NationStates Jolt Archive


Lets write a song.

Branin
05-03-2005, 11:24
Line by line. ANd lets keep this non-spammy. Make it something you would listen to. And lets stick to lyrics, none of this Bb C E Bb C F E stuff (as much I love writing it all down on staff paper :rolleyes: )

I'll start...

A darkness grows within the flame
Alenaland
05-03-2005, 11:32
I hear a voice that speaks my name.
Boonytopia
05-03-2005, 11:46
I have a madness that can't be tamed.
Alenaland
05-03-2005, 11:51
My feelings change, but I'm the same.
Kanabia
05-03-2005, 11:52
So mundane, I feel the shame.
Patra Caesar
05-03-2005, 11:54
Just one rhyme is too lame...
Enn
05-03-2005, 11:57
wrong number of stresses is the same
Down System
05-03-2005, 12:10
Playing this trying game
New Fuglies
05-03-2005, 12:12
resisting urge to flame
Down System
05-03-2005, 12:19
wondering who to blame
Nuggan
05-03-2005, 12:19
but when will people feel my pain?
Agnium
05-03-2005, 12:21
what is it? i have no aim
E Blackadder
05-03-2005, 12:27
:p nice song not lame
Saxnot
05-03-2005, 12:27
*vocal solo (Great Gig In The Sky Style)*
Killer Queen
05-03-2005, 12:31
was caught having a bat.. shame
Kanabia
05-03-2005, 12:52
*wank-metal roar*
Chinkopodia
05-03-2005, 13:41
Went insane, swallowed a cane.
Damn these rhymes are really lame.

*instrumental*

I'm out of rhymes, what a shame,
La-la-la-la-la-la.....lame?
Englandtopia
05-03-2005, 13:49
And i fear no pain,
As pain is the main game,
Branin
05-03-2005, 14:03
:headbang: :headbang:
Legless Pirates
05-03-2005, 14:04
The pain is the same
That is what I claim
Harlesburg
05-03-2005, 14:19
Who wants to undress Billy Zane????- :(
Greater Valia
05-03-2005, 14:20
Not me but its all the same.
Policart
05-03-2005, 14:24
Why I don't I can't explain
Harlesburg
05-03-2005, 14:37
I cant take all this fame
its so bad its rotting my brain
Greater Valia
05-03-2005, 14:38
Fix that lame brain with some oranges. (mwahahahaha)
Branin
05-03-2005, 14:40
this rhyme is getting lame.
Boonytopia
05-03-2005, 14:40
Fix that lame brain with some oranges. (mwahahahaha)

Nice one! :D
Stephistan
05-03-2005, 14:44
this rhyme is getting lame.

I know, as it's also starting to hurt my brain!
Choqulya
05-03-2005, 14:45
darkness surrounding me, numbness encasing
Stephistan
05-03-2005, 14:48
I look around and see such sadness across the abyss of time.
Lunatic Goofballs
05-03-2005, 14:48
I wanted to play a game
But all the landmarks look the same.
A thousand herring I did hide,
SOme outside, some inside.
I run before I'm blamed.
HTL
05-03-2005, 14:48
Good eye sniper!
Alenaland
05-03-2005, 19:15
darkness surrounding me, numbness encasing
I look around and see such sadness across the abyss of time.

My force diminishing; what does it matter?
Super-power
05-03-2005, 21:15
You're just gonna get fatter and fatter
Sharazar
05-03-2005, 22:41
You're just gonna get fatter and fatter
Laughing like the mad hatter
Colodia
05-03-2005, 22:49
Where art thy ladder?
Sharazar
05-03-2005, 22:52
Poisonous adder
Neo-Anarchists
05-03-2005, 22:52
Poisonous adder
Covered in doughnut batter
New Granada
05-03-2005, 22:54
Covered in doughnut batter
in the end all dreams will shatter
Alenaland
05-03-2005, 22:55
I think this was supposed to start out as a serious song and I liked the imagery, but I have to admit, some of these rhymes are hysterical! :D :cool:
Alenaland
05-03-2005, 22:56
Where can I turn to find my soul?
Colodia
05-03-2005, 22:58
While I eat my donut hole?
Sharazar
05-03-2005, 23:00
some of these rhymes are hysterical
the ambition of those born clerical
Where can I turn to find my soul?
deeper down the rabbit hole
Phyritia
05-03-2005, 23:11
oh holly pain that eats the heart
Alenaland
05-03-2005, 23:26
I'm looking for a savior at my local Walmart.
Sharazar
05-03-2005, 23:28
i hope the saviour's twice as smart
as folks who buy this crap called "art"
Tonissia
05-03-2005, 23:31
Then I'll Fart
Phyritia
05-03-2005, 23:31
i wonder what branin is thinking if this idea was smart...
and i wonder if he will ever take part?
Sharazar
05-03-2005, 23:38
he's just another horse pulling a cart
Colodia
05-03-2005, 23:42
Hey look, clothes for $13.99 at Wal-Mart!
Tonissia
05-03-2005, 23:44
I think I'll Fart
Harlesburg
06-03-2005, 06:12
I think I'll Fart
Until i get dragged by horse and cart.
Alenaland
06-03-2005, 06:25
I think I'll Fart

