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Welcome to Endgate (Open RP)

Aust
23-04-2005, 19:00
((This is an open RP... if you have characters who've died who could have wound up in Hell, or some other eternal punishment, feel free to play them here. I'll explain more IC.))

The brilliant tunnel of light is so cliche it's a joke. But it's real. The doctors say it's just your brain shutting down, that the part of your brain that sees hallucinates the tunnel of light. They're wrong. It's pain, the pain of the final moment before death, when all your life is a searing needle in your head, driving away all thought just before the black. The light is real, but it's not the end.

"Welcome to Endgate," someone says. Whoever it is has said that before, at least once, and seeing as I'm busy trying to get that agony out of my brain, I wish they'd stop it.

Getting jerked to my feet doesn't help with the pain, and neither do the quick punches that set my ears to ringing, but I keep my feet and manage to look my tormentor in the eye. Big mistake. The room dances around me in a most unappealing manner. The red thing holding me up doesn't seem to mind when I totter to the corner of the room to retch. Jesus, I hate dry heaving.

"What... where am I?" I manage to spit out.

"Welcome to Endgate," I almost say it with him. Shoulda known. This time, the little thing apparently has more to say, though. "You died. Here now, in Endgate. Go, time to work."

I don't have time to ask what he means when he shoves me out of the little room, onto a street. The sky is red at the zenith, and darkens to black at the horizon, like an open wound necrotising around the edges. The stones paving the street give a little, screaming when I step on them. This place gives me the creeps.

And suddenly, I'm not alone. All around me there are hundreds of people, thousands, hurrying and going about their business. Hulking monstrosities wade through the crowd. Jesus, that thing tore that guy's legs off.

The street runs straight as an arrow. I can see what's at the end: some kind of portal made of obsidian, it must be miles high. There's something silvery between the obsidian spires, and it looks kind of like a face. It's hard to tell, 'cause the whole thing is almost drowned out by the shining radiance of the two beings standing beside the towers. They must be angels. I've never seen anyone so beautiful, or so frightening. Guards. They're guarding the gate.

Welcome to Endgate.
Christac
23-04-2005, 21:02
OOC - This is a great idea, as many charicters come back to life. but nothing was ever written about what happened during their death.


TAG
Ravea
23-04-2005, 21:11
TAG, but I'm not sure if I should RP in 1st or 3rd person.
Al-Imvadjah
23-04-2005, 21:37
TAG, and I'm definately going to try stream-of-conscious.
Aust
23-04-2005, 21:38
OOC:RP it any way you like.
The Silver Turtle
23-04-2005, 22:38
*Wonders if these two threads are related, and tags anyway* (http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=336283&page=4&pp=15)
Ravea
24-04-2005, 00:57
Judas blinked. Where Am I? He groaned as he got to his feet and pulled his black and grey striped hat over his face as he always did. But no, this time it wasn't the same. Suddenly, a flash of pain.

"Welcome to Endgate. You died." The voice seems wicked, even evil. Judus thought for a moment. Dead? That can't be right. Last he remembered, he had been loading his pistol. His pistol! Judus checked his overcoat. Nothing. His weapons was gone. He tried to remember somthing...A detective. That's what he is, or was, apparently. Was he a detective? Judus was having a little trouble remembering anything now.

"Wait," Said Judus apruptly.

"No time for that." Judus was suddenly hoisted from his feet and flung into what was surely hell. Death surrounded him; what seemed like demons walked the streets under a blood sky. Judus suddenly looked behind him to see the portal.

"Oh my God."
Christac
24-04-2005, 01:54
Some voice, I know that voice. That’s my mothers voice. What is she upset about? Why is she crying?

"Please tell me he is going to be okay doctor!"
"I am sorry, I have done all I can, we just can't stop the bleeding"

Why is she screaming? Who is hurt? Where am I? That noise, it’s a door opening, but where and who is going through it? Why can't I see anything?

"We are trying as hard as we can to find your sons attacker mam!"

Attacker? Attacker? I had been on the train with Emma; we had been coming back from a date. Some men had come up to her and were pushing her around, when I tried to stop them they got me...

Then the person who is hurt must be me and...

Wait, is Emma okay?! I need to know!

"Please find him"

"We will find him mam"

Forget the attackers, I need to know what happened to her, someone say something!!

God! Help me! I need to live! I need to find out if Emma is okay

Wait, I must be getting better, I can see something, I can hear a new voice, I don't know this one, what’s it saying?

"Welcome to Endgate"

OOC - If this is crap, I will turn it into thired person for the rest of the RP
Aust
24-04-2005, 19:41
*Wonders if these two threads are related, and tags anyway* (http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=336283&page=4&pp=15)
OOC: Aye they are, it was such a great, great RP idea, that never reached it's conclusion that I had to try it again, just to try and make it work. I take no crdit at all for this idea.

IC: I'm not going to work, I've never worked, never, I've always found a way out of it, no matter who tried to make me work, even when they threatened to put me to death if I didn't work I refused.

This place is weird though, strange, great hulking things cross the streets, as though they own the place, everyone else, the normal people in this insane city seem to follow obay there every command.

They don't own me though, I won't do as they say, even if they say they'll through me into the fires of hell, talking of hell, it's a bit hot in here, i'll see if theres somwhere cooler.

On of the deamon beasts is coming over to me, he's the very image of the devil, I mean talk obout clished, first that tunnel of light and then this, the police must think i'm dumb or something.

"You work now," he grunts at me, pointing towards a cave that elads intoa mountainside, "You work. Take pick axe, dig for goodness, to cleanse your soul." His breath smells like garlic, like i'm ever going to do that.

I back away, "Okay, I'm ready to come out now, this isn't funny anymore guys."

He looks puzzeled at me, "This is no joke. This is endgate, you work off your sins." He big animal face is thust towards mine, I don't flinch, I just stare him straight in the eye.

"I'll be leaving now," I turn and begin to run as he sighs muttering somthing dark under his breath, then he's in front of me again, I run into his hard, mucled cheast.

But it's not him, he's still behind me, and he's at my side, theres hundreds of them! As one they grunt slowly, "They all run." and the on from behind physically lifts me up and carries me towards the mine.

"Help!" I cry at a figure in one of the doorways, "Help!"
Aust
25-04-2005, 16:22
Bump
The Silver Turtle
25-04-2005, 22:10
OOC: I'll second that bump. It was a great thread, I didn't RP but I was enjoying reading it, I'd like to see it played out.
Imitora
25-04-2005, 22:42
OOC: Muchos taggage, got the perfect chara for this (hes been dead...and back to life!), kinda busy now, will post soon.
Aust
26-04-2005, 17:34
OOC: I'll second that bump. It was a great thread, I didn't RP but I was enjoying reading it, I'd like to see it played out.
OOC: Indeed it didn't deserve to die off.