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Ok, I wannna start a new thread based 10 years after the end of the galactic civil war. Description: Luke Skywalker has just died of natural causes and on his deathbed, appoints a new ruler, Treydonis Kurr. Everything in the galaxy appears to be great, the sith destroyed, trade between systems at it's finest,etc. The jedi are now being trained simply for tradition, but a jedi master, Kyle Kurr, brother of the new ruler of the galaxy, is concerned. He realizes peace never lasts for too long. there is a young Zabrak named Bosphan Tradonis who hates the jedi and shows great interest in the teachings of the sith and also has a great knowledge of the force. He is planning something, darkness seems to be creeping into the galaxy yet again...
http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=459627
Need a few villians/sith(around 3) and about 10 good side/jedi characters

Name:

Powers 2 for apprentices and 4 for masters(You become a master/lord by being on this thread for a while and fighting battles):

Bio:

Side:

Weapon(what kind of lightsaber/blaster):

I am interested. Give me a minute to create a character.

Name: Liam

Bio: Can be found here (at the bottom of the post) (http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showpost.php?p=9876139&postcount=2). At this point in his life he was wandering the galaxy (ignore last two paragraphs of bio)

Powers: Force Enlightenment, Force Wave

Side: Neutral

Weapon: Dual-Phase Lightsaber, silver blade, electrum hilt.



Tell me if you have any questions or concerns.

I'm interested. Of course, I'll take the side of the Jedi on this one.

Name: Seriph Tallia (http://www.zmms.tu-berlin.de/modys/team/sandro/martial/big-Sandro%20-%20Jedi%20Knight.jpg)

Powers: Force Push, Jedi Mind-Trick

Bio: Born in 10 BBY, despite his age, he has proven himself to be a worthy Jedi on many occasions. His Master was Luke Skywalker, and with his death, Tallia has found himself thrust into the role of a Jedi Knight. Having learned directly from Skywalker, he feels obliged to continue the name of this hero. He has approached Kyle Kurr with this idea, and hopes to be allowed to continue. He too has felt the pull of the Dark Side emanating from Bosphan Tradonis, and is highly mistrusting of him. He has felt the touch of the Dark Side on his soul, but has mastered his emotions. He uses the fifth form of lightsaber combat, having mastered both Shien (better for blocking blasters) and Djem So (better for blade to blade combat). However, his style is also heavily based upon that of Master Skywalker, who had forged an entirely new form from many of the others. Now, he joins the fight for light...

Age: 23

Side: Light

Weapon: Lightsaber - Deep Green. Electrum hilt. Single Phase

I will play as Bosphan Tradonis, Kyle Kurr and the Emperor

I will play as Bosphan Tradonis, Kyle Kurr and the Emperor

Name:Bosphan Tradonis

Bio: Bosphan is a gifted zabrak, a very skilled mechanic who helps design ships , he is incredibly in touch with the force, and as such, was a highly recruited man for the jedi. They sought to teach him, but after they accepted him, they quickly realized his lust for power and utter hatred of almost all things were not the correct charactersistics of a jedi. They cast him out and thought nothing of it. But now he wants revenge, he is now putting the finishing touches on his upgraded ship, the cms Striker. He will travel to Korriban and learn the ways of the sith and punish the foolish jedi...

Age:28

Powers:none... yet

Abilites:Great natural knowledge of the force, brilliant enginner, very good shot

weapons:Zabrak heavy Blaster(2), SWcoped Blaster rifle

side:unknown

I will play as Bosphan Tradonis, Kyle Kurr and the Emperor

okay.

BTW: Do you want thirteen characters or thirteen people (IRL)? Because having thirteen nations in one character RP can get quite hard to manage...

okay.

BTW: Do you want thirteen characters or thirteen people (IRL)? Because having thirteen nations in one character RP can get quite hard to manage...
A good question.

okay.

BTW: Do you want thirteen characters or thirteen people (IRL)? Because having thirteen nations in one character RP can get quite hard to manage...
13 characters, with me having 3

13 characters, with me having 3

ah okay. Well, I am only going to RP one character for now... but if you want more and can't find anybody to do them... I might add a character.

btw: if you have any questions about Liam feel free to ask - I wrote the sign up very poorly.

Name: Kyle Kurr

Bio: A great jedi master who did not participate in the wars, Kyle Kurr's bravery,skill as a jedi, and intelligence(not to mention he is the brother of the emperor) Has catapulted him into an elite status. He commands a great fleet of ships and has his own jedi academy on Coruscant, the capital of the galaxy. He helps queel any local rebbelions and seems to be the only being in the galaxy who senses a great disturbance in the force. He will play a huge role in the war to come.

Age:41

Weapons:Bright Green Lightsaber

Abilities:Great warrior all around, Brilliant politician and great commander

Force powers:Force speed,Force wave, Force heal,Force push

Side:Good

ah okay. Well, I am only going to RP one character for now... but if you want more and can't find anybody to do them... I might add a character.

btw: if you have any questions about Liam feel free to ask - I wrote the sign up very poorly.

no problem, he was fine and you could make a character now if you want

one more thing, if you read my character bios you'll find that i left out a little information in the opening like age , so adding that for your characters that would be great

1) My point was that I didn't want to make another character, but if we can't find enough people or characters... I will - but now now.
2) If you click the link it will lead to everything about Liam (if you go to the bottom of the post). At this point in his life he is wandering the galaxy, so he is right up to the point before he founds an academy.

Yeah thanks, I know both those things though, i was mostly talking to snake eater,

btw: I'm not gonna make a vharacter bio for the emperor because he does not fight(mostly), but i will right some rp segments for him

Yeah thanks, I know both those things though, i was mostly talking to snake eater

oh, okay. My bad - just making sure.

Yeah thanks, I know both those things though, i was mostly talking to snake eater

1) I am Snake Eaters, or SE. Not Snake Eater.

2) My post has been edited.

k, now we just need 1 more sith to join tradonis and maybe 1 or 2 more jedi and we'll be good

k, now we just need 1 more sith to join tradonis and maybe 1 or 2 more jedi and we'll be good

I am pretty sure I could get a couple people to join if you want. Theao and CoreWorlds will most likely join, but it is up to the two of you also if you want me to ask them.

I am pretty sure I could get a couple people to join if you want. Theao and CoreWorlds will most likely join, but it is up to the two of you also if you want me to ask them.
cool, get em, and by the way, im quitting the academy 3 one, its kinda dumb

cool, get em, and by the way, im quitting the academy 3 one, its kinda dumb

umm, okay...

