NationStates Jolt Archive


A Scary Story

Whittier-
14-02-2005, 06:34
It was a cold rainy afternoon in Chicago Illinoise.
Jessica had just arrived home from school. As usual her parents were still at work. Everything was normal when she and her friend Lucinda walked through the front door to the livingroom. They threw their books on the couch. The phone rang. It was her mother. As she was hanging up, her 8 year old younger sister, Sarah, walked in the door, having just got off the bus.
The phone rang again, this time it was Luke, her 17 year old boyfriend. She talked on the phone for about 15 minutes. She hung up, very happy since he was coming over.
Sarah turned on the tv to her favorite cartoon, "Pinky and the Brain."
Jessica went upstairs and looked her 16 year fine body over in the mirror, admiring herself. One of the icons on her computer screen was blinking. Her email. Hoping it was from Luke, she clicked on it. But instead, when the email was opened, it was a picture of a hideous looking face of girl that sent shivers down her spine and made her hair stand up on end literally. It contained a message: "You will be dead tonight". She recognized the image. It was from a really weird website she had visited a while back.
She closed it. The email icon flashed again. She opened it, again the hidious picture, this time with the message: "I know where you are." Jessica looked around apprehensively then closed the email, deleting both of them. She jumped as the door creaked eerily open, but then her Lucinda walked in. They walked back downstairs.
As they sat on the couch, Lucinda asked Sarah if she wanted to hear a story. Sarah liked stories.
So Lucinda began telling about an urban legend: "There was this website. And it contained weird images and videos and stuff. And everyone who looked at either disappeared or was found dead of the most horrible causes. Tommy Tomson from across town had visited it and was found dead from petrification 5 months later. The same happened to 23 other guys and 5 girls. " She didn't know many victims the site had. Jessica's eyes got really big. Why did that sound familiar.
Lucinda continued describing the site and the fate of alot of the people who had visited it or had encountered a strange entity in one of the webs multitude of online chatrooms. It was an Yahoo chatroom where it had been encountered in fact. The entity used the screenname: DeathGirl. And if you chatted with that person, you didn't die in 5 months you were found dead 3 days later.
Then Lucinda was silent for a moment, but the silence was shattered by the phone ringing causing Jessica and Sarah to jump.
"I'm scared." said Sarah. "Its just a story." said Jessica, unnerved herself. She wasn't convinced it was just a story. Just 3 days before, during the weekend, she had been chatting with someone named Deathgirl on the web. But it was probably as coincidence. It had to be. Things like this didn't happen in the real world. They only happen in movies.
Lucinda noticed the look on her face: "Are you ok?"
"I'm fine." said Jessica, feigning a smile. She didn't want people to think she was superstitious.
Their mom was going to be working late and dad was out of town on a business trip.

8pm:

