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My Martial Arts Philosophy

Katzistanza
03-03-2006, 00:07
I am soon to have my Black Belt exam in Tang Soo Do, and to reach that rank, I have to write a philosophy and submit that to my instructer. I have a half-done rough draft, and I wanted to post it here for comments, discussion, or suggestions, spacifically on the parts I make a note of wanting to fix. Thanks to anyone who choses to respond, and enjoy!:

History:

I suppose it’s easiest to start with my history in the program. I don’t remember how old I was when I first starting taking class under Phil Hill, or even if it was called Hill’s Hitters at the time. I just have vague recollections of the time. It doesn’t matter; I didn’t develop as a fighter or a martial artist during that time. I was in elementary school. I quit somewhat quickly, as a yellow belt, I believe, because I didn’t like the fighting. I didn’t like getting hit. But like I said, I don’t see that as the important part of my karate career.

In my mind’s recollection, it really started when I rejoined the program in middle school. Sure, I already knew what a round kick, sidekick, and rap, was, but it was like starting fresh. And it’s from that point that I started to progress.

For a while, my progress through the program was steady, certain, and without significant jolts. This time around, sparing was my favorite part, and I enjoyed fighting an opponent just above my skill level. I also mastered the katas and techniques well. In my mind, looking back, that was sort of the prelude, the time of preparation for the real challenges, and real growth I would experience in the karate program.

As a brown belt, I settled into a comfortable nitch. I was in the children’s class at the YMCA, and had been going at pretty much the same spot for a while. I was comfortable, not really challenging myself. Then Phil decided it was time for me to move up to the adult class.

Struggle is necessary to growth. Safety never gained people great things. A bit of suffering is required to truly gain something of importance. If you didn’t struggle, work, sweat, and bleed for something, it can never have the same value to you as something you earned through strength of will, sacrifice, and effort. Babies must leave the safety of the womb before they can become people. Paradise had to be lost before mankind could strive for it’s potential. Carefree childhood must be forever left behind to become a man. Thus is the way of every great gain, weather on a grand, or deeply personal scale. This is one of the greatest lessons karate has imparted onto me.

From that point on, I have never been satisfied with letting myself comfortably cruise along, as tempting as it sometimes is. My karate career since then has been a series of struggles and triumphs, each triumph being the right to a new struggle. Although karate in an art of actions and externals, whether it be in a form, or against an opponent, it has really always been internal. All progress, all struggles, all gains and loses, have always been within me, the external merely being the incarnation of that. If I am at a certain stage mentally, spiritually, and emotionally, my physical externals will reflect it. If my mind is sharp, so is my fight. If my soul is full of energy, so is my form. If I am clouded, unconfident, unsure, or empty, it is reflected in what my body does, and I pay the price. The relationship between physical and mental, between external and internal flows both ways, each interacting with and influencing the other. I feel I am often at my best when paired with an opponent who exceeds me in skill, experience, speed, and strength. It makes me dig deeper, forces me to rise to the occasion, or to lie down and surrender. Thus far, I feel I have rose to the occasion, and that is the real accomplishment, and the real reward I will have gained from being a martial artist. Because in the end, aren’t the most significant, effective, meaningful rewards and consequences the ones we make for ourselves? Because in the end, aren’t the most meaningful standards to accomplish the ones we set for ourselves? (Make this more clear)
An individual’s ego (in the traditional sence) is the source, motivation, validation, and standard for his own existance. (clean up, make more clear).

Stance:

Training:

Continuous training outside the classroom is essential to excel in the karate program. One great thing about karate, is it gives you motivation to take care of your body. I you want to excel, you must be in good physical shape. So, if it is important to you, it thus creates a reason, beyond simple health and general well-being, to train your body.
I don’t know if being in the program has made me more aware of how I treat my body, or if it would be something I’d focus on anyway, but it is a great once a week excersise, and certainly makes me aware of the shape I’m in. It is a good barometer, and also points out problem areas I need to work on. Flexibility has always been a weak point for me, and more recently, quickness of techniques and combos. I take a great sense of personal pride in striving to keeping my body not just in shape, but in good working order, in balance, partly because of my time in the karate program.

Fighting:






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NOTE: I don't know if this conflicts with the "no homework help" rule, if so I apologize. As it is not homework, but a personal project, I figured it would be alright. My apologies in advance to the mods if you concider this a violation.
Katzistanza
03-03-2006, 00:22
bump
Argesia
03-03-2006, 00:35
Martial arts are 80s kitsch, not philosophy.
Senkai
03-03-2006, 01:02
Nice story. You rambled a little but that's ok.

