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The Chronicles of Renezar- Open-Character RP- PT.

The Black Agents
27-12-2006, 13:02
View of Eborian Civilizations : Magikia University
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The Chronicles of Renezar
Last of the Eborian

Chapter 1 The legend

Our story begins in a distant land called Renezar. A land as old as time. A land of wizards, warriors and demons. Climates of all points of the world this land held beauty only comparable to that of heaven itself. The people peaceful and nice to even their enemies. The land held creatures of wonder and might. Creatures like -Dragons, one for every fashion. Red dragons, blue dragons, gold dragons, and even silver ones. Others like goblins and unicorns, nothing was unseen in these lands. The people lived in harmony with these creatures, all living in peace and mutual benefit. The whole land lived under the guiding eyes of the gods: Sypher, Aedious, Remiel. Three gods, for three civilizations. Eboria, Wargate, and Remielia where built in their honor. Towering building, busy markets and architecture beyond the time of the land. For generations the people of these civilizations lived in harmony and formed the Temple of the Tribunal Council. Three gods, three civilizations- The land was in perfect balance. But the council was not. A vengeful goddess by the name of Delexia wanted no part in developing the races that lived in the land. She sought to have them war and kill for her pleasure.

It was not long before she began to try and turn the people against her brothers. She fed them lies and deception, making the people begin to question their faith in their gods. The gods of Renezar questioned Delexia about her actions but she gave no word. Soon the people began to open mock the gods. As many more began to fall to her lies. Soon the people of Renezar-all races and type: Eborian, Human, Elder elves, Linken Elves and the “ Darskina’r” or Dark skinned elves began to form sides of allegiance with either side. Many left to join Delexia , but the Elder Elves and the Eborians along with a large number of Humans stayed with the Tribunal council. Soon the civilizations fell into anarchy as separatists known as Delexians started to attack followers of the tribunal in broad daylight. Eventually it became so bad to the local policing forces could not stop the violence. As the attacks increased so did the defensive efforts of the Faithful. They began to take arms against the Delexians and attacked their homes and families. Soon nothing was left of the civilized world. The three Civilizations had been burned and broken as the two sides waged all out war, trying to eliminate the other forever....

But it was for told that an army would arise to finally unite the people of Renezar forever. And it did not take long for this army to reveal itself. The three gods formed an army called the Guardians; Elite warriors of the Temple of the Tribunal Council. They where formed from the faithful followers. Eborians as the Supreme Guardians- Personnel guards of the Three gods. The elder Elves made the Master mages, and the humans made the main fighting force. Blessed by the Three gods each soldier received their armor and weapons personally. Their souls granted the blessing of the tribunal. The army was set out to find and destroy any and all of the Delexian forces. And the army listened without question. They marched forth into battle after battle slaughtering any opposition they might have encountered. Full lust fields of dandelions, and sunflowers quickly turned into fields of death and hell as legions of Delexians fought a futile battle against the Guardian armies. After the battles the plat life would die as not even rain could dilute the blood that drenched the soil. Broken armor that still had parts of the bodies that wore them and weapons that broke against the powerful blessed weapons of the army littered the land as the guardians sweep through them killing everything that did not profess to the faith of the Tribunal. Towns burned and the dead cluttered the streets of the unfaithful. Soon the decimated armies of Delexia made a final stand at the temple stronghold of Delexia, a now lost temple told to hold the secrets of the gods and treasures of the now forgotten religion. The armies of the Tribunal made a grand entrance to the stronghold. The Eborian Supreme Guardians rode in on their ornate armor crested horses.

The legions of the Guardian army stood ready for the order to attack. As the Highest guardian named Supreme master guardian Crucix rose his sword to give the order, he was struck down by the power of Delexia. A massive burst of black fire erupted out of the front door of the temple and killed Crucix. After which the last remaining forces of Delexia charged out of the temple and assaulted the army, thinking that the death of their leader would beat them. The last stand was short and bloody as they where brutally massacred by the Guardian forces. The death of Cruciz did not hurt them but rather infuriated them.

