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Draft: The Civil Transportation Safety Act

Groot Gouda
01-09-2005, 07:47
Comments are welcome. This resolution has been authored by several people in the IDU and Nederland.

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The Civil Transportation Safety Act

WHEREAS certain civil water voyages, civil space flights and civil flights originate, pass through, pass above or terminate at different nations, and

FURTHERMORE citizens from third nations are often aboard these craft,

AWARE that these craft often cross into international waters, international airspace or beyond the stratosphere, and

RECOGNISING that the safety of those aboard and on land are the concern of the nations where the craft departs from, travels above, travels through, arrives at and passengers hold citizenship of, and

AWARE that safety is a shared responsibility of all parties.

THEREFORE, in the interests of promoting international travel, trade and, most of all, safety by air, space and water, the NationStates United Nations

RESOLVES that the safety of civil craft travelling through water, air and space between or above one or more nations is the responsibility of the United Nations Civil Transportation Authority (UNCTA).

1. The United Nations Civil Transportation Authority, chosen from among the membership of the UN General Assembly, shall create and publicise safety standards regarding travel by civilian watercraft, civilian aircraft and civilian spacecraft between UN nations; this includes any non-governmental freight-carriers. These technical standards shall be created by experts under the direction of the UNCTA and may include such items as:

* type, number and position of lifeboats
* docking, refuelling and other port procedures
* number, length and position of runways or launch pads
* type, number and procedures for air traffic control and navigational aids
* baggage, on-board crew, on-ground crew and passenger screening procedures
* type and number of on-ground and in-flight fire fighting equipment
* number and arrangement seating and storage compartments
* flight crew training, staffing numbers and certification
* type and storage of fuel
* what constitutes a major modification or an emergency.

2. These standards shall be reviewed at least every two-and-a-half years, and may be reviewed earlier in response to transportation mishaps or technological advances.

3. At least every two years and after every major modification, the UNCTA will certify which ports, airports, spaceports, watercraft, aircraft and spacecraft are in compliance with its regulations. The UNCTA will maintain a list of all applications for the certification of watercraft, aircraft, spacecraft, ports, airports and spaceports. The positive or negative results of these applications shall be made available to all nations and citizens.

4. Each certified and uncertified craft on an international trip must file a plan with every nation along its proposed route. Any nation along a route may deny certified or uncertified craft free passage through national waters/national air(space), or docking rights, or both, with exception during emergency landings or dockings. This denial may apply generally or on a case by case basis. Where an uncertified craft has been denied passage, landing or both, no retaliatory denial against the denying nation may be levelled. Certified craft may not be denied passage or landing once underway, except during a UNCTA emergency.

5. The UNCTA status, which is how well each port complies with the regulations, of each port, airport and spaceport shall be available to UN nations and citizens. Any nation or individual port, airport or spaceport authority may deny landing rights to an uncertified craft. This denial may apply generally or on a case by case basis.

6. In an emergency, UNCTA certified craft may attempt to dock or land at any civilian or military port, airport or spaceport after following UNCTA procedures for notifying the proper authorities of such an emergency.

7. Following a successful docking or landing at a civilian facility, the receiving nation or authority may recoup its expenses. Costs, based on UNCTA rates, shall be paid by the owner of the craft or the nation in which it is based.

8. Following an unsuccessful docking or landing at a civilian facility, the receiving nation or authority may recoup its losses and expenses based on the cost of reconstruction, indemnification for injury and loss of life, and expenses incurred until the crash. Costs shall be paid by the owner of the craft or the nation in which it is based.

9. Following a successful docking or landing at a military facility, the receiving nation may impound the craft and its cargo, and levy a charge no greater than the cost of the craft which made the emergency landing. Neither crew nor passengers may imprisoned for this act.

10. Following an unsuccessful docking or landing at a military facility, the receiving nation may impound the craft and its cargo, and levy a charge no greater than ten times the cost of the craft which crashed, plus indemnification for injury and loss of life. Costs shall be paid by the owner of the craft or the nation in which it is based.

11. A civil craft may not be intentionally damaged or destroyed by military means once it broadcasts its UNCTA emergency status. The owner of the craft of the nation in which it is based may levy a charge no greater than ten times the cost of the craft which was destroyed, plus indemnification for injury and loss of life against the violator of this provision.

