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Silent Phantom arriving at Kazakhstania

08-02-2004, 11:06
"Once apon a time, there were a man.
A man with his familly. He and his wife were
thinking of emigrate from a troubled country.
And so they did, they went to their local airport
and traveled to Kazakhstania. They traveled as
tourists, they were gonna visit a popular tourist
attraction. They were there to check out the country,
just in chase. As they bordered the airplane, the man got
nervous. Slowly the plane taxed out to the runway, the man breated heavliy. His wife tried to calm him. But his heart rate increased for every millimeter the plane moved. But when they took off he felt much calmer. Just as if a pair of boulder has been removed from his shoulders.
"Welcome to Kazakistania Airlines, we hope that you'll enjoy your flight and your stay in Kazakhstania." The Pilot said.


Then, the man got very nervous again. He looked around, there were a Junior Basketball team going to Kazakistania. He went to the toilet, he washed himself in the face. Then he walked back to his seat. After an 1 hour he stands up and walks to the cockpit. The Co-Pilot turns around and said. "You cannot be here, please return to your seat." The man pulled a silenced gun and said. "NO!" Then he shot the Co-Pilot. He locked the cockpit door and talked to the pilot. "Now listen to me, you are gonna fly this plane or i'll kill you. You are gonna crash this plane into...." Then the man showed the pilot a photograph. "If you refuse i'll tell other cells to kill your familly. So you better cooperate." The pilot looked scared and said. "ok ok, just don't hurt my familly. I've got two kids and a wife." The man smiled and said. "I know."




OOC: I'll continue later. This is my best attempt of doing a good RP. :lol:
So it better be good.
08-02-2004, 11:22
OOC: You might want to add the country's name to the title so that the thread gets their attention. Nice work so far.
Iuthia
08-02-2004, 11:31
OOC: Seems ok... though he may want to know how he smuggled a gun on board a plane, though if it was from your nation I suppose you would cover that part so it's ok.

Now here's the important part. This plane will have to act normally... if your terrorists just make the plane fly without acting normal it will be shot down...

Though if the plane gets shot down you can RP the families dismay at the fact the plane was shot down... it's still a tragedy.

If a plane acts odd then they will try talking to you, get offical responces... if they are still feeling odd about it, they will launch jets...

If they don't launch jets, your ok to fly that plane anywhere so long as it isn't military (military will have AA)...

If they do luanch jets then you can either try and hit something (and get shot down) or claim you are carrying hostages... in which case they may not shoot you down because they may try and save the people on board...

You may want to look it up... but I saw something on TV about this last monday...
imported_Xen
08-02-2004, 11:33
OOC:

The pilot is a wuss. 'Nuff said on that ;)

- Sovy K.
Iuthia
08-02-2004, 11:37
OOC: Hm... missed that bit... could make things easier but you may want to claim that one of the terrorists can fly, because if this guy to cowardly to refuse then he may be too cowardly to fly into a target... so have a back up, shoot the pilot once he has answered all the air tower commands and your near your target.(you know, the ones that are normal for a plane to get).

Hint: Once you fly above a city it's usually illigal to shoot a plane down... in England you can't shoot a plane down once it's in the city limits...

This is because the plane could land anywhere and still hit people.
Midlonia
08-02-2004, 11:37
o angering Kasaksthania is not a good thing to do... ah well the two kazza nations will soon bulk up the numbers
08-02-2004, 11:44
"When the plane entered Kazakhstanian Airspace, the radio beeped. It was Kazakhstanian Aircontroll. "Indentify yourself, i repeat indentify yourself." The pilot looked at the man, sitting next to him. "Answer them!" he said. The pilot answered the call. "We are Flight 5467 Kazakhstania Airlines from Maldive Islands, we are going to Kazakhstania International." The radio went silent for a second. The man was staring at the pilot. The man was sitting on the co pilots seat and he was ready to crash the plane at any time. Then the radio called back. "ID positive, welcome to Kazakhstania."

But the plane weren't going to Kazakhstania International, it was going to Kazakhstanias Leaders Palace."
Kazakhstania
08-02-2004, 11:45
OOC:
I have always supported terrorists!

I have funded them, as well as well known caracters(sp?) such as Terristan and GLA terrorists.

I have funded your allies, damn it!

I don't see why you should attack me, as I have funded terrorist movements in many countries. Heck, in some way I have probably funded you :)

This is all secret knowledge anyway. So please rethink your attack.

Anyway, there is no way a gun could get on that plane. All the security staff are in the military, and there is now ay one of your people could either bribe or become a member of my military.
08-02-2004, 11:48
OOC: http://www.nationstates.net/forum/viewtopic.php?t=122163

I didn't know that :(
But read the thread above.
Midlonia
08-02-2004, 11:48
OOC:
I have always supported terrorists!

I have funded them, as well as well known caracters(sp?) such as Terristan and GLA terrorists.

I have funded your allies, damn it!

I don't see why you should attack me, as I have funded terrorist movements in many countries. Heck, in some way I have probably funded you :)

This is all secret knowledge anyway. So please rethink your attack.