They were watching tv when there was a knock on the door. Jessica got up and walked to looking out the little glass window to see who it was. It was just Luke. So she opened it. He walked in. He was thin build with a funny looking nose and black skin. He was certain he was going to get some, so he brought his condoms. Course they were only supposed to be studying. Even if he didn't, he would still brag about cause he had a rep to maintain.
"I'll be right back I'm just going upstairs to change." said Jessica. Sarah went upstairs to go to the bathroom.
While Jessica was changing, Lucinda sat in front of the PC and logged into Nationstates. They talked for what seemed to Luke to be forever and ever. He was downstairs and kept checking his watch. Finally, impatient he walked upstairs and knocked on her door. She was had just finished dressing and let him in. He wrapped his arms around her in a tight embrace. It was 9pm.
Lucinda was busy with the NS forums when the screen began flickering.
The lovemaking was interrupted when she said, "Hey, your computer is on the fritz."
Jessica looked at the screen. How odd. She thought.
Luke was oblivious. Dumb machines he thought. He didn't like being interrupted during the course of "business". He walked up and reset the monitor. It didn't work.
So he unplugged the pc and plugged it back in, resetting it. The monitor came back on to normal. Now where was I he thought. "See all fixed." he said with a smile.
Sarah, who was downstairs again watching tv, decided to go upstairs to her room to get one of her toys. On the way she had to pass Jessica's room the door of which was open.
The three kids began getting ready to go to the party. Luke would have to work on homebase when he dropped them off later. Jessica sat down at the computer breifly to email another one of her freinds, someone who lived in Florida. The screen began flickering again. And the most horrifying image you could imagine appeared on the screen. It was the website. Neither Luke nor Lucinda saw cause they were distracted.
She tried turning off the computer. "Are you ready" Lucinda asked.
"Yeah" responded Jessica. But then screen came back on of its own accord. By this time Luke had walked down the hall to urinate.
Lucinda saw the screen come on on its own. Their faces went pale. Sarah who was watching from the doorway, watched while her eyes got really big and a lump appeared in her throat and she began to shiver, like she was seeing a ghost.
In the middle of the website was a 12 year girl in pretty white gown, with deep dark glowing pits for eyes and extreme hatred on her face. She had long dark but wet hair, a decayed nose, bluish skin. Jessica had the feeling that person on screen was looking right at her. The figure began moving toward the camera.
Jessica's heart began racing as her bloodlevel shot up. "This can't be happening, this don't happen in real life, this only happened in movies like the ring and stuff, this has to be a joke. Luke or Lucinda must have done something to computer to pull a joke on her." she tought, fear building up inside her.
But then the impossible happened. Lucinda was frozen in place. They couldn't help but watch as the figure reached a hand through the monitor into Jessica's bedroom and began hoisting itself out. First the hidious head then the rest of the body. The very image would give you nightmares not for weeks but for months.
The terrifying apparition began floating eerily toward Jessica. She backed up.
Sarah ran downstairs and hid, tears or fear running down her face as she screamed.
Lucinda and Jessica were both screaming.
Luke who was in the bath room, urinating, just shook his head. "Crazy female hysteria" he thought. He went back to talking to himself in the mirror for a couple of minutes: "who's the pimp? yeah you the pimp." he told himself through the mirror.
Lucinda and Jessica began to run for the door. Lucinda made it through. But then the apparition materialized in front of Jessica just before she could make it through. She tried back up but it was too late.
Luke stepped out the restroom to find Lucina running from Jessica's room screaming and Sarah sobbing while running downstairs, scared looks on their faces.
"Dumb females" he thought again. "This is just proof that ony thing women are good for is sex, sex, and more sex."
He walked to Jessica's room to find some crazy looking female bent over his girl. "What the fuck" he thought. By the time he realized what was happening it was almost too late. "hey" he said, "how bout letting me in on the fun." The figure continued, ignoring him as Jessica just lied their out of fright.
He put his hands on the figures shoulder, it was very cold to the touch. The figure turned around and his eyes bulged and a know grew in his stomach and his hair stood as saw the horrifying image before him.
His fight or flight instincts took over and he swung. The figure grabbed his arm and flipped him across the room with flick of its wrist. Then it turned it attention back to Jessica.
"Dumb bitch," said Luke, "You taking my girl unless you go through me first." The apparition looked at him with hate. It began moving toward him. "Run" he screamed to Jessica, who got and began to walk weakly out of the room. She was too weak to run.
I's gonna have to put this dumb ho in her place he thought. "I know jujitsu" said Luke, taking the stereotypical karate stance. "what the fuck did I get into" he thought. The bluish skinned girls with the scary eyes just grabbed him and began throwing him around the room. It grabbed him by his nutsack and lifted him up, squishing his nuts, his eyes bulging and whine coming from his mouth as would come from any guy who was grabbed there. It tossed him again, he got up, holding his nuts. "Fuck this he thought" feeling he was going to die. It was time to call for backup. He ran out the room like a bat out of hell. He ran downstairs calling out "somebody call 911, pimp under attack."
He yanked out his cell phone and dialed frantically, "Hello, 911, yes I need help. Me and my girl are being attacked by an evil crazy bitch. ... She came out of the computer." A voice on the other end. Then a click. "hello? hello?" said Luke. The 911 operator had hung up on him.
He went to grab Jessica, but she was dead in state of rigormortus, her mouth frozen open forever. He ran outside screaming, "somebody call 911, pimp under attack by evil girl from bitch world." as he ran down the street leaving his car behind.
Lucinda was next door banging on the neighbor's door with Sarah. The woman who lived there opened the door, and seeing the horrified looks on their faces, let them in. After hearing their stories, she thought there was a crazy woman at Sarah's house so she called the police.
Luke was still running down the street screaming for someone to call 911, and shitting and pissing his pants.
Lucinda and Sarah waited at Mrs. Sorenson's house for the cops. When they arrived they found Jessica dead inside the house, a corpse that was already a quarter of the way decayed.
The homicide detective had his work cut out. As it appeared the girl had been dead for a couple of days at least.
Lucinda's parents picked her up. When Sarah's mom arrived, she refused to go home. She didn't want to go back in that house. She was scared of it. Her mother was very upset about what happened to her eldest daughter. Seeing the corpse, she knew that someone had done something to her. That was the ony reason the detective agreed to look into it, despite the fact there were no marks. But if it made the mother feel better, it wouldn't hurt to investigate. Course, he never found out what the cause of death was. Nor could the coroner figure it out. As far they could tell, Jessica was in perfect health when she passed over.
As all this was happening, Linda Meirs and her boyfriend Freddy and their 5 freinds had just finished looking at a most odd website that another friend had told them about. It was called SuicidePartyPact.com. It had the most weird images of people hanging or gassing themselves, a little girl being drowned. The little 12 year old girl was all over the site, and seemed to be eerily staring at them through the monitor. Though they knew it was impossible cause Fred's computer didn't even have a webcam. Meantime, the person that Linda was chatting with on her laptop, a person named Deathgirl, came back on. "I bet you I know where you are." ........
End of Part 1. This is supposedly based on a story I got from another NSer. They claimed it was based on something that happened in rl in Chicago back in December. But I figure even it really isn't, it sure make a good story.
Opressing people
14-02-2005, 06:43
good story but kind of a ring ripoff
Vampad
14-02-2005, 06:44
Interesting...

