NationStates Jolt Archive


Dirty Money (Preview)

Gran Cienaga
09-03-2006, 00:37
Undisclosed location west of the Jackknife River, Gran Cienaga

Under the humming, yellowing lightbulb dangling from a silvery chain, Tom sat on the floor eating hot sausage patties on a plate atop a wooden crate. The shack, or rather the shoddy little box in the middle of the swamp, bothered him immensely. He always had the sensation that the walls would someday close in on him or that beams from the ceiling might someday clunk him in the head as he slept. Ignoring these feelings for now, he adjusted himself on the floor, making himself as comfortable as possible in his cramped surroundings. Tiny splinters from the oak-wood floor of the shack had long ago rubbed off on the seat of his trousers so he didn’t have to worry about any sharp prickly pains as he ate his dinner. Ladling syrup over the patties, he stared dully at the “meal” in front of him, sneering as he remembered how much he resented going into hiding in the marsh.

At least it’s the one place that sonofabitch won’t think to look for me.

Remembering the gleaming white veranda of his family home in Andahra only angered him more. Now, in his wife-beater and brown trousers, he looked more like a settler than the wealthy heir he knew himself to be. Without warning, he swiftly punched the side of the crate in a passing fit of rage and spat out curses as crimson blood slowly rose to the surface of his knuckles.

Ah, shit!

Cringing as his hand writhed in throes of pain, he muttered a few more curses before calming down a bit. Picking up his knife and fork off the floor, Tom began to eat when he heard a rapping sound outside the shack. Groaning as he picked himself up off the floor, he flung open the door and lunged outside in search of the noise’s source. To his left, greenish willows reached out to snatch him and the brownish river rushed up against rocks and reeds to whisk him off deeper into frontier territory. Avoiding them both, he stayed close to the side of the shack. Small packs of mosquitoes, half of them probably carrying malaria, danced about in the night air, buzzing and darting under the moonlight. He swatted them with his hand, searching, when he heard another rapping noise on the other side of the cabin. Walking quickly now, he soon found himself on the other side of the cabin yet couldn’t find the source of the sound. After another minute of looking, he shrugged and went back inside, shutting and locking the door behind him.

“You’re pretty far from home. This isn’t Andahra” the voice said as Tom looked up dumbfounded into the eyes of Rob Sears. Decked out with a bandolier over his white, collared shirt and a gleaming silver revolver on his hip, he was a sight to behold for Tom Rollins. His skin had been deeply tanned from years out in the fiery Najan sun and his youthful face belied a much more sinister interior. Rob looked at his acquaintance with squinting eyes, staring at him and chuckling occasionally.

“What the hell! How did you find me?”

“I asked around, wasn’t too hard.” He leaned back and folded his arms across his chest, smirking as he looked around. “Last time I checked, I could’ve sworn you had a bigger place than this.”

“Your mother, what do you want?”

Looking back at Tom, his tone changed suddenly from a mock-jovial one to a much more aggressive one. “You know damn well you oughta take this money!” He pulled out a roll of yellow bills from his shirt pocket behind the bandolier, throwing it in Tom’s face. “Stop pissing me off, bobby!”

“I’m not taking the money!” Tom shouted back, throwing it to the floor and kicking it in Sears’ direction. He rapidly pulled his gun out of his holster in an attempt to mortally wound Rob. Instead of pulling the trigger, however, the revolver flew out of his hand as a burning pain shot through his wrist. A little metallic glint resting on the oak floor was the only hint Tom had that he had just been shot. Shocked, he fell back against the wall as blood spurted out onto his white wife-beater while he cradled his wrist.

“You sonofabitch! You shot me!”

“You know why I had to do that! Don’t make me do it again!” Angrily, he squatted down and picked up the money off the floor, counting again to make sure it was all there. While he counted, he noticed that Tom’s revolver was not where it landed when he shot it out his hand. Looking back up, Rob saw that Tom was frantically trying to position the gun with his good hand.

“Are you actually aiming that at me again?” Bewildered, with his mouth agape, he stared as Tom looked at him defiantly, revolver in hand. “Are you actually aiming that gun at me again!”

Tom didn’t have a chance to fire it though. The next thing he knew, his good hand was nailed by the wrist to the wall, the handle of a small dagger poking out and facing his assailant. Tom let out a cry of agony as his arm tensed up in pain. Rob flung the roll of money against his chest before turning towards the door.

“You know what to do with that.” With that, he walked out into the humid night air, out of Tom’s sight.

