NationStates Jolt Archive


Plot... first chapter... GAAH

Darknovae
18-07-2006, 00:33
So, if you've seen my "Think of the Children!!" thread, you'll know that I'm posting a blog that is sort of based off of it. I'm having trouble thinking of a good beginning, and I want something completely normal to happen, not like getting arrested or something like that. I was going to start out with Ginny (the prtoagonist) school shopping with her mom, but it wouldn't work out as a beginning. Any ideas...?

I don't need names for characters. I've got all my names picked out. :D

If anyone needs to know what the story is about, go here (http://www.xanga.com/PersephoneSkye).
Franberry
18-07-2006, 00:36
looks quite intresting

keep us updated

EDIT:
as for the "normal" beginning, why dont you have a "normal" day, so the reader can be aquainted with the setting, and knows when the portagonist does something out of the ordinary.
Darknovae
18-07-2006, 00:50
Like, Ginny sitting at home, reading/playing on computer, and the school supply lists come?

I want the beginning to be perfectly normal, not uneventful though.
Kologk
18-07-2006, 00:53
Yeah, that could work. Honestly though, you've got to include 'The List' somewhere in the book. Actually, why not have Ginny walking around town (before curfew) and describe what she sees?
Littlebitqurky
18-07-2006, 00:59
how much of this book are you actually writing?:D
Franberry
18-07-2006, 01:00
how much of this book are you actually writing?:D
zing!
Littlebitqurky
18-07-2006, 01:02
zing!
the smiley was supposed to take the zing out of it..oh well!:rolleyes:
Franberry
18-07-2006, 01:05
the smiley was supposed to take the zing out of it..oh well!:rolleyes:
hehe

its a simple case of writers block, it dosent seem to be lazyness
Kologk
18-07-2006, 01:06
Oh, hey, gratutious linky time.

All the plot help you should need. (nanowrimo.com)