I would like 2 join

Name: Carth Onasi
Powers:Force lightning, Lightsaber throw
Bio: Carth Onasi is a mandilorian and fought alongside Canreros Ordo. After the mandilorian wars, Carth became a soilder for the Republic and was helping the jedi, Bastila and Andre. About 4 months, he found out that Andre was the long lost Sith Lord Revan. After helping deafet Revan old apprentis Darth Malak, Carth had gone missing for 17 year until now...
Side: Republic
Weapon:Dual short lighsabers (2 yoda sabers. but blue)

umm, okay...
whats up with ytou sounding weirded out?

I would like 2 join

Name: Carth Onasi
Powers:Force lightning, Lightsaber throw
Bio: Carth Onasi is a mandilorian and fought alongside Canreros Ordo. After the mandilorian wars, Carth became a soilder for the Republic and was helping the jedi, Bastila and Andre. About 4 months, he found out that Andre was the long lost Sith Lord Revan. After helping deafet Revan old apprentis Darth Malak, Carth had gone missing for 17 year until now...
Side: Republic
Weapon:Dual short lighsabers (2 yoda sabers. but blue)
buddy this is set like a thousand of yaers after the mandalorian wars, just fix that and its fine

I would like 2 join

Name: Carth Onasi
Powers:Force lightning, Lightsaber throw
Bio: Carth Onasi is a mandilorian and fought alongside Canreros Ordo. After the mandilorian wars, Carth became a soilder for the Republic and was helping the jedi, Bastila and Andre. About 4 months, he found out that Andre was the long lost Sith Lord Revan. After helping deafet Revan old apprentis Darth Malak, Carth had gone missing for 17 year until now...
Side: Republic
Weapon:Dual short lighsabers (2 yoda sabers. but blue)

Um... not very creative are you?

you didn't change a single them from Kotor.

whats up with ytou sounding weirded out?

Not wiereded out. Just wondering why you think its dumb before even getting involved (though it is your right to).

I guess we could start now and I could rp the zabrak going to korriban then finding a sith there(this would require for you to make him dmg)then they train togeter

I guess we could start now and I could rp the zabrak going to korriban then finding a sith there(this would require for you to make him dmg)then they train togeter

uh... okay, if you want I will make a Sith character... give me a minute

Not wiereded out. Just wondering why you think its dumb before even getting involved (though it is your right to).
your right, but just like to have a little control so i made my own

your right, but just like to have a little control so i made my own

ah I see... anyway here is the sith character (if you have any problems...):

Name: Brianna (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b360/DMG2005/Brianna.jpg)

Powers: Choke/Kill and Dominate Mind

Bio: One of the last Sith alive, she was an apprentice to a powerful Sith Lord before he was defeated. She now seaks revenge on those who killed him and all but wiped out the sith ideology.

Side: Dark/Sith

Weapon: Double bladed red lightsaber

k, perfecto, i'll start the icc thread now

I am interested

Name: Locutus

Powers: Force Lightning, force Crush

Bio: Little of locutus's life is known. His age is beyond years. He is older than any known object. The star forge only counts for the last 1 percent of his life. He was born into a normal life. When he was 12 he was taken in by a dark lord who's name is unknown. He learned a lot about the force within a month, and he eventually killked his master. After his training, he went back to his home world, and with the help of a conjured army, took it over easily. He resided over his old school mates, and always kept them in line. After many years and many assasination attempts, he left. He wandered around the galaxy killing anyone that stood in his way. One day he met up with a group of jedi who imprisoned him in an ancient temple on Korriban. Every so many years he was reincarnated, and then re imrprisoned, each time growing more powerful. Now this time he plans not to be imprisoned, as he now holds the ancient holocrons created for the powerful 8 masters of the galaxy in his possesion, and he has found a 9th, which actually belongs 2 him. Now he hopes to bring the sith 2 their true placement of rulers of the galaxy.

Side:beyond Evil

Lightsaber: 2 Dual-bladed, Crimson red, lightsabers (one sporting a blackhole that makes other blackholes seem like they have a -g force. It has a great power)

I am interested

Name: Locutus

Powers: Force Lightning, force Crush

Bio: Little of locutus's life is known. His age is beyond years. He is older than any known object. The star forge only counts for the last 1 percent of his life. He was born into a normal life. When he was 12 he was taken in by a dark lord who's name is unknown. He learned a lot about the force within a month, and he eventually killked his master. After his training, he went back to his home world, and with the help of a conjured army, took it over easily. He resided over his old school mates, and always kept them in line. After many years and many assasination attempts, he left. He wandered around the galaxy killing anyone that stood in his way. One day he met up with a group of jedi who imprisoned him in an ancient temple on Korriban. Every so many years he was reincarnated, and then re imrprisoned, each time growing more powerful. Now this time he plans not to be imprisoned, as he now holds the ancient holocrons created for the powerful 8 masters of the galaxy in his possesion, and he has found a 9th, which actually belongs 2 him. Now he hopes to bring the sith 2 their true placement of rulers of the galaxy.

Side:beyond Evil

Lightsaber: 2 Dual-bladed, Crimson red, lightsabers (one sporting a blackhole that makes other blackholes seem like they have a -g force. It has a great power)

uh... seems like that will get a no (from me at least)

I am interested

Name: Locutus

Powers: Force Lightning, force Crush

Bio: Little of locutus's life is known. His age is beyond years. He is older than any known object. The star forge only counts for the last 1 percent of his life. He was born into a normal life. When he was 12 he was taken in by a dark lord who's name is unknown. He learned a lot about the force within a month, and he eventually killked his master. After his training, he went back to his home world, and with the help of a conjured army, took it over easily. He resided over his old school mates, and always kept them in line. After many years and many assasination attempts, he left. He wandered around the galaxy killing anyone that stood in his way. One day he met up with a group of jedi who imprisoned him in an ancient temple on Korriban. Every so many years he was reincarnated, and then re imrprisoned, each time growing more powerful. Now this time he plans not to be imprisoned, as he now holds the ancient holocrons created for the powerful 8 masters of the galaxy in his possesion, and he has found a 9th, which actually belongs 2 him. Now he hopes to bring the sith 2 their true placement of rulers of the galaxy.

