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The Ballad of Valerie OOC/signup Thread

Nation of Fortune
09-08-2006, 23:58
OOC/signup thread for Ballad of Valerie. This RP is going to start out as a bounty hunt, but eventually turn into a survival RP against a zombie like situation. To join please ask for permission in this thread, we'll work out the details in here rather than in the IC thread.

Details:

It's a FT RP
Earth has been host of only poorest of the poor, buildings have not made much advancement from the year 2025.

Other those are the only constant details at the moment, I'll think of some more later.

I'm asking for the basics, spelling and grammar, good RP style, the sort.

IC thread (http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?p=11521176#post11521176)

Sign up now!

Players:
Nation of Fortune
Ravea
Draconis Nightcrawlis
Megas
Wandering Vagabonds
Nation of Fortune
10-08-2006, 03:13
I guess I should point out that I'm not only looking for bounty hunter types, I'm also looking for civilian types, and just about everything inbetween. I plan on having the bounty end up being on earth, so people could play characters that were too poverty stricken to leave earth, or there could be people that were wealthy business sorts looking for indentured servents on earth, or anything you can think of.
Ravea
10-08-2006, 05:00
I'll bite. I'll post up a charachter tomorrow; too tired now, though.
Nation of Fortune
10-08-2006, 07:29
Thats the spirit! Now, I think we can live with more people signing up, so give it a gander folks.
Nation of Fortune
10-08-2006, 22:42
Someone..... anyone?

Bump
Draconis Nightcrawlis
11-08-2006, 00:47
Hmm, I'd be interested in RPing a civilian. Anything I should know about creating one?
Nation of Fortune
11-08-2006, 00:59
Hmm, I'd be interested in RPing a civilian. Anything I should know about creating one?
Sure, if you'll be RP'ing in the slums of earth. The buildings you will be living will be ancient, and many of them will be rigged with IED's that were used in training missions for Nofian soldiers, least the area were the RP will take us.

Of course you could be an interested party about the bounty and just tagging along, in which case the bounty will be a scientist sort of person who who is conducting illegal research on the planet.

Thats all I can think of the top of my head, if you have anything specific bring it up.
Nation of Fortune
12-08-2006, 19:14
bump
Nation of Fortune
13-08-2006, 19:11
Badabumpbump

Heres to heart problems in close relatives that happen to be 85 years old.
Draconis Nightcrawlis
16-08-2006, 15:49
Any objections to using an older Nemo?
Nation of Fortune
18-08-2006, 01:50
If he had any interaction with Valerie, then you can't use her. Otherwise he's free game, although he would have to be fairly old, least if he was the one that was in FoaL. If anyone knew Valerie, or met her, even as a child, they would long be dead.
Draconis Nightcrawlis
18-08-2006, 02:29
Ah dang, I was hoping it would be like 10 years after that or something.
Nation of Fortune
18-08-2006, 02:42
No, no. Usually I go for modernish to postmodernish tech RP's of my nation, but for this one, I wanted something completely different, so I decided to go FT with this one. In doing so, I get to really develop a certain character I made FT wise, and I get to develop Valerie as well.
Draconis Nightcrawlis
18-08-2006, 02:45
Ah, so decades into the future then.
Nation of Fortune
18-08-2006, 02:52
Yes, long after they perfected the techniques used on Valerie.
Draconis Nightcrawlis
18-08-2006, 02:55
Ok, guess I'll have to go back to figuring a character again.
Nation of Fortune
18-08-2006, 02:56
Sorry 'bout that.
Draconis Nightcrawlis
18-08-2006, 02:59
No worries.
Megas
19-08-2006, 00:10
Hiyo! If it's still open (and it sure looks like it is), I'm in. Since nobody is using a bounty hunter character, yet, I suppose I could.
Nation of Fortune
19-08-2006, 01:42
Megas, you are welcome to join this RP.

My characters are mercenaries, and have been hired for this job to serve a special purpose. You are welcome to post in the IC thread whenever, but I request that the you meet the guy hiring the bounty in the bar where my characters are. I'll make an IC post soon to describe the guy who is hiring the bounty hunter.
Wandering Vagabonds
19-08-2006, 10:23
i'll toss my hat in if you'll have me, though i may have a few questions for you later.
Nation of Fortune
19-08-2006, 17:59
I'll have you. Feel free to ask as many questions as you want.

