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OOC: I'm considering marrying off one of my main characters....again....

Klonor
19-02-2007, 23:47
...and I want to see who’d be interested before I actually did it.

Amy Keane, daughter of former Supreme General Yunger Keane and Consul of Klonor, is the woman who'd be the bride when we do this. I was planning on having her be involved in a long-term relationship with the Grand Duke Solomon Klonor (My main character and leader of Klonor) but events (Namely the Duke getting a new girlfriend who kinda mentally raped Amy by accident) have pretty much ruled out that plot.

She's smart, attractive, twenty-seven (Well, technically she's 139, but in an average lifespan of 400+ years it amounts to the same thing), in a position of great power in Klonor (She’s the elected co-Head of State) and of good social standing (Her dad is a national icon and historical figure). However, she has been severely mentally scarred and will likely be dealing with some severe issues in the near future.

This is actually an RP that I had before (twice), but the first time the suitors stopped posting one-by-one, or officially dropped out, and it ended without anything happening, and the second time we didn’t even get to the second page when my computer died and I had to drop out. So, I'm starting it all over again, and hopefully we’ll actually finish it this time. What would you think of getting involved in this RP and sending a suitor?

This is going to be a day-on-the-street type RP, meaning Amy and your character just sorta bump into one another one day, it's not an officially arranged courtship between government dignitaries. I expect that it'll take at least several weeks, possibly months, since we're going to go through the entire range of the relationship, from first meeting to the honeymoon, and Amy might not even end up with anyone if none of the relationships work out (Though I don't particularly expect that outcome).

For the suitors:

Pansexuality is the norm in Klonor, so gender and, to a limited degree, physical beauty are quite unimportant. Female and alien suitors are more than welcome, as long as they’re not too far outside the human norm (I don’t care how open-minded you are, a Hutt is simply unattractive). It's fine to be a member of your own nation, but I doubt it will 'fit' to have your suitor be a person of power in whatever nation is RP'ing them; the character would need to be a person who could just happen to be in a restaurant/movie/on the street in Klonor, and how often does Tony Blair go clubbing in Germany? Of course, if you can find some way to have your Vice-President be in a Klonor bar then I'm not going to stop you.

Any nations (or races) that have telepathy are automatically out, there's no way it would work between the two of them. Hell, there's no way Amy’d even let them off the planet alive. In Klonor, telepathy is the Big Bad Wolf that makes the children cry and the police twitch their fingers (The short version: Telepathy was the bullet that brought down the Klonor government, opened up the borders to alien annexation, and kinda set off a wee bit of genocide in Epsilon Pegasi). If the suitor can keep it quiet then okay, but just know that this means they’ll have to keep it quiet permanently.

Other than that, the only requirements for a suitor is just a little common sense, put some thought into it and you'll do fine.

Amy's little mini-biography:

Amy Keane is the daughter of Yunger Keane and Keson Eio, a former Supreme General and social activisit, respectively. She grew up in Deneb, the cultural center and former capital of the Association, and entered the People's Assembly after achieving her Masters degree in History. She's currently the Co-Consul along with Mary Salm, and holds the record for longest serving Consul, having been elected a total of seventeen times on a platform of interior development (There were some aging, but still sore, racial and religious divisions within Klonor that she worked to smooth away).

It was during her sixteenth term that the Duke, who had been in a prolonged state of suspended animation for the past century, emerged from his stasis and re-entered the society and government. The Duke is something of a minor deity within Klonor, though he himself attempts to disuage this view whenever possible, and is near-worshiped due to his status as Klonor's oldest citizen, sole immortal, and first telekinetic. As such, Amy, along with pretty much everybody else within Klonor, had a minor infatuation with him while growing up, and the fact that her father was the closest thing the Duke had to a brother meant that she was constantly getting "this one time, after he'd been drinking, old Sol went and got himself into trouble" stories, so she had a more personal connection than the other scores of young Klonori. Unfortunately, soon after his re-emergence, Ravelyn Shentavo showed up and tried to make contact and, since he was indisposed at the time, was given a meeting with Amy instead. Long story short, Ravelyn initiated a mental connection (Purely innocent, she didn't know about the Klonor taboo), and pretty much instantly made herself Klonor's #1 most wanted. Unfortunately, instead of having her brutally killed, or at the least having her expelled from the nation (Being a foreign dignitary really did preclude any form of lethal retaliation), she and the Duke run off together and have a wild fling like long-lost lovers (Which they actually were). Amy, already quite traumatised by what was essentially her being brutally raped, was further disturbed when the Duke, the legendary figure she'd grown up fantasizing about, told the nation "just forget the whole thing" and her dad and everybody else shrugged and said okay. So, she had something akin to a complete mental breakdown.

