Pablicosta
11-01-2008, 01:01
This is the start of my return to the RP scene here on Nationstates. I've been out for nearly a year, so no doubt I'll be very rusty. Any comments and participation is welcome, of course.
I should point out that Pablicosta has been living under a corrupt left wing government for 2 years now, one which demands total independence from the rest of the World. This is the story of revolution, the start of which is in a basement within the capitol, Pablicosta.
As the sun slipped past the horizon at the end of 1st street, Pablicosta City, 3 young men sat around a round table. They looked as every Class 3 Pablicostan looked these days, the green work overalls, a duffel bag, black and a cap, black. All provided by the state.
You never see a Class 3 Citizen smile, the only people who smile are the Class 6 Citizens and The Chancellor. Society was supposed to be classless and unified under the left wing Elite Party. As that very thought passed through Hans's mind he let out a small chuckle, everything was supposed to be so good he thought as he watched his warm breath rising through the cold air.
The man sitting across from Hans lifted his head and put his hand to his forehead, and in his hoarse tone said "They won't come you know Hans, it's a pipe dream. You know it as well as I".
"Henry, they'll be here, I promise you. They heard the call, and they'll be here. Soon. Here-" said Hans, an optimistic, almost naive pip to his voice, "take some more vodka, I don't want it." Even though it was illegal to consume alcohol in Pablicosta, the group had managed to procure some from a party of border smugglers. Henry had taken the glass of vodka and as he prepared to take a sip of the vile stuff, he wiped some of the yellow grime from the window beside him. No light came into the basement room, but he could make out one of the huge government advertising boards by the street outside. The slogan was written in letters 10ft high and it read:
"NO ALCOHOL, NO PROBLEM"
Next to it was an empty noose. As Henry took his long awaited sip, the third man piped up;
"You best enjoy that Henry my boy, the boys who got it for us were blown up by a border patrol this morning".
Boris was notorious for knowing almost everything that happened in the huge country, and even this demoralizing comment amused the other 2 plotters quite a lot. Just as the minor furore died down there was a loud banging at the door.
"It's them! We're done for! Damnit Hans! Damnit!" yelled Henry as he stood abruptly, a little too abruptly in fact as his head thundered into one of the concrete beams supporting the floor above them. He fell back to his seat, his eyes slightly glazed, and stayed there. Without him, Hans and Boris picked up 2 pistols from the table, placing Henry's out of sight on the floor as they approached the door.
"Ready?" asked Boris tentatively, "if it isn't friendly, it's been an honour knowing you"
"It is friendly Boris, it has to be them" Hans said confidently as he took up his place on the wall beside the door, his pistol drawn and loaded. Just in case he told himself. Boris had his gun concealed, but was no less ready to fire should the door be hiding the Inquisitors or worse. He pulled the door open quickly and violently and was immediately by 5 men bursting in, each holding a rifle and wearing the standard Class 3 uniforms.
"Bloody hell" whispered Boris "It's really happening. Bloody hell!".
"Comrades" shouted one of the new arrivals as he closed the door and looked round the room, "shall we get started?".
To be continued...Dun dun dunnnn
I should point out that Pablicosta has been living under a corrupt left wing government for 2 years now, one which demands total independence from the rest of the World. This is the story of revolution, the start of which is in a basement within the capitol, Pablicosta.
As the sun slipped past the horizon at the end of 1st street, Pablicosta City, 3 young men sat around a round table. They looked as every Class 3 Pablicostan looked these days, the green work overalls, a duffel bag, black and a cap, black. All provided by the state.
You never see a Class 3 Citizen smile, the only people who smile are the Class 6 Citizens and The Chancellor. Society was supposed to be classless and unified under the left wing Elite Party. As that very thought passed through Hans's mind he let out a small chuckle, everything was supposed to be so good he thought as he watched his warm breath rising through the cold air.
The man sitting across from Hans lifted his head and put his hand to his forehead, and in his hoarse tone said "They won't come you know Hans, it's a pipe dream. You know it as well as I".
"Henry, they'll be here, I promise you. They heard the call, and they'll be here. Soon. Here-" said Hans, an optimistic, almost naive pip to his voice, "take some more vodka, I don't want it." Even though it was illegal to consume alcohol in Pablicosta, the group had managed to procure some from a party of border smugglers. Henry had taken the glass of vodka and as he prepared to take a sip of the vile stuff, he wiped some of the yellow grime from the window beside him. No light came into the basement room, but he could make out one of the huge government advertising boards by the street outside. The slogan was written in letters 10ft high and it read:
"NO ALCOHOL, NO PROBLEM"
Next to it was an empty noose. As Henry took his long awaited sip, the third man piped up;
"You best enjoy that Henry my boy, the boys who got it for us were blown up by a border patrol this morning".
Boris was notorious for knowing almost everything that happened in the huge country, and even this demoralizing comment amused the other 2 plotters quite a lot. Just as the minor furore died down there was a loud banging at the door.
"It's them! We're done for! Damnit Hans! Damnit!" yelled Henry as he stood abruptly, a little too abruptly in fact as his head thundered into one of the concrete beams supporting the floor above them. He fell back to his seat, his eyes slightly glazed, and stayed there. Without him, Hans and Boris picked up 2 pistols from the table, placing Henry's out of sight on the floor as they approached the door.
"Ready?" asked Boris tentatively, "if it isn't friendly, it's been an honour knowing you"
"It is friendly Boris, it has to be them" Hans said confidently as he took up his place on the wall beside the door, his pistol drawn and loaded. Just in case he told himself. Boris had his gun concealed, but was no less ready to fire should the door be hiding the Inquisitors or worse. He pulled the door open quickly and violently and was immediately by 5 men bursting in, each holding a rifle and wearing the standard Class 3 uniforms.
"Bloody hell" whispered Boris "It's really happening. Bloody hell!".
"Comrades" shouted one of the new arrivals as he closed the door and looked round the room, "shall we get started?".
To be continued...Dun dun dunnnn