BENKONATE
27-04-2006, 00:59
a wife is needed for johan lepwich master of benkonate we even will pay even if you just recommend remember to tell why she should dictatoris....is be sure she is pretty
Phalanix
27-04-2006, 03:09
OCC:
As a vet of NS I'd like to offer you some advice on your posting.
I'm sure you don't plan on following it but I'll list some pointers anyways.
1. A two-line topic post is not good.
-Try and make it a fair sized length post, you don't have to make it a whole page but please try your best to make it more than ten or so lines.
2. Be descriptive!
-Simply saying "Need wife, will pay" is not good enough these days. You need to describe what the character is looking for, does he like red heads, does she need to like the same thing, or does she need to be intelligent or a ditz?
-You should also describe what he is like. Is he a kind man, a smart one, or does he have some kind of flaw? Be creative and descriptive.
3. Grammar!
-Use proper grammar! If you have to use a word processor to write your post in go for it!
Well I can't really point anything else out (that I see) but please try your best to put effort into your posts and hopefully you'll become a key NS member.
Oh before I forget, go and read the stickies. They're very very useful.
BENKONATE
28-04-2006, 01:21
a wife is needed for johan lepwich master of benkonate we even will pay even if you just recommend remember to tell why she should dictatoris....is be sure she is pretty also if she is smart funny dependant and truthful comapionate