Dimitaria
11-04-2006, 00:00
In the description of the Rogue Nation of Zilm (which I have pasted at the end of the post), I noticed that the first paragraph states the nation is ruled by a small, efficient government, while the second paragraph starts "The enormous government concentrates mainly...". This is an incosistency that I thought I'd point out.
Also inconsistent seems the fact that the nation is labeled capitalist paradise, yet its description states that the private sector is "small".
Anyways.., just trying to be helpful, so hopefully these will get fixed.
Thanks,
Dimitar
The rogue president of the rogue nation of Dimitaria
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The Rogue Nation of Zilm is a huge, environmentally stunning nation, remarkable for its compulsory military service. Its hard-nosed, hard-working population of 235 million are either ruled by a small, efficient government or a conglomerate of multinational corporations; it's difficult to tell which.
The enormous government concentrates mainly on Defence, although Education and the Environment are secondary priorities. Citizens pay a flat income tax of 28%. A small private sector is dominated by the Information Technology industry.
Reporters often lose their jobs over fact-checking errors, roads are often attended by round-the-clock construction crews, graffiti artists spend lengthy periods of time in jail, and mobile phone masts are being erected all over the country. Crime -- especially youth-related -- is a major problem, and the police force struggles against a lack of funding and a high mortality rate. Zilm's national animal is the pheonix, which frolics freely in the nation's many lush forests, and its currency is the gold coin.
Zilm is ranked 6th in the region and 74,303rd in the world for Largest Welfare Programs (per capita).
Also inconsistent seems the fact that the nation is labeled capitalist paradise, yet its description states that the private sector is "small".
Anyways.., just trying to be helpful, so hopefully these will get fixed.
Thanks,
Dimitar
The rogue president of the rogue nation of Dimitaria
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The Rogue Nation of Zilm is a huge, environmentally stunning nation, remarkable for its compulsory military service. Its hard-nosed, hard-working population of 235 million are either ruled by a small, efficient government or a conglomerate of multinational corporations; it's difficult to tell which.
The enormous government concentrates mainly on Defence, although Education and the Environment are secondary priorities. Citizens pay a flat income tax of 28%. A small private sector is dominated by the Information Technology industry.
Reporters often lose their jobs over fact-checking errors, roads are often attended by round-the-clock construction crews, graffiti artists spend lengthy periods of time in jail, and mobile phone masts are being erected all over the country. Crime -- especially youth-related -- is a major problem, and the police force struggles against a lack of funding and a high mortality rate. Zilm's national animal is the pheonix, which frolics freely in the nation's many lush forests, and its currency is the gold coin.
Zilm is ranked 6th in the region and 74,303rd in the world for Largest Welfare Programs (per capita).