12. The UNCTA will also compile and publicise a list of civilian freight and passenger transportation owners whose craft or facilities have often unsuccessfully sought certification. This list will exclude companies whose craft or facilities would fail the UNCTA certification process but have not applied for certification.
Holyboy and the 666s
01-09-2005, 21:18
1. The United Nations Civil Transportation Authority, chosen from among the membership of the UN General Assembly,

I quote the rules for proposals: http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=420465

Creating Stuff

Committees may be created, as long as certain things are kept in mind: nations do not sit on committees, they are staffed by mystical beings that instantly spring into existance and live only to serve on said committee. Committees are also bound by the above MetaGame rules. Also, keep in mind that Committees are additions to Proposals; they shouldn't be all the Proposal does.

If you submit this proposal, you would have to change this line, or delete it. I suggest deleting it from the proposal all together, rather then changing it.
Groot Gouda
02-09-2005, 07:56
Creating the committee is not all the resolution does. Some minor modifications might be necessary to make this more clear, but it's not illegal as it is now I think.
Enn
02-09-2005, 08:35
Have you checked the character count? I haven't read through it thoroughly yet, but it looks to be extremely long.
Forgottenlands
03-09-2005, 05:16
UN Gnomes sit on committees. The General Assembly, General Secretary nor any other member or group of members can be a part in either the selection of or performing the tasks of the committee in question. That is my interpretation from the rules - though you might wish to check with Hack.

I'll go into a detailed analysis at a later time.
Fishyguy
03-09-2005, 07:00
(From 4.) Any nation along a route may deny certified or uncertified craft free passage
So, you can deny certified craft free passage, but not stop their passage?
(From 4.) Certified craft may not be denied passage or landing once underway, except during a UNCTA emergency.
I was confused by this statement at first. Is it supposed to mean a craft cannot be denied passage or landing unless there is another craft with an emergency en route?
11. A civil craft may not be intentionally damaged or destroyed by military means once it broadcasts its UNCTA emergency status.
This statement, combined with the ending of 4. worries me. What if a craft entered restricted military space, or space not certified for passage? It could be considered an issue of national security, and the State could not legally stop it. They could be the victim of a terrorist attack because suspicious activity was not halted immediately, even if that means destroying the suspicious craft. I believe it is the State's right to protect itself first, above any transportation regulations.

Have you checked the character count? I haven't read through it thoroughly yet, but it looks to be extremely long.
I agree, You might need to cut the bulleted list after 1. Besides that, 5. is nothing but a restatement of 3. and 4. I don't believe it clarifies anything or provides any new requirements. I would try to shorten the proposal by incorporating some of 7-10 into two papragraphs. You could combine the successful/unsuccessful paragraphs (7-9, 8-10) or combine the civilian/military paragraphs (7-8, 9-10). I realize any cuts hurt clarification, but it might be too lenghty to stay as it is.
Athens and Midlands
03-09-2005, 11:49
I feel it is ready for the UN. Can I advocate on behalf of you as I'd like it compiled for approval?
Athens and Midlands
03-09-2005, 12:01
Using all the comments, the proposal might look like this:

The Civil Transportation Safety Act

WHEREAS certain civil water voyages, civil space flights and civil flights originate, pass through, pass above or terminate at different nations, and

FURTHERMORE citizens from third nations are often aboard these craft,

AWARE that these craft often cross into international waters, international airspace or beyond the stratosphere, and

RECOGNISING that the safety of those aboard and on land are the concern of the nations where the craft departs from, travels above, travels through, arrives at and passengers hold citizenship of, and

AWARE that safety is a shared responsibility of all parties.

THEREFORE, in the interests of promoting international travel, trade and, most of all, safety by air, space and water, the NationStates United Nations

RESOLVES that the safety of civil craft travelling through water, air and space between or above one or more nations is the responsibility of the United Nations Civil Transportation Authority (UNCTA).

1. The United Nations Civil Transportation Authority, chosen from among the membership of the UN General Assembly, shall create and publish safety standards regarding travel by any civilian forms of transport between UN-member states, in which it includes any non-governmental freight-carriers. These technical standards shall be created by experts under the direction of the UNCTA and may include such items as:

* type, number and position of lifeboats
* docking, refuelling and other port procedures
* number, length and position of runways or launch pads
* type, number and procedures for air traffic control and navigational aids
* baggage, on-board crew, on-ground crew and passenger screening procedures
* type and number of on-ground and in-flight fire fighting equipment
* number and arrangement seating and storage compartments
* flight crew training, staffing numbers and certification
* type and storage of fuel
* what constitutes a major modification or an emergency.

