Hobbslandia
30-12-2004, 10:13
First off, the marketing worked. I found NationStates, truly enjoy the site, and as a result received the Jennifer Government novel in my stocking.
I finished the book last night about 5am. (I have a tendency to get right into a book and not stop reading unless I fall asleep)
Overall the book is excellent. The premise is not unbelievable as corporations are gaining more and more power every day, and yes I carry an AirMiles card that I use when I make purchases.
One bugaboo, Chapter 56. 2 F/A-18's shoot down a Boeing 737 that is heading Westbound from England out over the Atlantic. When I first read this I just couldn't catch what on Earth was going on. What could this have to do with the story?
That question was answered in Chapter 60. The President and 2/3 of the Government upper echelon went down on route to Washington.
A Boeing 737 is a short range commuter jet. I am very well versed in the aircraft having worked for an airline that fly them for nearly 20 years.
A 737 in full economy seating (Knees in your chin) can hold 122 passengers.
It is unlikely that as a Presidential aircraft it would be in this configuration. There was room on the flight (chapter 60) So this must be a very very small "upper echelon" And this echelon must be very hands-on because a chief in England no longer knows who his boss is.
Why is the Aircraft heading West? The 737 is not capable of flying across the Atlantic, with passengers, without refuelling. The NRA didn't need to shoot it down, it was doomed to run out of gas anyway. And you don't fly West even if you are capable of flying London-Washington nonstop. You fly NNW crossing the Atlantic coast over Scotland. This 737's only hope of making it was a fuel stop in Iceland and Gander,NF so again, they are going the wrong way.
To make the chapters sensible, the aircraft should have at least been a Boeing 767, heck even our Canadian Prime Minister has one of those and the aircraft should have been heading north. The F/A-18's should have been based in Scotland as Luton (SE England) doesn't work either.
Hope I don't seem picky, just a point. I made a similar observation over Stephen King's first Gunslinger/Dark Tower book when the inflight crew couldn't get into a washroom onboard an aircraft because a character had locked the door. (Why do you think there is a flight attendant call button in there if the crew can't unlock the door from the outside)
Anyway, really enjoyed the book, thanks Max and I will look forward to reading more of your work.
I finished the book last night about 5am. (I have a tendency to get right into a book and not stop reading unless I fall asleep)
Overall the book is excellent. The premise is not unbelievable as corporations are gaining more and more power every day, and yes I carry an AirMiles card that I use when I make purchases.
One bugaboo, Chapter 56. 2 F/A-18's shoot down a Boeing 737 that is heading Westbound from England out over the Atlantic. When I first read this I just couldn't catch what on Earth was going on. What could this have to do with the story?
That question was answered in Chapter 60. The President and 2/3 of the Government upper echelon went down on route to Washington.
A Boeing 737 is a short range commuter jet. I am very well versed in the aircraft having worked for an airline that fly them for nearly 20 years.
A 737 in full economy seating (Knees in your chin) can hold 122 passengers.
It is unlikely that as a Presidential aircraft it would be in this configuration. There was room on the flight (chapter 60) So this must be a very very small "upper echelon" And this echelon must be very hands-on because a chief in England no longer knows who his boss is.
Why is the Aircraft heading West? The 737 is not capable of flying across the Atlantic, with passengers, without refuelling. The NRA didn't need to shoot it down, it was doomed to run out of gas anyway. And you don't fly West even if you are capable of flying London-Washington nonstop. You fly NNW crossing the Atlantic coast over Scotland. This 737's only hope of making it was a fuel stop in Iceland and Gander,NF so again, they are going the wrong way.
To make the chapters sensible, the aircraft should have at least been a Boeing 767, heck even our Canadian Prime Minister has one of those and the aircraft should have been heading north. The F/A-18's should have been based in Scotland as Luton (SE England) doesn't work either.
Hope I don't seem picky, just a point. I made a similar observation over Stephen King's first Gunslinger/Dark Tower book when the inflight crew couldn't get into a washroom onboard an aircraft because a character had locked the door. (Why do you think there is a flight attendant call button in there if the crew can't unlock the door from the outside)
Anyway, really enjoyed the book, thanks Max and I will look forward to reading more of your work.