NationStates Jolt Archive


Rate my roleplay

Thunderstraat
21-11-2003, 02:34
Please....
Thunderstraat
21-11-2003, 02:37
The thing is, you lurkers that are (presumably) waiting to roleplay better can come here and post. I'm looking for comments about my roleplaying; I don't care about nation size or stance with Thunderstraat.
The Eastern Bloc
21-11-2003, 02:43
What most RPers are weak in is their character interaction. Rather than just posting... "the ship did this." or "the ships went over here" you talk about the captain, and the crew; how they feel and think. Make it seem more real and whatnot. That and grammar, definitely need to have good grammar. If you started improving those two aspects of your RPing, it will improve your overall RPing a hundred fold.