NationStates Jolt Archive


Ten Spies [RP]

20-09-2003, 06:25
Ten Lands of Ages secret opperatives walk into the international airport armed with only one suitcase full of cloths each. The ten men who are in their early twenty's have never been outside their training base. Their mission was to find out more about the Goverment of Omz222. They walk camly throught the airport and walk to a taxi and drive to the meeting spot.

There contact who gives them each instructions, money and a Socom (http://www.air-soft.com/tm_us_socom_mk23_prototype_fixed.htm) pistol. They get into the white pizza van as they head for their operating base which is fully equpied with the best avalible technology. The leader Jack Kamanki breifed the team on their mission and they headed out for a month to gather information.
Omz222
20-09-2003, 06:29
A police offer stood by, and peered at the men.

Pistols!!??, he thought. "Comrade, I think we have found a terrorism target."

Suddenly, he walked over, along with the other police officier and in an accented English, he asked,
"Where did you get these heavy weapons!?"

They held their pistols, at the mens. The rest of teh police officier came.

the airport fell silent.

One may note, that many public places in Omzian Nation have heavy security patrols --- Omzian Democratic Republic is abotu secrecy, anyways.
20-09-2003, 06:30
OOC: They Met 15 Blocks Away! :?
Omz222
20-09-2003, 06:31
OOC: They Met 15 Blocks Away! :?
OOC: Uh... the airports are not near the cities, they are in the suburbs :P
20-09-2003, 06:33
Oo: Ok Lets Me Redo My Post :?
Omz222
20-09-2003, 06:34
Oo: Ok Lets Me Redo My Post :?
OOC: No need, just act as if tehy are in front of the van.
20-09-2003, 06:35
Changed Reply
Omz222
20-09-2003, 06:37
OOC: Well, looks better. But you gotta work on the response :wink:

One tip: Omzian nation allows guns.
20-09-2003, 06:43
One Month Later

All of the spys have gotten good jobs and were getting closer to the day when they will begin Mission Infiltraite . They all met togther in a small town by the capital city in a house owned by a trusted military soldier who was working for the Lands of Ages military.

Johnny have you gotton use a access date for Omzian Army Base #540

No sorry not yet secrurity is very high due to the recent attack on our nation so it will be very hard.

Well hurry we need to do this now k We'll meet again in Jokinstan Park by the capitol meet in the storage room k bye
20-09-2003, 06:43
OOC: Well, looks better. But you gotta work on the response :wink:

One tip: Omzian nation allows guns.

Thanks
Omz222
20-09-2003, 06:45
[OOC: One of my military (I persume you meant army) bases? Omzian Army Base #540. Air Force Base: Omzian Air Force Base #190, Field Hankz.]
20-09-2003, 06:46
Lets contiue tommorow parents are mad! :wink:
Omz222
20-09-2003, 06:47
Lets contiue tommorow parents are mad! :wink:
[OOC: Sure.]
20-09-2003, 06:53
{OOC I'm Back Sorry! :oops:}
20-09-2003, 17:06
Bump
Omz222
20-09-2003, 17:09
OOC: What are you going to do next?
20-09-2003, 17:13
ooc: Can I rp one of the spys?
20-09-2003, 18:39
Sure Two Guys there are 5 groups!

Johnny got a day when they gonna have like a drill or something!

And what?

Where gonna sneak in then k!

Sure Boss I'll call the others to get them ready.

And I got us 10 spec ops kits and our guns : )

Finally these guns suck!

Ok Later

They spys are part of a billion dollars secret group of twenty guys and ladies one of which is our president. The are the highst trained and have the best equipment avalible hey are called the ' Jewels '.
22-09-2003, 04:58
bump
Omz222
22-09-2003, 05:01
[OOC: You need to RP an interaction with my people, otherwise, I can't respond.]
22-09-2003, 05:23
ooc; ok soon

Mongo Night

' Lets go boys '

They jump into the truck painted black for th night sneak in

They park by the base and wait for the sun to set

' Lets go heres a copy of the base map and we'll meet here ok '

' If you get in danger don't say a frikin thing ok '

' Yes boss lets go '

They spilt into five five teams one team goes into the front entrance and knock out the guard and disarm the security system for the first floor
Omz222
22-09-2003, 05:28
OOC: Uh... We have multiple guard here...

IC:

"STOP! It saids no ent... WHAT ARE YOU DO!?", the second guard said as the first guard is knocked out. Then, he is knocked out, but after he pulled the switch.

Suddenly, alarm bell rang, and 10 Omzian soldiers came out, running, fully armed with heavy machine guns. Then, they surrounds the 2 unknown suspects. Rest were assigned to keep guard.

The group of 2 were trapped at bay.

One may note the big "NO TRESSPASSING" sign, and the searchlight.

"What is your puprose? Be captured or be shot to death!", a soldier said in a brutal voice, in Omzian.

