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Victim's Prayer

Tehok
09-09-2004, 09:24
With all the passion deep within, I express to all the fatigue one man’s ages have pressed upon me here. The pains and aches which the bellows of remorse spark to life within my heart are rife with the sadness and guilt that I have forever suppressed until now. I speak these simple words only to be heard by my own deafened ears, whose powers turn from me due to the agonizing, cold truth that causes my voice to tremble and flee the persecution of my breath like a crisp, dead leaf blown asunder by a woeful gale of pleasant horrors. The discomfort of my uncivil gestations has weighed me down far too long and far to deep for me to bare any longer, and now, gasping for breath in this sailor’s grave made by my own salted tears, I beg forgiveness. I ask of this great price, but I have nothing to return such kindness and love - not home nor fortune nor family can I offer, only my ephemeral emotions can I put to the Creator as sacrifice. Yet I ask of it still, this forgiveness - selfish as it may be - from you, from myself, and above all, from my God, whose love of me I will never understand, but I need. Just to find courage to draw in my next breath, I must know that God will forgive me through the power of the Christ, and that I might find sanctuary in his arms when that final hour comes round at last and I must answer for who I am and what justifies my sentence to paradise. I have abused this vessel to obscene ends, and whatever part of my heart has not been scalded by said viced flames, whatever part still pumps with life and love, I know that it is sorry for the things I have done, and I wish that were enough for me to rest at night, but even my blackest blood does not run thick enough to extinguish the corporal blaze.

My stomach and my consciousness are equally filled to their bursting brims with my lust for physical gratification, for I know that it is true that lust empowers my sloth, and my sloth empowers my gluttony. Thus a triumvirate of three lethal sins, so powerful that they are unreconcilable by man alone, has long been born unto my person, and at last the shame overwhelms my humble and fragile shell bestowed upon my poor, weak, injured soul. My penance I know nothing about, I know only shame for these mortal flaws, and if this shame kills me as I try to right what I have done... then I beg my spirit be set free from this terrible plane at your hands, that I may once know happiness free of my addiction. These abuses lied to me, and they led me to believe that I could be satisfied with my solitude and subtle transgressions. I once thought that it was my mind, alone, being the only one to function in my singular existence, but I am sure that I had knowingly leapt from God’s bridge, established over the stormy waters of free will.

I do not blame my decisions and incoherent justifications of my vices upon the desolation of my mind, for I have always been intelligent enough to make my own choices through mankind’s creation of logic and reason, but I have never been wise enough to look beyond such devices to make the right choices. I have been irresponsible, as so many of my brothers and sisters who walk this world in my times have been, and I have failed miserably to recognize the value of my blessing of life - and yours. I am not a worthless man of clay, but a living, thinking being of flesh and soul - my life, my body, and my will are not the essence of mud, but are the priceless exigencies of a wonderful series of truths. It is this love of truth and faith in the power of the individual that knowingly faces adversity time and again which makes me so vastly value my worth, and it shatters me to think how long I have gone telling myself that it is no one’s business what I do with my gifts, and that one man is not a role model, so my inaction will not contribute to the decay of that and those which I love.

The wages of sin are death? Then I am dying, and I see it in me when I look myself in the eye in the mirror. I see myself, and I see the face of a liar and a thief, parched lips that charm and persuade the most valuable of commodities to be stolen from the unknowing guise of the innocent, my spoils being trust, love and pride. But what’s more hidden in my face, is what must be looked at twice in each eye. I have the volition of a killer, and what I lust for the most is the flesh of those who trespass against me. Of all things I want in my heart, so common is my want for revenge and vindication, calling them in my mind justice and balance, but feeling in my chest the desires born from the womb of hate and spite. I wish to be free of this the most, I want to forgive and be forgiven as the Lord’s prayer says. What God can forgive my trespasses, if I cannot forgive those who trespass against me? Do I so deserve punishment eternal? Do they? I want to give in to my passions and embrace the hate that dwells inside me, but I remind myself that no God could possibly have the wrath that lurks within me and corrupts me. Piece by piece, piece by piece, piece by piece, I have torn myself anew and rekindled the harms done unto me as a child and a youth. Only the mightiest of Lords may bridle me into penitence and calm, and so I have been. I do not know what my master wishes of me, but as his beast of burden I am prepared to plough the fields through rock and clay from dawn to dusk to dawn, and make it so that my brothers and sisters may attain illumination, and feel the peaceful touch of God’s hand upon their filthy mane.