And to everyone who has already joined, since the IC thread is open feel free to post IC'ly whenever.
Wandering Vagabonds
19-08-2006, 19:44
alright. i'll start working on a character. in the mean time, if i have questions i'll send a tg.
Nation of Fortune
19-08-2006, 21:45
TG them, or post them here, whichever.
Draconis Nightcrawlis
20-08-2006, 15:41
I got a wee bit sidetracked, hows this?

Name: Ddienw
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Height: 5’9
Build: Slim
Hair: Dark green
Eyes: Dark blue
Skin: Pale

An unknown, Ddienw is a special soldier raised by a mysterious group known to him only as “They”. He is the latest in a line of clones of the one “They” called Nemo. Ddienw is a quiet person, rarely showing emotion, if he shows emotion it was often moody.

Despite his obvious quietness, Ddienw is bright and talented at tracking.
Nation of Fortune
20-08-2006, 19:46
That character will work, but how do you plan on using him? I'm just curious.
Draconis Nightcrawlis
20-08-2006, 21:26
Hired to go after the bounty because of his tracking skills.
Nation of Fortune
20-08-2006, 21:56
Sounds like a plan.

You can get an IC post up whenever. If you haven't already figured it out, the guy who passed out is indeed the guy doing the hiring.
Draconis Nightcrawlis
20-08-2006, 22:05
Lol thats never a good sign if the hirer is passed out :D

I'll get up a post as soon as I can.
Megas
20-08-2006, 23:27
Yeah, alright. Here's my guy.

Name: Esdras Duperard
Gender: Male
Age: 38
Height: 6'1''
Build: Average
Hair: Short, green
Eyes: White, with a slight shade of green
Skin: Greenish

Esdras has a background in Megan special forces, and become a bounty hunter after choosing not to renew his commission. He spent several years fighting in the Ultimate Challenge League, where his skills and prowess served to win him fame and fortune, until the underground bought off his supporters, and he was soon ejected from the sport. From there, he joined a rag-tag crew of privateers captained by a Torontonian. He served with them for many years, making many fortunes, and losing countless more to authorities in various countries, eventually becoming the second-in-command. After the crew was disbanded, he became a bounty hunter again, wandering across the galaxy in search of work.

I'll have my post up sometime soon, but probably not tonight.

Esdras wears a pair of black BDU's which are more of a gray color due to their age. The BDU's are made of a woven synthetic available only in Megas which provides him with limited protection from most small caliber projectiles and beam weaponry, and also physical attacks are buffered to some extent.

He has a rifle, an sidearm, and a HUD that are all contained in his rifle sling, which he usually wears over his right shoulder.
Nation of Fortune
20-08-2006, 23:37
That looks excelent. Yeah, just have the post up whenever, sooner preferably.
Wandering Vagabonds
21-08-2006, 07:30
Name: Osis Da'ju
Gender: Male
Age: 30
Height: 6'2''
Build: athletic
Hair: clean shaven
Eyes: pale blue
Skin: tan

Osis heralds from a small tribe of nomads. He grew up as most did in the tribe, but took the religion to heart. As he grew to adylthood he became aware of the breaking of the holy laws almost daily by his people. One night, god spoke to him in a dream and told him what he must do. The next day he killed every other member of his tribe. He left the desert behind and traveled to the city, where he had the ancient texts of his people tattoed all across his back, arms, and the left side of his head, so that he would never forget the teachings. After some time it was discovered what he did and he was banished from the city. After bing cast back in the desert, he honed his ability to hunt in order to survive. Eventually he caught a caravan to another, farther away city. He has been a hunter ever since.
Draconis Nightcrawlis
21-08-2006, 14:36
So Ddienw should just walk into the bar and gop up to him?
Nation of Fortune
21-08-2006, 17:51
Or he could have already been there and watched him pass out.

Either is fine.
Draconis Nightcrawlis
22-08-2006, 03:14
What are the limits on weapons if any? Can Ddienw have a zat'ni'katel?
Nation of Fortune
22-08-2006, 03:18
Dare I ask what the hell that is?

I prefer if we stuck to projectile weapons, so assuming it is one, then he is more than welcome to use it. I just feel that the likely hood of creating a weapon that doesnt' fire a solid projectile is highly unlikely.
Draconis Nightcrawlis
22-08-2006, 03:22
It's a weapon off Stargate, Val was shot by one in that 'Princes Coming Of Age' thread.