Tonissa, you having some gas problems there?
I'm sure there's something made by Bayer
To keep you from polluting the air
But then again, maybe you just don't care...
Branin
06-03-2005, 06:29
OOS(out of song):Has anyone else noticed that our rhyming goes in abnouxously long streaks??
Alenaland
06-03-2005, 06:33
Yes, and maybe it's not good for the song, but it's fun.

I figure, if you are looking for a real song from here, you can take the lines that suit you and leave the rest for us to play with.
Alenaland
06-03-2005, 06:33
OOS(out of song):Has anyone else noticed that our rhyming goes in abnouxously long streaks??

Perhaps, but does that make us freaks?
Planners
06-03-2005, 06:34
I think my leeks have beaks
Traveling Folk
06-03-2005, 06:41
Those aren't leeks; they're birds, you geek!
Alenaland
06-03-2005, 06:41
I think my leeks have beaks

They've been that way for many weeks...
Spaam
06-03-2005, 06:48
They've been that way for many weeks...
But then I went down to the creeks,
And when I was there I found
While I was looking around
A bird that made a funny sound
Alenaland
06-03-2005, 06:51
He was hiding in the ground
I reached for him, but he got away
And I didn't have the time to stay
I wonder what he's doing on this day?
Planners
06-03-2005, 06:56
Hey this is neat
my leeks have feet

Oh wait now wings
I am seeing things

It seems to be squimiring
my stomach is churning

I see black beedy eyes
This must all be lies

It Can't be true?

*squack*
*Bawk*

It is a bird
hmm So, I am most definitely a terd.
New Genoa
06-03-2005, 07:03
I look about and see my face
Then I wonder why use maise?
Then I think and contemplate
and then I get very irate
to the point where I'm insanely mad
and back again to insanely glad
will I live or will die?
I don't know
but I like chicken pie
North American
06-03-2005, 07:06
I see this pathetic song and I sigh
It makes me almost want to break down and cry
Planners
06-03-2005, 07:06
ya he seems like a nice guy
North American
06-03-2005, 07:09
I wish you'd all just go away
Instead of wasting my day
I guess It's sort of my fault
I think I'll just lock myself in a vault
New Genoa
06-03-2005, 07:09
ya he seems like a nice guy

OMG I fingered my pie
New Genoa
06-03-2005, 07:10
I wish you'd all just go away
Instead of wasting my day
I guess It's sort of my fault
I think I'll just lock myself in a vault

And I think I'll just have some salt.
Planners
06-03-2005, 07:11
This calls for dry malt!
Branin
06-03-2005, 07:13
OOS: hell with it, if you can't beat em join em




might as well join the assault
Killer Queen
06-03-2005, 07:16
Explosion
Planners
06-03-2005, 07:19
Kaboom
Akusei
06-03-2005, 07:43
And then catapault
into the lockdown vault
that is your twisted soul
burning out of my control

twisting sliding
spinning gliding
madness overtakes thee
lyrics make or break me

Is this the end?
Please be my friend
it all depends
Branin
06-03-2005, 07:48
*12 minute drum solo*
Occidio Multus
06-03-2005, 08:22
*two and one half minutes of all us playing the kazoo.
Alenaland
06-03-2005, 08:26
*two and one half minutes of all us playing the kazoo.

Then we all switch to making armpit noises.
Kinda Sensible people
06-03-2005, 08:30
And then catapault
into the lockdown vault
that is your twisted soul
burning out of my control

twisting sliding
spinning gliding
madness overtakes thee
lyrics make or break me

Is this the end?
Please be my friend
it all depends


Oh wait, I almost forgot
Lest by unanswer you're distraught
The song won't end, you will be fraught
By the longest single run on thought.
Alenaland
06-03-2005, 08:35
Oh wait, I almost forgot
Lest by unanswer you're distraught
The song won't end, you will be fraught
By the longest single run on thought.

There are only so many words we can add.
Using too many would be bad.
And it would make poor Branin sad.
Or maybe we've already done that -Egad!
Kinda Sensible people
06-03-2005, 08:37
There are only so many words we can add.
Using too many would be bad.
And it would make poor Branin sad.
Or maybe we've already done that -Egad!