The battle should have ended with the defeat and prisoner should have been taken. But the fighting continued and everyone was killed. Their bodies set up as displays of horror in front of the Temple as it was looted and burned. As the temple burned Delexia came forth and challenged the whole legion. With great pride they fought against her but even they could not defeat her power. They soon found themselves on the other end of the slaughter stick. The all but a few Eborians was thought to have been wiped away during this battle. After a short time the Guardians cried to the Tribunal to save them. And with great anger the tribunal came to the aid of their dying army. And struck down Delexia with a mighty attack that to this day is unknown. As a goddess Delexia was immortal and could not be killed, so the tribunal banished her and what was left of her followers to a land known as the Kornosian continent. A place a lonly despair. A desolate land with little hope of escaping. But the Tribunal could not leave the people to die with a scorned heart. So they created a fountain which would never stop following called the fountain of Forgiveness, a tree which would produce fruit for 500,000 to feed on called the tree of Holies, and a forest which was wider and bigger then any forest on Renezar. Tools and other objects where not given and where only present on the people who had them on their person. The people would never be allowed to see the lands of Renezar ever again.

That day over 100,000 souls died and the whole lost a people. But some still say that the Eborian people still live in secret in a far away land. Protected by the temples holy power, a blessing for their unwavering service to the Tribunal. No one may know for sure, but the people always wonder. After the battles The civilizations where rebuilt by the Tribunal and the people came back praising them and life seemed to return to normal. But the Guardians where still existing and they where made to kill and serve. The Guardians who where left where given divine like powers to govern one thing in Renezar, one for every element, one for just about everything that can be seen. These Guardians now sit at the right hand of the Tribunal and still act as servants of them and the temples. So they where divided among the three gods. Sypher took the Linken Elves and another group and placed them as guards of his temple in Eboria. Remiel took the Elder Elves and made him his guards fro his temple in Remielia, and Aedious took the Humans as he saw they where they most battle worth after the Eborians and made him the guards of this temple in Wargate. In Honor of the races that where faithful the Tribunal created swords and armor that would hold to power to command that race and bestowed them upon the Leaders of each race. And gave them their places among the gods. Peace rained in Renezar for 300 years until another threat loomed over the land... Many cried for the Eborians to return.



Chapter 2
Lost but not found

It was a cool morning as a young man by the name of Andreas awoke from his bed in a small farming village about 4 days horse ride from Eboria. His bed was small and made from straw with a blanket over the pile and a pillow made from fur and soft moss. His house was small but warm and had been in his family since the great war with Delexia. The family owned much land but never formed from it all. His dad always gave the excuse..

“ I shall not till more then I can reap... The Great guardian of the land would be most upset.”

Truth was his dad was lazy and did not want to work. So Andreas got up every morning and ate a small piece of meat and drank some milk before heading out to farm the land. But that day he felt like hunting more then anything and he went back to grab his bow. As he was about to leave his mother grabbed him by his ear and asked him a question

“ And where do you think your going young man?”

Andreas laughed and reassured his mother by saying

“ I am going hunting... Not for long just a few hours– I’ll be back before lunch time”

His mother shuck her head and let him go, giving him her good wishes on his hunt. The excited Andreas ran outside and started through to woods. At first it was easy but as he went deeper the woods began to get thicker and thicker. Soon he was lost and could not find his way back. It was not wise to venture out into the woods alone. Tree demons lurked for unsuspecting travelers. Bandits where also a big problem. They would kill a victim even before looking for anything of worth. But Andreas was calm and he started to climb a tree. So he placed his bow on his back and grabbed the first branch. But as he did the branch on the opposite side swung around and knocked Andreas off itself and slammed him against the rocks. Without looking he had tried to climb a tree demon. As he struggled to get loose little vines called choker vines started to grow around his throat, and they began to get tight. Andreas stuck to the rocks looked around for a piece a stone. Upon finding one he started to try and cut the vines. As he cut the first one it began to bleed and the tree moaned. As the demon felt the pain it began to loosen its grip on Andreas. And Andreas did not let the opportunity slip by him. He quickly wiggled out of the tree demons hold and fell to the ground

“ Is that all you got!?!” screamed Andreas as he walked the tree demon slowly move back into it original spot.

