NationStates Jolt Archive


Descriptive

Ezail
03-10-2005, 19:37
What would you add into this desrciption about a land that is suppose to be extremly peaceful, large, and has large crop fields and supplies other regions with food.


----- was the largest of all the regions and was a perfect place to grow crops and catch fish. The corn fields were as large as cities, the apples were a juicy red, and the potatoes were thriving in numbers. Small villages scattered through the peaceful land and the other four regions relied on their land for food.
The WYN starcluster
03-10-2005, 20:17
What would you add into this desrciption {snip}

"And their womenfolk, Ahhh. To see them was to know that all was right in this land."

( And as for the menfolk - the sheep were nervous ;) )
Ezail
03-10-2005, 20:28
lol, i like that it adds comedy to it but i need it to stay on the serious side. I had a good laugh though thanks.
Ashmoria
03-10-2005, 21:04
id add in more types of crops and a bit of animal husbandry. rolling hills are always nice as is wild food. a forest for firewood and hunting.