Um, but your whole story sounds quite stereotypical... a bit fake to put it bluntly. Are you sure those are your true feelings?
Von Witzleben
03-03-2006, 02:08
My. What a long story.
Markreich
03-03-2006, 02:14
"Martial Arts are organized uselessness." -Bruce Lee
Mythotic Kelkia
03-03-2006, 02:22
As a brown belt, I settled into a comfortable nitch.

Do you mean niche? pronounced /niS/ (rhymes with leash).
Von Witzleben
03-03-2006, 02:30
So. Is anyone else here doing any form of MA's? I'm just startet with kickboxing again. After a 4 year break. Man. I'm in such bad shape.:(
Europa Maxima
03-03-2006, 02:32
So. Is anyone else here doing any form of MA's? I'm just startet with kickboxing again. After a 4 year break. Man. I'm in such bad shape.:(
I am considering either doing Wing Chun, Krav Maga or Aikido, or maybe even Ninjutsu. So far I've been doing Wing Chun, and it's great, but the lessons may no longer fit my time-table as of next year.
Von Witzleben
03-03-2006, 02:37
Your considering Wing Chun and your doing Wing Chun already?
Europa Maxima
03-03-2006, 02:49
Your considering Wing Chun and your doing Wing Chun already?
As in continuing it, albeit at a later stage. Not sure yet.
The Beach Boys
03-03-2006, 02:55
Um, but your whole story sounds quite stereotypical... a bit fake to put it bluntly. Are you sure those are your true feelings?

FWIW, I'm not happy to say "fake", I'd prefer to say it sounds like you could be trying to say what you think the examiners would like to read.

but I agree with Senkai's question.

is it possible you've influenced by how more senior people talk about their growth in tang soo do, and maybe you think that's how you're expected to see it?

and, are you sure you've spent enough time in your own head with it all? in the old days we were encouraged to spend time in meditation and in our own thoughts, and explanations were at a minimum because they wanted us to figure more out for ourselves. if we couldn't it soon became obvious when we didn't understand what was what. I know some schools are different now.

I don't know you or your school, so I may be way off base. if I'm wrong I apologize. but just consider it. what is your own contact with the essence of tang soo do's meaning? what's so simple you could say it in one sentence, so all-embracing it goes beyond techniques and styles and boundaries to what is true in all martial arts, so personal you can see it growing in your everyday life as well as your practice, so fundamental it integrates you so that you aren't one kind of person in uniform and another out, or one person in one situation and a different person in another, and so real it changes how you live and gives you a handle on all your life, not just on martial arts?

here is the only thing I'm sure of:

the only answer to your assignment that will be worth a damn to your black belt examination or to your life is the one that is so much your own that it grows out of you, and that is so much the fruit of your own spirit that you won't need or want to ask a bunch of strangers (or even your dojang brothers) to help you with it. just as your techniques and forms have to be the outgrowth of you as a martial artist, so does your philosophy. the black belt test is many things, including the first step in proving that tang soo do is more than someone else's shadow around you, it's your own shadow. don't write about anyone else's shadow. write about your own. better you should have a small shadow of your own than a big shadow of someone else.

all the best. in tang soo do.
Newtdom
03-03-2006, 02:58
I have done martial arts for 13years now. I have a 5th degree in Aikido (Godan), a 2nd Degree in Tae Kwon do and have trained a bit in Krav Maga.

Is your thesis suppose to be just like a history about your personal career or martial arts in general? If its suppose to be about your feelings and emotions then I think your on the right track, but for my thesis (to be a certified instructor) I had to write about just martial art philosophy in general.

But so far I have really enjoyed what you have written...keep it up. And remember your Black Belt has nothing to do with the ability to beat a person up, but in the perseverance and courage it took to get to that rank.
The Bruce
03-03-2006, 03:26
I used to joke that mastery is after years training to punch very solid objects realizing that you really don’t have to punch solid objects with your fist anymore.
Qwystyria
03-03-2006, 04:27
As someone who's written, read and graded numerous Tang Soo Do essays, your essay strikes me as a particuarly run-of-the-mill typical essay. You don't say anything wrong, and you most likely actually think what you said. Your grammar is a little iffy at times. It doesn't look like you're quite done with it. But I'm sure whatever you do will be acceptable, and most martial arts instructors aren't really grammareticians anyway.

BUT if you're really looking to impress them - and to use this as a way to improve yourself, you might try looking a little deeper than that. WHY do you like sparring? WHY are you motivated? What is it about martial arts that keeps your interest month after month and year after year? What is it about being a black belt that draws you to it? What do you think it really means to have one? What changes will it make in your life? Don't just go for the facts, go for the reasons. I've only ever read one essay like that, and man, that guy would've gotten that belt no matter WHAT he did, I think.