She went away for a while, recovered, and dealt with some real self-worth issues that she'd had for a while (For a long time she considered her position quite purposeless, since the Consuls had really just existed to take up space until the Duke came back). Now she's on her way back to Deneb to resume her duties, and that's where this RP will take off.

Amy is of average height (5'9''), has red/gold waist length hair (Standard length for Klonor), and has a body that, to avoid making making this description an article in Playboy, I'll simply say is worthy of notice (Not, however, stop-in-your-tracks-and-drop-your-jaw, since she's a government official and not a supermodel). She enjoys the classical literature of Old Earth (In reality the current literature of our own world) and other such historical hobbies (hence her degree in history) because, in her own words, "looking at where we're from tells us where we're going." She appreciates a good joke, but is absolutely horrid at telling them (Her retelling of the overly cliche "Jimathon Jones" routine usually comes out offensive and rude). Fortunately, anecdotes from her own past usually suffice to raise a smile, so she manages to get by in a conversation.

I think that covers the basics of what people will need to know about Amy, since this isn't an official courtship type RP the suitors aren't going to be entering the relationship with knowledge of her and her past, and anything that they'll eventually find out should come out in the RP.
Theao
20-02-2007, 00:01
Interested, but few questions.

1) Fanta-Sci-Fi, or just sci-fi?
2) If fantasy is partial then magic/pseudo magic permitted?
3) Just TP or any/all mental abilites(precog, TK, clairvoyance, ect) a no-no?
Klonor
20-02-2007, 00:09
I swear, I'm having deja-vu. Didn't you ask that last time?

Anyway, I'm a strictly sci-fi nation, but fantasy's fine by me, as long as we're not talking Bronze Age technology with FTL and nuclear weapons solely fueled by somebody chanting.

It's just telepathy itself that's a no-no, Amy herself is telekinetic. As long as you stay out of her mind you'll be fine.
Theao
20-02-2007, 05:19
I swear, I'm having deja-vu. Didn't you ask that last time?

Anyway, I'm a strictly sci-fi nation, but fantasy's fine by me, as long as we're not talking Bronze Age technology with FTL and nuclear weapons solely fueled by somebody chanting.

It's just telepathy itself that's a no-no, Amy herself is telekinetic. As long as you stay out of her mind you'll be fine.


More or less, very similar questions at least. Do you have a template or exposition in thread method?
Klonor
20-02-2007, 21:45
Thread method? I think I've been off NS for to long, that particular term isn't ringing a bell.
Theao
20-02-2007, 23:41
Thread method? I think I've been off NS for to long, that particular term isn't ringing a bell.

Probably because I came up with it on the spot. What I meant was where history/interests/ect. are revealed during the rp(through flashbacks, converstation, reactions, ect.) rather than detailed in the ooc.
Klonor
21-02-2007, 00:03
Ah, I gotcha. I figure half-and-half, part here and part in the thread (Through flashbacks, conversations, etc. like you said), generalities here and details in the RP. The players need to know things like name, nation of origin, job, etc., but Great Aunt Mary, who witnessed your baptism and gave you a tricycle on your third birthday, can afford to be revealed in the RP.

Of course, if Great Aunt Mary also sold you to slavers on your sixth birthday and you've only just escaped, that might be worth a more direct mention (That might have something of an effect on a persons personality).

This way, players don't know extreme details that Amy wouldn't know so, though we of course have more of a grasp on events that our characters, it's a little bit closer to two people who aren't being puppeted about.
The Ctan
21-02-2007, 00:03
OOCness; One wonders if said mind-rapist has been brought to justice for it yet. It sounds... telepathic.

And, humm. Maybe I'll have my exile character zip out to SR-2091 for a lark. How secret is it?
Klonor
21-02-2007, 00:10
Nope, fee as a bird and dating the Duke (Well, okay, not anymore since that RP was like two years ago and I haven't spoken to that player in just as long, but this RP is taking off right from that point). The Duke and she had history and, when you're regarded as a semi-divine being, you can get such minor things like a government death warrant swept under the table. Believe me, that had some disastrous effects on Amys psyche, too.

