Holy Panooly didn't know about.
At least try and make a story out of it, no one can win Nationstates, the real winners are the ones who make good stories and do it by working with the people they are fighting (OOC).
OOC: Imperial Heaven, I told you :P.
OOC: its a fertilzer bomb the supplies can be bought in a hardware store.
Huzen Hagen
10-02-2004, 21:30
ooc:i could make the fertilizer in rl at school
Inner Heaven
10-02-2004, 21:31
OOC: Guys, you're missing the point of what Iuthia said :P
OOC: its a fertilzer bomb the supplies can be bought in a hardware store.
Sigh...
I'm not disputing that it can't be done. I'm disputing the fact that you haven't really put any effort into it. I've got forces in Holy Panooly right now who are using what Holy Panooly knows to route out terrorists like yourselves.
What I'm asking is that you at least try to take this into account, you can probably have your attack because your in the nation and it's not going to be too hard... but at least make it interesting.
You've got forces from both me and Holy Panooly looking for you, using Holy Panooly's intelligence on your organisation (which should be alot because he supported you) so it's pretty easy for me to claim I catch most of your terrorists... however, I can't claim I got them all, at least not until some of them have had a chance to hurry an attack. The point is that it would be nice to see you take that into account and put some effort into RPing those who escape, who then go on to do a big blast...
In otherword, I don't like people doing terrorism with two lines of descrition alone.
OOC: terrorists are going to be caught and I realize its on high alert. Im not going to type a page long post which can be summed up in a paragraph. If you or Panooly wanted to stop the van on its way you can do that, I gave the relevant information needed for the RP.
OOC: terrorists are going to be caught and I realize its on high alert. Im not going to type a page long post which can be summed up in a paragraph. If you or Panooly wanted to stop the van on its way you can do that, I gave the relevant information needed for the RP.
OOC: Fair enough... I just like giving advise and I understand that not everyone can be bothered to write more, I have a fast type rate so I can do this pretty quick...
However, when you write more it's harder for us to say it didn't happen because it would be more detailed, a long description done with research would make it hard for someone to dismiss an attack... that and the fact people like a good story, they would hate to tell someone it didn't work if they worked hard on it.
Anyways, it's nice to see someone who is willing to have members caught and to take losses in exchange for a chance to do something important. Personally I am going to have to leave Holy Panooly to reply to this how he sees fit... if it was my nation I would go along with it (though I'm not saying you could get into Iuthia :wink: ) but this is Holy Panooly's nation and I don't control what happens in it... good luck.
On another note, you don't mind if I write up a raid against one of your safe houses later? I'd do it now but I want your permission and I have other things to do... so it may be alot later tonight or tomorrow... do you mind? I will expect to get my man if I do a raid, but I will take casualities if your defence is good.
On another note, you don't mind if I write up a raid against one of your safe houses later?
OOC: sure go ahead.
Inner Heaven
10-02-2004, 21:56
OOC: Its no problem. Just as long as you make it a good story :P
Austar Union
11-02-2004, 12:38
Official Message From the National Security Agency to Holy Panooley
We have recieved recent intelligence that an attack may be planned against your nation. We advise you take appropriate action.
OOC: Imperial Heaven, well done for not godmoding. If only everyone stuck to the rules when making a terrorist attack...
Holy panooly
11-02-2004, 13:50
I can't reply instantly due to timezones.
IC: We are deeply shocked about this act of terrorism. We know it are are the probably one of our previous allies and we're going to do everything about those terrorists. Luckily Iuthia has sent a squad of men to clean our country of these wrong doers.
Shinoxia
11-02-2004, 14:02
Shinoxia condemns this attack and will take steps to make sure it doesn't happen again. We are also stepping up our terrorist defenses.
General Shackleton
Orchestrator of Shinoxia
Dr_Twist
11-02-2004, 14:10
This is a discussing and cowardly attack as always from Inner Heaven and Imperial Heaven, These attacks are just aimed at hurting innocent people, and these groups are Still out Lawed in Dr_Twist and Allied nations.
Holy panooly
11-02-2004, 14:18
They will be stopped.
Holy panooly
11-02-2004, 14:19
They will be stopped.
Credonia
11-02-2004, 14:23
They will be stopped.If your against terrorism now, you should join the Anti-terror coalition
Credonia
11-02-2004, 14:23
They will be stopped.If your against terrorism now, you should join the Anti-terror coalition
Holy panooly
11-02-2004, 14:31
I will.
Terrorists begin grabbing rifles food water and ammuntion and begin to run to caves and hope to get out of the country as 3 friends are running one says "Follow me!" As they do they go into a area dark they light the flash light they have..They follow him more and run into a small cave that could fit 4 or so people they get in and they see ammunition and food and water enough for a month they say to him "whered this come from" he says back "I put it here just in case" they set up blankets and camp inside.The terrorists who wernt caught or killed are now scattered everywhere without communications..Can they set up a large cell or will they end up blending in and liveing the rest of there life in secrecy?
http://www.nationstates.net/forum/viewtopic.php?p=2726594#2726594
OOC: w00t!... I've started my work againt terrorism...
Holy panooly
12-02-2004, 20:49
Holy Panooly's Chief of Intelligence Service, Jamed Bohond said in a television statement:
We know that there are still terrorists around in our nation. We are doing everything we can to hunt down and kill the cells left behind. It has also became clear that the Iuthian troops have had incredible successes against the vile enemy. Thanks to our good working secret police we discovered the plan of a major attack on Holy Panooly by terrorists. We know they are from the Three Heavens and we will do everything to protect you.
The Van begins to pull into the malls parking lot and tries to park as close to the mall as possible(if its an internal parking lot they will park by an entranceway.)
does it make it in alright?