The Shin Ra Corp
09-12-2007, 02:04
I've just posted this really neat RP (http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=544850). However, it seems to me that it is maybe to boring or I made some substantial errors in the setting, because it went almost unnoticed. Since this is the first RP I've posted, I would like to ask the more experienced nations here for some constructive criticism, so I can do better next time.