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Hi everyone!

I've got to submit an essay as part of my degree by the end of next week; I've written it and had it reviewed by friends here at Uni, but I was wondering if anyone here would be bothered enough to cast their eye over it and give me some feedback?

I don't know if I'm allowed to put up a link to the essay - it's hosted on my space on the Uni's webserver, but I don't want to break a forum rule and get hit with the ban-stick!

Not asking for any help with the actual writing of the essay, more just to see if it makes sense and follows through.

The subject matter is the Roman Republic and the title is:
'Is the Catiline Affair overrated?'

Let me know if I can post a link, and I will do!

You could have just brought it up as a discussion topic and en passant asked people to read your essay.
However, now I think it risks falling under the "no homework" rule.

Glancing over what wiki has to say on it, it sounds interesting though.

Yeh - it's actually a really interesting subject :)

I'm more looking for help with checking the sentence structures, grammatical and punctuation errors, and so forth rather than the actual content.

Guess I'll just wait for an Admin to let me know either way :)

In that case you should ask in the moderation forum (http://forums.jolt.co.uk/forumdisplay.php?f=1231), rather than wait for them to find this thread.