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X is still at large . Civle war still rains. His supporters who oppoze the freeing of slave in Aust have attacked. In Tanka the garrison has just fallen and muterlated bodys of children and defenders have been sent to the Goverment. They have taken 1000's of woman as slaves. They rip out there vocal cords and barand them. We need help.

I take it that you didn't like my addition?

X is still at large . Civle war still rains. His supporters who oppoze the freeing of slave in Aust have attacked. In Tanka the garrison has just fallen and muterlated bodys of children and defenders have been sent to the Goverment. They have taken 1000's of woman as slaves. They rip out there vocal cords and barand them. We need help.

is mister x a balding, ageing blond man who shouts all the time?

I take it that you didn't like my addition?
Yes I did and I accept however a nation wished to attack me so i did this to through him off my tail. Crookfur knows what he's like

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Errr....Okay...In english please

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what on earth?

For those who missed my post on the last thread about this:
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IC: following the on going electronic surveilance carried out by Crookfur agencies on behalf of the Aust government we belive that our deep analysis of transmission data has lead us to the Indentity of the mysterious X.

His name is Achiles (anyone read the ender's shadow saga? think Bean/peter wigan's nemesis but older and well more messed up with some interesting issues about members of the fairer sex).

While originally a street child from some backwards country he was picked up by a Crookfur humanitarian mission and his intellegnce and potential regonised. Following a state funded education in an institute for gifted children Achilles imediatly applied for entry into Parkhurst military academy (think sandhurst) where he excelled constaly comming top or near top of his class. However at this point things started going wrong, Achiles was implicated in the death of the his one contender for final top of class a young woman named Petra Anderson. Following this achiles carrer was stalled and he stood no chance of a main staff position so he worked his way into shadowy world of Crookfur military intellegence until dishonorably discharged following gross misconduct against a female superior.

Following his discharge Achiles disappeared but Crookfur intellegence have identified numerous mercanry and terrorist operations that appear to have contact with him (a number have implicated him as a commanding officer responsible for numerous war crimes).

We belive that achiles was originally hired as an advisor by Austian rebels but has managed to eliminate the rebel cmmoan d structure and take control himself.

In light of this Crookfur asks permission to deploy a special service section and elements of MI6 operational personell inside Aust borders with the sole aim of capturing this individual.
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Hope that helps.


Following the receipt of Aproval form Aust authorities the Crookfur elements begin arriving.

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OOC:GAH!!!!!!!!!!!!! damn you invalid session!!, anyways I posted a letter to the president of aust that in one NS week the force wave of my M.E.S.A (Mobile.Exo-Skeletonal.Assault.) unit(s) would be landing on his shores to help with the war effort their sorta like the big robot thingies from rebot (those things are so cool!) the force wave would consist of 8 M.E.S.A unit(s) and several engineers to repair them and other vechiles(sp?) and that when they land not to have any military units on the beach (just incase rebels get the letter their'll know and well do what they do best >=) they are best at defensive anti infantry and minor anti-armor units and ok at offensive. jsut leave a map fo them to get to HQ adn they will be fine.

and link to them is as follows http://www.nationstates.net/forum/viewtopic.php?t=75323&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=20

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PS. more will come as they can build them

5 ATA Elites will get there ASAP.

Those 5 troops die, I can do nothing....


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Im sending the 8th Peacekeeping Div.It has 30,000 men and has taken part in countries ranging from Turkey to Gilbratar.

From the other Thread:
1st Battle group was standing by for possible Evacuation of the embassy.

(Scene) Aust Capital

Ambassador Cal Ripkin tries to speak wuth Aust officials to get a better idea on wether , Rylleh should help or just pull our embassy.

(Rylleh Embassy) Rylleh Security people lock down the embassy.

****Secret IC******

We will watch to see if important people in Aust need asylum.

Secret OOC (Preparing for what may happen later)

Secret IC:
Ambassador Cal Ripkin is thinkng of using the Embassy to act as "An Underground Railroad" to help slaves escape.

