a bomb blows up
a bomb has blown up in my city. a plane came and hit the airport and had a bomb on it and it killed 209 people in the 5 mile radious. the radiation killed 178 the explostion killed 31 people in the airport.
And little to no punctuation! :D
a bomb has blown up in my city. a plane came and hit the airport and had a bomb on it and it killed 209 people in the 5 mile radious. the radiation killed 178 the explostion killed 31 people in the airport.
Please clarify what you mean by 'radiation': Was this a dirty bomb of some sort?
The nation of Eredron pledges its full support in any investigation.
a small relief team of medics are on their way to help your wounded. if i could find some more medics to send i'll inform you. as far as millitary goes, when you id who is responsible we can lend you some more solders to help.
The Damned People
23-10-2003, 03:30
Come on. Put some effort into it please.
-Nik
Euroslavia
23-10-2003, 04:17
Come on. Put some effort into it please.
-Nik
i second that. it didn't even seem like he tried...
ooc: i think this story has some potental, i really want to see where this goes. yeah it's short, but it's good
Setian-Sebeceans
23-10-2003, 04:28
Get me stright if I'm wrong, but isn't the perpouse of a bomb, to blow up and kill?
The Damned People
23-10-2003, 23:32
ooc: i think this story has some potental, i really want to see where this goes. yeah it's short, but it's good
No, not even. You want to see good stories, go over to NationStates. This story took about 2 1/2 seconds to write, and less than that to come up with. What is so great about a bomb blowing up?
-Nik
Shildonia
23-10-2003, 23:45
What is so great about a bomb blowing up?
Who did it? Why? Will they strike again? Is it the precursor to invasion? Will the people responsible hit other nations? etc. Use your imagination instead of expecting everything to be spoonfed to you. Besides, it's his first try.
The Peoples Republic is willing to despatch four Demeter class fighters to Ammmmericaaa to assist in intercepting any further suspicous aircraft.
The Trojan Empire
23-10-2003, 23:53
a bomb has blown up in my city. a plane came and hit the airport and had a bomb on it and it killed 209 people in the 5 mile radious. the radiation killed 178 the explostion killed 31 people in the airport.Your problems matter not to us.
Ambassador Peleus
-The Trojan Empire-
killed 209 people in the 5 mile radious. the radiation killed 178 the explostion killed 31 people .
OOC:Sounds like he's just throwing out random numbers too. Also, it only kiled 178 people in a 5 mile radius. Don't you think an area around an airport would have a little more population than that. even if it only killed 10% of the people.
Whatever- it doesn't really matter.
IC: The nation of Ssakura will deploy 5 howitzer/infanry teams to watch for anymore terrorism attacks. The troops will be removed in 2 rt days.
Why the hell would the death of 209 people require international aid
*The great Empoer Ssakura scratches and imaginary beard*
"while you may have a point there, giving aid now sort of grants you a future favor in return, that's not the only reason, but it's a good one"
Why the hell would the death of 209 people require international aid
ooc: there have been internation aid given to nations suffering less casulties in real life.