Things like this didn't happen in the real world. They only happen in movies.

Lol how original :D
Greedy Pig
14-02-2005, 06:52
*yawn*..

Read half way. Then I read the end and spoiled the story.

You want to hear something scary?

If you don't pass reply to this message 10 times, your Valentine date would stood you up tonight. :D
Peopleandstuff
14-02-2005, 06:53
good story but kind of a ring ripoff
Only 'kind of'? You truely have a talent for understatement! ;)
Stormforge
14-02-2005, 06:54
"somebody call 911, pimp under attack by evil girl from bitch world."This was the best part.
Nureonia
14-02-2005, 06:55
*yawn* Reminded me of a crap version of the Ring... and it wasn't that scary. Paragraph form please.
Evil Arch Conservative
14-02-2005, 06:57
It grabbed him by his nutsack and lifted him up, squishing his nuts, his eyes bulging and whine coming from his mouth as would come from any guy who was grabbed there. It tossed him again, he got up, holding his nuts. "Fuck this he thought" feeling he was going to die. It was time to call for backup. He ran out the room like a bat out of hell. He ran downstairs calling out "somebody call 911, pimp under attack."

It was vaguely disquieting untill I got to that part. You're not supposed to snicker during the climax of a scary story.
Naturality
14-02-2005, 06:58
"Sarah ran downstairs and hid, tears or fear running down her face as she screamed.
Lucinda and Jessica were both screaming.
Luke who was in the bath room, urinating, just shook his head. "Crazy female hysteria" he thought. He went back to talking to himself in the mirror for a couple of minutes: "who's the pimp? yeah you the pimp." he told himself through the mirror."

"He ran out the room like a bat out of hell. He ran downstairs calling out "somebody call 911, pimp under attack."


Lol
Whittier-
14-02-2005, 08:19
*yawn* Reminded me of a crap version of the Ring... and it wasn't that scary. Paragraph form please.
That's all you see eh?
Whittier-
14-02-2005, 08:21
thanks. I put that line in there on purpose.
Town Idiot Idiots
14-02-2005, 08:31
i liked the concept of the story n all, but when i read deeper i realised it was a ring rip off, good stuff, but try and again and when you finish it, read it through, you might notice its a book/movie rip off. By the way i have an excellent scary story it goes....

It was a dark and stormy night, I was watching Scary Movie 3, until... It happened it changed my life... I spilt my beer on some other guy.. This is how my story began.. and I became Beverage Man!! Sadly I broke a fingernail and I went into concussion and I woke up into the year 2005.

THE END (Or is it?) :confused:
Free Soviets
14-02-2005, 08:38
Tommy Thompson
- former governor of wisconsin -

had visited it and was found dead from petrification 5 months later.
Whittier-
14-02-2005, 09:02
- former governor of wisconsin -
thought someone would notice.