Then a voice came from behind him..

“ You know little boys should not be playing in the woods alone... Its dangerous here.”

Andreas quickly turned to see a small group of bandits standing over him on top of the rocks. They wore black tattered shirts and a single pauldron made of scrape metal. Their blades looked like they where made from scrape metal as well. Rusted and bent they didn’t give much room for sanitation. They leader of the bandits jumped down and introduced himself

“ Hi, my name is Little mugger. And those are my band of ‘ friends’ I saw you take on that tree demon... you’re a real class act.”

Andreas quick snapped back saying

“ And you would know class. I bet if a classy person walked up to you and slapped you in the face, you still wouldn’t know what classy is!”

The bandits leader laughed and punched Andreas in the nose. Andreas fell back and held his nose. He had been punched before, but not in the nose. As the blood started to run down his face, he got up with a burst of speed and tackled the bandit leader. Wrestling him as Andreas punched him back. The other bandits jumped down and grabbed Andreas and pulled him off their leader. They pulled him back and held I him in an arm lock. . The bandit leader returned to his feet and felt the place where Andreas had punched him. The bandit leader looked up at him and gave a small grin, then began to beat Andreas. Punches to the stomach and face gave Andreas the worse pain he had ever felt.

As the bandits finished, they dropped him on the ground and left him, taking his bow and arrows as they left. Andreas looked up with his fading vision just as they disappeared in to the forest. He could barely move, his whole body ached. And his right eye had started to swell shut. Andreas slowly got up off the ground and stumbled over to the rocks and propped himself up on them. He could taste the distinct taste of blood in his mouth. If he was bleeding half as bad as he thought he was, he was in for a tough time getting back. Night had started to fall and his blood would attract Gimriths- or Human look-a-likes that liked to eat human bones.

Andreas had figured that he had lost conciseness after his beating. But he had to think his muggers as they lead him close to the edge of the forest. As Andreas started for the open field which was his farm he heard sounds behind him. Sounds that would make even a hardened warriors skin crawl. As Andreas turned a Gimirth jumped at him, only to be killed before he reached him. Andreas looked around but only saw a slender figure in the short distance and fading light. Andreas called out hoping that the savior would grace him with their face. But as he called the figure moved away, deeper into the forest. With the light almost gone and his wounds hurting he decided to get home. As he moved across the field he found a new bow and quiver.and a small mote attached which read..

“ You have fought a tree demon and won, you fought bandits and lived.... Meet me in Port Carmithica in three days And I may have more for you.”

Andreas laughed and walked inside. His mother was so worried that she had sent out his dad to search for him. As his mother rejoiced she quickly saw his wounds and screamed for his sister Meledy to get a bucket of water and a needle and thread. Quickly she moved to get the water and needle. Andreas moved over to his bed and fell down hard. His body was exhausted and his head hurt. After a minute or two his sister came back with the water and needle and handed it to his mother. She placed a wet rag over Andreas’s head and started to stitch up a cut he got on his for head. Andreas could not tell what hurt worse, the cut or his mother stitching it.

“ OOOH” said Andreas and he felt the needle move into his skin.

