NationStates Jolt Archive


which will be the new god?

Green israel
15-11-2004, 20:38
I think he get life and he don't want to die.
please help me he tried to get power. he almost unbeaten.
bad issue, BAD issue. DIE, you fucking issue.

any help, some one?
New Foxxinnia
15-11-2004, 23:35
The language seemed extremely unnecessary. The entire paragraph doesn't make sense, and this isn't even the right forum for this kind of thread. You didn't capitalize in some spots and that annoyed me.

I was satisfied that you avoided using smilies though.

NO.
Ravea
15-11-2004, 23:57
I think he get life and he don't want to die.
please help me he tried to get power. he almost unbeaten.
bad issue, BAD issue. DIE, you fucking issue.

any help, some one?

I have NO idea what you just said!