Side:beyond Evil

Lightsaber: 2 Dual-bladed, Crimson red, lightsabers (one sporting a blackhole that makes other blackholes seem like they have a -g force. It has a great power)
k, great stuff, but uh, thats a little powerful for this, the way yoore described you dont need any help and youll just kill my guy when he gets there, make him a little weaker and younger and then we could form a powrful trio of sith, you dont even need to rewrite it, lets just assume youre a young mandalorian or something and get rid of the lightning. then we could all 3 meet up at korriban

anyways, i guess ill actually start the icc thread tomorrow as i dont feel like doing it now but i'll still stay on right now and accept new people

I am interested

Name: Locutus

Powers: Force Lightning, force Crush

Bio: Little of locutus's life is known. His age is beyond years. He is older than any known object. The star forge only counts for the last 1 percent of his life. He was born into a normal life. When he was 12 he was taken in by a dark lord who's name is unknown. He learned a lot about the force within a month, and he eventually killked his master. After his training, he went back to his home world, and with the help of a conjured army, took it over easily. He resided over his old school mates, and always kept them in line. After many years and many assasination attempts, he left. He wandered around the galaxy killing anyone that stood in his way. One day he met up with a group of jedi who imprisoned him in an ancient temple on Korriban. Every so many years he was reincarnated, and then re imrprisoned, each time growing more powerful after having regained what he lost. Now this time he plans not to be imprisoned, as he now holds the ancient holocrons created for the powerful 8 masters of the galaxy in his possesion, and he has found a 9th, which actually belongs 2 him. Until recently he lost all identity of who he was after being re-awakened, and even though he regained his identity his powers remain lost to him. He will need a lot of help 2 regain his power, as most of it was lost.
Now he hopes to bring the sith 2 their true placement of rulers of the galaxy.

Side:beyond Evil

Lightsaber: 2 Dual-bladed, Crimson red, lightsabers (one sporting a blackhole that makes other blackholes seem like they have a -g force. It has a great power)



There is that better???? (not being sarcastic or anything if it sounds that way)

There is that better???? (not being sarcastic or anything if it sounds that way)
That will work, although it stil isnt great, so im done for the day ill start the other thread tommorow

and btw...... That guy has been in my mind for 4 years, I haven't even finished his story, and I there is no way I could Write his entire bio in a post, I mean If i wrote it on paper, i could make a several hundred page book, Though knowing his full story, he actaully is weaker then i describe him, those are his highlights

doesn't seem any better to me...

Saying that he can use Force Lightning and Force Crush (even if "it is lost to him for now") is too powerful...

Saying after studying for only a month, he was able to kill his master and take over an entire planet with a "conjured" army, is too powerful...

Saying he is older than time... well that is just ridiculous...

Saying his lightsaber has a blackhole in it... I don't even know how to respond to that it is so crazy...


I could go on about how you should tone down your character, but I think you get the point. If this is your first time on the forums, maybe you should read the stickies and learn to RP better before starting here.

not being mean, but i said eventually, like i said if i told you the whole story it would be diff, maybe one of these days for an interesting book to read (if i end up writing it) you could read his biography. 20 years took place between being entered as an apprentice, and him killing his master!, and actually force crush, is not that bad, I have played kotor2 and it barely kills sith troopers, not 2 mention jedi! and here, I will make some edits!:

About his older than time: ok first, I will just put, thousands of years, secondly, I told you he wasn't alive the whole time. He was esentually dead for a large portion of it.

about the lightsaber: I will edit that (a mini-black hole) obviously you have never heard of Jedi Academy the game!.

And the army, was made with help, of an older (starforge like) creation, that basically was an older starforge, if that is any better!

and lets just leave his power lost for until either he dies, is imprisoned, or wins, not saying which, (which actually, if you are gonna keep droning on about my errors, i would prefer if he is imprisoned, and his story temperaraly ended)

if any other come up, or i remeber another, or if u want me 2 actually fix something ask instead of b**** about it!

Just saying it isn't a good idea or a fun RP if your character is a massively powerful character with all the information in the world and older than time.

(I too have played Kotor 2 and force crush is the second most powerful force power, next to force storm)

i never said he had all the info, god i would hate that, what good would books be, lmao!;)

and in case u didn't read the other post since i edited it, i changed his age, part, feel free 2 NICELY <----- that is emphasized!, ask me to change something!

and in case u didn't read the other post since i edited it, i changed his age, part, feel free 2 NICELY <----- that is emphasized!, ask me to change something!

okay.

Sorry for snapping at you, I am just really mad at somebody in another thread right now, and my anger is carrying over.

oh, welll........ ok, as long as im not the source!:D

Name:Jack Ryan

Bio: Was young when he found his force powers. When he was ten he went to the Jedi Academy to train. Was one of the first new Jedis to be trained by Luke. The years after he perfected his Force Speed and Push.

Age:16

Powers:Force Speed and Force Push

Abilites:Intelligent

Weapons:Green lightsaber

Side: Good Jedi

okay, i see you two are getting along famously, anyways, im bored and ive already beaten call of duty 2 twice, so iguess ill start rping now

Name:Jack Ryan

Bio: Was young when he found his force powers. When he was ten he went to the Jedi Academy to train. Was one of the first new Jedis to be trained by Luke. The years after he perfected his Force Speed and Push.

Age:16

Powers:Force Speed and Force Push

Abilites:Intelligent

Weapons:Green lightsaber

Side: Good Jedi
k, you'll be on coruscant when the three sith attack then you'll be thrown into the fight

also, i guess i should have mentioned, the army was a small set of clone troopers (not stormies) and the planet was still in the ballistic age!, and The rule was more based on fright!

Dude, man, COD2 rocks! (if you are interested, I am in a clan called RS, they are a gaming div., and if u want you could apply for a position in the COD div!)

also, i guess i should have mentioned, the army was a small set of clone troopers (not stormies) and the planet was still in the ballistic age!, and The rule was more based on fright!

that would have helped :P

well, like i said 2 put it all in writing would take several hundred pages!

IC Thread (http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=459627)

k, so when i get there i guess you dmg(sith character) should be there and we run into each other, each of us there to do the same thing, then we get inside the abandoned academy and find lord(forgot your name,sry) then we free him and begin our training, everyone else(Jedi) just rp yourself doing everyday stuff on your planet until the war starts

alright...

(just a reminder: Liam (my "jedi character"), if you know his history, was a jedi though he fell to the darkside. Currently he is wandering the outer rim and the dark places of the world. He does not affiliate himself with Jedi or Sith... he is neutral (sort of ;) )

:) locutus is my name, playing Rp is my game, and if u want call me loc, or locut!