His mother ignored his and continued to stitch. His sister watched quietly on the far side of the room. The blood made her sick and she could not bare to watch up close. Andreas had just turned 17 not more then 2 months ago. And already his life was getting harder. He could see that their maybe peace in the three legendary Three civilization of the Tribunal council but were he lived it was nothing like peace. The Port of Carmithica is a rough place. Ships from Eboria tend to get robbed there. Anndreas had a lot of time to think about going.
The Black Agents
27-12-2006, 22:50
bump
Wandering Argonians
28-12-2006, 00:21
OOC: We'll see where this goes...
The Black Agents
29-12-2006, 10:03
That night was unusually quite. His mother and father decided to sleep early and let Andreas get his sleep. Andreas tossed and turned in his bad, trying to figure out who left him the bow and who the person was that killed the Gimmirth. So many questions and not enough answers. Andreas decided to sleep and maybe the answers would come to him. As he started to drift off into the land of dreams he was awoken by the sound of horse hoves hitting the ground. The loud sound was enough to wake up his mother and father as well. Andreas grabbed the bow and arrows and race outside to see what or who was coming. He saw torch light and banners: banners that he did not recognize. He looked behind him and looked at his father who told everyone to get inside the house. Just as his family started to get inside Andreas saw flaming arrows strike his house. One arrow landed close by lighting a bail of hay aflame. Andreas without thinking grabbed the arrow and returned it to its senders. The arrows flown with great accuracy striking a man on a horse holding a banner. The man fell over and tried to pull out the arrow as it started to light his under clothing on fire cooking the man inside his armor. The men around him simple ignored his pain.

Andreas looked back and saw his father grab two long scythes and handed Andreas one. Andreas had no problem with killing, he just wished he knew who he was killing. The mysterious force had a leader, his armor black as the night and his cape red as blood. The leader held his sword high and dropped it down. As he finished a group of soldiers charged the house. Their armor clinking as they reached the house they drew their swords and swung at Andreas. With quick reaction he hit the soldier in the waist with the butt of the scythe and moved around and cut in an up formation making the blade exit out of the soldiers back pointing up. As Andreas pulled out the blade he looked over and saw his father struggling against two soldiers. Andreas moved quickly trying to save his father. But just before he reached him a flurry of arrows struck the house stopping him. Andreas looked up and saw 5 archers standing on a crop of rocks. Andreas looked at them then back at his father and then made a mad dash for his father. As he started to run the archers fired again.


Andreas dashed dodging arrows as he went, as he reached his father he grabbed a soldier and placed him in front of the arrows path. Andreas closed his eyes and heard the sound of many arrows pierce the mans armor. The soldier went limp as the sounds of the arrows ended. Andreas slowly looked up passed the dead soldiers shoulder, trying to see if the archers had left. But as soon as his head came above the shoulder an arrow shot past him grazing his cheek. Andreas quickly dropped the soldier and dashed to his father. But as Andreas reached him the last soldier killed him. Andreas watched as the soldier slowly inserted his blade into his fathers torso. It seemed like time had slowed down as he watched. Nothing seemed to matter, not even his own life. Andreas's father looked over to him as his face wrenched in angony. His father could see Andreas' anger and he motioned to the house where his mother and sister where hiding. Andreas looked back to the house and nodded as his fathers face lost life. Andreas' life was shattered, and for no reason. This strange amry come from nowhere and kills what is most important to him. But his time lost in dreamland was cut short as a arrow glanced his leg. Andreas held his leg and fell a little. But the archers were not the only threat. The soldier that killed his father took aim at Andreas. His creams where one of a person bent on ending his life. Andreas looked around for somthing to use. He spotted a sword left behind by the first soldier he killed before. Andreas quickly moved and grabbed his sword and turned to meet his adversary. But as soon as he turned the soldier swung at him. Andreas answered with putting the sword up into his defence. The two weapons made contact, sparks and chips of metal sprayed around as Andreas falls from the hit. The soldier regains control of his weapon and goes for another swing. Andreas quickly moved and grabs his weapon and slices the soldiers knees. The soldier falls and screams in pain. Andreas makes his way inside just as the flames got inside. His sister creams aloud so that he could find them.
The Black Agents
29-12-2006, 18:24
Bump... I hope people are atleast reading this...
Kulikovia
29-12-2006, 18:29
OOC: I posted a comment on your ooc thread
The Black Agents
30-12-2006, 06:23
reserved for next post
The Black Agents
31-12-2006, 02:53
The flames where great in heat and hurt Andreas as he searched for his family. His sisters screams where engraved into his mind as he thought that he may be to late.