SR-2091? Not secret at all, it's the capital of the Association. Well, it's really the capital in title only (The Duke still lives in Deneb and the Assemblies have their meetings there, too), but it's still not a secret. Damn hard to get to, of course (A trip of several million light-years will do that), but your exile's more than welcome.
Revenia
21-02-2007, 00:11
I'd be up for a go-around, being chronically bored and whatnot.

Jeremiah Ixvitl has a reason for being ANYWHERE! The difficult part is explaining how he got there...and explaining what he is.

What he isn't, by the way, is a giant demon-ray. That is an Ixchitl. Don't confuse the two. Jeremiah doesn't like being confused with demon-rays. Jeremiah eats demon-rays for brunch. They taste good with assorted greens and eggs.
Klonor
21-02-2007, 00:29
Uh...okay
Klonor
21-02-2007, 17:59
Come on guys, only one suitor? It's been two days already, I was hoping there'd at least be two hopefuls.

Don't get me wrong, Jeremiah the demon-ray eating madman is more than welcome, but this isn't really meant to be a single one-on-one RP. There's never any guarantees in a relationship and, if there's only one other participant, we all know who she's going to end up with.

Oh, and I edited the first post with a little more info, so people will know what they're getting into.
Theao
21-02-2007, 18:13
I'm going to be getting a suitor present, once I can get over this infernal brainblock.
The Blastit Empire
21-02-2007, 18:18
I may get something up, depending on how I go with me other RPs lol. I have a lot of catching up to do with my posting
Klonor
22-02-2007, 03:26
That makes two, and maybe three. Anybody else? C'mon, this is your chance to gain the ear of an influential member of Klonor society, surely you have some form of devious plot that could exploit that for the personal gain of you and your fellows!
Theao
22-02-2007, 06:11
Name(full): Gaeth Melcori Marian'alle Ni'Uriosa Exin
Name(used): Melcori or just Mel
Appearence: 6'2", extremely slender, Pure white hair of medium-long length, somewhat elongated ears(vertical/trek style)/canines, glacial blue eyes, tail(neon green fur), otherwise human.
Traits/Abilities/Dress: Telekinetic(to an extent), carries a small tube on outside of a black full body robe. Tends toward odd colour combinations.

Mel is very odd/naive/inquisitive as he hasn't had a chance to interact with other species, but is now compelled to do so as he has been exiled due to politics. Is presently at loose ends and is simply out to enjoy himself with little concern for past or future.
Revenia
22-02-2007, 06:54
Well, if we're on to this...

Name: Jeremiah "Jerry" Ixvitl
Race: Ascended
Age: Indeterminate (Ageless/Immortal)
Physical: 6'6" in height, fit, well muscled, very strong-boned. Possessed of an almost dangerously low level of fat. Appears to be very gaunt and slim, despite his musculature. Has red eyes, silver hair, and pale white skin.
Mental: Hard to say. Much easier to experience.

Kit and Clothing: Tends to wear black clothes and a longcoat of Guardian Temple design. Has a black two-handed sword that he habitually carries with him. Starship is the Armed Scout Duran Duran.

He has two Magus (Companion) animals, a wolf and a flamingo. They are named Bosley and Francine, respectively.
The Blastit Empire
22-02-2007, 07:03
Name: Reikan Edgeheart
Appearance: Tall (6'3), medium build, short messy black hair, green eyes, slightly greenish skin.


Reikan is just your everyday, Blastonian Citizen...well, sort of...

His parents had decided to make their children one of the special "Gen-En", as they were dubbed by most Blastonians In other words, they were genetically engineered one way or another, a process that is in no way, cheap for the common man. And The Edgehearts may have been happy, but they were, in no way, wealthy. So in order to give young Reikan a life of splendor, they spend a lot of their savings in hopes to give this child a better life.

And what they recieved a gifted youngster indeed. Reikan has a natural immunity to toxic substances, is healthier than the average man, naturally muscular, and a higher reaction time than most people without genetic enhancements.

Reikan is a very laid back sort of guy with a kind personality, however he can get stern when needed or if he feels insulted, which is seldom.
Klonor
23-02-2007, 01:34
Cool, it looks like this is finally coming together. I'd like to wait for at least one more participant before we start since this RP seems to have a disturbingly high drop-out rate (The first time we did this there were like six guys in the beginning and it still died an unpleasant death), but other than that I think we're pretty much set.

