NationStates Jolt Archive


New: Uprising RP idea. Would like feedback.

09-10-2003, 21:39
At 07:00 this morning, armed Terrorists of the well known Ali'abasi stormed the Schottlandian Embassy in The Holy Empire Of Connal.

Hostages were taken including Ambassador Banks and his family.
Schottlande issues warning that situations could escalate and international war could break out unless the hostages are released. Alive.

If the terrorists demands are not met, well, it's goodnight schottlande.

OOC: Hey, its my first attempt at an RP story.
Do you think it has potential?
Feedback plz.
Five Civilized Nations
09-10-2003, 21:43
...okay...

um...yeah...no comment...
09-10-2003, 21:45
So, what do you think?
Five Civilized Nations
09-10-2003, 21:46
The story is okay...

But you need a formal resistance group in your nation that is trying to create a civil war to destroy your nation...
09-10-2003, 21:51
Check it out now. I have made some slight changes to the storyline.
Five Civilized Nations
09-10-2003, 21:53
It has potential...

Who's the Empire of Connal?

Why is Ambassador Banks so important that if he isn't returned, the Schottland would be destroyed?