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Two stories. Twenty-three words.

Rhaomi
24-09-2006, 00:55
I've recently stumbled across a lovely little genre of literature called flash fiction (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flash_fiction). Basically, the author has to write a complete, compelling story in as few words as possible, typically less than a hundred.

Now, most would think this a frivolous exercise in constrained writing, but good authors can produce remarkably powerful stories in just a handful of words. Here are two examples:

First, a horror story by Fredric Brown:

"The last man on Earth sat alone in a room. There was a knock on the door..."

:eek:

Creepy. (And yes, since this was written in the 1940s, he meant "man" as in "human", not just "male". No naughty last-man-on-last-woman action here. :p )



And now, a mini-masterpiece by Ernest Hemingway. It's only six words long, but it packs an emotional whallop:

"For Sale: Baby shoes. Never Worn."

:(

Chew on that for awhile...

There's an entire directory of flash-fiction sites on this (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flash_fiction) Wikipedia article. Anybody else find something they like?
Call to power
24-09-2006, 00:59
How positive those two selected pieces areā€¦.
United Chicken Kleptos
24-09-2006, 01:07
I don't get the second one.
Call to power
24-09-2006, 01:09
I don't get the second one.

lets just say the baby grew out of them and leave it at that
H N Fiddlebottoms VIII
24-09-2006, 01:16
I don't get the second one.
Its a dead baby joke.
Except that Hemingway was a drunken lunatic with no sense of humor, and so it isn't actually funny, and, hence, isn't a joke.
But there is, most certainly, a dead baby, because the only thing Hemingway liked more than the taste of buckshot was staging tragic moments in maternity wards.
Infinite Revolution
24-09-2006, 01:48
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if you go though all those pages and find some more really short ones i'll tell you if i like them. most of them are too long. i have a very short attention span/boredom threshold. i like hemingway's, not so much a story, they have sentences in them, but powerful none-the-less.
Rhaomi
24-09-2006, 02:03
if you go though all those pages and find some more really short ones i'll tell you if i like them. most of them are too long. i have a very short attention span/boredom threshold. i like hemingway's, not so much a story, they have sentences in them, but powerful none-the-less.

Hmm... you're right. I figured that all the stories in those directories would be a sentence or two each.

Well, after a bit of Googling, I found this site (http://tangents.co.uk/50words/); every story on it is fifty words or less. No Hemmingway, mind you, but pretty good anyways.