IC
Admiral Billy Barty send a EA-24G to the top of the embassy with officers to Asses the Situation

OOC:GAH!!!!!!!!!!!!! damn you invalid session!!, anyways I posted a letter to the president of aust that in one NS week the force wave of my M.E.S.A (Mobile.Exo-Skeletonal.Assault.) unit(s) would be landing on his shores to help with the war effort their sorta like the big robot thingies from rebot (those things are so cool!) the force wave would consist of 8 M.E.S.A unit(s) and several engineers to repair them and other vechiles(sp?) and that when they land not to have any military units on the beach (just incase rebels get the letter their'll know and well do what they do best >=) they are best at defensive anti infantry and minor anti-armor units and ok at offensive. jsut leave a map fo them to get to HQ adn they will be fine.

and link to them is as follows http://www.nationstates.net/forum/viewtopic.php?t=75323&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=20

President (*cough*dictator*cough*) James Blue
Dictator of Zenmensonsou
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PS. more will come as they can build them

Please, if you are going to jump in at least try and keep it modern tech.

No offence or anything

IC:


Mike Bannister was not having a good time. he hated flying esspecially when it involved being dragged from his cosy analyst's post and flung on a plane to some war ravaged country. As he relaxed into the smartly upholstered seat of the exectuctive transport jet carrying the MI6 detachment Mike tried to reason that it could have been worse, he could have been chucked into a transport plane along with the grunts from the special service section (and after having had that! experience once before he was grateful not to have to prepeat it). While this comforted him some what, the reason for his presence did far more to displease him: They had finally caught up with Achilles... Achilles Donald: freind, mentor, betrayer and obsession all roled into one. mike had been obsessed with tracking him down ever since that fateful day when Achilles had shown his true colours once and for all.

As the hours passed Mike though back to his days striaght from training and thrown directly into one of the biggest counter espionage operations as junior profiler and operational analyst officer to a top notch team headed up by Sandra Andrews, one of the shining lights within the Crookfur intellegence community. While Sandra was good there was a alrge debate on who was better, herself or her No2, a certain Achilles Donald. Most regonised that Achilles was one of the finest operational intellegence officers in the service and deserving of his own team but soemthing dark and mysterious keep him trapped in his support role (none of the team knew it at the time but Achilles had been implicated but never charged with the death of a fellow cadet at the military academy and his evaluation profiles did display some dangerous traits).

As he joined the team mike was almost instantly taken under Achilles' wing, wether this was because Achilles sought an easy mark or saw soemthing special in him was something that cosntantly nagged at Mike. Under Achilles giudance Mike proved a enourmous asset to the team gain promotion and respect for his work as a data and personality anaylist (author's note: yes he is likely going to end being a jack ryan type).

Things were progressing smoothly in the counter espionage and the team were ready to give the approval for an "operation" when things suddenly went wrong, very wrong. The entire target organisation avnished without a trace just as the operational command was given almost as if they knew it was comming. On his way to a debreif meeting, mike ntoiced that achilles' office was compeltely empty, figuring that promotion had finally come for his mentor, mike wnet to Sandra's office to equire, only to find the door locked and her lights out. This struck Mike as odd but on calling security he discovered that Achilles and Sandra had left together so he let the worry slip from his mind until the mroning when the news reached him. Sandra had been found dead in her home... she had been raped and brutally tortured during what examiners described as one of the most coldly calculated attacks he had ever seen.

Shocked by this Mike tried to contact Achilles only to find no trace of him he seemed to have disappeared in the same way the enemy operation had, his files had been wiped clean from the department computers and all his personal effects were gone. The the forensics lab returned thier DNA results... they positivly IDed Achilles as the attacker and to compound this an oversight team had evidence indicating that the enemy had been warned... by Achilles.