My heart shall heal, and my love will ring true from the greatest bell of Notre Dame, for my Christ’s love is the balm that soothes the viper stings of misjudgement in my ethereal exigency. This I swear, forever and ever, my witnesses being the flawless perception of God and my own crippled stare, that I shall lust no more. I shall be slothful and be wanting never again, for I gain my power from him, amen. Instead of sloth, gluttony, and lust, these three oaths will be my new addictions.
1. To live
2. To love
3. To give
Terminalia
09-09-2004, 09:39
God loves the sinner who has truly repented even more than the virtuous man, stick to your new life and dont go back to the old one, ever.
Monkeypimp
09-09-2004, 09:46
My Church (www.apatheticagnostic.com)
Keruvalia
09-09-2004, 09:48
Yeah ... all the world needs is another Christian.

No matter. It is your choice, but you're still insane.

Lust?! Just how in the hell can lust be a sin? Call it "passion" or refer to yourself as "gregarious".

"All humans are subject to deep passions, only fools ignore them just to call themselves holy." - Keruvalia II 6:19

Someday you will face God and be held accountable for all of the fruits of creation that you refused to enjoy.

You now sin worse than you ever did before. Congratulations. Seek help.
Tehok
09-09-2004, 09:53
In my meditations as an atheist, I learned that true morality is the product of empathy for suffering and humility. To want to be and do good is not enough. Discipline is required to know pain and why it is evil.
BackwoodsSquatches
09-09-2004, 10:18
Forgive me, but...



ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ.......
Tehok
09-09-2004, 10:19
Perfectly understandable. I should have added "Zzzzz" as an option on the poll.
BackwoodsSquatches
09-09-2004, 10:23
Its not that the subject wasnt deep, or thought provoking....

Its just that your prose was too...........elaborate.
Really...it was a little pretentious.

However, Im no Oscar Wilde.

Apologies.
Tehok
09-09-2004, 10:41
I'm not Oscar Wilde, either. I'm not even Lucille Balle. I was literally half conscious when I wrote it all out is what happened. Not sleepy, not stoned, just peaceful. Thanks for sitting through the first sentence. :)
Janathoras
09-09-2004, 10:47
Tooo muuuuch teeext... *brain implodes* Naw, in all reality, I actually read it through. I think you're insane, but then who can stay sane in this world? ;)
Chess Squares
09-09-2004, 11:15
God loves the sinner who has truly repented even more than the virtuous man, stick to your new life and dont go back to the old one, ever.
born again christians = bullshit
Terminalia
09-09-2004, 11:54
born again christians = bullshit

yawn trips Chess squares into path of oncoming bus
Chess Squares
09-09-2004, 13:04
yawn trips Chess squares into path of oncoming buswhich just proves the point

a born again christian just sins for god
DHomme
09-09-2004, 13:11
which just proves the point

a born again christian just sins for god
and a militant atheist just pisses everybody off
Chess Squares
09-09-2004, 13:12
and a militant atheist just pisses everybody off
you: - "oh no, some one excersing the use of the big mushy thing in their head. Discredit him, discredit him!!!"

im sure i dont need to tell you where to stick it
Tehok
09-09-2004, 13:13
You're right, Chess Squares. It was wrong of Terminalia to push you in front of a bus. Good luck in your recovery. I hope that you someday learn to walk again.
New Vinnland
09-09-2004, 18:18
Disavow Jesus and let Thor into your heart!
Thor is Lord, blessed be his name. Amen.
Lower Aquatica
09-09-2004, 19:20
you: - "oh no, some one excersing the use of the big mushy thing in their head. Discredit him, discredit him!!!"

im sure i dont need to tell you where to stick it

Actually, Chess -- and this is speaking as an agnostic -- I'm afraid it's because at times, whether you are aware of it or not, you are indeed coming across as a dicksmack.

Dialing it back a notch may actually get people to listen to you. Just a thought.
Terminalia
10-09-2004, 03:12
You're right, Chess Squares. It was wrong of Terminalia to push you in front of a bus. Good luck in your recovery. I hope that you someday learn to walk again.

Sneaks into hospital disquised as nurse and slips a grenade under Chess squares pillow
(giggles)
Terminalia
10-09-2004, 03:17
Disavow Jesus and let Thor into your heart!
Thor is Lord, blessed be his name. Amen.
reminds me of a joke, 'the mighty Thor one day is flying around the clouds one day when he spots a comely wench sunnying herself on ariver bank, with out further adue he alights near her and promptly mounts her for hours on end.
At the end he says to her Hi Im Thor, she says Your Thor, Im so Thor I can hardly tawk!
Heathengrad
10-09-2004, 06:41
reminds me of a joke, 'the mighty Thor one day is flying around the clouds one day when he spots a comely wench sunnying herself on ariver bank, with out further adue he alights near her and promptly mounts her for hours on end.
At the end he says to her Hi Im Thor, she says Your Thor, Im so Thor I can hardly tawk!

Is that a Bob Saget original?
Tehok
10-09-2004, 07:29
Couldn't be. The man coasted on the hard work and sweat of Dave Coulier for too many years, dulling his ability to write jokes of that caliber.
Terminalia
10-09-2004, 07:57
Is that a Bob Saget original?

Whos that?