It shoots a type of energy, one shot stuns, the second kills.
Nation of Fortune
22-08-2006, 03:24
I see, and that was a really long time ago. I'd prefer he not have one.
Draconis Nightcrawlis
22-08-2006, 03:29
Ok, no prob then. What should he have in place of a zat'ni'katel?
Nation of Fortune
22-08-2006, 05:24
I think any sort of pistol would work just fine.

I'm gonna wait for Megas and Wandering Vagabonds to post, I don't really want to get so far ahead that they can't keep up.
Ravea
22-08-2006, 05:47
Name: Eschaton
Gender: Male
Age: 37
Height: 5’11
Build: Bulky
Hair: Black
Eyes: Black
Skin: White

A mysterious man, Eschaton is a very solitary and deadly figure; he rarely talks, even if directly addressed. A brilliant killer and a genious alchemist, he prefers to use subtle means of assassination; he carries a high-powered dart rifle tipped with his very own poisions. Depending on which poisions are used, the weapon is capable of instantly killing or paralyzing any living organism. He also uses poision-tipped needles for close range combat, and posesses a very large custom pistol, complete with improvised explosive ammunition. Eschaton usually wears a long brown overcoat and a pair of square sunglasses.

His origins are unknown; there are no records of his life before the age of 26, when he became a bounty hunter.
Nation of Fortune
22-08-2006, 06:00
Looks great, get an IC post asap.
Draconis Nightcrawlis
22-08-2006, 14:36
Ah standard pistol it is then.
Megas
22-08-2006, 21:29
Posted. Sorry for the delay, but classes just started and I was getting my financial aid in order.

EDIT: I also updated my character post with some info on Esdras.
Balanite
22-08-2006, 23:53
May I join? The other one I'm in is going rather slow lately.
Nation of Fortune
23-08-2006, 01:20
Sure. We have more than enough bounty hunters though, so I would suggest something like a civilian, or something a bit less focused. You could even be a nephew of the passed out man. If you go that path, his name is Jacob Lauber.
Balanite
24-08-2006, 12:29
Alright. I'll just re-use one of my characters from a forgotten rp.

Name: Uni Sinclair
Gender: Female
Age: 21
Build: Average
Hair: Light Brown
Eyes: Blue
Skin: Lightly Tanned
Appearance: Clothes one size too large. Trousers rolled up all the way above the knees and pinned. Short hair, long enough to cover her ears and forehead. She has thin eyebrows, and a birthmark happens to be above her right one, hidden by the hair.

Uni Sinclair grew up around farm animals, understanding at a young age that they were all going to die and be eaten (the animals). She knows how to milk a cow, bath a pig, and shear a sheep.

Used to living alone on the farmstead apart from her brother, she lacks people skills, and often tell them directly the unfiltered truth, making her sticking out like a sore thumb. She feels awkward and clumsy in the enclosed space.

She loves food, especially pork sandwiches, yet doesn't seem to get fat from it, an ability admired by many. She has a simple mind and an aura of self-content. Some people feel unwell in her presence, but she dismisses it as something to worry about never.

ooc: Sorry, I'm feeling cheerful today.
Megas
24-08-2006, 21:29
NoF, I hope you don't mind my incorporating what I thought might be Nickel's reaction to Esdras' comments in to my post. I think it follow's Nickel's perception of Esdras quite well, no?

If you don't think so, just let me know, and I'll edit my post and not do it again.
Nation of Fortune
25-08-2006, 03:50
Sure, no problem, and you were right that was how she would feel. If he had gone any further though, things would be looking very grim for him.

@Balanite

Looks interesting. I have a perfect way to have you meet up with us. Assuming she is from a poor family, which seems very likely. We won't be able to actually land in NoF, since she will be living on Earth (assumed) she will be very likely to be chased by any number of things, bandits, gangs, anything, you could have her being chased, and bump into us shortly after we arrive on Earth.
Balanite
25-08-2006, 09:05
I can also make her a niece of that drunk guy if you wish.
Nation of Fortune
25-08-2006, 09:07
Nah, it's fine as is. Working it that way would be too awkward to work smoothly.
Megas
26-08-2006, 15:57
Sure, no problem, and you were right that was how she would feel. If he had gone any further though, things would be looking very grim for him.