Then, in a heavy English accent, and in a broken English another yell, "Why come here? Come and don't die!"
22-09-2003, 05:33
The two captured soldiers pushed a button on their belts

The getaway car speeds into the groups of soldiers as the captured soldiers run into the bushes

The rest of the group successfuly get into the building diarming the alarms for teh next to levels and run down the stairs armed with their rifles.
Omz222
22-09-2003, 05:39
OOC: Uh... "Rest were assigned to keep guard", remember.

IC:

"MY G...", as the car rammed in. 3 soldiers were injured, with one in very serious condition.

"There's another 8!", the soldiers quickly shot machine gun rounds. All head or chest shots, at the 8 other suspecious people.

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The 2 captured soldiers, however, were autmoatically shot by "secondary position" guards --- both in the chest.

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Omzian State Armed Police Headquarters, 1:01AM

"Sir... We are meeting here?"

"Yes, emergency meeting. Got the phone, some people broke into the military base?"

"Yes, what's the situation?"

"An invesigation is underway. Right now army soldiers and armed police personels are also rushing towards the military base."

"We shall see."
22-09-2003, 05:44
The other eight spread into the rooms gather all info taking pics and evrything and killed 4 soldiers who were on guard

' Boss we lost Sean and Paul '

' Shit damn we'll kill these bastards '

They finished after twnety minutes of looking through all teh files

The other six soldiers ran out of the backside of the building quietly and get into the second getaway car

Two soldeir went deepers into the building transferring the pictures thru internet to the ' Jewels Headquarters ' None of the secret op group jewels were killed but two infantry died the otehr two were robots controled by the headquarters.



OOC: Are you gonna send me the info my soldeirs might have found?
Omz222
22-09-2003, 05:49
OC: For god's sake, my soldiers shot machien gun roudns at all, not just a few.

If you want to RP a spy, you need to follow what RL nations do: make them get into the "inner circle" of the nation's government.

If you want to do infilation, you might want to RP it in a special way, with my soldiers not being on alert, or somehow bypass the security.

This way is a failure: let's face it.
22-09-2003, 05:50
ok fine forget this whoel thing

I am never gonna rp again I stink ok

Oh Well tahnks omz222 bye
Omz222
22-09-2003, 05:54
ok fine forget this whoel thing

I am never gonna rp again I stink ok

Oh Well tahnks omz222 bye

*Sigh* *Shakes head*

The problem is not that you can't RP. You can, if you do it the right way.

Your RP skill seems good, but use it effectively.

What is the use if you area really good RPer and you don't know the tactics in a war, anyways?

My answer was not to say "LoA is a piss-poor RPer!!11111 LoA sucks, get a life LoA!!1111". My answer for you is a tip: do the RP more effectively. It is not that you are a bad RPer, nor I don't want spies in my country, it is that I want to have it straightforward, and more fun. My tip is that to suggest you soem ways to make this better.

I'm sorry if you understood. If you want to RP --- you could start off my the "normal" RPs --- this way you can build the "base" of your RP skill.

Good luck.
22-09-2003, 05:55
Thanks but no omz22

Its just too easy for me to godmod like now k so thanks
Omz222
22-09-2003, 05:58
Thanks but no omz22

Its just too easy for me to godmod like now k so thanks
OOC: No prob.

Don't think negatively. This is not godmoding --- instead, this is bad usage of our RP skill.

Try to think more logiccally --- how could I sneak in the base without detection? What are the loopholes? What are other ways to get the infomation instead of rushing in?

If you want fun RP ideas --- spend some time, plan it out, tell other people and execute that. Use unique strategies to RP --- not just "Hello John", "Hi Smith", "How are you John?" etc. --- use more creative ways.
22-09-2003, 05:59
yeah but i didn't have any info on your base
Omz222
22-09-2003, 06:01
yeah but i didn't have any info on your base

My actual point was: what could you do to get the infomation but you will not be in the base and be caught?
22-09-2003, 06:02
do you have any jobs open ibn teh base?
Omz222
22-09-2003, 06:04
do you have any jobs open ibn teh base?
Dish washers, cleaning staff.

You could also haev a long-term RP --- to have your spies grow from normal LoA citizens --- to Omzian citizens --- enter the Army/Air Force/Navy, and find about the "secret" stuff.

But the truth is, Spy RPs are, of course, complicated.
22-09-2003, 06:09
What about other stuff?

After five years the spys have gotten good jobs and had joined the Omzian military and the four infantry were gonna try to get higher ranks. The six ' Jewels ' left and went back to Lands of Ages while the four infantry climbed the ranks getting closer to their goal.
Omz222
22-09-2003, 15:07
What about other stuff?

After five years the spys have gotten good jobs and had joined the Omzian military and the four infantry were gonna try to get higher ranks. The six ' Jewels ' left and went back to Lands of Ages while the four infantry climbed the ranks getting closer to their goal.
OOC: You need to RP how they joined the military. My military has requirements.
And normally soldiers have to be an Omzian citizen for a long time, not mentioning background checks.

So you need to RP a lot of other stuff.