Democracaaay: I would reccomend editing the OP or making a new post with Bosphan arriving on Korriban and describing what your other character (jedi one) is doing presently. Then it will be easier for the rest of us to post.

Name:Ershuude Del Korra

Powers: Force Jump And Battle Meditation

Bio: Adoptive father was one of Lukes original apprentices. Mother is Unknown, traveler who died in childbirth. Raise in the Jedi Temple on Yavin IV. Choosen to be trained at age 2.5. Father was the last jedi to be killed in conflict. Ershuude took his adoptive fathers death very hard.

Abilities: Naturally athletic, Strong (physicly)

Homeworld: Yavin IV

Age: 17

Side:Light

Weapon(what kind of lightsaber/blaster): One Turquoise bladed lightsaber and one Blue(his fathers lightsaber). Weilds them one at a time.

Democracaaay: I would reccomend editing the OP or making a new post with Bosphan arriving on Korriban and describing what your other character (jedi one) is doing presently. Then it will be easier for the rest of us to post.
What kurr is doing is kinda irelevant at this time and i wanted you guys to describe your landins on korriban first

oh, and ya, for the beginning of the story, my character's (locutus) spirit is imprisoned in the temple, if anyone needed 2 know! He needs 2 people 2 bring him out, and they need 2 find the holocrons in the temple (no need 2 go into detail for looking for them, the are in the main hall, in the walls!)

What kurr is doing is kinda irelevant at this time and i wanted you guys to describe your landins on korriban first

it is still part of the RP and kind of sets the scene.

edit: loc, you might want to make an IC post saying something about your character being in the temple or such.

it is still part of the RP and kind of sets the scene.

edit: loc, you might want to make an IC post saying something about your character being in the temple or such.
fine,fine

it is still part of the RP and kind of sets the scene.

edit: loc, you might want to make an IC post saying something about your character being in the temple or such.
fine,fine

there fixed my opening thing, also the advesary is liam and ill make a post for kurr now

there fixed my opening thing, also the advesary is liam and ill make a post for kurr now

you want them to meet this early? alright... though know that Liam isn't getting seriously injured - and I assume both characters will be walking away from the fight (if there is one).

Piece of advice, Loc, don't use the number 2, to mean "to" or "too"

you want them to meet this early? alright... though know that Liam isn't getting seriously injured - and I assume both characters will be walking away from the fight (if there is one).
they wont even fight, its just that my character is very edgy and catious by nature, they will become teamates i was thinking

advice taken, internet habbit, lmao!

advice taken, internet habbit, lmao!
By the way im going to team up with liam(hopefully) then were going to scour the academy for survivors and find you, would you like to add anything to that, like what room we find you in or anything?

In there you will find Powerful holocrons, there are 8 of them, but don't be fretting over a long search, they are easy 2 find, and all you need to say is lke "in our searches we found 8 powerful holocrons, that seemed to pulsate with emense power." then One of them is needed 2 opend a Huge locked door, Inside you will find a statue of Locutus, and 8 holes where the holocrons go, then you guys will do whatever pleases you and then the room will shake, after that i will do that part.

Dmg, we were supposed to face off then realize we have similar goals, you wrote it like my guy wasnt there

Dmg, we were supposed to face off then realize we have similar goals, you wrote it like my guy wasnt there

kind of confused. In your IC post did you mean the person to be Brianna (the sith) when he spun around. Because in your OOC post about it you said the adversary would be Liam - but he doesn't have similar goals at all.

Goreing. You might want to work on the grammar of your post - write it in Microsoft Word or something before you post it. Just a suggestion.

kind of confused. In your IC post did you mean the person to be Brianna (the sith) when he spun around. Because in your OOC post about it you said the adversary would be Liam - but he doesn't have similar goals at all.
yeah sry, just a little confused, i meant he faces off with your sith character then realizes she is not an enemy and then they start a little syndicate of sith that will include loctus's character,liam has his own goals apparently. but make sure he doesnt find the loctus's character

yeah sry, just a little confused, i meant he faces off with your sith character then realizes she is not an enemy and then they start a little syndicate of sith that will include loctus's character,liam has his own goals apparently. but make sure he doesnt find the loctus's character

my apologies. Liam isn't even supposed to be on Korriban - I will edit my post about where he is and then you can have your character meet up with Brianna just inside the temple.

my apologies. Liam isn't even supposed to be on Korriban - I will edit my post about where he is and then you can have your character meet up with Brianna just inside the temple.
no problem

if you want them to meet up, you are going to have to do it. Brianna is located in the first room at the entrance to the temple.

there now youre going to need to rp negotiating with my guy, and then we will start our own syndicate

okay, though she is quite mysterious and may give half answers.

K, so once u guys finish your mission on taka'men you need to rp your self being called into a big gathering by master kurr

Ssry, if my post was a little long, lmao, had to get all that in

Ssry, if my post was a little long, lmao, had to get all that in
No it was cool, and set the stage for my guy being scared shitless,lol

k, now we'll start describing the training for a few posts, with me making a few posts about kurr in between. Then after two or three posts about training, my guy will turn into an incredibly gifted sith apprentice and rewrite my bio because then ill have force powers, also brianna will become more skilled and be on the brink of becoming a lord, and and the powerful old sith will regain alot of his old power, then as were about to leave to go get new sith apprentices, we are attacked by A fleet of the empire led by kyle kurr, but everyone will make it out okay. But there will be a verbal confrontation

righty ho! :) ;)

k, plan changed, there willl be no sith besides us, it willl be a droid army, what we'll do is trat with this small army, then as we grow in power, we'll travel to surrounding planets stealing droids and slaughtering resistance, then when everything appears well, kurr will amass an army with the two jedi characters, and attack us, after that its all the same

k, though I haven't really planned what to do with Liam yet.

k, though I haven't really planned what to do with Liam yet.
No problem, how about in our main characters quest for power, they eventually start hiring mercs and spies, and liam ends up being one of them?

No problem, how about in our main characters quest for power, they eventually start hiring mercs and spies, and liam ends up being one of them?

not really his cup of tea... nor does he like the sith.