Anyway, there is no way a gun could get on that plane. All the security staff are in the military, and there is now ay one of your people could either bribe or become a member of my military.

GLA terroists seems to have cleared off..as has cuddlebugs.. this is a the "New World Order" apparently, they are completely dilusional and attck stuff for know reaosn, mind you their RPing has improved...
Kazakhstania
08-02-2004, 11:49
IC:

*SAM site number 2502*

"Erm, sir, there is a passenger jet going of course over here"

"Contact em, ask why."

"Flight 5467 Kazakhstania Airlines please indentitfy why you are off course."

*A few seconds later*

"They say that theya re on course."

"Hell, they are five miles of course!"

"Where are they heading?"

"To the presidents palace!"

"What the! Wait. I have heard of stuff liek this. They are too low, of course and going to the leaders palace."

"Terrorists! Get two escorts up there quick. Meanwhile, ready the SAM."

*On the plane*

Near the back, Dutch Broody sat in his seat. He has seen the terrorists, as he presumed, go in to the cockpit and not come out. He also heard several muffled shots, and a course change.

He looked out the window. The were flying over a military base, not the preassigned flight course. Definately terrorists.

He reached forward into his bag, and drew out his FCP-9 pistol, amde in Freedom Country. Very good pistol, high firing rate. He signaled to his accomplis across from himt o do the same. He pulled out a folded MP-5K Submachien Gun, and readied it.

They sprung into the corridor, ready to fire as soon as a terrorist showed.
08-02-2004, 11:49
OOC: He came from the Maldive Islands, the security is very bad due to civil war.
08-02-2004, 11:50
Anyway, there is no way a gun could get on that plane. All the security staff are in the military, and there is now ay one of your people could either bribe or become a member of my military.

Well, he took off from another nation. It would actully be this other nation's security that would do the pre-flight security scanning. He could easily have one of them in his pocket.
Iuthia
08-02-2004, 11:50
OOC:Anyway, there is no way a gun could get on that plane. All the security staff are in the military, and there is now ay one of your people could either bribe or become a member of my military.
OOC: Well, what if the plane came from another more... lax nation?

Some nations have ways around this, but it affects their economies if they don't allow free travel... Iuthia doesn't allow nations that are not on a "trusted" list to fly into the nation. But in return it makes the tourism industry pretty mediocre...
08-02-2004, 11:51
"The Man, felt that something were very very wrong, he didn't take any chances. He crashed the plane into a downtown area. the Plane carried over 300 people."
Kazakhstania
08-02-2004, 11:58
Godmoding.

Didnt give me a proper chance to respond.

IC:

*On the plane*

Near the back, Dutch Broody sat in his seat. He has seen the terrorists, as he presumed, go in to the cockpit and not come out. He also heard several muffled shots, and a course change.

He looked out the window. The were flying over a military base, not the preassigned flight course. Definately terrorists.

He reached forward into his bag, and drew out his FCP-9 pistol, amde in Freedom Country. Very good pistol, high firing rate. He signaled to his accomplis across from him to do the same. He pulled out a folded MP-5K Submachine Gun, and readied it.

They sprung into the corridor, ready to fire as soon as a terrorist showed.
08-02-2004, 12:10
ooc: sorry
Hmmm it's a single terrorist locked in a cockpit.


IC:

"The Man talked with the pilot. "Get back on course! We draw unneccecary attention." The pilot refused. "no way, i don't care if I die." "If you don't follow instructions we'll kill your family."

The Man shot the pilot in the head. The plane started to tilt, the man tried to straithen it up but he failed. He thought to self. "Hmmm, i don't care if i'll die." He locked up the cabin door. But there stood Dutch Broody, the man pulled his gun. But too late, Dutch shot the man. The man died."
08-02-2004, 12:50
Bumpety Bump
Kazakhstania
08-02-2004, 14:28
The air marshall with the MP-5 continued to check the plane for any more terrorists.

Dutch Broody straightened up the plane. Being an air marshall, he was an ex Air Force pilot. He had never flown a bomber, but knew how to fly. He turned to plane and put it on autopilot, drawing it back on course.
TheLiberator
08-02-2004, 14:30
GREAT! You can finally RP right DTIS Phantoms! I applaud you.
08-02-2004, 15:18
OOC: Thanks, it's a little bit boring to write so much. But it went well.

IC: "When a cell located in Kazakhistania heard about the incident they murdered the pilots family. Hard and fast."


The Emir of the DTIS Phantoms


"Brethern in Kazakhistania, we urge you not to commence any more violent acts of terror against Kazakhistania. We call to you Kazakhistania, please join us. Join our alliance. We need you to supply us."
Crookfur
08-02-2004, 22:20
OOC:

A good overall effort but a few points:

The actual airline involved is not made entirely clear but is indicated as belonging to Kazakhstania.

If an ariline is operating in a country with lax security requires they will generally take thier own steps of a level similar to that which they would use at home (think El al (spelling) the isrealli airline with its own armed gaurds in US airports...)

Oh and that final broadcast by the Emir might get intercepted and make Kazakhstania look rahter bad...