NationStates Jolt Archive

I believe that politicians could use rap, a poetry to influence other communities of voters. This is just something I thought up, thinking what if this war isn't over.

Bush talks Iraq but our government's corrupter,
and prophets been sizing the end all in the Middle East.
Look at your meal. It could be your last supper.
Now enjoy your feast!
Cities in shambles, all heart beats cease.
With this war on terror we're taking a gamble.
Did you really think we could defeat an invisible beast.
They're the predators, we're the prey.
They swallow many times weight.
Detach their jaw, like the demonly snake.
Bush is rolling dice, with our lives at stake.
2 dies, with evil eyes. Do you think we'll survive?
Weapons of mass destruction, full of lies.
Oil sumption's, the only reason our men have to die.
Now we talk reconstruction, with France first in line???
Tell me our country is not full of corruption,
when we trade lives for dollar signs.

It is still a work in progress but I hope you get the idea. World Peace!

whoa demo!!
polish that thing up and send it out!
they dont need another boring speech writer, they need a RAPPER!!

rap is too 90s--they need to try something new

oh now come on, we're talking politics here, 60s style rock and roll is cutting edge for them

For politics - no.

For massive amounts of humor quality while attempting to get a message across - yes.

Well done.

Wait a minute, I think I saw this movie. Oh yeah, Bullworth.

Har, you want Ashcroft to add rapping to his already distinguished repertoire? :lol:

Well, I watched one of Jack Layton's Chinese-language ads (you gotta do something while waiting on the server) and he sounded rhythmic, like he was rapping.

Well what do you guys think of this peace in particular?? Any feedback on how to make it any better?? I'll even source you if I ever make it big. :lol: Peace...