2. These standards shall be reviewed at least every two-and-a-half years, and may be reviewed earlier in response to transportation mishaps or technological advances.

3. At least every two years and after every major modification, the UNCTA will certify which ports, airports, spaceports, watercraft, aircraft and spacecraft are in compliance with its regulations. The UNCTA will maintain a list of all applications for the certification of watercraft, aircraft, spacecraft, ports, airports and spaceports. The positive or negative results of these applications shall be made available to all nations and citizens.

4. Each certified and uncertified craft on an international trip must file a plan with every nation along its proposed route. Any nation along a route may deny certified or uncertified craft free passage through national waters/national air(space), or docking rights, or both, with exception during emergency landings or dockings. This denial may apply generally or on a case by case basis. Where an uncertified craft has been denied passage, landing or both, no retaliatory denial against the denying nation may be levelled. Certified craft may not be denied passage or landing once underway, except during a UNCTA emergency.

5. The UNCTA status, which is how well each port complies with the regulations, of each port, airport and spaceport shall be available to UN nations and citizens. Any nation or individual port, airport or spaceport authority may deny landing rights to an uncertified craft. This denial may apply generally or on a case by case basis.

6. In an emergency, UNCTA certified craft may attempt to dock or land at any civilian or military port, airport or spaceport after following UNCTA procedures for notifying the proper authorities of such an emergency.

7. Following a successful docking or landing at a civilian facility, the receiving nation or authority may recoup its expenses. Costs, based on UNCTA rates, shall be paid by the owner of the craft or the nation in which it is based.

8. Following an unsuccessful docking or landing at a civilian facility, the receiving nation or authority may recoup its losses and expenses based on the cost of reconstruction, indemnification for injury and loss of life, and expenses incurred until the crash. Costs shall be paid by the owner of the craft or the nation in which it is based.

9. Following a successful docking or landing at a military facility, the receiving nation may impound the craft and its cargo, and levy a charge no greater than the cost of the craft which made the emergency landing. Neither crew nor passengers may imprisoned for this act.

10. Following an unsuccessful docking or landing at a military facility, the receiving nation may impound the craft and its cargo, and levy a charge no greater than ten times the cost of the craft which crashed, plus indemnification for injury and loss of life. Costs shall be paid by the owner of the craft or the nation in which it is based.

11. A civil craft may not be intentionally damaged or destroyed by military means once it broadcasts its UNCTA emergency status. The owner of the craft of the nation in which it is based may levy a charge no greater than ten times the cost of the craft which was destroyed, plus indemnification for injury and loss of life against the violator of this provision.

12. The UNCTA will also compile and publicise a list of civilian freight and passenger transportation owners whose craft or facilities have often unsuccessfully sought certification. This list will exclude companies whose craft or facilities would fail the UNCTA certification process but have not applied for certification.

According to Holyboy and the 666s, the proposal might look like this, without the original 'article 1':

The Civil Transportation Safety Act

WHEREAS certain civil water voyages, civil space flights and civil flights originate, pass through, pass above or terminate at different nations, and

FURTHERMORE citizens from third nations are often aboard these craft,

AWARE that these craft often cross into international waters, international airspace or beyond the stratosphere, and

RECOGNISING that the safety of those aboard and on land are the concern of the nations where the craft departs from, travels above, travels through, arrives at and passengers hold citizenship of, and

AWARE that safety is a shared responsibility of all parties.

THEREFORE, in the interests of promoting international travel, trade and, most of all, safety by air, space and water, the NationStates United Nations

RESOLVES that the safety of civil craft travelling through water, air and space between or above one or more nations is the responsibility of the United Nations Civil Transportation Authority (UNCTA).

1. These standards shall be reviewed at least every two-and-a-half years, and may be reviewed earlier in response to transportation mishaps or technological advances.

