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Help The People Proposal submitted to the un today

The babylonian empire
19-10-2004, 23:51
This peoposal if passed (and i think it needs to be) will help thousands of starving and dying kids around this globe.

Please give this proposal your support i dont see a reason why not to itson page 16 in proposals and its called Help The people

Thank you for reading this now goto the proposal and give it your approval

Sincerely,
The Dictator Of The Babylonian Empire!
San Mabus
20-10-2004, 00:30
Paste the text here, willya?
The babylonian empire
20-10-2004, 02:01
Help The People
A resolution to improve worldwide human and civil rights.


Category: Human Rights
Strength: Significant
Proposed by: The babylonian empire

Description: We Need a resolution to help the people living in the slums of this earth. We have people living with kids and no food or water no place to live while others are sitting in palaces in with exery luxury of the known world.

We need to strengthen our bedgets to help these people we need more funding to bring food and shelter to the helpless citizens who are dying in the streets because they had no money to feed themselves. I want to increade humanatarian aid around the globe.

I URGE YOU TO VOTE FOR THIS please think of the kids think of how many we could save if we just strengthen out humantarian budgets help your citizens ladies and gentelman DO THE RIGHT THING.

Approvals: 1 (Coolet)

Status: Lacking Support (requires 135 more approvals)

Voting Ends: Fri Oct 22 2004
Unfree People
20-10-2004, 03:34
Do the right thing and use a spell checker. Sheesh.
Man or Astroman
20-10-2004, 18:37
This proposal is an appeal for a proposal as opposed to actually being one itself.

Needs more work.
Eudeminea
20-10-2004, 18:47
Agreed. perhaps someone with more knowlege of proposal writing could help you draft a better version that would most certainly have a better chance of getting aproved