Lol, that's what I figured. I'm trying something new with Esdras, and I'm not exactly sure which way I'm going to develop his character, yet.
Nation of Fortune
31-08-2006, 06:56
I found out I'm going to boot camp the first week of october, so before then lets get this RP rolling, and get some IC posts.
Draconis Nightcrawlis
31-08-2006, 14:46
Well if someone interects with him, Ddienw will talk, if not he'll just stay in that meditating/sleeping position.
Megas
31-08-2006, 16:51
Well, Esdras spoke to Eschaton, and is now waiting for a response.
Draconis Nightcrawlis
07-09-2006, 21:48
Should we bother waiting for the stragglers? We could end up waiting a long time for them.
Nation of Fortune
07-09-2006, 21:54
Should we bother waiting for the stragglers? We could end up waiting a long time for them.

You raise a good point, I'll send them a TG, and then make a post asap.
Balanite
08-09-2006, 11:01
I'm just waiting a bit while you guys land on earth.
Nation of Fortune
08-09-2006, 16:55
Not really too much you can do until we get on Earth.
Daruhjistan
08-09-2006, 20:13
Might I ask if I can join in with the following character?


Name: Robert DeSarre
Gender: Male
Age: 28
Height: 5'11"
Build: Lean, wiry and muscular.
Hair: Dark brown, slightly overdue crew-cut, scraggly beard.
Eyes: Flint grey.
Skin: Very well-tanned.

Robert got on Earth as an accident. He was hired to be a guard for a rich tourist who wanted to see the dregs of mankind, but things went wrong. Despite his extensive combat training and field experience, Robert, his fellow bodyguards and the crew of the ship they had taken failed to protect the ship and it was taken by a gang seeking to get off-world. Unfortunately, the ship crashed very shortly after takeoff.

With no way to contact anyone off-planet, they tried to make it in this new environnment. However, with only Robert having any sort of ability to survive in an hostile environment, first the rich man and then the rest of the group either died or went on their own way. As the last survivor, he made a home of sorts for himself in a ramshackle but serviceable house in the middle of a small community where no one asks any questions.

In the ways of clothing, he has done away with the utliities he had brought with him, instead falling back on civilian clothes. His preference runs towards cargo pants, a sweater or long-sleeved shirt, his own tactical vest and then a long, tough overcoat. His pistol is permanently strapped to his right thigh and his grossesmesser, or German-style long-knife, is at his left hip. His rifle, though, he always seems to keep close to hand. It is to note that his gear is extremely well-maintained, and because he uses common calibers, finding ammunition is not much of a problem and his house is well-provisionned.
Nation of Fortune
08-09-2006, 20:34
Sounds fine, it is getting a bit crowded, but so long as you prove worthwhile you are welcome to join.

Why don't we have Robert meet up with Uni, and save her from...... whatever you decide. While they are leaving the community for reasons I'll leave up to you, why not run into our ship as it lands, which should be shortly.
Daruhjistan
08-09-2006, 21:22
I'll post once you land on Earth.
Nation of Fortune
08-09-2006, 22:08
I'll post once you land on Earth.

I was actually thinking you and Uni could get together before we land, but whatever.
Daruhjistan
08-09-2006, 22:40
That works too, thank you for the nudge there :)

I'll make a point to make contact with the farmstead, then.
Nation of Fortune
08-09-2006, 23:08
That works too, thank you for the nudge there :)

I'll make a point to make contact with the farmstead, then.

Sounds like a plan. Just get a hold of Balanite, and work things out.
Nation of Fortune
08-09-2006, 23:20
I simply must say, I love your post. You will do great things on this forum.
Balanite
09-09-2006, 10:40
If you guys are uncomfortable with the first-person narrative, I'll change.

It's just I like the idea of the unreliable narrator, who happens to be a bit overconfident.
Nation of Fortune
09-09-2006, 10:45
If you guys are uncomfortable with the first-person narrative, I'll change.

Its just I like the idea of the unreliable narrator, who happens to be a bit overconfident.

I personally have never been fond of the first person narrative in an RP, but if you want to do it, I'm not going to stop you.

That may be because it's hard to control multiple characters in the first person, and often times I do so. Although if you'd rather do first person, I'll work with it.
Balanite
09-09-2006, 15:33
I guess its quite problematic for the plot to keep switching from one person to third.

Thanks for being flexible to my language experiments.
Megas
09-09-2006, 19:46
Yeah, sorry it took me so long to post. This past week has been very busy for in RL. So much so that I've got half the GFFA and the ESUS breathing down my neck waiting for me to post in those threads as well.