2. At least every two years and after every major modification, the UNCTA will certify which ports, airports, spaceports, watercraft, aircraft and spacecraft are in compliance with its regulations. The UNCTA will maintain a list of all applications for the certification of watercraft, aircraft, spacecraft, ports, airports and spaceports. The positive or negative results of these applications shall be made available to all nations and citizens.

3. Each certified and uncertified craft on an international trip must file a plan with every nation along its proposed route. Any nation along a route may deny certified or uncertified craft free passage through national waters/national air(space), or docking rights, or both, with exception during emergency landings or dockings. This denial may apply generally or on a case by case basis. Where an uncertified craft has been denied passage, landing or both, no retaliatory denial against the denying nation may be levelled. Certified craft may not be denied passage or landing once underway, except during a UNCTA emergency.

4. The UNCTA status, which is how well each port complies with the regulations, of each port, airport and spaceport shall be available to UN nations and citizens. Any nation or individual

port, airport or spaceport authority may deny landing rights to an uncertified craft. This denial may apply generally or on a case by case basis.

5. In an emergency, UNCTA certified craft may attempt to dock or land at any civilian or military port, airport or spaceport after following UNCTA procedures for notifying the proper authorities of such an emergency.

6. Following a successful docking or landing at a civilian facility, the receiving nation or authority may recoup its expenses. Costs, based on UNCTA rates, shall be paid by the owner of the craft or the nation in which it is based.

7. Following an unsuccessful docking or landing at a civilian facility, the receiving nation or

authority may recoup its losses and expenses based on the cost of reconstruction, indemnification for injury and loss of life, and expenses incurred until the crash. Costs shall be paid by the owner of the craft or the nation in which it is based.

8. Following a successful docking or landing at a military facility, the receiving nation may impound the craft and its cargo, and levy a charge no greater than the cost of the craft which made the emergency landing. Neither crew nor passengers may imprisoned for this act.

9. Following an unsuccessful docking or landing at a military facility, the receiving nation may impound the craft and its cargo, and levy a charge no greater than ten times the cost of the craft which crashed, plus indemnification for injury and loss of life. Costs shall be paid by the owner of the craft or the nation in which it is based.

10. A civil craft may not be intentionally damaged or destroyed by military means once it broadcasts its UNCTA emergency status. The owner of the craft of the nation in which it is based may levy a charge no greater than ten times the cost of the craft which was destroyed, plus indemnification for injury and loss of life against the violator of this provision.

11. The UNCTA will also compile and publicise a list of civilian freight and passenger transportation owners whose craft or facilities have often unsuccessfully sought certification.

This list will exclude companies whose craft or facilities would fail the UNCTA certification process but have not applied for certification.

I don't know which is the best for the voting room.
Reformentia
03-09-2005, 12:05
That's pretty near 5,700 characters with spaces...

I believe the longest anyone has ever managed to slip past the character limit before this was in the 3,400 range.

Edit: the original, not those last versions... which are 5,600 and 4,600 (approx.) respectively.
Athens and Midlands
03-09-2005, 12:06
Seriously, I had to try to make it clear...

Edit: I'll put it up before the delegates now! I can't wait. :)

(By the way, it is slightly edited according to forum thread comments)
Groot Gouda
08-09-2005, 21:59
I'll take this back to my region with the original authors for some finetuning. Athens and Midlands, you're welcome to join us in improving it, the more people the less work! After that, we'll post it here one more time for the things we might have missed and we can start campaigning.
Love and esterel
08-09-2005, 22:13
That's pretty near 5,700 characters with spaces...

I believe the longest anyone has ever managed to slip past the character limit before this was in the 3,400 range.

Edit: the original, not those last versions... which are 5,600 and 4,600 (approx.) respectively.

According to microsoft word, the longest "UN resolution" is:
#25 The Child Protection Act
http://www.nationstates.net/cgi-bin/index.cgi/page=UN_past_resolutions/start=24

characters (without spaces)= 2938
characters (with spaces)= 3513
Forgottenlands
08-09-2005, 22:16
I swear, the limit must be 3000 without spaces
Love and esterel
08-09-2005, 23:35
I swear, the limit must be 3000 without spaces

ok thanks a lot
Waterana
09-09-2005, 01:00
More like 3,200, according to my sources.

That was my answer when I asked the question about the character limit while drafting CRPW. It was accepted by the system ok and I was only about 50 characters or less under that limit :).