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Coming out of FTL space, was the first colony ship Retribution nearing its destination. This new found planet was called El Salvador, meaning The Savior, because it was found when Swirrhirr was facing a large population crisis. Anyways, here is the story:

"Captain, we are closing in on El Salvador space" announced Antoine, the ship's AI.

"Thank you Antoine, prepare to enter the atmosphere." said Master General Aliente Smirhk.

The ship began its descent into the planet's atmosphere, when a crew member piped up, "Sir! RADAR is picking up unknown signals, it isnt the Hrekk, we destroyed them completely during the war."

The Master General rushed forward to the viewscreen in a panic, only to confirm that this was real. Several large ships were riding in orbit, and one was pursuing the Retribution. "Open a line to Swirrhirr, tell them to warp some warships here right now!" shouted Master General Smirhk.

"Swirrhirr! Swirrhirr! Come in! Hostiles detected!" shouted the Comm Operator.

-back in Swirrhirr-

"Yes, Retribution, what is the situation?" asked Uatt Jiv, magistrate of Swirrhirr.

"We are being shot at by unknown enemy ships, wait," said the comm operator, "Turn to port! Turn to port Mas-----" was the last transmission from the Retribution.




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Meanwhile the natives of 'el salvador', as the invaders called it, were preparing another attack on the invader convoy......

"Cpt. Patrick Bettle come in" Exclaimed General Jon Miklow " Cpt. Bettle was the mission a success, I repeat was the mission a success."

" Yes, full kill." Came the reply of the battle hardened, Thunderhawk pilot, Flt. Cpt. Patrick Bettle, as he turned the Craft, ready to come in and release yet another deadly salvo of Viper thermal laser rockets. " This new craft handles extremely well, with more of these we should easily defeat the invaders in no time. Send my compliments to the Scientists that inveneted this baby!"

" Wait!" Shouted Cpt. Bettle " Wait I think..........Oh god................. :?:

Today, in M'iish City, capitol of Swirrhirr, Magistrate Uatt Jiv gave an update on the crisis at hand. It started like this:

"Citizens of Swirrhirr, we have been unlawfully attacked by an unknown species and origin. So, in response to this, pending further research into who they are, a decision is to be made."

-weeks later, after the decision, The Great Hall in M'iish City-

"I bring you all good and bad news, the unknowns have a name, they are the Maziarr. Well, the good new is, they only have that one planet. Well, there is no bad news, my mistake. But, as a finish to my update, to war!" shouted Uatt Jiv.

-on El Salvador-

"So, they wish to take El Salvador for their own, huh? Well, lets see them try! We are at war with Swirrhirr!" shouted Cpt. Bettle, who was now the President of El Salvador.

-meanwhile, back in Swirrhirr-

A worldwide broadcast says that 'azik rijok', or Full War has begun. Swirrhirr is to began to assembling the ten battle groups of its fleet immediately. All troops, spacecraft, and such must be refitted and ready to invade. War has begun, but the first battle is approaching immediately.

Meanwhile, in el salvador, the maziarr were moving there battle fleet in from their orbital Space dock, circling the world. it was an awe inspiring sight, thousands of ships all moving in to defend and even die for their people.

"This is Cpt. Bettle speaking." Said Cpt. Bettle over his new, Bigger faster, deadlier ship's intercom. " Crew of the HawkMoth, this is your captain speaking. We are leaving the atmosphere of our beloved homeplanet, whether we return, is for fate to decide, but gentleman, I promise you fate is on our Side. We shall go out into open space and engage the fleet of the invader scum. we have 2 squadrons of Thunderhawk's coming along, it's not as if we need the extra firepower, but they will provide cover for us as we make our bombing run on their mothership. That is all."


"Captain!!" Shouted the lookout on the frontmost ship of the invader fleet "Look!! About 25 ships closing in on us. It looks like 24 close assault craft and a frigate. Tell the other ships to execute operation violet."

And so the Swirrhirr fleet moved into a Defensive formation, but the maziarr were ready for this, they peeled off to regroup into smaller groups and began their separate strikes.

And so the first engagement in the war for Maziarr had begun...............