Oh, and Revenia, what do you mean by "Mental: Hard to say. Much easier to experience."
Revenia
23-02-2007, 02:34
I mean that he's got a bit of a distinct personality. Which is a polite way of saying that he is more than likely insane. But if you'd been the places he'd been and done the things that he'd done, you'd be a bit crazy, too.

He's got 'powerz,' but they aren't particularly subtle, or mind control.

Does that answer your question?
Klonor
23-02-2007, 04:26
Oyah, I misunderstood (I thought you meant mental powers and whatnot). That's good to know, though.
Theao
23-02-2007, 04:32
Rev: when you say Immortal, do you mean ageless/will not die of natural causes(age/disease) or immortal in the sense of will not/can not die or in the sense of can not be harmed/die in any manner?
Revenia
24-02-2007, 00:36
Ascended are "immortal" in the sense that they either don't age or have incredibly long lifespans. They're extremely resistant to disease, but that is due to an immune system that is almost...too...capable. Meaning it interferes with potentially beneficial treatments -- such as, say, certain types of medicine, as well as harmful foreign bodies.

The 'Ageless/Immortal' thing was meant to indicate that he, as an Ascended, doesn't have definite lifespan and doesn't (or hasn't) shown physical signs of aging. Nothing more.
Klonor
25-02-2007, 03:50
Wow, I guess my reputation really is officially dead, I suppose I've been gone too long for people to remember me. No matter, we must all look to the future. Onward!

I'm going to start the RP, I'll post the link here in a sec.
Klonor
25-02-2007, 04:34
The thread can be found here: http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=519094
Kulikovia
25-02-2007, 11:17
I am interested in playing this rp.
Kulikovia
25-02-2007, 12:40
Name: Atticus Konovski
Age: 30
Height: 5' 11''
Weight: 190lbs
Hair: Dark Brown
Eyes: Bluish Gray
History: Atticus was born in the port city of New Archangel. It was a beautiful city with grand architecture mixed with modern buildings. His father was a lawyer and mother a teacher. He also has an older sister. From an early age he was fascinated by history and had an insatiable appetite for knowledge. He recieved good marks in school and was active in sports. In college he recieved a degree in archaeology and human studies. This was the high light of his life. Being an archaeologist was the only thing he ever wanted to do and was quite good at his job. After several years, he decided to open a antique collectors business which turned into a descently sucessful business. He is generally good natured and laid back.
Theao
31-03-2007, 20:23
Just a note, and apologise for any misconceptions, but Mel wasn't floating(chiefly as his TK doesn't work that way). Just jumped fairly high.
Klonor
31-03-2007, 22:00
Ah, gotcha.
Sakkra
01-04-2007, 01:07
I'd be quite interested. The only thing is, I don't know what your main character's feelings towards large, long-lived reptilians would be. There are physioliogical and biological differences that could make it ... interesting. But for the sake of it, i'll throw up a small bio.

Name: Jhoor
Age: 55 (mid-teens in human scale)
Height: 7'1" (10' from head to tip of tail)
Weight: 325 lbs
Hair: None. Light blue scales with flecks of black markings around the eyes normally.
Jhoor is officially the adopted son of the emperor Gorrm. The ceremony commemorating the 8 billionth imperial subject prompted this. He was born on Sslaa V in the Birth Pits of Wyrmspine Isle. Fairly chipper and optomistic in outlook, he still remains wary of any and everyone who seems too friendly. This is due to his sire Gorrm's influence and his position.

When not involved in his studies at Hreer University on Earth, he likes to go spear-fishing, sunbathing and touring nations that have been deemed at best a minimal threat to visit. Although there are sub-specie of Sakkran that are telepathic (such as the Grass Walkers), he is not one of them.
Klonor
01-04-2007, 01:28
Well, it depends how reptillian he is. Like I said, sexuality in Klonor has pretty much completely left behind standard human norms, but there's still a physical aspect; it depends on how far off par he is. Are we talking Star Trek-lizard, or actually reptillian?
Sakkra
01-04-2007, 02:20
Star Trek lizard for the most part, although i'd modified the Gorn (sp?) off of the Master of Orion Sakkra. I think I created a happy medium. (http://www.5amfunnies.com/sakkra/Character/skeen.jpg)