:) well For tonight thats all my fun, but in 7 hours from this post I shall, be back, maybe an hour or so earlier or later so peace out!:D

:) well For tonight thats all my fun, but in 7 hours from this post I shall, be back, maybe an hour or so earlier or later so peace out!:D

I won't be back on until past 10 am ET most likely, though I have no idea when in reality.

not really his cup of tea... nor does he like the sith.
okay, fine

well, actually, i got a small bit of time left, but don't be surprized if i stop posting

question: what planet is Kurr and the emperor on? and what are they doing at the moment? (I think I found away to mix Liam in)

question: what planet is Kurr and the emperor on? and what are they doing at the moment? (I think I found away to mix Liam in)
jedi master Kurr is on Yavin 4 with the other two jedi rpers and they are training. Emperor is on coruscant in the imperial palace managingday-to day affairs

ok, thanks.

can you have someone try to interact with Liam. He is supposed to be at the hq, capital, enclave (whatever you want to call it) where the emperor is.

can you have someone try to interact with Liam. He is supposed to be at the hq, capital, enclave (whatever you want to call it) where the emperor is.
Sure

My guy will need a lightsasber when he begins training, how about my guy makes one from some of the parts brianna found?

No, he shall venture in to the cavern, as a test, and inside it he will find all the parts he needs. The crystals in the cavern have had time to grow with great power.

No, he shall venture in to the cavern, as a test, and inside it he will find all the parts he needs. The crystals in the cavern have had time to grow with great power.
will that be before or after im done training?

will that be before or after im done training?

generally before... so that you can use the lightsaber during the training.

more of in the middle. You will begin with force training to enter the cavern, then you will come out, and begin lightsaber construction. Then you will train for a few weeks before training will become a more part time thing

more of in the middle. You will begin with force training to enter the cavern, then you will come out, and begin lightsaber construction. Then you will train for a few weeks before training will become a more part time thing
sure tang, we should probably keep doing slighty irrrelevant things as the jedi characters will have a hard time catching up

good thinking.

btw: Would you mind if I brought Liam to Korriban for a brief and ominous visit. They could try to attack him, but he would still be more powerful at present time - though he has no will to kill them, so he will leave peacefully.

good thinking.

btw: Would you mind if I brought Liam to Korriban for a brief and ominous visit. They could try to attack him, but he would still be more powerful at present time - though he has no will to kill them, so he will leave peacefully.
cool, how about some patrol droids spot him and he just gives himself up so he can speak to us?

most assuredly, as it would fit in about now.....

okay...

(but gives up is a relative term in this case)

What i mean is, he gets captured on purpose, he could easily destroy them if he wanted to

What i mean is, he gets captured on purpose, he could easily destroy them if he wanted to

I know... though your character might as well find him as the sith lord said.

dang, where are all the jedi characters?

thats your cue Loc

We seriously need to begin training, master kurr is already about to talk to the emperor and ammas the army, although I guess i could staal them and say that they got lost or something

fluid time...

the scene in the academy on korriban could be happening while Kurr was still back on Yavin.

fluid time...

the scene in the academy on korriban could be happening while Kurr was still back on Yavin.
good thinking, all the sith stuff thats hapening is based on when the two jedi were on taka'men how bout

good thinking, all the sith stuff thats hapening is based on when the two jedi were on taka'men how bout

yeh something like that

fight fight fight!,lmao!

fight fight fight!,lmao!

possibly... soon enough... possibly

No offense meant Dem. It is just nice to keep the IC thread of OOC comments unless they are attatched to a relevant IC post.

No offense meant Dem. It is just nice to keep the IC thread of OOC comments unless they are attatched to a relevant IC post.
you're right, thats the whole reason they made this one i guess

you're right, thats the whole reason they made this one i guess

that and for signup :p

just to tell you, that is GM.

Hey, Locutus, can you RP what happened in the cave...

hmmmm, probably....

hmmmm, probably....

thanks... I am kind of busy for a few minutes

anyone gonna make a post, c'mon

look look, I speck.... lol "classic Jar Jar"

You actually need all of these also

# A handgrip
# An activation stud plate
# A safety switch
# An emitter matrix
# A lens assembly (focusing crystal)
# A blade-length adjuster (only on Dual-Length Lightsabers)
# A power cell
# A power conduit
# A recharge socket

You actually need all of these also

# A handgrip
# An activation stud plate
# A safety switch
# An emitter matrix
# A lens assembly (focusing crystal)
# A blade-length adjuster (only on Dual-Length Lightsabers)
# A power cell
# A power conduit
# A recharge socket
okay, but all of those should be found in the next room

is this the final battle?!

is this the final battle?!
no,no eveyone will make it out

all of them are found except for the emitter matrix. It is found in the end in a strange chest past a power force field (not an actual forcefield but a field of force)

all of them are found except for the emitter matrix. It is found in the end in a strange chest past a power force field (not an actual forcefield but a field of force)
nah, too long

umm dude, I spent a long time on that post, lmao, then i find its been replaced, nooo. lmao

umm dude, I spent a long time on that post, lmao, then i find its been replaced, nooo. lmao
no, its fine, i just thought you were going to make me write it

is this the final battle already?!

no its not!

no its not!

my bad, I was gone for a few minutes and didn't see the previous answer to my question. No need for a "!" :p

btw: I had an idea where Brianna uses her adept Dominate Mind skills to take over some of the troopers.

some one can rp a segment of the battle and ill make the last post of it(everyone will be alright)

my bad, I was gone for a few minutes and didn't see the previous answer to my question. No need for a "!" :p

btw: I had an idea where Brianna uses her adept Dominate Mind skills to take over some of the troopers.
you can rp the next segment and do that, but ill finsish it

Goreing: Just a note... you are only 16, so don't over amplify what your powers are.

goering is fine, because these are only droids. anyhoo, is everyone done posting cuz i can put a wrap on this battle now

goering is fine, because these are only droids. anyhoo, is everyone done posting cuz i can put a wrap on this battle now

even droids (when they are amassed) aren't easy for someone who has only been studying the jedi ways for six years...

I am not done yet, I just want to slow it down because people are making conflicting posts.

OOC: Jack is using force push and is going very fast while using his lightsaber. I think he can take out some of them.

OOC: Jack is using force push and is going very fast while using his lightsaber. I think he can take out some of them.

it was just a warning...

edit: you don't need to use the OOC tag in the OOC thread...

lol, just a heads up for those of you who are using ICC. The actual tag is IC - though it doesn't make a difference (just a kind tip).

