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How do i find out why my proposal was deleted
Planetary Defense

I understand from all the feedback i got on my proposal that it was lacking specific details and i got very good feedback that will help me, but the moderator I assumed deleted it and i want to know how to find out why, what was there reason for deleting, the more feedback i get will help in future proposal writing.
Thanks

Master Tom
Orions Belt

Couldnt say why, could you put a copy up for me to see, maybe I could help.

already deleted my copy
:(

Well then, there ya go, no one can help you now, lol :)

I wasn't the Moderator who deleted this proposal, so I can't be certain. However, from the title of your proposal, it's my guess that you tried to establish some kind of military force that would be under the direct control of the United Nations. This is not allowed under NationStates rules, as "Global Disarmament"/"International Security" proposals affect military spending by UN member nations; the UN itself does not maintain its own military.

--The Modified Democratic States of Cogitation
NationStates Games Moderator

I wasn't the Moderator who deleted this proposal, so I can't be certain. However, from the title of your proposal, it's my guess that you tried to establish some kind of military force that would be under the direct control of the United Nations. This is not allowed under NationStates rules, as "Global Disarmament"/"International Security" proposals affect military spending by UN member nations; the UN itself does not maintain its own military.

--The Modified Democratic States of Cogitation
NationStates Games Moderator


It was a proposal for defense against rouge comets or asteriods, it was listed in the International Security and rated mild, unforunately i was a bit vague and was hoping the mod who deleted it would give me his imput.
Thanks

Master Tom
Orions Belt

I might have deleted it, I don't remember. If I did, I probably sent you a telegram explaining why. If you received a telegram, please post it here.

I might have deleted it, I don't remember. If I did, I probably sent you a telegram explaining why. If you received a telegram, please post it here.


I Never received a telegram.

Don't proposals disappear from the list after a period of time? Most likely your proposal was up there for too long and wasn't being approved so it was cleared of the list.

Planetary Defense
A resolution to improve world security by boosting police and military budgets.


Category: International Security
Strength: Mild
Proposed by: Master Tom

Description: A Proposal For The Protection of our World

We The People of this Great World...

-snip-

Voting Ends: Sat Nov 27 2004
emphasis added

Unfortunately, your proposal timed out.The positive thing is that you probably gathered over 40-50 approvals which is grounds for resubmission. If you can. keep the list of delegates that approve of your proposals. Keep telegramming them, every time you resubmit. I personlly see nothing illegal about this proposal. It just "timed out".

Good Luck with the resubmission.