Colodia
20-11-2005, 19:27
Keep in mind I'm completely against censorship, but my essay needs to be in favor of censorship for the sake of knowing the other side of the argument for my Language Arts Honors class.
So this is a persuasive essay. Mind helping me out by telling me if it's effective and if its orangized, focused, specific, and flows well?
1234567In our ever-changing world in which our society is constantly being exposed to more and more false-realities in which people freely commit violent acts and freely use vulgar language as they please, we must fight back and resort to the tool of censorship to save the very glue that binds our society together – civilized behavior. These inappropriate, terrifying, anti-family objects, be it books, movies, music, TV, or even the speeches of our national leaders themselves, whatever it may be, must be censored to the point where it is acceptable and non-threatening to the present and future American society.
1234567A look at our general American society and the media (books, music, movies, TV, radio, etc.) produced and shown in the country first would alarmingly show you that we are being exposed to some very dangerous and very explicit content. You would be hard pressed to watch television for 30 minutes and not find sexual references, and this would simply be in channels that children regularly watch. Watch television channels late at night or channels that children don’t usually watch and the results will be even more staggering with how much inappropriate content is in there. And this is just television thus far. The younger generation is constantly attracted to the movie theatres and we are simply freely catering to their media-warped minds by allowing them access into R-rated and PG-13 rated movies which include violence, vulgar language, sexuality, and crude and traumatic images. Authors, for some odd reason, feel as if they have a shield that protects them from whatever they decide to write. And what they write can easily be more violent and more visually abhorrent than any TV show or movie simply with their colorful use of words. The radio itself can be a tool of anarchy against the very way our nation works. How can we allow broadcasts from individuals who preach the dismantlement of our American society and calls for the people to rebel against our very laws that keep order? We have a very scary and very dangerous range of problems we must deal with immediately and it starts here with these objects of social destruction.
1234567We now have a clear idea of what exactly is the problem in America. Now what is the problem doing to Americans? The movie “Jackass” was released featuring a group of men performing stunts that involved physical pain that no average American would ever do in their life. In the weeks and months following the release of said movie, many children and teenagers were either hospitalized or buried after their reenactment of such stunts. That’s just one movie that caused the deaths of too many victims that weren’t able to distinguish right from wrong after watching this movie. And in the television, sexual perversion and the lack of any sensible ideas has caused for soft-core pornography to be regularly shown in the form of music videos and movies that the younger generation constantly watches. Problem here being is that they are far too young to be exposed to such content; they are not even 18 yet.
1234567And what of the problems we will see in the future if we allow such material to evolve and thrive in the United States? Rest assured that we can and probably will achieve a collapse of the way our society works to make way for a country without morals and without any regard to what is appropriate and what will harm you. As we constantly show the younger generation these materials as they are still developing their opinions about the world, we are condemning them to a future in which they are desensitized to perils that they will see as everyday occurrences such as murder, rape, arson, drug use, and theft. Crime rates will soar, possibly at an exponential growth, as the younger generation ages to the point where they are able to own a gun or they are able to freely drink alcohol. What will we possibly achieve but for a deep dark society that has become so saturated in the problems of the world that it sees no wrong in said problems?
1234567We must use censorship to protect our country before it is too late. This world we have come to is not the world we want to be in which we have no regard for what is right and what is wrong, what is appropriate and what is inappropriate. We cannot allow the family to be destroyed; we cannot allow our country to be destroyed. We need to utilize this tool of censorship immediately before it’s too late.
So this is a persuasive essay. Mind helping me out by telling me if it's effective and if its orangized, focused, specific, and flows well?
1234567In our ever-changing world in which our society is constantly being exposed to more and more false-realities in which people freely commit violent acts and freely use vulgar language as they please, we must fight back and resort to the tool of censorship to save the very glue that binds our society together – civilized behavior. These inappropriate, terrifying, anti-family objects, be it books, movies, music, TV, or even the speeches of our national leaders themselves, whatever it may be, must be censored to the point where it is acceptable and non-threatening to the present and future American society.
1234567A look at our general American society and the media (books, music, movies, TV, radio, etc.) produced and shown in the country first would alarmingly show you that we are being exposed to some very dangerous and very explicit content. You would be hard pressed to watch television for 30 minutes and not find sexual references, and this would simply be in channels that children regularly watch. Watch television channels late at night or channels that children don’t usually watch and the results will be even more staggering with how much inappropriate content is in there. And this is just television thus far. The younger generation is constantly attracted to the movie theatres and we are simply freely catering to their media-warped minds by allowing them access into R-rated and PG-13 rated movies which include violence, vulgar language, sexuality, and crude and traumatic images. Authors, for some odd reason, feel as if they have a shield that protects them from whatever they decide to write. And what they write can easily be more violent and more visually abhorrent than any TV show or movie simply with their colorful use of words. The radio itself can be a tool of anarchy against the very way our nation works. How can we allow broadcasts from individuals who preach the dismantlement of our American society and calls for the people to rebel against our very laws that keep order? We have a very scary and very dangerous range of problems we must deal with immediately and it starts here with these objects of social destruction.
1234567We now have a clear idea of what exactly is the problem in America. Now what is the problem doing to Americans? The movie “Jackass” was released featuring a group of men performing stunts that involved physical pain that no average American would ever do in their life. In the weeks and months following the release of said movie, many children and teenagers were either hospitalized or buried after their reenactment of such stunts. That’s just one movie that caused the deaths of too many victims that weren’t able to distinguish right from wrong after watching this movie. And in the television, sexual perversion and the lack of any sensible ideas has caused for soft-core pornography to be regularly shown in the form of music videos and movies that the younger generation constantly watches. Problem here being is that they are far too young to be exposed to such content; they are not even 18 yet.
1234567And what of the problems we will see in the future if we allow such material to evolve and thrive in the United States? Rest assured that we can and probably will achieve a collapse of the way our society works to make way for a country without morals and without any regard to what is appropriate and what will harm you. As we constantly show the younger generation these materials as they are still developing their opinions about the world, we are condemning them to a future in which they are desensitized to perils that they will see as everyday occurrences such as murder, rape, arson, drug use, and theft. Crime rates will soar, possibly at an exponential growth, as the younger generation ages to the point where they are able to own a gun or they are able to freely drink alcohol. What will we possibly achieve but for a deep dark society that has become so saturated in the problems of the world that it sees no wrong in said problems?
1234567We must use censorship to protect our country before it is too late. This world we have come to is not the world we want to be in which we have no regard for what is right and what is wrong, what is appropriate and what is inappropriate. We cannot allow the family to be destroyed; we cannot allow our country to be destroyed. We need to utilize this tool of censorship immediately before it’s too late.