Hey Loc, not really a problem at this point, but maybe you could be a slight bit more cautious on how your phrase something (I am not trying to be an ass). Instead of writing this:
suddenly jack saw Ershude enter the room, and he was immediately killed by locutus. Meanwhile since that was all in jacks head brianna was curious as to why jack seemed to have lost it

Write it more like this (just a suggestion):

As Jack stared into Locutus' eyes, the sith lord created a powerful illusion of Ershude entering the room and being immediately killed. Meanwhile, Locutus noticed Brianna had a curious expression on her face.

okie dokie!

okie dokie!

thanks man. Just trying to save you from someone making a GM accusation, no harm meant.

Np, probably would have made it clear if i put that way originally

just another warning Loc. What you are doing could be considered God Modding (that is controlling other people's characters and saying that they were disarmed and such) - though as long as nobody objects it is okay.

hmmm, never thought of that..... but, then again I highly doubt a jedi, an apprentice none the less could stand up to force crush, and call it a childs trick......

aye! GMing going crazy in here. Guys you have to remember that you can decide what your character's actions are, but the other person gets to decide the outcome of them (if they are relevant to their character... such as shooting a blaster bolt at their head).

Pyronne: I have givent this warning numerous times now. You need to lay of the God Modding or people won't respect you. You aren't allowed to control someone elses's character nor can you say what happens to them from your attack... you have to allow them to.

I had to do it just now, beacause he said he was leaving and i didn't want to be stuck all night.... :)

I had to do it just now, beacause he said he was leaving and i didn't want to be stuck all night.... :)

yeh, i know - something like that most people won't have a problem with. It is when someone says, "And then Jimbo Crackass shot force lightning from his finger and forced his opponent to the ground. He strengthed the power of the lightning and then his enemy's face began to melt... and then he died."

I think you see what I am saying ;)

omg... this is getting really frustrating... it is becoming just so unrealistic and God Modish.

OOC: You should brain wash Ershuude into becoming a Sith with using Brianna's dominate min and Locutus stare. Brianna should also force memorys of sith into Ershuude mind.

OOC: You should brain wash Ershuude into becoming a Sith with using Brianna's dominate min and Locutus stare. Brianna should also force memorys of sith into Ershuude mind.

I would love to, but that is up to Pyronne if he turns Sith or not... we can only try.

Loc: your idea to make clones is becoming (in my view) a little god modish. Saying that there has been a super technology leap in the last few years that now allows to create clones in minutes.

It took the Kaminoans a little less than a decade to grow a clone from birth to adults. During that time they were rigerously trained and conditioned for war...

The problem is that with your way you could theoretically make an infinite army of jedi... meaning... game over.

fine, jeeze...... (i only was gonna make the 2.......)

fine, jeeze......

I am not trying to bash on your ideas... I am just trying to keep it realistic in an already unrealistic universe. Perhaps you could say that the Kaminoans were already training (non-jedi) clones and we can take them as our army.

Already fixed with something else, :) better idea!

lol, or you could just destroy it. :p

what year is it? I swear Its gone all quiet on the forum thing

what year is it? I swear Its gone all quiet on the forum thing

huh? 2005...

you mean people aren't posting right now?

i was being sarcastic, and i said it because no one is posting a thing......

I see...

Do you want to advance the plot, or should we wait until Democracaaay and everyone else returns?

We should wait until he comes back.

Good point.....

All right, we will wait then... though that will most likely be until mid/late thursday when Democracaaay returns.

uh, yeah, i actually just figured out im not going over to my friends fo another two hours so, whats up with the clones?

uh, yeah, i actually just figured out im not going over to my friends fo another two hours so, whats up with the clones?

lol okay, so I guess we have two hours more...

uh... yeh... about the clones...

Lets fire up those posts.... Im gonna die from bordem

Lets fire up those posts.... Im gonna die from bordem

lol ok. Well, Kurr needs to do something with the rest of his fleet of jedi. The emperor needs to respond to Liam. And the Sith need to head somewhere on their battleship.

Btw.... lmao..... i didn't blow up a planet. I blew up the cloning facility, which only takes up a portion of the planet.....

Btw.... lmao..... i didn't blow up a planet. I blew up the cloning facility, which only takes up a portion of the planet.....
But unfortunately the cloning facility would be like super heavily surveyed as its the source of their army

true that!

true that!
its cool, well just blow the shit out of em

things are grinding to a halt.....

has everyone given up on me, lmao, or what, cause it has gone all quiet

has everyone given up on me, lmao, or what, cause it has gone all quiet

I dunno... Dem just stopped posting - perhaps he went to his friends house.

I dunno... Dem just stopped posting - perhaps he went to his friends house.

and just as I open my big mouth.... Dem posts :D

Thats fine... though be sure to do the same with the Jedi.

Also, I will say what has happened with Liam during those years.

have I beend left out?

he said that he was going to advance the plot a few years and tell how everyone got stronger during them... but then he deleted it for some reason.

okay.... interesting, is he still alive????

okay.... interesting, is he still alive????

dunno. Maybe he is righting up the post that advances everything.

he said that he was going to advance the plot a few years and tell how everyone got stronger during them... but then he deleted it for some reason.
i dleted it becuz I wrote it saying we were on korriban

ahhh, i see well......

ahhh, i see well......
how come everyone stopped posting?

just busy at the moment

hmmm, good question, let me ask locutus. "hey locutus why did you stop posting?" "Ummmm...... waiting for another post, and ummmm....... looking for Red Vs. Blue season 3!" "oh ok, Im gonna tell them what you said" "OK" ummm Locutus said he was waiting for another post, and he was looking for Red vs. Blue season 3.

hmmm, good question, let me ask locutus. "hey locutus why did you stop posting?" "Ummmm...... waiting for another post, and ummmm....... looking for Red Vs. Blue season 3!" "oh ok, Im gonna tell them what you said" "OK" ummm Locutus said he was waiting for another post, and he was looking for Red vs. Blue season 3.
okay... I've posted three in a row so can you post now

Ps>Has anyone played call of duty 2 for the 360 yet?

ok let me specify....... waiting for another post "from someone else".

ok let me specify....... waiting for another post "from someone else".
just rp for em if they dont wanna do it themselves

I will post what happened to Liam in a moment.

No I don't have CoD 2 but I have played it

I will post what happened to Liam in a moment.