Since that Day Mike had devoted all his energies to tracking down Achilles, always one step behind in the trail of death and mayhem that Achilles and his supporters had left behind, but now they had him, Crookfur information gahtering assests had been in place in time to get a fix on him, and Now Mike was here to advise on the final operation.

The contact between the landing gear and runway on landing woke Mike from his day dream. As the jet taxied into the Crookfur deployment compound Mike could make outt he shapes of command and barracks biuldings, troops disembarking from hulking transport planes, the sleek and menacing forms of Ultra hind gunships and Vandal combat tranport helos awaitng the command to bring hell to the enemy and the back ground the massive forms of 2 CFUC-12B gunships and the large yet awesoemly magestic shadows that were the two Electronic warfare Super Vulcans that would provide tactical data and defence supression for any operation.


yes long winded but a bit more detail for thos interesting. basically it boils down to: Achilles= really bad, Mike Banister= comming to kick his ass.

actually if you would read the older thead crookfur you would see I've been a a part of it from quite some time.


you have my deepest sympathies leader of Aust, I'm afraid I cannot send troops as they are in the midst of a military upgrade (from sticks adn stones to ...something) I will however have any cilivian ships willing to come to Aust to pick up any refugees and will be safely and well treated here in Zenmensonsou for the time being if you wish

(OOC: oh and it is techniquely modern tech we have the abilitity to make exoskeletonal suits in real life but they are not cost effective. my M.E.S.A unit(s) don't use neral interlinks I guess I should of posted it they use joystick style controls, if you want me to explain it more thoroughly send me a telegram)

(OOC: gh I'm horrible with BBCode here's a link to it http://www.nationstates.net/forum/viewtopic.php?t=75231&highlight=

~~double post~~

I will provide full protection and help to Aust and her allies.

bump?

The rables have broken into the main compound of tanka. The soldgers and refugies flee as they charge. An unlucky woman is cought by a reble and pinned to the floor as she is stripped and he tears the child from her berest spearing it on his bayonet and holding it above her head so her own childs blood dripps on her head as he begins his vile work. Ahead of her Conorl Clarkson orders the gate to be closed leaving 30 woman and children plus 10 men to face toutcher and enslavement. As the mens dying screams wrench the air he survays the remaining group of survivors. "Is this all that survived." He stares at the ragged bunch. "Yes Sir,"
"How many."
"20 soldgers and 35 woman and children.
"Not enough, Thats one man every 5 meters if we arm the woman and children, By night we will be overrun. Arms status."
"2 machine guns, 5 pistols and 14 AK47, with ammo, Sir"
"Then Tanka is overrun. Request imiduet evac."
"Yes, Sir, But Sir the'll never make it."
"They'll have to, It's our only hope"
"Yes, Sir." The attendent began to run away but the grey haired cornal held him back. "How many enermy."
"Couple of thousand, all armed,"
"Get the the woman and children into the main building we can hold 'em off for langer there."
"Yes Sir." The attendent ran off and silant dissaplined soldures began to say there prayers and hearded in the cavillians.
Once incide the attendent ran up to the cornal. "Evac on it's way sir, no specified force but expected to consistr of coalition forces. Times 12 midnight." Suddenly a wild cry came up from a soldger "Attack!"

The rebles charged forwards there guns raised and firing. 2 soldures fell. "Fire!" Said the cornal. The disssapplined troops relised round after round into the enermy. Result we lost 5 men out of 20 they lost over 100 out of 100,000

OCC:What haappens next... Can you help rescue those brave men?

The pilots rushed to there craft ready for the rescue. They new they may lose there lives but that was the risk they were taking to rescuse the men who had held out outnumbered 100 to 1 for 8 days

In respeonse to the call for aid the Crookfur force mobilizes, the 2 Skyflame gunships and 4 of the Hinds.

On arriving at the Scene the Skyflames instantly set up a fire pattern to sweep the rebels back from the fortifications, a fire storm of 25, 30, 40 and 105mm fire rains down from the sky.


