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Writing help Mk. II

Johnny B Goode
06-04-2007, 18:03
I promise this story is much better than my last one. It's only partly finished, though.

http://oddfacts.awardspace.com/tranzor_z_parody.htm
Fassigen
06-04-2007, 18:08
"On his island headquarters, the archvillian Dr. Devil is plotting to conquer the world. He has summoned his assistant, the nefarious Mr. She-Man. He is, as you may have guessed, a she-man. Not just, half-man/half-woman, but the worst of both!"

I could, fortunately, bear to read no further.
Johnny B Goode
06-04-2007, 18:14
"On his island headquarters, the archvillian Dr. Devil is plotting to conquer the world. He has summoned his assistant, the nefarious Mr. She-Man. He is, as you may have guessed, a she-man. Not just, half-man/half-woman, but the worst of both!"

I could, fortunately, bear to read no further.

It's a parody, genius.
Kryozerkia
06-04-2007, 18:30
It's a good start, those I would omit the "scream" at the end and replace it with the appropriate adjectives.
Johnny B Goode
06-04-2007, 19:35
(Bumps topic)
Johnny B Goode
06-04-2007, 21:03
(Re-bumps)