No I don't have CoD 2 but I have played it
Ive beaten it 3 times and i dont have it either. But thats because i go over to his house like 10 hours at time:D

right then... so are we approaching the final battle?

hell if i know

it just seems like it because everyone is preparing a huge fleet, army, etc.

hmmmm, who knows..... maybe someone dies

whats going on? Anybody want to get this going?

I would, and i did, just can't really do it till like 4, until friday anyway

it died in here. No one is on.... :(

it died in here. No one is on.... :(

the problem is that the creator of a thread/RP is usually the driving force of the plot... and it seems Democracaaay hasn't been on in a couple days nor has he been the driving force (for the most part).

Maybe you should just RP Bosphan for now...

If we really need to kill some one we can kill Ershuude, as long I get to control some other character. I wont have computer access all next week because Ill be out of town. Im here until 12pm est saturday.

why is the IC thread closed?

If we really need to kill some one we can kill Ershuude, as long I get to control some other character. I wont have computer access all next week because Ill be out of town. Im here until 12pm est saturday.

why is the IC thread closed?

It isn't closed... Just nobody is posting because we need Democracaaay (or someone to control his characters - which I hate doing).

btw: you can keep Ershuude alive... I have a plan for Brianna...

ok but he'll have to be like in carbonite or something because I'll be gone all next week.

Secret plans are always fun

ok but he'll have to be like in carbonite or something because I'll be gone all next week.

Secret plans are always fun

well... hopefully we can finish it today or tomorrow because I would rather not wait a whole week. Though, due to the lack of activity by Democracaaay we might not get to it finish this for a while (if ever).

right then... so are we approaching the final battle?
no, by the way, Ive been busy playing my 360 and inviting people over, so ill start posting some more now

no, by the way, Ive been busy playing my 360 and inviting people over, so ill start posting some more now

okay, but lets try to do most of it tomorrow because some people might not be on Sunday, and Pyronne is gone next week he said.

okay, but lets try to do most of it tomorrow because some people might not be on Sunday, and Pyronne is gone next week he said.
sure tang

what the hell, where is everybody? I think I might start a new one

what the hell, where is everybody? I think I might start a new one

I am right here...

I'm right here too.

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Hello?????????????????????????????????????????????????Hello????????????????????????????????????????? ????????

don't spam.

I'm right here too.
what I meant was why the hell is noone postiing

Well... because there isn't really a way for me to post anything useful... You are controlling the Jedi Fleet and part of the Sith Fleet (along with Locutus)... so... I can't really battle untill you have them arrive.

Well... because there isn't really a way for me to post anything useful... You are controlling the Jedi Fleet and part of the Sith Fleet (along with Locutus)... so... I can't really battle untill you have them arrive.
k, ill start the battle

Ah damn... nobody was on saturday when Democracaaay was posting and most likely a lot of people won't be on Christmas day, and then Pyronne said he was going to be gone next week.

Hopefully we will be able to RP the final battle (or most of it - the part that is just the ships and fighters attacking each other) in a couple of posts tomorrow so that we can get down to any showdown jedi vs. sith matches or etc.

Hey Dem, is it a little late for me to join. just saw this on the front page and thought why not. I don't really want to be a Jedi or sith, just a Mandalorian-clone bounty hunter to assassinate a few NPCs to push the story as well as to be eventually captured and/or killed.

Hey, CM. I don't think it would be too late, however I do think that the final battle is coming soon and the RP might be over soon.

Hey Dem, is it a little late for me to join. just saw this on the front page and thought why not. I don't really want to be a Jedi or sith, just a Mandalorian-clone bounty hunter to assassinate a few NPCs to push the story as well as to be eventually captured and/or killed.
Yeah, it's not to late. Plus, to everyone else, this is not the final battle

ok, I'll just amke a few cameos then, stay in the shadows to provide just enough suspicion. Who should hire me and who should I try and kill?

ok, I'll just amke a few cameos then, stay in the shadows to provide just enough suspicion. Who should hire me and who should I try and kill?
You'll be one of the 500 mandalorians that my guy hired.(I guess the leader.)

yeah, except my guy is like the guy at the end of Scarface. You know, the one who climbed the office wall with the shotgun....lol

yeah, except my guy is like the guy at the end of Scarface. You know, the one who climbed the office wall with the shotgun....lol
i love that movie

so where would mine fit in? I also need quick-and-dirty deal on the guy you want removed as well as the plot thusfar.

well i can't give u a to do/kill list, but the plot so far has been, Bosphan goes to korriban, and meets up with brianna. They together find several crystals in the old academy, and find a sort of tomb. They awake a very evil sith lord which lay inside the tomb. (ME) They have a visitor Liam. He gives them warnings. The jedi go to a couple planets to do some things. The sith start building a droid army. They get discovered, the jedi attack them with an army. The sith beat them back, and take a prisoner (Jack) another jedi comes to save him, also gets captured, eventually they are released. Sith leave Koreiban, and land in the hanger of one of locutus's old battle cruisers. They head for Kamino, they destroy the cloning facility. they head back to korriban for a little bit to collect supplies. Then they head out. Years later the sith have set up a base on Mustafar. They make a larger droid army, and they all gain more power (locutus gaining some of what he lost back). Now they are preparing for an upcoming battle, and Bosphan has recruited a bunch on mandalorians to help. Locutus has 5 personal droids. 2 look like battle droids but are silver with double bladed lightsabers, 2 are Hk models of an unknown model (to all but locutus). and the last one is a completely mechanized version of general grievous (more powerful, and without the organic insides).


If i have left anything out, please write it in where it would go (I.E. there was a prisoner taken by the sith between the battle and the sith leaving)

then which of your characters do you want me to kill?

You can kill Brianna when you attempt to storm the planet. However, be aware that she is in a tightly secured bunker with advanced droidekas guarding it (as well as an anti-personnel turret). And she is a sith lord so she is pretty powerful.

oh.. and Liam is going to be kind of pissed off when she dies (though that is part of Liam's plot and story so I won't reveal any more)

You can kill Brianna when you attempt to storm the planet. However, be aware that she is in a tightly secured bunker with advanced droidekas guarding it (as well as an anti-personnel turret). And she is a sith lord so she is pretty powerful.

oh.. and Liam is going to be kind of pissed off when she dies (though that is part of Liam's plot and story so I won't reveal any more)
he can't kill brianna, he's on her side.

he can't kill brianna, he's on her side.

oh... well bah. (though he could still be ordered to kill Brianna. Maybe the dark lord of the sith feels that she is becoming to powerful or that she is plotting against him.)

ok, anything info on the planet, bunker complex, target, appearance of target, and what planet she's on.