The Hinds swing round to the rear areas of the rebel advance and begin loobing rockets into the hordes of rebels, as the rockets get close to thier targets they Appear to disintegrate into a wall of Fletteces that Whip thier way through the rebel lines.


high above the Combat a Super vulcan orbits listening for rebel command communications and looking for soemthing to Jam.



OOC: Unless the rebels have some moderatly high tech stuff then my aircraft should be safe ad i'll be able to bring in some rescue choppers to pull your people out.
What sort of forces are the rebels deploying? from your description i assume we are dealing with light infantry (hence the fletteces/beehive rounds) if they have any armor or other supporting units then now would be the time to tell us, before the thrust of the Crookfur forces go after X.

(OOC: sorry about the late late late posting but RL has been calling me anyways if I'm still welcome I'll post and if not jsut ignore it adn tell me)

4 large enclosed landing craft slowly sliding onto the beach as 3 F-16 flew low over head making sure the beachhead was clear, the landing crafts were only capable of hold two M.E.S.A. units with their pilots and one extra person, 3 having an engineer in them aswell.

The roof and surrounding walls slowly lowered acting as ramps as the 8 slow lumbrting gaints stepped onto the beach looking around carefully, expecting the sounds of gun fire and gernades to go off anymoment.

Jack the team leader turned on his comm to the lead destroyer (of 3 total ships) stationed a few miles out in deeper water.

"Captain this is Jack things look clear requesting permission to head inland"

"have you found a sort of map or direction to Aust HQ?"

after looking around quickly he replied ".....negative"

"alright you have permission to head inland, we're going to stay here for 2 days should you need evac or air support, good luck"

"comfirmed moving out"

the 8 M.E.S.A units and 3 engineers slowly made there way into the forest. Jack glanced at the man in M.E.S.A 2 speaking into his comm "hey brian you getting anything on the "radio"

"notta commander I'll keep an ear out for anything.... interesting"

"good lets no get lost on the first day of our vacation k?" Bill "pretty eyes" said with a smirk.

They have some heavy armour but they mainly attck in ambushes. My HQ is in the capital city which is underground. I will raise an airport up to take your plnes and then lowere it.

The Curnalshot another reble scum trough his head and smashed another with his sword held the door alone the last of his men laying dead. Behind him the woman and children hid and cryed thinking the end was near. He slashed another and kicked one in the croch. "Come on ye scurvy braggarts I will have ye crowding at the gates of the dark forest tonight." Another fell to his blade adding to the bodys that lay at his feet outside they were piled 3 bodies deep.He relaxed and at that moment a reble who had been playing dead stabbed him deep in the chest punchering a lung. The curnal swung his sword dicapertating the trator then he collapsed on his sword. The rebles rushed forward seeing the last enermy dead but then there came a scrrech. Lazers and bullits tore into them. The rebles fled as 5 liboreter 56's landed squads of trained troops disenbarked fireing and setting up a screen. A officer ran up. "Sir! Captin humprys at your service." The curnal looked up with misty eyes. His life ebbing away. "Thank God your her..." He died content, the woman and children that he had sacrafice everything were safe. Humprys reboarded the attack craft crying, carrying the limp body of the cornal in his hands.

Down the main street of Austopia a great millatery prossecian went in the middle was the cornals body. He was buryed with full milatary houners.

i hate you all!

Why do you hate us all?

To be honest the Crookfur forces don't need much, the Skyflames are fully rough feild capable an the rest are helicopters, just give us a forrest clearing or something to operate from.

(OOC: am I being ignored?)

no your not being ignore Zenmonsonsou. I told you the position of the Aust HQ. Do you wish to have a full millatary base and airfield if so I can rase one up for you.
Crookfur there are no forest clearings on Aust however you may have a Army/Airbase if you wish. I can raise and lower it. There has been another attack today led by X himself we didm't get much but mutalted bodys at the scean suggest they were overwelmed by a much larger force.