And yet we must continue on
Until we reach the brink of dawn
When lights spill down upon a lawn
And Darkness with its shadows gone

More rhymes there are yet to be found
P'raps in your bed or underground
And with them we shall build a mound
With intrusive, neverending sound
Alenaland
06-03-2005, 08:41
And yet we must continue on
Until we reach the brink of dawn
When lights spill down upon a lawn
And Darkness with its shadows gone

More rhymes there are yet to be found
P'raps in your bed or underground
And with them we shall build a mound
With intrusive, neverending sound

My bed does not contain a note
of sound or anything I wrote
I prefer to sleep somewhere remote
In sleep I dream but don't emote
Kinda Sensible people
06-03-2005, 08:44
My bed does not contain a note
of sound or anything I wrote
I prefer to sleep somewhere remote
In sleep I dream but don't emote

Some notes are meant not to be known
Just like some shirts are badly sewn
Notes that sound like squeaking phones
Or like unearthly, cursing moans
Like the sounds of singing barritones
Alenaland
06-03-2005, 09:03
Some notes are meant not to be known
Just like some shirts are badly sewn
Notes that sound like squeaking phones
Or like unearthly, cursing moans
Like the sounds of singing barritones

Hey! I'm a bari! I resemble that remark!
Akusei
06-03-2005, 09:13
Some notes are meant not to be known
Just like some shirts are badly sewn
Notes that sound like squeaking phones
Or like unearthly, cursing moans
Like the sounds of singing barritones

Yet in the end all must parish
and organs collapse with audible squish
heads rot into skulls
and the message board convo lulls
No more posting stupid polls
only sound of death knolls
as they take their tolls
upon the ghastly trolls
Harlesburg
06-03-2005, 11:40
*two and one half minutes of all us playing the kazoo.
Ha HA
Harlesburg
06-03-2005, 11:42
Yet in the end all must parish
and organs collapse with audible squish
heads rot into skulls
and the message board convo lulls
No more posting stupid polls
only sound of death knolls
as they take their tolls
upon the ghastly trolls
My Goals alas i lost my goals for now i tinker with the fowls and watch the lass go down the shoales if only for my Moles.
Dragon Cows
06-03-2005, 12:01
i eat my soup right from the bowls
while watching a show on moles
and with my soup i eat some rolls
and look deep down within my soul

my soul, it seems, is black as night
i fear that i am in a fight
with myself for what is right
but i believe i have the might

to beat these most evil thoughts
strength i have, and I have lots
to beat this soul that sits and rots
and ties itself in nasty knots

finally now, i have won
although i admit i did have fun
now my soul is bright as sun
hurry now, for i must run
Sharazar
06-03-2005, 12:12
This verse is so lame
Tho yours are the same
But who's really to blame?
Is it Saddam Hussein?
Ariddia
06-03-2005, 12:28
Hussein flying the bane
A world gripped in pain
Whilst we struggle on and on
Hell's torture, an endless song
Which must stretch out across the plains
As hell engulfs us all in flames
And these lines flow on, forever long
Alenaland
06-03-2005, 18:29
Hussein flying the bane
A world gripped in pain
Whilst we struggle on and on
Hell's torture, an endless song
Which must stretch out across the plains
As hell engulfs us all in flames
And these lines flow on, forever long

I do not think this song is long
But then again, I could be wrong
My mind is lost like a too-tight thong
That hides between your butt cheeks
Alenaland
06-03-2005, 19:31
Sorry, was that a thread-killer?
Harlesburg
09-03-2005, 11:37
We'll never know the pain that grows
inside these souls
that lost controls
as we all know the worlds a hole
sucking out our very being
Blind man looks but is he seeing.
Harlesburg
14-03-2005, 05:59
I killed this thread with so much glee
Without a trace for who can see
A masquerade for us to see
But alas fair child we will never be.
Dragon Cows
14-03-2005, 06:31
Harlesburg, he bumped the thread
to try and stop it from going dead
in the end he may be ahead
and that is all that i have said
Trilateral Commission
14-03-2005, 06:43
foe foe's Im tippin
wood grain im grippin
catch m lain switchn
wit da paynt dripn
turrn yo nek butt u dam missn

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Lries
14-03-2005, 06:43
This is my first post in this thread,
The system didn't let me know,
It reminds me of the painful days of the haunted dead,
Where the youth we were losing let go,
And all stood still.
Harlesburg
15-03-2005, 09:03
It makes me ill
for us to swill
from this bottle of whiskey
the bottle is life
and we are rife
with all the plagues of Hist'ry. :D
The Supreme Rabbit
15-03-2005, 09:08
Somthing from DDR:

And Stalin, he's a big shit
He makes us suffer all the time
I don't like him, not a bit
Over his wall I'm gonna climb