I'm also gonna need a plot-wrap up to do this properly. I need to know a little what's going on so I can do a proper briefing for the assassin.

Well, the person you are going to assassinate is dependant on how the plot goes. If you want, ask Locutus (oocly) to hire you to kill Brianna, for whatever reason... (i.e. she is becoming to powerful, he doesn't trust her motives, etc.).

If you are going to kill Brianna, then here is the info on her:

Name: Brianna (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b360/DMG2005/Brianna.jpg)
Powers: Choke/Kill, Dominate Mind, Force Lightning, Battle Meditation
Bio: She wandered the galaxy before arriving on the ancient Sith homeworld of Korriban. There she met up with an Iridonian and together they freed an ancient imprisoned Sith (Locutus). She became the Dark Lord of the Sith's apprentice and grew immensely in power. She is currently a Sith Lord and quite powerful...
Side: Dark/Sith
Weapon: Double bladed red lightsaber


She is on the fortified planet of Mustafar along with the droid army. She has created a bunker (1 bunker not a complex) which is armored to defend against anything except orbital bombardment. There is one door (one meter thick) and it can only be opened from the inside. The top of the bunker has a anti-personnel turret that is operated from the control panel inside the bunker. She is also guarded by 20 upgraded Droidekas that are completely loyal to her and do not respond to anyone else's command.

Locutus gave you a plot-wrap up on post 230...

ok. I've been hired to kill her. no boss named as of yet. standard operating procedure to not name contractor. And I'm not sure if I am going to kill her just yet or just attempt to do so and then choose a side to help fight for.

well note that she is one of my characters and so if you are going to kill her... it is going to involve me and one hell of a fight (she is a sith lord)

true, but note the force disruptors, ion blasters, and other weapons. If it were real, she has a 1/10 chance of surviving the attack. We could always have my guy fall into her hands and work for her then.

All I am saying is note that you aren't going to be able to just make a post detailing how you made it into her bunker and killed her. I am still controling her and whether she dies is up to me.

Note: he can have all the weapons and gadgets he wants... she is still a Sith Lord - and in the world of Star Wars, one against one, the Jedi and Sith are the most powerful...

Note: Landing on the most heavily defend planet in the galaxy will not be easy... especially undetected.

Note: She has upgraded Droidekas guarding her... they have reinforced armor, strong energy shields, better weapons and faster reactions.

Note: Even if you can make it past all of that (as well as the anti-personnel turret), I would like to know how you are planning to enter a bunker in which the walls are built to defend against any gun smaller than a battleship based orbital cannon, and the door is a meter thick; as well as the door only being controlled from the inside by the Sith Lord herself.

dig under it and pray for the best or actually take a battleship and glass it. Remember, he's a clone and can be cloned as many times as necessary. I figure he'll hijack a small, powerful, coaked cruser and glass it but hey, I'm willing to just get my guy captured or killed on the first attempt and stalk her for the rest of the thread.

You do realize it takes about ten years for the Kaminoans (the best cloners in the world) to get a clone from birth to adult (20+) years and they still require all the training and such... they don't pre-installed with knowledge nor do they come as adults...

So, while you may be able to be cloned as many times as you want... you wouldn't remember what happened and by the time you grew up, the war would be over...

You do realize it takes about ten years for the Kaminoans (the best cloners in the world) to get a clone from birth to adult (20+) years and they still require all the training and such... they don't pre-installed with knowledge nor do they come as adults...

So, while you may be able to be cloned as many times as you want... you wouldn't remember what happened and by the time you grew up, the war would be over...
okay, now your just sounding like you don't want her to die

idea:Perhaps locutus could come to me and ask that I assanate you? Maybe I bring my Mandalorians so after I kill you we fight your droids or something?

I am allowing her to die... I am just not going to make it easy as hell, like you penetrate all the defenses and kill a SITH LORD with no trouble at all...

You do realize it takes about ten years for the Kaminoans (the best cloners in the world) to get a clone from birth to adult (20+) years and they still require all the training and such... they don't pre-installed with knowledge nor do they come as adults...

So, while you may be able to be cloned as many times as you want... you wouldn't remember what happened and by the time you grew up, the war would be over...

True, however this is not the Kaminos. The cloning facility used by my character grows the clone blanks en masse and then programmed with the DNA and memories with the SynChip (notice I mentioned it many times in my post). It won't take years to recreate a warrior, but days. If you want exactly how this works, watch The Sixth Day. This is also how Palpatine had his spare clones made if you read carefully, minus the chip part since he's force sensitive. He can also make replacement organs for himself if needed using a flash cloner (on a smaller scale) like is used to make the genetic blanks. They can come pre-installed with the knowlege as long as it is recorded as the brain can tell it (I.E. the game Brute Force)

Alright, whatever, I will go with it. I am not particularly attatched to Brianna anyway. Though I would like to point out that if someone killed you (your character) and then destroyed the chip... you wouldn't be able to be reborn.

or just like most computers after a crash, I could just roll back on a previous version. Remember, I said his suff was stored in a computer. However, destroy all the computer banks, backups on other planets, and kill him and he's dead for good.

As for killing her, I figure I just blow the door off with about one hundred thermal detonators blowing simeltaneously and then sneaking in amid the smoke, activate the Force disruptor and kill her quickly.

oh, and Liam will have Master Miles show up in his office to clairify everything tonight. The Academy thread shall move on.

That seems pretty close to immortality...

You are going to plant one hundred thermal detonators on the door without the droideka's and sensors noticing you? As well as a Sith Lord?

lol, awesome...

actually, that's just a breaching charge. remember the blast will be noticed, however will he in his stealth suit. Heck, the blast may even kill her.....
wait...better idea...
blast kills my guy and spooks your character into escaping where they meet up later. just take my ship I park conveniently 1km away and go back to the cloning facility with my corpse. You kill then procede to revive my guy, we make the contractor think you're dead and we make you a bank of clones while my guy enters your service.

actually, that's just a breaching charge. remember the blast will be noticed, however will he in his stealth suit. Heck, the blast may even kill her.....
wait...better idea...
blast kills my guy and spooks your character into escaping where they meet up later. just take my ship I park conveniently 1km away and go back to the cloning facility with my corpse. You kill then procede to revive my guy, we make the contractor think you're dead and we make you a bank of clones while my guy enters your service.

Now that sounds like a plan! Make it happen...