“ Mother!... Where are you!” screamed Andreas as he searched.

“ Andreas!... you must leave. Its to dangerous !” screamed his mother trying to protect her son.

Andreas ignored her cries and continued his search. His time was almost cut short as a rafter fell. Andreas just barely missed it. Andreas got back on his feet and went to open a door. As his hands touched the metal ring which acted as the door knob, a sharp stinging burn took his hand by force. The burn melted his skin and caused him great pain.

Andreas took a cloth and wrapped it into his hand and grabbed the knob again pulling on the door until it opened. Inside his mother and sister sat in the corner-scared.
Andreas took his mothers hand and picked up his sister over his shoulder and lead them out the back. Andreas kicked the back door open, only to find 3 soldiers looking for them.

“ You.. Don’t move!” said one of the soldiers.

“ Sorry don’t think I can do that.” said Andreas as he let go of his sister, and his mothers hand.

“ It wasn’t a suggestion kid” said the soldier as he nodded to the other two.

Andreas watched as the other two soldier moved to either side as they withdrew their weapons. Andreas slowly pulled out his as he would die to protect his family.
The Black Agents
01-01-2007, 12:28
bump.
The Black Agents
02-01-2007, 11:32
bump for RPers
The Black Agents
06-02-2007, 16:54
Andreas watched as the other two soldier moved to either side as they withdrew their weapons. Andreas slowly pulled out his sword as he would die to protect his family. His dedication was not to fail him. The soldiers that flanked him rushed in with lightning fast moves hoping to catch him off guard. And it worked Andreas didn’t know how to react to the flanked attack, his mind unsure of his path. As the swords of the two soldiers made their final decent to the body of Andreas a flurry of arrow pelted the second soldier and gave Andreas time to react to the other. Andreas brought his sword around and blocked the soldiers sword. A loud ping sound resonated throughout the country side.

The scene was set. The struggle of strength, and willpower. The two held each others swords at bay, hoping the other would fall and lose the fight. Both faces showing signs of fatigue. Andreas’ sister scared for your brothers life grabs a pitch-fork and stabs the soldier in the side. As the fork penetrated his side he screams and fell to the side. His blood staining the dirt below. Andreas gathered himself from the ground below and regained his composer. Andreas closed his eyes and felt his most inner rage build, a rage that he had never felt before. A rage that was built from his families loss , the loss of his father, his home. As they opened his eyes glowed white with the blessed light of the lost race that served the right hand of the gods.

“ Your…Your eyes. How are your eyes doing that?” screamed the last soldier as he started to back away. Falling over a log then getting up quickly to run away.

Andreas only looked at the soldier as he ran. And gave this small utterance

“ Expris…Medicorican… Icimaire… Ignistica!”

AS Andreas finished the flames that once engulfed his house began to form around him. Starting at his feet the flames slowly surrounded his body and soon enclosed him. Andreas the held out his hand and formed the flames to his hand and arm. The flames swirled and contorted. Andreas simply pulled his hand back and thrusted it forward. Propelling the flames in a single line, like a string of fire. As the flames reached the fleeing soldier the extreme heat burned through his armor and body. Making a clean, but charred hole through his heart. The soldier stopped and fell to the ground.

As the soldier fell the white glow in Andreas’ eyes left and Andreas fell to the ground.
The Black Agents
13-07-2007, 03:59
bump
The Black Agents
20-10-2007, 18:16
Bump.