NOTE: This is just a preview of an RP I’m planning on doing, I haven’t worked everything out yet. Let me know if you’re interested.
Imitora
09-03-2006, 00:51
Count me as interested.
Gran Cienaga
10-03-2006, 03:02
(OOC: Bump)
Imitora
12-03-2006, 22:04
Any one else, I cant be the only one...
Ttambo
12-03-2006, 22:41
I too am immensely interested. I'd be more than willing to participate.
Gran Cienaga
14-03-2006, 21:26
OOC: OK, so here's the deal, I think I've worked out a basic plot for this. Here's a little background info. Gran Cienaga is essentially divided into two different sections: Cienaga, which is located east of the Navaja River, and the Marchland, located west of the Navaja. The Marchland is almost all frontier except for one state, Saint Tropez, located in the north.

Saint Tropez is a major gambling center in Gran Cienaga and a lot of people with money to spend go there and gamble, Tom Rollins being one of those people. Rollins is prone to drinking in excess and while gambling in Saint Tropez, he insults Rob "Rusty" Sears, infamous outlaw in the Marchland. Instead of shooting Rollins on the spot, Sears shows some mercy and offers to spare his life if Rollins delivers some money for him (money stolen in a bank heist that involved the shootings of three innocent men).

Sears knows that law enforcement agents are going to find this money and shoot him, so he figures that if he passes this money off to someone else, they'll be killed instead. At the last minute Rollins backs out the deal and runs off deep into frontier territory and Sears chases him down. After that, the story's pretty much open to go in any direction. I just need to create roles for a couple more characters and we can start. Any questions or suggestions?
Ttambo
14-03-2006, 23:53
Well, let's hammer some basic shit out. Where was Rollins supposed to deliver the money? We could complicate the plot (and make it more interesting) by saying Sears owed a lot of money to some crime syndicate (Chinese, Russian, Italian, Mexican, pick your poison). So he pulls a bank heist to try to pay them off and gets the cops hot on his tail in doing so. Rather than deliver the money himself to the syndicate, he's passing it off on Rollins, right? Well, maybe Sears is going to try to set the syndicate up. He lets Rollins deliver the money and gets both him and the syndicate busted up by cops, right? That could be the master plan.

Of course, Rollins probably has different ideas. Maybe he wants to take the cash for himself; he runs away with it again, trying to hide in the inner city. The syndicate puts pressure on Sears and maybe sends some goons to rough him up. Sears gives them the story, and now he has to track down Rollins or it's his life. So now Rollins has Sears, the syndicate, and cops after him. We could make the plot even MORE interesting by having some corrupt cops try to cut a deal with Rollins...if he gives them a slice of the money, they'll forget the shit ever happened. These are still real basic ideas but they allow for a lot of badass characters and story development. Let me know what you think.
Gran Cienaga
16-03-2006, 03:56
OK, Rollins would have to deliver the money from Saint Tropez (in West Cienaga) to Andahra (in East Cienaga), which would involve him crossing the border in some form (car, train, boat or plane, depends on the time period).

We can say that Sears, a notorious thief in the frontier but a petty crook in East Cienaga, owed money to the Indian "mafia" because he screwed with the wrong guy in Saint Tropez' casinos and has to pay off his debts. Knowing that the cops would be all over him, he has someone (Rollins) deliver the money for him; if he gets shot by the "mafia" after delivering it, who cares, but Rollins at least has to deliver the money and avoid the cops.

Rollins would want to take the money, at least until someone, let's say Sears' jilted mistress, tips him off about what's going on. This would explain why Sears orders Rollins to take the money and why Rollins would refuse to do so. Rollins only hope is to make it to Avalon, a semi-independent city in Najan territory. The only problem is Rollins would probably have to deal with corrupt cops trying to take the money from him, along with Sears edging him on, and along with the Indian "mafia" looking to kill him after he delivers the money.

This is all preliminary stuff, but it is a way to work out the details.
Ttambo
16-03-2006, 04:36
Sounds good to me. Now we've just got to scrounge together some more interest for the thread. Two or three people's just no fun, so I'll see if I can get some nations I'm familiar with into this.
Gran Cienaga
16-03-2006, 05:07
Sounds good, I have a couple people who should be in on this so that brings us up to five, one more should do it. I can write as the cop, we need others to RP as Rollins, Sears, a member of the Indian mafia and a couple other roles.
Imitora
16-03-2006, 18:34
Hate to do this, but this isn't quite exactly what I thought it would be, so I must back out. Sorry, but best of luck with it!