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Anyone Want to Read My Screenplay?

The New Diabolicals
25-11-2006, 01:01
This is a very 'does-what-it-says-on-the-tin' thread. Basically, if you want to read my new screenplay and help me develop it please either post here, send me an email at

invisiblehen@aol.com

or add me on MSN at

invisiblehen@googlemail.com

It's basically about a bunker that sinks underground and traps its inhabitants inside, forcing them to cannibalism. If you like romantic comedies please don't read, although I'd like to believe that it did have some elements of black comedy in there somewhere.
If you help me out well I'll even add your big fat name to the credits!
Kryozerkia
25-11-2006, 01:40
Does it have a ditch or smouldering crater in it?
Desperate Measures
25-11-2006, 01:40
Does it have a ditch or smouldering crater in it?

You seem to be hot on craters.
Kryozerkia
25-11-2006, 01:41
You seem to be hot on craters.
Ditches make for a great start to any story, and smouldering craters are an excellent solution to the Mid East crisis.
Call to power
25-11-2006, 01:43
how long is it?

its just that cannibalism take about a month (at which time the reptilian part of your brain is very much in control if that's useful)

and send me it if you please email should be

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Desperate Measures
25-11-2006, 01:43
Ditches make for a great start to any story, and smouldering craters are an excellent solution to the Mid East crisis.

I prefer to blow up bridges as a beginning and end to all stories and wars.
Kryozerkia
25-11-2006, 02:00
I prefer to blow up bridges as a beginning and end to all stories and wars.
Rampant death is a good way to end the story, either with mass homocide, suicide or a mix thereof.
The New Diabolicals
25-11-2006, 02:09
Rampant death is a good way to end the story, either with mass homocide, suicide or a mix thereof.

It's suicide by 'Disintegration' by The Cure