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I was thinking of a weird comic about perverts, those who peep, and those who watch porn. The main characters are actually like real people, though, and have their own problems, and they have rivals. I have two storylines. What does NSG think?

I was thinking of a weird comic about perverts, those who peep, and those who watch porn. The main characters are actually like real people, though, and have their own problems, and they have rivals. I have two storylines. What does NSG think?

Can you draw?

It could work. I can't really pass judgement until I hear more about the story arcs or maybe some sample writing.

sounds promising! if you choose to develop something like this, i would like to have a peek myself... well aimed "smut" humor can be very amusing!

Can you draw?

Unfortunately not.

Unfortunately not.

Well, won't making a comic be rather difficult? Particularly one that is heavily plot-based like yours sounds. Have you thought of a way around this?

Unfortunately not.

Neither can I, but that never stopped me. :)

I made a comic about Greek mythology that was set in the 21st century. It's very badly drawn.

Now that i think of it, put some Greek mythology in there, especially something about Zeus ;)

It could work. I can't really pass judgement until I hear more about the story arcs or maybe some sample writing.

Well, it's set in a high school. There are two main factions.

The peepers: Their mission, a daring enterprise, to boldly go where no man has gone before: the girl's locker room. These are the three main characters

The perverts: They watch a ton of porn and read dirty magazines. They find peeping more trouble then it's worth, and summon each other by text-messaging "Fap fap fap fap wank wank wank wank wank wank wank wank JACKOFF!". They are the peepers' main rivals. The leader has a Spock haircut, and frequently says "illogical"

I figured two plotlines. One, where they swap duties, and two, where they collaborate against the "femi-nazi" forces of a new transfer student. Note: I'm not trying to offend anyone with the second.

There are a ton of references to Star Trek. In fact it's called Star Trekkies.

Sounds like a number of echi manga I know of...

Minus the Star Trek refrences though.

Yeah. It was envisioned very manga-style. If you want to hear about the plotline I've really fleshed out, tell me.

Yeah. It was envisioned very manga-style. If you want to hear about the plotline I've really fleshed out, tell me.
If you're going to be making puns like that, then I might almost be ambivalent. Or even filled with bored interest.

If you're going to be making puns like that, then I might almost be ambivalent. Or even filled with bored interest.

Lolz.

Lolz.

You should use innuendo. Lots and lots of innuendo. Drown your comic in a deluge of innuendo- but MAKE IT FUNNY. An un-funny deluge of innuendo is offensive. A funny deluge of innendo is funny.

To me, anyway.

You should use innuendo. Lots and lots of innuendo. Drown your comic in a deluge of innuendo- but MAKE IT FUNNY. An un-funny deluge of innuendo is offensive. A funny deluge of innendo is funny.

To me, anyway.

Well sure, innuendo is much better than bluntness after all. :)

Well sure, innuendo is much better than bluntness after all. :)

One can still use bluntness and be funny, though it would haveto be in the context of sarcasm to be truly funny and not flat-out retarded.

:)

Yeah. I was gonna use bluntness, but innuendo would be much funnier.

I made a plotline about a new transfer student. She convinces all the girls to stand against the peepers and the perverts (with a lot of Nazi symbolism involved), destroying the perverts' porn, and getting the peepers unable to access their peephole. The twist is that...

She's a lesbian, and has been using the peephole. The whole convincing was so the girls would never suspect her.

mm ok not into those comics

I'd say go for it. And keep the Star Trek stuff. It's accurate, lots of high school nerds/geeks/versageeks do that kind of thing. Qu'rplagh mo'RaT ke'laG sEd ur'a'aT.

One can still use bluntness and be funny, though it would haveto be in the context of sarcasm to be truly funny and not flat-out retarded.

:)

Well innuendo can use many different means to say something, only one way to be blunt. And sexual bluntness can just be crude, no humor at all. But I suppose if you are good then you can pull it off. :)

I'd say go for it. And keep the Star Trek stuff. It's accurate, lots of high school nerds/geeks/versageeks do that kind of thing. Qu'rplagh mo'RaT ke'laG sEd ur'a'aT.

The Star Trek references are just to be funny, and the way the peepers and perverts view each other as different species, and the pervert summoning text-message: Fap fap fap fap wank wank wank wank wank wank wank wank JACKOFF!

The Star Trek references are just to be funny, and the way the peepers and perverts view each other as different species, and the pervert summoning text-message: Fap fap fap fap wank wank wank wank wank wank wank wank JACKOFF!

arr Star Trek and porn seen that mix before

I think it could work. I like the femi-nazi story arc.

The perverts: They watch a ton of porn and read dirty magazines. They find peeping more trouble then it's worth, and summon each other by text-messaging "Fap fap fap fap wank wank wank wank wank wank wank wank JACKOFF!". They are the peepers' main rivals. The leader has a Spock haircut, and frequently says "illogical".

Drawing on personal experience, eh? :p

Drawing on personal experience, eh? :p

Lolz. I'm writing it as a short story instead.

Don't bother drawing it. Use something like www.stripgenerator to do most of the work, and maybe edit it a bit in psp or photoshop or something.

Get an artist. *nodnod*

P.S. And uh, prescript. And, you know, look around. You read any other comics?

P.P.S. Also, let me be your editor.

I was thinking of a weird comic about perverts, those who peep, and those who watch porn. The main characters are actually like real people, though, and have their own problems, and they have rivals. I have two storylines. What does NSG think?

Autobiographical material never really works well.

Autobiographical material never really works well.

Nah. The stuff that happens here would never happen anywhere in real life.

Get an artist. *nodnod*

P.S. And uh, prescript. And, you know, look around. You read any other comics?

P.P.S. Also, let me be your editor.

I'll take you up on that last offer, but I'm writing a short story.

Things that go BUMP! in the night!

Wow, I got the quadruple post.

I'll take you up on that last offer, but I'm writing a short story.

M'kay then. ^_^

M'kay then. ^_^

I'm TGing you what I got.

bump

Well, it's set in a high school. There are two main factions.

The peepers: Their mission, a daring enterprise, to boldly go where no man has gone before: the girl's locker room. These are the three main characters



Isn't this the plot to Porky's? And most teen sex comedies since then?

EDIT: Now that I think about it, the plot of that was to get into Porky's...the locker room was a sub plot...

Isn't this the plot to Porky's? And most teen sex comedies since then?

EDIT: Now that I think about it, the plot of that was to get into Porky's...the locker room was a sub plot...

Lolz.

(bumps)

(bumps again)

(bumps again)

Just how long can we talk about a porno novel?

(rhetorical question I think) :p

Just how long can we talk about a porno novel?

(rhetorical question I think) :p

It's a short story. Besides, I hate seeing a thread of mine die. If you want I can TG it to you.